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by Rebecca Elson


  Eat all my crumbs.

  I hear you down there in the dark

  When your cousins in my head

  Are waking up,

  Whiskers stirring synapses,

  Sharp tail points flicking

  At the base of my skull.

  Cozy up behind my fridge

  But watch out for the trap,

  The why-me box.

  Once you’ve started in

  It snaps you shut.

  These Two Candles, Saint Pantelehm

  1

  Afterwards we could remember passing the taverna

  With the hunters drinking in the shade,

  Their dogs chained, and the smell of grilling meat,

  And turning an eye to the dry hills

  We wondered what they killed.

  And killing seemed something separate from death,

  And death seemed something geographical,

  On the map, an exit point for every individual.

  Sometimes you come so close to yours

  You feel your body passing.

  2

  I saw the oil snaking down the road

  And was about to warn when

  Very close and very far away

  I saw the tire going sideways

  In a terrible distortion of motion and of time

  And then a body, which was mine,

  Sliding and sliding down the tarmac,

  And a head flicking back, but softly,

  As if a hand, arriving finally, had made a sign.

  Then the motor cutting, everything still.

  3

  Across the empty road an olive tree

  Received us in the shadow of its grace.

  And all the possibilities of death

  And life, and luck descended

  Like a flock of swallows,

  None of them coming to rest.

  4

  Waiting in the hour of siesta,

  The hunters and their dogs gone dreaming,

  The heat rising from the road,

  And a kind of death, like sleep,

  Passing over the unknowing town,

  A beetle fell from nowhere to the pavement

  With a small thud,

  Lay stunned on its back for a moment,

  Then began to move its legs.

  5

  So we came to you like that, at dusk,

  To the dark space of your altar,

  Touched by miracles,

  Let two coins echo in the box,

  And set those two small lights beside each other

  To consume themselves in peace.

  6

  And that same night a wind came up,

  You must have heard it,

  Howling from a clear sky

  For days and days, night after night,

  Everything dancing, crazy,

  Sea, stars, mountains with their dust,

  The trees, the jasmine on the terrace,

  Summer chairs, the dead September leaves, all flying,

  And us climbing, painfully, the road above the bay.

  Antidotes to Fear of Death

  Sometimes as an antidote

  To fear of death,

  I eat the stars.

  Those nights, lying on my back,

  I suck them from the quenching dark

  Til they are all, all inside me,

  Pepper hot and sharp.

  Sometimes, instead, I stir myself

  Into a universe still young,

  Still warm as blood:

  No outer space, just space,

  The light of all the not yet stars

  Drifting like a bright mist,

  And all of us, and everything

  Already there

  But unconstrained by form.

  And sometimes it’s enough

  To lie down here on earth

  Beside our long ancestral bones:

  To walk across the cobble fields

  Of our discarded skulls,

  Each like a treasure, like a chrysalis,

  Thinking: whatever left these husks

  Flew off on bright wings.

  Extracts from the Notebook

  Editorial note

  Becky kept her notes in Chartwell A4 hardback volumes of 160 pages. There are four of them represented here, beginning with the first, undated, entry in Spring 1991, when she returned to England, and ending with the final entry on Monday 3 May 1999, thirteen days before she died.

  She wrote in pencil, legibly and freely, drafting and redrafting poems, stories and essays. She would tackle a difficult idea again and again to clarify its expression. Among these entries, she developed the habit of making verse-notes, a discipline of observing and exploring, written at speed directly into the book. Occasionally she would draw on one of these entries to inform a poem, but most remain as they were first written – fresh, unguarded, illuminated by their own discovery. These are the majority of the pieces here.

  The selection has not been an easy task. We wanted to show something of the range of her notebooks while hinting, without unnecessary duplication, at her working methods. Inevitably, there is some repetition of phrasing between the notebook and a number of the finished poems. We have included some examples of this (the barest minimum necessary) to illustrate the patterns of association and thought in the shaping process.

  Apart from the very rare spelling error, no corrections have been made – except that where she used US spellings, they have been altered. Dates have also been put in, to mark the beginnings of new years. Nothing else has been tidied up, but much has been omitted.

  AB, AdC 2001

  Spring 1991

  Metamorphoses

  And so, spreading our wings, we become night

  ...

