The clerk looked up at her and bristled.
“Are you saying I am not an educated man?” he growled. “Is that what you are saying? That I have not read this Mr Christie?”
“I am not,” said Mma Ramotswe. “You people are well educated, and efficient. Only yesterday, when I was in your Minister’s house, I said to him that I thought his immigration people were very polite and efficient. We had a good talk about it over supper.”
The official froze. For a moment he looked uncertain, but then he reached for his rubber stamp and stamped the passport.
“Thank you, Mma,” he said. “You may go now.”
Mma Ramotswe did not like lying, but sometimes it was necessary, particularly when faced with people who were promoted beyond their talents. An embroidering of the truth like that—she knew the Minister, even if only very distantly—sometimes gingered people up a bit, and it was often for their own good. Perhaps that particular official would think twice before he again decided to bully a woman for no good reason.
She climbed back into the van and was waved past the barrier. There was now no sight of Dr Komoti and she had to push the van to its utmost before she caught up with him. He was not going particularly fast, and so she dropped back slightly and followed him past the remnants of Mangope’s capital and its fantouche Republic of Bophuthatswana. There was the stadium in which the president had been held by his own troops when they revolted; there were the government offices that administered the absurdly fragmented state on behalf of its masters in Pretoria. It was all such a waste, she thought, such an utter folly, and when the time had come it had just faded away like the illusion that it had always been. It was all part of the farce of apartheid and the monstrous dream of Verwoerd; such pain, such long-drawn-out suffering—to be added by history to all the pain of Africa.
Dr Komoti suddenly turned right. They had reached the outskirts of Mafikeng, in a suburb of neat, well-laid-out streets and houses with large, well-fenced gardens. It was into the driveway of one of these houses that he turned, requiring Mma Ramotswe to drive past to avoid causing suspicion. She counted the number of houses she passed, though—seven—and then parked the van under a tree.
There was what used to be called a sanitary lane which ran down the back of the houses. Mma Ramotswe left the van and walked to the end of the sanitary lane. The house that Dr Komoti entered would be eight houses up—seven, and the one she had had to walk past to get to the entrance to the lane.
She stood in the sanitary lane at the back of the eighth house and peered through the garden. Somebody had once cared for it, but that must have been years ago. Now it was a tangle of vegetation—mulberry trees, uncontrolled bougainvillaea bushes that had grown to giant proportions and sent great sprigs of purple flowers skywards, paw-paw trees with rotting fruit on the stems. It would be a paradise for snakes, she thought; there could be mambas lurking in the uncut grass and boomslangs draped over the branches of the trees, all of them lying in wait for somebody like her to be foolish enough to enter.
She pushed the gate open gingerly. It had clearly not been used for a long time, and the hinge squeaked badly. But this did not really matter, as little sound would penetrate the vegetation that shielded the back fence from the house, about a hundred yards away. In fact, it was virtually impossible to see the house through the greenery, which made Mma Ramotswe feel safe, from the eyes of those within the house at least, if not from snakes.
Mma Ramotswe moved forward gingerly, placing each foot carefully and expecting at any moment to hear a hiss from a protesting snake. But nothing moved, and she was soon crouching under a mulberry tree as close as she dared to get to the house. From the shade of the tree she had a good view of the back door and the open kitchen window; yet she could not see into the house itself, as it was of the old colonial style, with wide eaves, which made the interior cool and dark. It was far easier to spy on people who live in modern houses, because architects today had forgotten about the sun and put people in goldfish bowls where the whole world could peer in through large unprotected windows, should they so desire.
Now what should she do? She could stay where she was in the hope that somebody came out of the back door, but why should they bother to do that? And if they did, then what would she do?
Suddenly a window at the back of the house opened and a man leaned out. It was Dr Komoti.
“You! You over there! Yes, you, fat lady! What are you doing sitting under our mulberry tree?”
