Rewriting Stella

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by Tuttle, Dan;

Their walk proceeded back off nature’s grounds,

  the bound’ry punctuated by concrete.

  They strolled back to the vertical compounds

  of urban order’s suite blocks on repeat.

  Fast after supper, Stel excused for bed

  to stop depressing day from further spread.

  254.

  Atop her bedside nightstand sat Brocade,

  compendium of river poems she liked.

  She hoped to sweetly seed her dreams, blockade

  subconscious’ flood nightmares that had psyched

  her out, drowned her in sense she’s trivial.

  By keeping with the theme of water, but

  recasting it in light convivial

  she hoped to break from nighttime bad dream rut.

  Stel opened to the page she’d left ajar:

  Behind a ribbon of the evening mist,

  distills chill sky, and melody of far

  off waterfalls like ten silk strings; she kissed

  the cover as she closed it, calm again.

  She’d not have been had she read to the end.

  255.

  Bent also under Mother’s influence,

  that night in Fan, Ayi reached toward her tome

  by light of kerosene so dim she’d squint,

  the same sweet book of Xue Tao’s river poems.

  In Chinese rather than translation, she

  turned too to “Spring In Autumn”, very same

  as verse that Stel read. Its calamity

  had been cut short, ignoring couplet’s aim:

  …comes to my pillow, tugging feelings and

  thus keeping me awake in sorrow past

  this midnight. Waterfalls where meadowlands

  she’d farmed this life would turn from grassed to glassed:

  this feared reality brought tears, boiled blood

  each time she thought of life beyond the flood.

  256.

  Fluorescent flash too fast to follow flung

  from ceiling slots inset above the seats,

  aseptic light itself well-known among

  officials seeking chairs ’neath its deceits.

  Attendees filled the same ones as they had

  the last time, with a single truancy:

  “Forgive me colleagues, I’ve found one comrade

  new place to sit so we can fluently

  discuss the dam without conflicted views.”

  Chair motioned to the seat where earlier

  had sat Environment. “We’re overdue

  for truth, yet his accounts seemed pearlier

  than possible for flood of such a size.

  His lakeside holdings left him compromised.”

  257.

  Twelve well-disguised quick surveys of the room

  showed twenty-four dilated pupils’ fear

  as brains behind each dreaded Chair’d exhume

  his own portfolio as racketeer—

  for though not all had holdings that would count

  as patently corrupt, they knew the game

  that let the higher-ups create accounts

  to bring the lower-downs to public shame.

  The Chair continued, “All your arguments

  for needing electricity are strong:

  there’s finite places with bizarre blueprint

  for hydro at this scale so those hour-long

  and longer brownouts go away. We need

  more raw power, this I know, so let’s proceed.”

  258.

  Two junior-most betrayed allegiance when

  they cheered as if attending NBA

  and watching Yao Ming slam dunk. Councilmen

  with more experience held tongue and stayed.

  Frivolity in public – let alone

  in Party meeting dictating the fate

  of million peasants – wasn’t quite condoned

  and here could thoroughly incriminate

  offending parties. Men stilled once seeing

  the equilibrium in room they’d spoiled.

  The gracious Chair pretended there’d not been

  a breach, continuing the speech: “We’ve toiled

  to craft a better life for folks in town,

  distributing the social costs around.

  259.

  In normal times for normal problems, this

  apportioning’s the best way to proceed.

  With bigger questions, our shortsightedness

  can interfere if unaccompanied

  by patient, pregnant, perspicacious pause

  to ask ourselves if act for action’s sake

  fulfills our obligations – every clause! –

  to serve our boss and brethren. Each mistake

  at infrastructure’s scale can’t be withdrawn,

  they’re irreversible. So any ‘yes’

  creates one future, leaving ten foregone.

  Responsibilities aren’t dispossessed.

  So in right company (he gestured at

  the empty chair) let’s be good technocrats

  260.

  and comb through all the details of the choice.”

  He ordered shuffled papers at his hands,

  arranging into little stacks by voice

  he’d seek for counsel. “Ministry of Lands,

  you stated earlier the perils floods

  continue posing to our cities, and

  suggested dam could best distribute mud

  and silt to suit a settlement build plan.

  In parallel, math shows that dredging out

  that silt accumulating on dam’s wall

  incurs recurring costs. Are those about

  the same as what we’d budget out to haul

  the sandbags called for in emergencies

  when floods are coming?” “Cash divergence these

  261.

  two options have is minimal. Of course,

  to take a mitigation mindset curbs

  prevention in the long term, since resource

  then follows crisis places it perturbs.

  Respectfully, I’d recommend a view

  toward longer-term prevention, with the dam,

  acknowledging the choice is up to you

  and subject to competing hard demands.”

