The Broken God Machine
By Christopher Buecheler
The Broken God Machine
By Christopher Buecheler
Copyright © 2013 Christopher Buecheler
All Rights Reserved
ISBN: 978-0-9884708-2-8
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The Broken God Machine is a work of fiction. Names, places, and incidents are a product of the author’s imagination or are used fictitiously.
First Edition: September 2013
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Cover Art by Tomasz Jedruszek
Cover Design by Christopher Buecheler
Dedication
For Marie-Christelle, for always making me feel like part of the family.
J’espère que ce livre vous plaira!
Acknowledgments
This is my fourth book, and as with the others it represents not just my work, but the work of several people who have helped me to shape it into its present form. As always, I am thrilled to have the opportunity to thank them here.
My wife, Charlotte, who remains my toughest and best critic. Her love and support are the reason this book and all of my other works are available and not still sitting on my PC, half-completed and abandoned.
My principal editor Lauren, who has done a wonderful job as usual helping me not only to kill typos, fix grammar errors, and eliminate errant commas, but also in shaping the story. Once again: if there are any errors left in this text, be assured the fault is mine.
My content editor, Andy, whose thoughtful and thorough review of the manuscript identified many ways to improve it.
My cover artist Tomasz, whose glorious digital painting captures the spirit of the book beautifully.
My advance readers: Nora, Charles, Trevor, Zeke, Tracy, Kim, Sheri, Jennifer, and Tiffany. Your feedback really helped improve the book!
My fans. It continues to be a pleasure to interact with you guys on Facebook, Twitter, and via email. I hope you enjoy this book as much as you enjoyed the II AM Trilogy!
Lastly, I owe a debt to Messrs. Arthur C. Clarke, Frank Herbert, and Joshua Middleton. Clarke’s Against the Fall of Night planted the seed for this book in my mind almost two decades ago. Middleton’s Sky Between Branches illustrations got me brainstorming on characters and ideas. Herbert’s Dune gave me the push I needed to start writing. While I don’t believe I’ve engaged in any outright theft, their influence can be felt here and there, and it would be wrong not to cite their work as inspiration.
Part One
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Chapter 1
Pehr was sixteen and as impetuous, and stupid, and brave as any teenager, yet even he feared the Test.
Why not? The Test had taken his older brother, crippled his uncle, and been so terrible to his own father that the man had refused to speak of it to his children, saying always, “When you are older. When you are closer,” until time and fate had taken the opportunity from him forever.
Without the Test, there were no hunters, and without those there could be no law, no order, and no hunt. It was best to be a hunter, and Pehr was glad to have been born into the line. The only alternatives were scheming merchants, grumbling farmers, and of course the women. Of the three Pehr thought the women most worthy of respect. They could tend homes, raise children, mill grain into flour and make it into dough. Women were creators – their hands made bread, and their bodies made children – but they were not hunters.
The Test was only weeks away, and like the other boys of age in his village, Pehr had thought of little else for many months. There were chores and lessons, all those things that made up his life, but principle of all there was the Test. The fear and joy of it occupied his waking and dreaming mind alike. Soon he would be a man, allowed to call himself by his true and full name, the name his father had given him when first he had emerged from his mother’s womb. Khada’Pehr, the son of a hunter, soon to be a hunter himself.
They were talking of it now, he and Jace, who was also the son of a hunter. Pehr’s cousin, two years younger, Jace was many things and most of them good. He was quicker of mind than Pehr, and better with the bow, but he was neither tall nor strong, and Pehr did not know if he would ever be a hunter.
“Sili says you will finish. She’s sure of it,” Jace was saying, and Pehr glanced over at him, grunted, and resumed gnawing at the rib of roast kampri he had stolen from one of the merchantmen in the village center. Pehr was always ravenous; his uncle worked him, it seemed, as if strengthening Pehr’s body could make up for the man’s own crippled leg.
“Yes, act like you don’t care,” Jace said, grinning. “I’ve seen how you get when she comes around. You would take her to bed right now if you were allowed.”
He paused, but no reaction from Pehr was forthcoming, so he continued, laughing and adding, “And if you knew how.”
“I know how,” Pehr said through a mouthful kampri, not indignant. To sound indignant would simply tell Jace his words were true, a satisfaction that Pehr did not intend to give the younger boy. In truth, Jace was not entirely wrong; Pehr did not know how to bed Sili – not exactly – though he had some idea of how the process must work.
What he did know was that when he passed the Test, he would make a necklace of jade and give it to her, and if she accepted it, he would marry her and take her to bed. That he would go there inexperienced was not something that worried Pehr terribly; he had asked his uncle once if he should seek instruction, and the man had thrown Pehr a sideways grin, assuring the boy that such things would take care of themselves.
“If you know, then tell me,” Jace challenged, and Pehr laughed.
“Learn for yourself, wet-head.”
“You don’t know anything!”