Mma Ramotswe experienced a sudden, absurd urge to look over her shoulder, as if to imply that there was somebody else under the tree. She felt like a schoolgirl caught stealing fruit, or doing some other forbidden act. There was nothing one could say; one just had to own up.
She stood up and stepped out from the shade.
“It is hot,” she called out. “Can you give me a drink of water?”
The window closed and a moment or two later the kitchen door opened. Dr Komoti stood on the step wearing, she noticed, quite different clothes from those he had on when he left Gaborone. He had a mug of water in his hand, which he gave to her. Mma Ramotswe reached out and drank the water gratefully. She was, in fact, thirsty, and the water was welcome, although she noticed that the mug was dirty.
“What are you doing in our garden?” said Dr Komoti, not unkindly. “Are you a thief?”
Mma Ramotswe looked pained. “I am not,” she said.
Dr Komoti looked at her coolly. “Well, then, if you are not a thief, then what do you want? Are you looking for work? If so, we already have a woman who comes to cook in this house. We do not need anybody.”
Mma Ramotswe was about to utter her reply when somebody appeared behind Dr Komoti and looked out over his shoulder. It was Dr Komoti.
“What’s going on?” said the second Dr Komoti. “What does this woman want?”
“I saw her in the garden,” said the first Dr Komoti. “She tells me she isn’t a thief.”
“And I certainly am not,” she said indignantly. “I was looking at this house.”
The two men looked puzzled.
“Why?” one of them asked. “Why would you want to look at this house? There’s nothing special about it, and it’s not for sale anyway.”
Mma Ramotswe tossed her head back and laughed. “Oh, I’m not here to buy it,” she said. “It’s just that I used to live here when I was a little girl. There were Boers living in it then, a Mr van der Heever and his wife. My mother was their cook, you see, and we lived in the servants’ quarters back there at the end of the garden. My father kept the garden tidy …”
She broke off, and looked at the two men in reproach.
“It was better in those days,” she said. “The garden was well looked after.”
“Oh, I’m sure it was,” said one of the two. “We’d like to get it under control one day. It’s just that we’re busy men. We’re both doctors, you see, and we have to spend all our time in the hospital.”
“Ah!” said Mma Ramotswe, trying to sound reverential. “You are doctors here at the hospital?”
“No,” said the first Dr Komoti. “I have a surgery down near the railway station. My brother …”
“I work up that way,” said the other Dr Komoti, pointing vaguely to the north. “Anyway, you can look at the garden as much as you like, mother. You just go ahead. We can make you a mug of tea.”
“Ow!” said Mma Ramotswe. “You are very kind. Thank you.”
IT WAS a relief to get away from that garden, with its sinister undergrowth and its air of neglect. For a few minutes, Mma Ramotswe pretended to inspect the trees and the shrubs—or what could be seen of them—and then, thanking her hosts for the tea, she walked off down the road. Her mind busily turned over the curious information she had obtained. There were two Dr Komotis, which was nothing terribly unusual in itself; yet somehow she felt that this was the essence of the whole matter. There was no reason, of course, why there should not be twins who both went to medical school—twins of
ten led mirrored lives, and sometimes even went so far as to marry the sister of the other’s wife. But there was something particularly significant here, and Mma Ramotswe was sure that it was staring her in the face, if only she could begin to see it.
She got into the tiny white van and drove back down the road towards the centre of town. One Dr Komoti had said that he had a surgery in town, near the railway station, and she decided to take a look at this—not that a brass plate, if he had one, would reveal a great deal.
She knew the railway station slightly. It was a place that she enjoyed visiting, as it reminded her of the old Africa, the days of uncomfortable companionship on crowded trains, of slow journeys across great plains, of the sugarcane you used to eat to while away the time, and of the pith of the cane you used to spit out of the wide windows. Here you could still see it—or a part of it—here, where the trains that came up from the Cape pulled slowly past the platform on their journey up through Botswana to Bulawayo; here, where the Indian stores beside the railway buildings still sold cheap blankets and men’s hats with a garish feather tucked into the band.