  The Chairman nodded, shifted topmost stack

  of papers lower down and looked at next.

  “Security, we know you’re crackerjack

  at making sure decisions that have vexed

  the masses don’t cause revolutions. Mum,

  preserving public equilibrium,

  262.

  you ease decision-making in this room,

  for which we thank you. Order’s paramount.”

  Whenever PSB came up, a gloom

  descended on some faces. Their account

  of that department was not unlike hens

  suspiciously regarding costumed wolf

  that paces just beyond securing pens,

  disguising noxious hunger ’neath lamb’s wools.

  Another stack of papers shifted down,

  and Chairman turned to Sci-Tech to explain

  assessment asked for, detailing what drowned

  grassed hectarage would do to air and rain.

  “Combustion in industrial process

  creates airborne acidity, smokes stress

  263.

  ionic bindings hydrogen pursues—”

  “No need to wade through technicalities.”

  “Of course, Chair, beg your pardon. Air infused

  with this discharge won’t cause fatalities.”

  Supporters ’round the room sighed with relief,

  each knowing that approval’d likely stall

  should scientists conclude with strong belief

  that dam would cause more acid rain to fall.

  “There is, of course, a second type of harm,”

  overtly prompted Chair, “so please go on.”

  “Indeed. Perhaps the c
ause for more alarm

  is way decomposition’s undergone

  aquatically in absence of—” “The gist!”

  “Oh, yes. I’m sorry. Methane’s what we missed.”

  264.

  The Chair’s Socratic style too challenged to

  continue given time pressures, he said,

  “Like many of you, comrades, I pursued

  a PhD. I studied watersheds.

  Decomposition anaerobically

  of plant material will loose a gas

  much worse than CO2. Our probity

  demands we calculate how much this mass

  of methane impacts our ability

  to honor Paris’ Agreement signed

  to law by President. Agility

  is limited in governance. Confined

  by that, state’s aegis isn’t infinite:

  we’re duty-bound to act within state’s writ.

  265.

  Yet, independently of that, we’ve failed.

  We’ve failed to zoom in past our macro views:

  debates have been incredibly detailed

  on large-scale consequence, from rains to coups.

  I scheduled us this meeting after break

  Mid-Autumn Festival would give us all

  so I could see myself the place the lake

  would flood if we move forward. What befalls

  these people living in that basin? We’ve

  the power now to displace our uncles who

  themselves once shouldered revolution, heaved

  outdated feudal China into new,

  more modern times. They fought so we could live

  these better lives. Is this what we then give

  266.

  as payment? This displacement? Honor past

  and present, future with an equal weight

  to build a China we’ll be sure outlasts

  the disagreements time will procreate.”

  He paused to let the silence emphasize

  his point, and knew his words would make them think

  of aunts and uncles, mothers, fathers, wives,

  and husbands, cousins, friends, all social links

  they and their families had to rougher times

  when cataclysms crashed each decade’s dreams.

  “Recall our relatives who spent their primes

  constructing China, building this regime

  that’s brought us order, growth, stability.

  Have not they earned old age tranquility

  267.

  to live out days on farms they’ve tilled since we

  officials in this room could barely crawl?

  To take a million mostly elderly

  and force them anywhere would cast a pall

  of loss across the venture, turning folks

  against us during times we’re doing fine.

  It takes a crisis nationwide to coax

  the people to support an act maligned

  against their ancestors. We’re not there yet.

  I won’t approve the dam. I know we need

  more electricity. For that, I’ll set

  Sci-Tech, Finance, and Industry to lead

  the search for better power source that won’t jilt

  our forefathers. Dismissed!” And so was guilt.

  268.

  Decision echoed in his head. The room

  cleared out at his command. In emptiness

  a voice spoke up, though he knew not of whom.

  His eyebags showed him under plenty stress,

  enough, perhaps, to hear things. His face blanched.

  “Chirr after chirr, as if in unison

  though each one stands alone on its own branch,”

  the words familiar as if used in one

  close memory – oh, what could it be? – that tone

  was muffled, feminine, and foreign. Wait!

  Of course! It was in English. Wife had shown

  their homestay daughter verse she would restate,

  aloud through wall at night he’d hear her say

  the poems aloud, recited like one prays.

  269.

  Satori shocked his senses, sparked surprise

  as suddenly he thought back through debate

  with comrades in the room, thought improvised.

  But no… subconsciously threads did predate

  this conversation and the tack he took.

