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by Andrea Davis Pinkney


  not answering my question.

  I know a yam’s flavor.

  I’ve eaten many yams

  on our farm,

  but none at Kalma.

  I bite into the yam’s

  pointy top

  to get at my gift’s starchy insides.

  Old Anwar must know his yam is magic.

  “I roast it in a way no one else can.

  Old Anwar’s way.”

  The yam’s flavor is a nutty burst,

  slightly burned, and so, so good.

  I take only one more tiny bite,

  then wrap my glistening gift

  to keep for later.

  Old Anwar gently lifts my pencil,

  smooths my yellow paper with his palm.

  He writes a new English word,

  tells me how to say it properly.

  Sweet.

  Slowly, I repeat.

  With my pencil,

  I swirl sweet’s delicious beauty

  onto my tablet’s paper.

  Sweet.

  Sweet.

  Sweet.

  I have already tasted this new word’s meaning.

  BUSHY BUNDLE

  Fat-shaped,

  hairy-faced,

  bushy body,

  squat legs.

  Soft-quilled back.

  Waddle,

  waddle,

  taking your

  own slow clumsy

  stroll

  anyplace

  you choose.

  Shading with my

  pencil point’s

  flattest side,

  I color

  to make your bushy-haired,

  chubby-bundle,

  soft-quilled back

  come alive.

  One question I must ask:

  Hedgehog, where do you hide your eyes?

  THE FUTURE

  I now know what

  I want

  to be.

  Not a farmer.

  Not a wife.

  Not even a keeper of sheep.

  I want

  to make words,

  draw slants

  and dots

  and circle-shapes

  for others’ eyes to see.

  I want

  to teach it all to girls and boys,

  ready to read and rise.

  This is what

  I want.

  MINE

  My yam stays hidden

  under the dusty,

  rumpled blanket

  at the foot of my pallet.

  I take a tiny yam-bite each day.

  Sweet.

  Sweet.

  Shiny-skinned magic.

  I try, oh, I try,

  to make my gift last.

  It’s not easy.

  I know I should share

  with Leila and Gamal,

  but after only three days,

  my yam is down

  to a final thumbnail morsel.

  There’s just not enough left for sharing.

  I have little choice but to keep

  the sweet,

  roasted bit

  all for me.

  SOUP-CAN SOCCER

  Gamal gets there first.

  His side-footed

  swipe

  sends the battered tin

  clattering.

  Even on banana legs,

  Leila is just as fast,

  fighting

  to get the “ball”

  away from Gamal.

  She pings it,

  pops it,

  keeps it tumbling.

  The “ball’s” scraped label

  gives a glimpse

  of the soup

  that once filled its belly:

  ICKEN OODLE.

  Leila kick-kicks

  the “icken oodle”

  past her opponent,

  charging it

  down,

  down,

  down,

  a field of no grass,

  until Leila shouts, “Goal!”

  Rejoicing in her win

  at one-on-one

  soup-can soccer.

  BRUSHING DUST

  I’m ready to ask my mother

  one of many vexing questions.

  Muma is sweeping the dirt floor

  of our rice-sack house.

  So much sweeping,

  always sweeping,

  brushing dust

  into puff-puffs

  that billow

  at Muma’s ankles.

  My words come as telling,

  not as asking.

  “I want to leave Kalma.

  I want to go to Nyala.”

  Muma stoops to pick up

  a stubborn pebble that will

  not yield to her broom’s stiff bristles.

  She flings the tiny menace

  to a corner,

  sweeping faster,

  not once looking up

  from the brown dirt clouds

  gusting off her hard work.

  “Amira, I’m busy,” she says.

  HANDLEBAR HAPPY!

  Gamal’s spindly shins,

  peddling fast

  on a rickety

  fender-bent bike.

  He doesn’t seem to notice

  the sagging chain

  or crooked seat,

  or squeaky wheel.

  Gamal is too busy

  balancing

  a boy on the wide-armed

  handlebars.

  His passenger is that same child

  whose neck Gamal nearly snapped

  in his moment of heated grief.