Mma Ramotswe did not want Africa to change. She did not want her people to become like everybody else, soulless, selfish, forgetful of what it means to be an African, or, worse still, ashamed of Africa. She would not be anything but an African, never, even if somebody came up to her and said “Here is a pill, the very latest thing. Take it and it will make you into an American.” She would say no. Never. No thank you.
She stopped the white van outside the railway station and got out. There were a lot of people about; women selling roasted maize cobs and sweet drinks; men talking loudly to their friends; a family, travelling, with cardboard suitcases and possessions bundled up in a blanket. A child pushing a home-made toy car of twisted wire bumped into Mma Ramotswe and scurried off without an apology, frightened of rebuke.
She approached one of the woman traders and spoke to her in Setswana.
“Are you well today, Mma?” she said politely.
“I am well, and you are well too, Mma?”
“I am well, and I have slept very well.”
“Good.”
The greeting over, she said: “People tell me that there is a doctor here who is very good. They call him Dr Komoti. Do you know where his place is?”
The woman nodded. “There are many people who go to that doctor. His place is over there, do you see, where that white man has just parked his truck. That’s where he is.”
Mma Ramotswe thanked her informant and bought a cob of roasted maize. Then, tackling the cob as she walked, she walked across the dusty square to the rather dilapidated tinroofed building where Dr Komoti’s surgery was to be found.
Rather to her surprise, the door was not locked, and when she pushed it open she found a woman standing directly in front of her.
“I am sorry, the doctor isn’t here, Mma,” said the woman, slightly testily. “I am the nurse. You can see the doctor on Monday afternoon.”
“Ah!” said Mma Ramotswe. “It is a sad thing to have to tidy up on a Friday evening, when everybody else is thinking of going out.”
The nurse shrugged her shoulders. “My boyfriend is taking me out later on. But I like to get everything ready for Monday before the weekend starts. It is better that way.”
“Far better,” Mma Ramotswe answered, thinking quickly. “I didn’t actually want to see the doctor, or not as a patient. I used to work for him, you see, when he was up in Nairobi. I was a nurse on his ward. I wanted just to say hallo.”
The nurse’s manner became markedly more friendly.
“I’ll make you some tea, Mma,” she offered. “It is still quite hot outside.”
Mma Ramotswe sat down and waited for the nurse to return with the pot of tea.
“Do you know the other Dr Komoti?” she said. “The brother?”
“Oh yes,” said the nurse. “We see a lot of him. He comes in here to help, you see. Two or three times a week.”
Mma Ramotswe lowered her cup, very slowly. Her heart thumped within her; she realised that she was at the heart of the matter now, the elusive solution within her grasp. But she would have to sound casual.
“Oh, they did that up in Nairobi too,” she said, waving her hand airily, as if these things were of little consequence. “One helped the other. And usually the patients didn’t know that they were seeing a different doctor.”
The nurse laughed. “They do it here too,” she said. “I’m not sure if it’s quite fair on the patients, but nobody has realised that there are two of them. So everybody seems quite satisfied.”
Mma Ramotswe picked up her cup again and passed it for refilling. “And what about you?” she said. “Can you tell them apart?”
The nurse handed the teacup back to Mma Ramotswe. “I can tell by one thing,” she said. “One of them is quite good—the other’s hopeless. The hopeless one knows hardly anything about medicine. If you ask me, it’s a miracle that he got through medical school.”
Mma Ramotswe thought, but did not say: He didn’t.
SHE STAYED in Mafikeng that night, at the Station Hotel, which was noisy and uncomfortable, but she slept well nonetheless, as she always did when she had just finished an enquiry. The next morning she shopped at the OK Bazaars and found, to her delight, that there was a rail of size 22 dresses on special offer. She bought three—two more than she really needed—but if you were the owner of the No. 1 Ladies’ Detective Agency you had to keep up a certain style.
She was home by three o’clock that afternoon and she telephoned Dr Maketsi at his house and invited him to come immediately to her office to be informed of the results of her enquiry. He arrived within ten minutes and sat opposite her in the office, fiddling anxiously with the cuffs of his shirt.
