HIS BRANDED BRIDE: Steel Devils MC Page 66
by Sophia Gray
[LC4]I don’t really believe her character when she says this. It sounds too convenient, like the writer has written it so it works for the plot.
[LC5]The events of this chapter, namely the hero and heroine being caught in a storm, in her ex-husband’s cabin, was a strange plot point on the first read.
[LC6]Why would she bother doing this? They need to track down her son?!
[LC7]Why didn’t he just have her stay there from the beginning?