  But today he’s invited this kid

  to ride

  up front.

  To be his special traveler

  on a dust-powered path

  at dusk

  lit by glints of gold

  winking from the bike’s cracked

  back reflector.

  Gamal speeds up.

  The giddy boy squeals.

  Friends,

  handlebar happy!

  RED-EYED ROBBER

  A burglar has come to my sleeping corner.

  She’s a sneaky thief.

  I hear the tiny scuffles

  her four feet make

  as she rummages near my pallet.

  Her whiskers twitch.

  “You can’t hide

  in this wide-open place,” I whisper.

  This red-eyed rat,

  this crafty criminal,

  knows I’ve caught her

  before she can even try to steal

  what’s mine.

  She watches my yam scrap

  with her red rat eyes,

  hoping I won’t stop her.

  This red-eyed robber is stealing,

  but it’s hard to get angry.

  She’s leaving behind a gift.

  She’s given me a giggle.

  I tell her,

  “Go ahead, you sneaky thief.”

  Hunger won’t let her wait.

  She snatches up

  my last bit of sweet

  in her teeth.

  Scratches at the dirt floor,

  scurries.

  Escapes through a slit

  in the rice-bag wall,

  her red-eyed robber’s

  safety hatch.

  NEW FAMILY PICTURES

  Old Anwar:

  fig-shaped chin,

  cheeks high,

  sharp,

  pushing out

  from black-creased

  skin.

  Hatch-hatch—

  quick mustache,

  patched to the top

  of a parched,

  dark

  lip.

  Shoulders,

  solid blades

  hoisting heavy memories.

  Bunions forcing his feet

  into crumpled clusters

  of toe bones and tight skin.

  Gamal:

  wide-open e
yes,

  smiling,

  seeing possibilities

  in “icken oodle”

  and broken bottles.

  Gapped teeth,

  ready to take a bite

  out of anything that

  tastes like sticky

  mischief.

  Dusty skin,

  smooth,

  yet marred by

  healed ropes of

  burned flesh

  fanning his neck.

  Hair,

  a rounded,

  nubby

  puff,

  shaping

  his face.

  LOVE

  A new treat from Old Anwar.

  This one sweeter than sweet,

  and brighter

  than even the ripest yam.

  In its clear glass bottle,

  it shines

  more brilliantly than the

  sun’s liquid heat.

  It’s a dream

  that can come

  true

  only at the hands

  of a miracle maker.

  Orange Fanta!

  My eyes go wide.

  So does Old Anwar’s smile.

  I don’t ask where

  this bold

  bolt

  of hot-colored soda

  came from.

  I learned

  from the yam

  that Old Anwar won’t tell.

  He says, “Drink.”

  The bottle’s cap

  has been removed.

  My dream-treat is open,

  ready.

  It’s warm, sparkling.

  I don’t even care

  about the family of ants

  crowding at the bottle’s top,

  fighting to dive

  inside.

  I blow at the bugs,

  brush clean the glass rim,

  kiss that bottle right on its

  lip!

  Then—ya!

  I quick-swig.

  It’s hard not to suck down every delicious drop.

  I drink only half,

  leaving some to share with Leila and Gamal.

  But oh, oh, oh!

  How can I not finish off this treat?

  I utter a quick, silent prayer.

  Allah, strengthen me.

  I breathe, close my eyes.

  Press back my urge to drink it all.

  Take one more taste

  of the orange-sweet

  syrupy brew.

  Fanta soda,

  I love you!

  GUZZLING

  When I bring Gamal and Leila the Fanta,

  they do something unexpected.

  They don’t even fight

  over its bright

  delight.

  Gamal says, “Leila, you first.”

  Leila sips, then says, “Gamal, you now.”

  They pass the pop-treat back and forth,

  licking their lips,

  tasting the sweet on their teeth,

  savoring.

  Then Gamal and Leila grant another surprise.

  They leave the final guzzle for me,

  letting me hug my bottle,

  not a broken dolly,

  but a sugar-bright memory

  of shared joy.