“First of all,” announced Mma Ramotswe, “no drugs.”
Dr Maketsi breathed a sigh of relief. “Thank goodness for that,” he said. “That’s one thing I was really worried about.”
“Well,” said Mma Ramotswe doubtfully. “I’m not sure if you’re going to like what I’m going to tell you.”
“He’s not qualified,” gasped Dr Maketsi. “Is that it?”
“One of them is qualified,” said Mma Ramotswe.
Dr Maketsi looked blank. “One of them?”
Mma Ramotswe settled back in her chair with the air of one about to reveal a mystery.
“There were once two twins,” she began. “One went to medical school and became a doctor. The other did not. The one with the qualification got a job as a doctor, but was greedy and thought that two jobs as a doctor would pay better than one. So he took two jobs, and did both of them part-time. When he wasn’t there, his brother, who was his identical twin, you’ll recall, did the job for him. He used such medical knowledge as he had picked up from his qualified brother and no doubt also got advice from the brother as to what to do. And that’s it. That’s the story of Dr Komoti, and his twin brother in Mafikeng.”
Dr Maketsi sat absolutely silent. As Mma Ramotswe spoke he had sunk his head in his hands and for a moment she thought that he was going to cry.
“So we’ve had both of them in the hospital,” he said at last. “Sometimes we’ve had the qualified one, and sometimes we’ve had the twin brother.”
“Yes,” said Mma Ramotswe simply. “For three days a week, say, you’ve had the qualified twin while the unqualified twin practised as a general practitioner in a surgery near Mafikeng Railway Station. Then they’d change about, and I assume that the qualified one would pick up any pieces which the unqualified one had left lying around, so to speak.”
“Two jobs for the price of one medical degree,” mused Dr Maketsi. “It’s the most cunning scheme I’ve come across for a long, long time.”
“I have to admit I was amazed by it,” said Mma Ramotswe. “I thought that I’d seen all the varieties of human dishonesty, but obviously one can still be surprised from time to time.”
Dr Maketsi rubbed his chin.
“I’ll have to go to the police about this,” he said. “There’s going to have to be a prosecution. We have to protect the public from people like this.”
“Unless …” started Mma Ramotswe.
Dr Maketsi grabbed at the straw he suspected she might be offering him.
“Can you think of an alternative?” he asked. “Once this gets out, people will take fright. We’ll have people encouraging others not to go to hospital. Our public health programmes rely on trust—you know how it is.”
“Precisely,” said Mma Ramotswe. “I suggest that we transfer the heat elsewhere. I agree with you: the public has to be protected and Dr Komoti is going to have to be struck off, or whatever you people do. But why not get this done in somebody else’s patch?”
“Do you mean in Mafikeng?”
“Yes,” said Mma Ramotswe. “After all, an offence is being committed down there and we can let the South Africans deal with it. The papers up here in Gaborone probably won’t even pick up on it. All that people here will know is that Dr Komoti resigned suddenly, which people often do—for all sorts of reasons.”
“Well,” said Dr Maketsi. “I would rather like to keep the Minister’s nose out of all this. I don’t think it would help if he became … how shall we put it, upset?”
“Of course it wouldn’t help,” said Mma Ramotswe. “With your permission I shall telephone my friend Billy Pilani, who’s a police captain down there. He’d love to be seen to expose a bogus doctor. Billy likes a good, sensational arrest.”
“You do that,” said Dr Maketsi, smiling. This was a tidy solution to a most extraordinary matter, and he was most impressed with the way in which Mma Ramotswe had handled it.
“You know,” he said, “I don’t think that even my aunt in Mochudi could have dealt with this any better than you have.”
Mma Ramotswe smiled at her old friend. You can go through life and make new friends every year—every month practically—but there was never any substitute for those friendships of childhood that survive into adult years. Those are the ones in which we are bound to one another with hoops of steel.
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