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by Raymond Carver


  the man’s photograph, knowing he has only two years

  to live. He doesn’t know this, of course,

  that’s why he can mug for the camera.

  How could he know what’s taking root in his head

  at that moment? If one looks to the right

  through boughs and tree trunks, there can be seen

  crimson patches of the afterglow. No shadows, no

  half-shadows. It is still and damp.…

  The man goes on mugging. I put the picture back

  in its place along with the others and give

  my attention instead to the afterglow along the far ridge,

  light golden on the roses in the garden.

  Then, I can’t help myself, I glance once more

  at the picture. The wink, the broad smile,

  the jaunty slant of the cigarette.

  Late Fragment

  And did you get what

  you wanted from this life, even so?

  I did.

  And what did you want?

  To call myself beloved, to feel myself

  beloved on the earth.

  Appendixes

  Appendix 1

  Uncollected Poems: No Heroics, Please

  The Brass Ring

  Whatever became of that brass ring

  supposed to go with the merry-go-round?

  The brass one that all the poor-but-happy

  young girls and boys were always snagging just

  at the Magic Moment? I’ve asked around: Do you know

  anything about the brass ring …? I said to my neighbor.

  I asked my wife, and I even asked the butcher (who I think

  is from a foreign country and should know).

  No one knows, it seems.

  Then I asked a man who used to work for a carnival. Years ago,

  he said, it was different then. Even the grown-ups rode.

  He remembered a young woman in Topeka, Kansas. It was

  in August. She held hands with the man who rode

  the horse next to her, who had a moustache and

  who was her husband. The young woman laughed

  all the time, he said. The husband laughed

  too, even though he had a moustache. But

  all that is another story. He didn’t

  say anything about a brass ring.

  Beginnings

  Once

  there was a plumb-line

  sunk deep into the floor

  of a spruce valley

  nr Snohomish

  in the Cascades

  that passed under

  Mt Rainier, Mt Hood,

  and the Columbia River

  and came up

  somewhere

  in the Oregon rainforest

  wearing

  a fern leaf.

  On the Pampas Tonight

  On the pampas tonight a gaucho

  on a tall horse slings

  a bolas towards the sunset, west

  into the Pacific.

  Juan Perón sleeps in Spain

  with General Franco,

  the President barbecues

  in Asia…

  I wish to settle deeper

  into the seasons,

  to become like a pine tree

  or a reindeer,

  observe the slow grind and creep of glaciers

  into northern fjords,

  stand against this nemesis,

  this dry weather.

  Those Days

  FOR C. M.

  Yes I remember those days,

  Always young, always June or July;

  Molly, her skirt rucked up over

  Her knees, I in my logger-boots

  My arm round her little waist,

  We laughing, doing

  onetwothree—glide!

  onetwothree—glide!

  in the warm kitchen,

  Fish chowder or venison steaks

  On the stove, roses stroking

  The bedroom window.

  Across the pasture, the Nisqually River

  We listened to at night.

  Oh how I wish

  I could be like those Chinook salmon,

  Thrusting, leaping the falls,

  Returning!

  Not chunks and flakes and drift

  drift

  The Sunbather, to Herself

  A kind of

  airy dullness;

  head is a puddle,

  heart & fingers —

  all extremities —

  glow

  under your indifferent

  touch.

  Now old sun,

  husband,

  pour into me,

  be rough

  with me,

  strengthen me

  against that other,

  that bastard.

  No Heroics, Please

  Zhivago with a fine moustache,

  A wife and son. His poet’s eyes

  Witness every kind of suffering,

  His doctor’s hands are kept busy.

  “The walls of his heart were paper-thin,”

  Comrade-General half-brother Alec Guinness

  Says to Lara, whom Zhivago has loved

  And made pregnant.

  But at that moment,

  The group from the topless bar

  Next the theater begins to play.

  The saxophone climbs higher and higher,

  Demanding our attention. The drums

  And the bass are also present,

  But it is the rising and falling saxophone

  That drains away the strength

  To resist.

  Adultery

  Poem on My Birthday, July 2

  “and we kept going

  up and up and up

  and your brother

  had a headache

  from the al-titude

  and we kept going

  up and up and he said,

  ‘where we going, dad?’

  and I said, up.”

  just pleasant to sit here

  this morning drinking fresh coffee

  wearing a clean shirt. taking stock?

  what does that mean? mum dead,

  dad has sclerosis. sclerosis,

  a hell of a word. what is tomorrow?

  tuesday? ha. my wife wants

  to bake me a cake. she says. most

  of my birthdays I’ve had to work.

  that means. birthdays? I remember

  the road into jameson lake:

  hardpan, switchback, dogwood

  scraping the fenders and trailing

  along the canvas top of the jeep

  until, past timberline, we left

  the woods and road behind

  and nothing ahead but steep ridges

  sided with wildflowers and bunchgrass,

  then over the highest ridge

  into jameson valley,

  and the lake still frozen.

  that was a giggle. ice fishing

  in july. high country, indeed.