“Which of us has seen her, then? Was it you that she showed herself to that time with the wine?”
“It could have been me,” Jace said. “It might have been, if I had been the one who stole the wine and got her drunk. It could have been.”
“But it wasn’t you, because you would never have stolen the wine.”
Jace had no reply to this; it was true.
Pehr grinned at the towheaded boy, finished with his kampri rib, and threw the bone aside. “We have until sundown. Will we sit here and talk of things that I will have and you will never, ever have … or will we go, and swim, and maybe catch some dinner? I doubt I can stomach Nani’s gruel alone again tonight.”
“You say that every night,” Jace said, standing. “Then you eat a double portion and ask for more.”
“Liar,” Pehr said, though it was true, and the two took to their feet, laughing. The sun lay low on the ocean, but there was still an hour yet or more before it sank below the waves. Here, by the lagoon, they were protected from the tremendous rip currents that lurked below the surface of the water outside. The semicircle of rock – the peaks of some long-drowned, long-dead mountain – kept the shallow waters calm and clear, and the boys fished at its edge often. It was the only hunt
ing they were allowed, before the Test.
Pehr stood outlined by the setting sun, a boy of sixteen with brown skin and shaggy, dark hair, on the cusp of manhood but not yet there, his bare torso still unmarked with the scars of the Test and the hunt. The cool breeze that blew unceasingly from the ocean had teased his hair into crazed loops and whorls, and he ran his fingers through it.
He glanced over toward the towering cliffs of Nethalanhal, which ran in a nearly straight line from the ocean to the eastern jungle, making up one edge of his world. There were symbols there on the rock, high above where any man could reach. Ten of them, said to have been carved into the limestone by the very Gods themselves, their meanings lost to a time when men had been more than they were now. They read: VEGA CALIZA.
Pehr wondered, not for the first time, what was beyond those massive grey cliffs. Then his mind returned, as it most often did, to thoughts of the Test, and of Sili, and of food.
“Let’s catch some fish,” he said to Jace, picking up his spear, and without another word he turned and ran toward the bay. Jace followed, trailing behind, his shorter legs not quite able to keep up. He was nimble, though, and gained back the ground as the two negotiated the rocky drop-off that separated the dunes from the farmland. Pehr dropped the last eight feet, landing in the soft, dry sand and sinking to mid-shin.
“Watch out for crabs,” he admonished, turning back to look up at Jace. “They bite.”
“They pinch,” Jace corrected absently, making the same drop down and landing beside him. The two set off together toward the water.
“Look at the Everstorm,” Jace said, pointing.
In the far, far distance to the southwest, the edge of it was visible, reflecting the setting sun. The swirling, angry clouds of the great tempest never left the horizon. Lightning flashes illuminated their cores from time to time, and occasionally a bolt would flicker down to strike the water’s surface. Purple and red and grey, it squatted angry over the ocean like a beast in waiting. No intrepid sailor who had ventured out past the lagoon and into the raging ocean had ever returned; it was said that the Everstorm swallowed them.
“What of it?” Pehr asked, and Jace shrugged.
“I just like to watch it. The colors change as the sun sets, and sometimes I see things in it. Faces, like our ancestors, or … or the Gods.”
“You’re insane,” Pehr said, but he came to a stop at the peak of the last dune, staring out at the swirling maelstrom that lay on the far edge of the earth.
“Am not,” Jace said. “Haven’t you ever looked at something and seen … more? A dragon in the clouds, or a monster’s claw in the branches, or—”
“That’s for babies,” Pehr said, giving a dismissive shake of his head. “It’s like the stories of the Great Old Grandfathers, with their towers of metal and bows that shot beams of sunlight, or the Lagos hordes that the Gods unleash upon those who have sinned.”
“It’s not the same. Those are stories, but this … being afraid, maybe, but the seeing is—”
“I don’t see anything except the Everstorm. It’s the same as it’s ever been.”
“Which means it’s different all the time,” Jace muttered, but Pehr ignored him.
They descended the dune, reaching the bed of kelp and other detritus discarded by the sea that marked the high-tide line. Beyond it the sand grew damp and hard-packed. The boys barely left footprints as they walked along it, moving toward the rocks that poked like rotten teeth from the water near Nethalanhal’s towering grey face. From the shoreward side, these were easily accessible through chest-deep water, but they dropped off precipitously on the other side to depths that made the water dark and inscrutable.
For ages, these rocks had supported a thriving tidal ecosystem, and countless boys and men had come here to hunt the large, red-scaled fish that served as the system’s alpha predators. The trick, Pehr’s uncle had told them when first he began instructing them in the process, was not in killing them. The trick was in luring them near enough to the surface to be killed in the first place. It was best accomplished by two; Pehr and Jace had spent many long hours practicing the technique, and had once succeeded in bringing up a fish so large that it had torn the spear from Pehr’s hands and carried it away.