  And so, flexing our toes, we become trees

  And so, filling our lungs, we become wind/light

  And so, stretching our limbs, we become light/wind

  And so, rattling our bones, we become reeds/fire

  And so, settling our bones, we become sleep

  And waking we become all that we have loved

  That spasm of remembering

  We become the grasses of the field

  And fear explodes in us like small pods

  Scattering its seeds

  Released me from my bones

  From the grip of toes on the cold earth

  From what the fingers must endure

  And having gone one thousand times to the water’s edge

  And found the same shells, and all of them empty

  stack my bones on an empty bench/bed

  And endure, with sleep, the small emptinesses of the afternoon

  ...

  The mind that holds itself beyond the universe that it beholds

  The House of Science

  Hey you! Dishevelled in the back pew

  Slept all night with your temple to the earth

  Ears filled with the roar of life

  What are you doing here?

  Missing Mass Degrees of Freedom

  The room at the back of the house

  The plastic dancer turning in pink

  In the birthday jewellery box

  You did not want

  How soon we become strangers

  For the first time you know yourself to be a stranger

  The watermelon on the screened back porch

  ...

  19 June

  They are terrifying, these mushrooms, the way they push up overnight,

  And spread, and you know they are feeding off decay,

  That death is just below the surface, just, and they grow so fast

  Like a cancer, I would go out into the night, as in a nightmare,

  And rip them up, and scatter them, with my bare hands,

  But the death would still be there.

  ...

  19 August [Sutton]

  Digging Potatoes with my Father

  Autumn again

  The absolute safety, the und
erstanding

  Khaki pants & muddy workboots

  Leaning into the pitchfork, and the pitted steel tines driving into

  the soil that we turned, the spring before, my sister & I, and

  dug in with sheep manure from the garden supply centre at

  Abercorn, when she was back east, & I was up north

  I crouch in the earth and scoop the potatoes out as he turns the soil with his fork

  Thoughts of mortality

  Memories of all the autumns, the flaming trees, the apples, the woodsmoke.

  ...

  5 October

  When sleep won’t come

  And your whole life howls

  And words dive around your head like bats

  Feeding off the darkness

  ...

  8 December

  The Foundations of my Father’s House

  Were deep in prairie grasses, which stretched

  As far as you could see

  Only the church still standing

  Still painted white, a sharp steeple against the blue,

  And a minister in robes, black as a beetle

  On a summer day

  Saying where it went? / How 50 years can extinguish a town I couldn’t hear them

  As I walked the low stones

  Waist deep in clover & wild barley

  And sweet humming bees

  Guessing at a woman I was told was my grandmother,

  Who I never knew

  Hanging out the white sheets in the prairie wind

  The small bed of iris, gone wild

  And wondering if it ever hummed with people, this place,

  Or how the snow settled on it on a winter night

  And whether lights burned in the windows

  The bit of board walk where my father turned his tricycle wheel into the crack to stop

  ...

  And I walk the low stones

  Shoulder deep in clover & wild barley & sweet humming bees

  And from where he stands watching it is only my path

  through the prairie that marks his walls.

  ...

  1992

  15 March 1992

  Simulations of the Universe I

  Begin with particles which could be dust

  Or stars, it makes no difference

  And put them in a box from which they can’t escape

  Except into another box which is identical

  Or else another, and then

  Abandon them to their trajectories

  The language of encounters

  The elliptic passages, hyperbolae

  The magnetism of each mutual centre

  When sufficient time has elapsed then

  Mapping them onto the dark plane

  Of probability, or space

  You’ll see them, so much like you saw once

  Waking in mid flight, the lights below

  The cities strung out across a continent in knots and filaments

  So beautiful your breath rushed out

  As only in the face of truth

  ...

  28 May

  This, and other paradigms

  As if it were nothing but memories

  Flying out from the spinning axis of existence

  Mass as memories as if mass were memories memories were matter

  And the further out you go, the further back, the faster they fly

  We are each our own centre

  Until we reach the threshold, With our own threshold

  Surface of last scattering Missing mass and memories/most of them gone/

  except one summer evening

  Where I sat with my sister on my great aunt’s screened back porch

  Eating watermelon

  The vestigial/and undifferentiated/heat

  From a wicker chair from which my feet cannot touch have not yet reached the ground

  Since there is no centre we are each our own

  Where I sit with my sister

  On the steps of my great aunt’s screened back porch

  Eating watermelon spitting the dark seeds out into

  In the vestigial undifferentiated heat from

  13 July [Beauchamps]

  The seeds we spit as dark as evening

  Fireflies

  Explaining Dark Matter

  As if all there were, were fireflies

  And from them you could infer the meadow

  *As if, from fireflies, you could infer the field.