  Return

  George Mensch’s cattle

  have dunged-up the living room,

  windows have fallen out

  and the back porch

  has caved in around the kitchen:

  I move through each filthy room

  like a finance company.

  For the Egyptian Coin Today,

  Arden, Thank You

  As I stare at the smoothly worn portrait of

  The Sphinx, surrounded by a strange fading landscape,

  I recall the remoteness of my own hands pulling

  Themselves awake this morning, shaky, ready to begin

  Their terrible round of questioning.

  In the Trenches

  with Robert Graves

  The latin winds of Majorca

  are far away still. Here,

  machineguns traverse each night. By day,

  high-explosives, barbed wire, snipers…

  Rats wo
rk their way in and out

  of the fallen. The corpses are like lorries,

  the rats drive them deeper

  into the mud. Behind the lines,

  on both sides, officers and men queue

  for a last fuck. All but Graves, anyhow.

  First the hawk must grow in a man, a spur

  to sex. We live

  in difficult times.

  The Man Outside

  There was always the inside and

  the outside. Inside, my wife,

  my son and daughters, rivers

  of conversation, books, gentleness

  and affection.

  But then one night outside

  my bedroom window someone —

  something, breathes, shuffles.

  I rouse my wife and terrified

  I shudder in her arms till morning.

  That space outside my bedroom

  window! The few flowers that grow

  there trampled down, the Camel

  cigarette butts underfoot —

  I am not imagining things.

  The next night and the next

  it happens, and I rouse my wife

  and again she comforts me and

  again she rubs my legs tense

  with fright and takes me in her embrace.

  But then I begin to demand more

  and more of my wife. In shame she

  parades up and down the bedroom floor,

  I driving her like a loaded wheel-

  barrow, the carter and the cart.

  Finally, tonight, I touch my wife lightly

  and she springs awake anxious

  and ready. Lights on, nude, we sit

  at the vanity table and stare frantically

  into the glass. Behind us, two lips,

  the reflection of a glowing cigarette.

  Seeds

  FOR CHRISTI

  I exchange nervous glances

  with the man who sells

  my daughter watermelon seeds.

  The shadow of a bird passes

  over all our hands.

  The vendor raises his whip &

  hurries away behind his old horse

  towards Beersheba.

  You offer me my choice of seeds.

  Already you have forgotten the man

  the horse

  the watermelons themselves &

  the shadow was something unseen

  between the vendor & myself.

  I accept your gift here

  on the dry roadside.

  I reach out my hand to receive

  your blessing.

  Betrayal

  like bad credit

  begins with the fingers

  their lies

  The Contact

  Mark the man I am with.

  He is soon to lose

  His left hand, his balls, his

  Nose and handsome moustache.

  Tragedy is everywhere

  Oh Jerusalem.

  He raises his tea cup.

  Wait.

  We enter the cafe.

  He raises his tea cup.

  We sit down together.

  He raises his tea cup.

  Now.

  I nod.

  Faces!

  His eyes, crossed,

  Fall slowly out of his head.