  FANTA FLUTE

  If

  I shape

  my lips

  to make

  the letter

  O,

  then blow

  on my empty soda bottle’s

  O,

  then—oh!—I have a Fanta flute.

  Hooty music skims

  from the glass-lipped rim:

  Toot!

  HALIMA, PROFILE

  Red pencil, red pencil,

  show me my friend.

  Forehead,

  rounded and proud.

  Eyelash up-flips,

  curly beauty.

  Smile bones—strong!

  The slope of her nose,

  ending in a pudgy bump

  that leads to full lips,

  ready to say:

  “Amira, come to my new school!”

  I WISH

  I’m quiet

  during today’s lesson

  with Old Anwar.

  I want to tell him

  learning letters

  and words

  pleases me.

  I want to tell him

  I’m thankful.

  I want to tell Old Anwar

  that he’s so kind,

  so good.

  I want to tell him,

  too, my wish.

  I know they are trying

  to make a school here at Kalma,

  but it will be a rice-bag shack

  filled with Sudanese flowers.

  I wish

  I could have lessons

  in a real school,

  with other girls,

  with Halima.

  And books

  and a blackboard,

  and laughing,

  and many

  students,

  chanting,

  singing,

  trapping

  funny-bug alphabet letters

  that flit on that blackboard.

  After everything he’s done to teach me to read,

  I can tell none of this to Old Anwar.

  LEAP

  “What snare has trapped you, Amira?”

  Old Anwar asks.

  His eyes let me know

  I can trust him.

  Words leap from me

  like a grasshopper

  freed from a folded palm.

  “Gad Primary School—in Nyala,” I say,

  my words surging.

  Old Anwar

  lets my wish settle

  like his tasty mixture of greens and rice.

  And, like his makeshift meal,

  his expression is an odd mix.

  He looks pleased

  and questioning,

  and troubled.

  I ask,

  “Have I hurt you, Old Anwar?”

  I can’t look at him.

  He’s silent, folding his hands,

  pressing at his knuckles.

  I say,

  “You have given me such good lessons.

  “I should not have spoken about wishes.

  I will endure a scolding.”

  I lower my head,

  ready to accept

  my reprimand.

  ANTHILL

  Old Anwar says,

  “I am the one

  to be admonished

  for not seeing

  that the bright star right in front of me

  needs a bigger sky

  to shine.”

  He rubs the backs of his hands

  with slow force.

  I can hear the weathered skin

  of one hand

  coursing against the ashen skin of the other.

  He says,

  “Amira, you are right to want proper schooling,

  but even Old Anwar cannot bring this desire into being.

  Gad Primary School costs money.

  We do not have the means.”

  Scaly knuckles whisper regrets

  as Old Anwar wrings his hands even harder.

  He says, “And Nyala is several miles from here.

  It is dangerous to travel while war rages.”

  I watch a circle of ants

  scurrying near my toes,

  pushing dirt, building a mound.

  I know how those ants feel.

  They’re small, but want to climb the hill.

  Old Anwar’s discouragement

  feels like a gritty-skinned heel

  smashing my own hill of hope.

  ENVY

  I follow the hedgehog,

  past gutters jammed

  with orange peels,

  rotting melon rinds,

  and broken bottle dollies.

  Sudanese flowers

  floa
t like ghosts

  haunting the afternoon.

  Her hidden eyes know where to look

  to find the way.

  She senses I’m close behind.

  Her bushy bottom

  toddles,

  twitches a rhythm that invites me:

  Come along.

  We go

  past trenches

  dug

  by worn feet

  that have traveled the alleys

  between so many

  ugly

  dome-homes.

  This know-it-all hedgehog

  has a plan.

  We come to Kalma’s intake gate,

  where the stocky guard in his safari suit

  and green-dark sunglasses waits,

  paces.

  He’s busy eating peanuts,

  shells and all.

  He’s busy drinking Fanta.

  He’s busy burping.

  I stop.

  I can go no farther

  before Mr. Safari Suit questions me.

  But the hedgehog,

  she keeps going.

 

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