  Infer the day from vestigial heat

  ...

  26 July

  Surface of last scattering

  Beyond which you can’t see

  Earliest memories → eating watermelon on my great aunt’s/Aunt

  Eleanor’s screened back porch

  Flying out from the spinning axes of existence

  The further back you go, the faster they are flying away

  Mass as memories memories as matter

  We are each our own centre, our own threshold

  In the vestigial and undifferentiated heat

  As if from fireflies, you could infer the field

  ...

  30 August

  Explaining Relativity

  From Einstein: ‘A Clear Explanation that anyone can understand’

  to give: exact insight

  to require: patience and force of will

  no attention to elegance

  ‘In this way the concept of empty space loses its meaning’

  ...

  Figurehead

  Look how she holds her shoulders

  Rigid against adventure

  Her breasts erect with the slap of spray

  Intent on nothing

  But the slow curve of the horizon

  Though always in her ears

  There are the murmurings

  And sleeping now & then, she dreams

  Of an elastic moment when, turning, she looks back

  And understands, at last, the creak & snap

  And the great white voices.

  ...

  6 September

  Story – With D., the time the woodpecker flew into the window & killed itself, & I try to tell him why I’m so sad.

  In the garden, hot, May, the birds are singing like crazy in the forest all around, I am barefoot, in my pyjamas still, maybe a cup of tea, hot. I am trying to tell him something when the bird flies into the window, crack, and falls stunned onto the patio, its red throat thrown back in a kind of ecstasy, in a kind of posture that says ‘take me’, to the sky, to the sun, and a small drop of blood grows round at the corner of its beak.

  For months now, it has been like this, it seems, they don’t ask, and because they don’t ask, I don’t talk, I ache, I am far away & silent. Sothat when the tears come, which I can no longer keep back, he puts an arm around me and says, ‘Don’t be sad, it’s only a bird,’ though he himself is sad, and I say, of course it isn’t the bird, and I manage to say a bit more, enough, so that later, when I pick up the bird and carry it to the edge of the woods so impenetrable there is no simple walking in, there is a kind of peace in dropping its small body into a thicket, making sure it reaches the earth, and covering it with the dead leaves that have lain all winter underneath the snow.

  ...

  4 October

  I. Evening, and the air fills with darkness,

  And the darkness with wind

  And the wind with moths

  And the moths with motion

  You are among them

  And they touch you, telling you

  There is no solitude we have not all passed through, or will in time

  And you wonder how you came to be here

  And you remember, as a child,

  How, in ignorance, you left your thumbprint

  In the dust of one moth’s wing

  And how they told you, later,

  It would die.

  We come as children.

  ...

  II. Turning nightward in thes
e domes

  Our shutters opening like secrets

  We set our silvered cups to catch

  The fine mist of light

  That settles from our chosen stars

  On the edge of the unanswerable

  Even here, our questions

  And all of it eclipsed by the cold and catholic colours of dawn

  Though we know better, seems so much more

  That it has come to us

  Than that we have travelled

  In one still night

  ...

  1993

  24 January 1993

  After the sheets and the towels are folded, and put back in the cupboard, and quiet has come again, like the dust in sunbeams, and my father has returned to his ancestors, and the sloped script of their voices, and my mother dusts away the last dry needles, and still the snow does not come. ‘It rained,’ the letter says, ‘and the brook swelled over its banks of ice, and the next morning our little bridge was part of a dam of dead wood & rubble, 300 yards downstream.’

  We are standing still, mittened, in the forest. It is snowing gently. We have carried this small construction of planks and two-by-fours down to the brook, a small brook we would certainly have played in as children. My father is hammering in nails, with great precision. Always more nails than I would have, solid, precise. Then we lift it on end, and let it fall like a drawbridge, walk, ceremoniously, across its nine foot span. Then we pad home through the snow and the descending dark, and leave my father by the brook, adjusting the branches of the trees. I am the good daughter. I am only half there.

  Sarah is in the downstairs bedroom …

  We make angels in the meadow, in the snow.

 

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