  Something Is Happening

  Something is happening to me

  if I can believe my

  senses this is not just

  another distraction dear

  I am tied up still

  in the same old skin

  the pure ideas and ambitious yearnings

  the clean and healthy cock

  at all costs

  but my feet are beginning

  to tell me things about

  themselves

  about their new relationship to

  my hands heart hair and eyes

  Something is happening to me

  if I could I would ask you

  have you ever felt anything similar

  but you are already so far

  away tonight I do not think

  you would hear besides

  my voice has also been affected

  Something is happening to me

  do not be surprised if

  waking someday soon in this bright

  Mediterranean sun you look

  across at me and discover

  a woman in my place

  or worse

  a strange whitehaired man

  writing a poem

  one who can no longer form words

  who is simply moving his lips

  trying

  to tell you something

  A Summer in Sacramento

  we have been looking at cars lately

  my wife has in mind

  a 1972 Pontiac Catalina conv

  bucket seats power everything

  but I’ve had my eye on a little

  red & white 71 Olds Cutlass

  A/C R&H wsw tires

  low mileage & 500 cheaper

  but I like convertibles too

  we’ve never owned a really good car

  most of our bills are paid

  & we can afford another car

  still

  a couple of grand is a lot of money

  & a yr ago we wd have taken it

  & fled to Mexico

  the rent’s due Thursday

  but we can pay it

  by God there’s nothing like

  being able to meet your responsibilities

  on my birthday May 25

  we spent 60 dollars or more

  on dinner wine cocktails

  & a movie

  at dinner we cd hardly find anything to talk about

  though we smiled at each other

  frequently

  we’ve gone to a lot of movies the last few months

  this Friday night

  I am to meet a girl I have been seeing

  now & then since Christmas

  nothing serious

  on my part

  but we make it well together

  & I’m flattered

  with the little attentions she shows me

  & flattered too

  she wants to marry me

  if I will get a Reno divorce soon

  I will have to think about it

  a few days ago

  an attractive woman I’d never seen before

  who called herself Sue Thompson

  a neighbor

  came to the door & told me

  her 15 yr old foster son had been observed

  raising my 7 yr old daughter’s dress

  the boy’s juvenile parole officer wd like

  to ask my daughter some questions

  last night at still another movie

  an older man took me by the shoulder

  in the lobby asked me —

  where’re you going Fred? —

  shitman I said

  you have the wrong fella

  when I woke up this morning

  I cd still feel his hand there

  almost

  Reaching

  He knew he was

  in trouble when,

  in the middle

  of the poem,

  he found himself

  reaching

  for his thesaurus

  and then

  Webster’s

  in that order.

  Soda Crackers

  You soda crackers! I remember

  when I arrived here in the rain,

  whipped out and alone.

  How we shared the aloneness

  and quiet of this house.

  And the doubt that held me

  from fingers to toes

  as I took you out

  of your cellophane wrapping

  and ate you, meditatively,

  at the kitchen table

  that first night with cheese,

  and mushroom soup. Now,

/>   a month later to the day,

  an important part of us

  is still here. I’m fine.

  And you—I’m proud of you, too.

  You’re even getting remarked

  on in print! Every soda cracker

  should be so lucky.

  We’ve done all right for

  ourselves. Listen to me.

  I never thought

  I could go on like this

  about soda crackers.

  But I tell you

  the clear sunshiny

  days are here, at last.

  Appendix 2

  Introduction by Tess Gallagher to A New Path to the Waterfall (1989)

  This is a last book and last things, as we learn, have rights of their own. They don’t need us, but in our need of them we commemorate and make more real that finality which encircles us, and draws us again into that central question of any death: What is life for? Raymond Carver lived and wrote his answer: “I’ve always squandered,” he told an interviewer, no doubt steering a hard course away from the lofty and noble. It was almost a law, Carver’s law, not to save up things for some longed-for future, but to use up the best that was in him each day and to trust that more would come. Even the packaging of the cigarettes he smoked bore the imprint of his oath in the imperative: NOW.

  This was an injunction that would bear down on us with increasing intensity as we attempted to finish this book. In an episode eerily like that which preceded the death of Chekhov, to whom he had recently paid tribute in his story “Errand”, Ray had been diagnosed with lung cancer after spitting up blood in September 1987. There would follow ten months of struggle during which the cancer would reoccur as a brain tumor in early March. After twice swerving away from recommendations for brain surgery by several doctors, he would undergo seven weeks of intense, full-brain radiation. After a short respite, however, tumors would again be found in his lungs in early June.

  These are the facts of that time, enough to have made realists out of us if we hadn’t been realists already. Nonetheless, much as Chekhov had kept reading the train schedules away from the town in which he would die, Ray kept working, planning, believing in the importance of the time he had left, and also believing that he might, through some loop in fate, even get out of this. An errand list I found in his shirt pocket later read “eggs, peanut butter, hot choc” and then, after a space, “Australia? Antarctica??” The insistent nature of Ray’s belief in his own capacity to recover from reversals during the course of his illness gave us both strength. In his journal he wrote: “When hope is gone, the ultimate sanity is to grasp at straws.” In this way he lived hope as a function of gesture, a reaching for or toward, while the object of promise stayed rightly illusory. The alternative was acceptance of death, which at age fifty was impossible for him. Another journal entry revealed his anguish as the pace of the disease quickened: “I wish I had a while. Not five years—or even three years—I couldn’t ask for that long, but if I had even a year. If I knew I had a year.”

 

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