“I’ll bring them up. You spear,” Jace said, and Pehr laughed at the tone of easy command in the boy’s voice. Of course Jace would bring the fish up; Pehr had easily twice the arm strength.
“Yes, sir,” he said, and clambered out onto the nearest rock, skirting out and around its edge, finding the well-worn platform upon which he had stood countless times before. Jace scurried up and over the other side, nimbly leaping a crevasse and then skidding on his feet down a slick, algae-covered length of rock. Pehr watched, impressed, reflecting on the fickle twist of fate that had given the boy such innate and uncanny agility, and an aim with the bow that was truly Gods-sent, yet denied him the strength of body he would need to survive the Test.
Well, Pehr thought, he has another two years yet to fill out, at least.
“Are you going to stare at me or spear fish?” Jace asked him. Pehr rolled his eyes and made a gesture of contemptuous dismissal that his aunt would have scolded him for making, but he took his position with the spear.
Jace squatted down at the water’s edge, pulled half a dozen sea snails from the rock, and put them in a pile. Without ceremony, he grabbed a nearby loose stone and brought it slamming down. Shells were shattered, snail lives extinguished, bait made. Jace scooped up the remains in two cupped hands and dumped them into the sea, then dipped his hands as if to rinse them, but instead began to thrash them in sharp, erratic movements.
If they were lucky, a red fish would scent the blood and feel the vibrations of Jace’s hands, putting the two together as a fish in distress. It would come up from the depths to investigate, and Pehr would stab it with his spear, long and slender and flexible.
They knew that from this point it was mostly a matter of chance; sometimes a red fish came within minutes, and sometimes they would spend an hour without success, killing many snails – it seemed that no matter how many gave their lives for this cause, there was never a shortage. The men of the village believed that the larger, elder fish had made it to such a distinguished state by learning to discern the difference between a true meal and a fake. Only a master of the thrashing motion, it was said, could hope to fool them.
Jace was no master, but he was skilled, and luck was on their side this night. After but a few minutes, a red fish of perhaps three hands in length swam up from the depths. It would provide plenty enough for the five people who would be sharing it for dinner, with some left over to be stored in the cool depths of the root cellar and eaten with breakfast. Jace grinned, his eyes never leaving the water, as Pehr pulled back his arm and drove the spear forward. His aim was true, and the limber wooden spike pierced first the water and then the red fish. The fish thrashed, the water going dark with its blood, trying to escape, but the spear had driven straight through it. Pehr lifted the fish from the water with ease, leaning against the rock for balance against the fish’s frenzied death throes.
“Well done!” Jace said, standing up from his crouched position and stretching. Pehr held the fish up in the air until its motions had become little more than twitches. Then he moved again to the shore side of the rock, and into the water. Jace followed him.
“Let’s get it home,” Pehr said. “I’m starving.”
Chapter 2
“The swinging stones did this to me,” Pehr’s uncle Khana’Truff told them, and not for the first time. He pointed to his mangled left leg, the shin and thigh both obviously broken and not set right. “Had I not such strength in my arms, I would not have been able to drag myself to safety. I would have been ground to paste.”
“You were lucky, Father,” Jace said in a tone that seemed to lack the breathless awe and attention Truff had been expecting. The man whirled to face his son, giving that familiar glare that Jace and Pehr so often imita
ted behind his back.
“Lucky?! I trained for that Test, boy! I trained every day. I was the only one of my year to make it through the Test at all, and that’s why they softened it up.”
“Stefan says that’s a rumor,” commented Pehr through a mouthful of gruel and chunks of sweet, red fish, not looking up from his plate.
Truff grunted, belched, and drank from his stone mug of ale. “Stefan is the witless son of a witless merchant and knows less about the world even than his coward father. Rumor? My arse.”
“It’s just what he says, Uncle.”
“My arse, I said! What nonsense. If they hadn’t softened it up, there wouldn’t be five, sometimes six boys from most years to make it through.”
Nani, Jace’s elder sister by one year, entered the room carrying a basket holding two loaves of bread and a crock of kampri butter. She was wearing her most prized possession, a necklace of polished jade chipped with painstaking care from the edge of Nethalanhal by the hunter Khada’Josep, two years Pehr’s senior, who had passed the Test first among his peers. The necklace’s creation was as much a rite of passage as the Test itself, and to gift it to a woman meant nothing short of the most sincere intent to marry.
“You shouldn’t curse at the dinner table, Father,” Nani said, setting the bread down and looking at Truff with an expression of playful reproach. “Especially not in front of the children!”
“We’re not children,” Jace said. Nani ignored him.
“I didn’t curse,” Truff protested, grabbing a loaf of bread and breaking it. He handed the first piece to his wife, Anna, who bowed her head in thanks. Anna had taken a vow of silence upon the news of Nani’s betrothal. This was their custom; she would not speak again until the eve of the wedding, using the period of silence to meditate, pray to their gods, and gather her thoughts for the speech she was to deliver at the wedding.
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