  And one by one those threads’ loose ends frayed out

  displaying selves in places overlooked:

  pork price ask came from Stella’s probing snout

  bewildered by this meat she didn’t know

  back home; compassion’s plea for elderly

  was sown from story of Stel’s friend’s plateau

  collapsing when they’d shifted shelter free

  from Middle Eastern or’gin to a place

  where foreignness reset earned social grace,

  270.

  and seeing parents’ dignity so wane;

  the probing questions on the Sanxingdui

  arose when he found way to entertain

  the kids on ride home, so he planned swing they

  would make to a museum to see preserved

  these artifacts displaying where they’re from.

  He’d never recognized these small things swerved

  the ways that he’d then turn around to plumb

  his colleagues, test their reasoning. Mere kid

  approaching life with curiosity,

  agendaless herself had put on skids

  some trillion yuan at full velocity

  toward terraforming turf. Child’s words reversed

  so deftly who would, wouldn’t be, submersed.

  CHAPTER 14

  271.

  That night Stel slept perturbed again by dream

  in which the flood swept her to aqua brine.

  This version was more nightmarish extreme,

  as she adream lived as a Frankenstein:

  imagined psyche lived in different shape

  amalgamating what she thought Abu

  looked like with her own body. The seascape

  subsumed shared frame and sank them into blue.

  They quarreled such that by time she awoke

  who’d domicile there was never solved.

  Of course, dreamed mix would not directly yoke

  reality, so in sunlight dissolved.

  Long days stretch longer when what intervenes

  is not sleep’s rest so much as replayed scenes.

  272.

  Perturbed Stel lived next day two ways, at once.

  She lived it easily, as people do,

  in thoughtless movements through irrelevance.

  She also lived it watching self for clues,

  in metacognitive self-critic mode,

  the one employed when conscious of one’s ways

  and seeking further data. It bestowed

  examples interactions overstay

  their welcome, sponging up resulting mood.

  Some whipsnap words from nettled teacher slipped

  into her morning psyche; they’d preclude

  participation when friends tried conscript

  her into lunchtime games. Rigidity

  of self-inspection blanched the day of glee.

  273.

  “Where do I land,” Stel wondered, “on Ai’s line

  between intentions true to self and those

  made by and for society?” Entwined

  two selves still lingered from seen image dozed.

  Her vulnerability to influence

  of dream did disempow’r to nth degree.

  She sought to snap out of continuous

  autoptic scrutiny. “It’s new to me—

  and haunting. Let’s dispel this mental haze

  with Ab once and for all, since it’s his feud

  that got under my skin these past few days.”

  Come homework time she barged in, thoug
h ’twas rude.

  From scholar’s fortress he prepped to recite

  books’ memorized subsections through the night.

  274.

  “Abu, we’ve gotta talk. You’ve known me for

  the longest time of anyone. You’ve seen

  the me I was when littler.” He pored

  through book with fervor of mujahideen,

  without regarding entrant guest’s request

  he disengage. In doorway statuesque,

  Stel stood distressed with shock of heart abscessed.

  Myopically, Abu kept eyes to desk

  and shut them time to time as lips retraced

  the sonic foils of incantations writ

  in lifeless Chinese text, the savored taste

  of memorizing, sweeter bit by bit,

  of words that left his mouth addictively

  cued dopamine feedback predictively.

  275.

  “Ab. Really. Over here.” He snapped from plane

  collapsing colorful dimensions of

  the lived experience to dull, contained

  pursuit of marks. To Ab, naught stood above.

  “What’s up?” “I’m still upset about our fight.”

  “Why? You have your way, I have mine. I asked

  for space.” “What if I want to reunite?”

  “I’m not convinced you ever fully grasped

  exactly what I’m doing here. If you

  want social time, go get it. Millions wait

  for English buddies.” “No…” “But me, my tru-

  est colors show at desk, on tests, on straight-

  and-narrow climb up out of pit of birth.”

  Such path would sacrifice once-moving mirth.

  276.

  Since finding him in Gumi’s class, he’d been

  lead rider in race peloton toward fate:

  she’d followed him when he sets sights to win

  the scholarship above all their classmates.

  Perhaps they’d better balance earlier

  before their choices held much consequence,

  when escapades and quests seemed pearlier,

  and so much so that play was common sense.

  Stel wondered how she’d get by if he weren’t

  in pole position for decisions faced,

  blew her one way. She’d drafted close and learnt

  she needed separation from the pace.

  “Recall the dragonfly, Stel. You envied

  its windward flight. So why not commend me?”

  277.

  Enough. Enough! She tried. She felt absolved,

  if scared. In own room she distracted with

  a ritual in which she laid, dissolved

  into a cuddle puddle with BLING, smith

  of her first maturation years ago.

  She played fond film reels of the hijinks they

  enjoyed together, frozen mind’s tableaux

  of time they’d since outgrown. Outgrown? Betrayed?

 

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