They eat summer corn chowder, turkey burger sliders, and homemade potato chips; and the baby, seated in his car seat between Tiny and Iris on one side of the bench, sleeps the whole time. But then, just as Iris is ready to bring out the triple-berry shortcake, Monica rises up so suddenly from her seat opposite them that Iris thinks she has been stung by a bee.
“Monica?” Iris says, alarmed.
“I’m fine. I’m fine. We just have to go.” She nods at Tiny. “We have to go now. Take the baby and put him in the car.”
“What—”
“We gotta go right now, hon,” Monica says.
“Are you okay?” Iris asks. “What happened? Did I do something to offend you?”
“Oh, no,” Monica says. “We just have to go.” She looks pointedly at Tiny.
“All right. I’m just going to use the facilities first.”
“Don’t do that.”
He stares at her, his hands on his hips.
“Tiny,” she says. “Please.”
Tiny heads off with the baby and Monica says, “Bye, Iris. Call me later.”
She runs to the car and Iris stands there, puzzled, but then starts to clear the table. She’ll bring the shortcake to Confession Club tomorrow night.
When she is climbing the back porch steps, she sees something. Off in the distance, at the side of the road, there is a lone figure walking toward her, a black dog at his side. She recognizes the man’s silver hair, the lean to the left in his walk, the apologetic set to his shoulders. And yes, she has always wanted to have a reason to run to the man she loves, but this time she stands perfectly still and just waits. Funny, it seems like the same thing.
Acknowledgments
When authors publish books, it is customary that they use the acknowledgments page to thank people: editors, agents, reference sources, people in art departments and on sales and publicity teams, readers, loved ones, even pets. But this time, I’d like to thank just one person, Beth Pearson, who is an associate copy chief at Random House. Book after book, I’ve had the great pleasure to work with her and to profit from her expertise. Beth, this letter is for you. I hope you won’t mind copyediting it!
Dear Beth,
You and I both know that there are a lot of people in the world who care about grammar and punctuation—though not enough people, if you ask me. (I don’t understand why everyone isn’t up in arms over the ever-increasing misuse of apostrophes.) In elementary and high school, I loved diagramming sentences. I loved taking tests about proper use of the English language. I loved the sound of intransitive verb, prepositional phrase, direct object, dependent clause. I still love learning about grammar: One of my favorite books is Mary Norris’s Between You & Me: Confessions of a Comma Queen.
For those of us authors who delight in and respect the language, copy editors like you are indispensable for helping us to get it right on the page. You are like the hair and makeup people whom actors visit before they are seen by the public. You are like the net beneath the trapeze artists. Authors are the friend in need to whom you are the friend indeed. And you rarely get the recognition you deserve.
We’ve worked on a lot of books together, and I was always glad to get your comments and questions, to work with you to find a better way, a clearer way, and, oftentimes, a more amusing way to say things. It was never work; it was fun! Even though we never met, I counted you as one of my friends.
Now that you are retiring from this job you’ve held for several decades, I want to offer you a million thanks, Beth. And a million good wishes too, as you begin the next phase of your life. I hope you’ll find joy and satisfaction in whatever you choose to do. But mostly I hope you’ll find a way to work on my books as a freelancer until I retire, too.
Much love,
Elizabeth
ABOUT THE AUTHOR
ELIZABETH BERG is the author of many bestselling novels, including Open House (an Oprah’s Book Club selection), Talk Before Sleep, and The Year of Pleasures, as well as the short story collection The Day I Ate Whatever I Wanted. Durable Goods and Joy School were selected as ALA Best Books of the Year. She adapted The Pull of the Moon into a play that enjoyed sold-out performances in Chicago and Indianapolis. Berg’s work has been published in thirty-one countries, and three of her novels have been turned into television movies. She is the founder of Writing Matters, a quality reading series dedicated to serving author, audience, and community. She teaches one-day writing workshops and is a popular speaker at venues around the country. Some of her most popular Facebook postings have been collected in Make Someone Happy and Still Happy. She lives outside Chicago.
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