by Tim Dorsey
Everyone in this towns carrying a script around with him.
Really?
Pedro reached in his back pocket and pulled out a stack of pages folded lengthwise. Heres mine.
Ford took it and began reading.
Just dont be pushy, said Pedro. When youre in the right place, act like youre reading something really fantastic and make them curious. When they ask, tell them they cant see it. Thats how this business works.
I have a lot to learn, said Ford, flipping Pedros script back to the cover and looking at the title in big, bold letters: Nailed! Whats it about?
This good-looking standby carpenter is drafted to act in a key scene by a desperate director after one of the stars has a fatal accident on the set. And he steals the show! Sounds far-fetched, but thats how Harrison Ford got his break, except the fatal part. But heres my big twist in the climax that puts it over the top: Turns out the carpenter is the one who sabotaged the drawbridge that fell on the other actor in the first place!
I like the title.
Works on multiple levels, said Pedro. Theres the obvious carpentry meaning, then it refers to the first actor getting killed, and finally the standin nails his role. Think its too intellectual?
Audiences want to grow.
Thats what I thought.
Ford handed the script back. Any interest?
Oh, sure. All the people at the parties say theyre in love with it. But Im not releasing the option unless I get to play myself. Its going to be my Good Will Hunting.
Sounds great.
Really think so? And youre a writer, too, so that means a lot more. Everyone who reads it at the parties cant believe it hasnt already been scooped up. Actually, they dont read it. They just look at the first couple pages like you did, and I tell them the rest while they eat finger food. Thats those grease spots. Everyones absolutely crazy about it!
Only one thing
said Ford.
You hate it. I knew it! Just like the people at the parties. They said they loved it, but then talk filtered back to me later. This fucking town
No. You got me wrong. Its
Its what?
The carpenter needs to be sympathetic.
What do you mean?
Right now hes just an asshole. The audience will side with the dead actor, no matter how good the carpenter performs. Word of mouth will kill the second weekend receipts.
How do I fix it?
Backstory the first actor as a jerk, so the audience already hates him. Then theyll cheer the sabotage, which is revenge for something the actor did to the carpenter in a flashback. But it has to be a really big screwing-over to justify murder. Like something involving his family.
Or a smaller screwing-over, and I just have him sprain his ankle falling in the moat?
Or that.
Pedro finished taking notes on a Pretzel Depot napkin. Gee, thanks.
Can I ask a favor? said Ford.
Go for it.
You mentioned part-time positions. Plural. You think maybe my friend Mark
I knew you were going to ask that, said Pedro, folding the napkin and sliding it into his pocket. Oh, why not? You helped me with my script.
Two men in dark suits and thin, dark ties sat in row 34. Most of the other passengers were asleep. The jet was over water.
An arm reached up and clicked on a reading light. The men stared again at a long-range surveillance photo of two young men with no forwarding address from Ohio.
Where could they have gone?
** Chapter 6
FORT LAUDERDALE
Three retirees sported guayaberas and super moods as they bopped jauntily up the sidewalk. The trio crossed Las Olas at the light and turned in a doorway. The bar had all its windows open to the bright Atlantic Ocean on the other side of A1A.
The Elbo Room.
It was barely after noon on a Tuesday, so all the stools were available except the one under another old-timer with a thick crop of white hair and a barber shirt.
The guys headed his way with broad smiles. Roy!
Roy. The Pawn King. Ran a Collins Avenue shop back in the day, the most dependable fence on the beach. Now he cut hair at the Deauville. Except the scene at that end of the strip had long since dried up and there were no customers. Roy didnt mind. He spent his shifts sitting in one of the barber chairs, reading the Herald beneath faded photos of the celebrities getting trims fifty years ago. Or, like today, when he got a call from the old gang and closed up early for a little side action.
Roy hopped off his stool with his own smile and they all hugged. Sergio! Chi-Chi! Coltrane! Great to see you! Been too long!
Roy! You look great!
Thanks. He sat back down. But whyd you have us meet up here? Its more of a drive.
Ask Mr. Movie History.
Sergio
Roy nodded. Should have known.
Sergio swiveled on his stool, lost in time. The good ol Elbo Room, established 1938.
Its changed too much, said Roy.
Not for me, said Sergio. Its the spirit that counts. Can you feel it?
Chi-Chi leaned to Roy. He had an espresso.
When I close my eyes, Im right back in that movie. Sergio pointed at the old publicity photos on the north wall. Instead of Hollywood, they held the premiere at the landmark Gateway Theater up on Sunrise. Made the newsreels.
The bartender came over. Whatll it be, fellas?
Sergio pointed toward a corner. Isnt that where the Basil Demetomos Dialectic Jazz Quintet played?
We dont have jazz here. Just rock.
No, in the movie. Where the Boys Are.
Movie?
Paula Prentiss, George Hamilton. Travis McGees marina was in the aerial shot over the opening credits. Just got finished studying the anniversary DVD. In the subtitles, they misspelled the Elbo Room through the whole damn thing. Added a w. Bet that burns your ass with all your obvious pride working here.
You been drinking?
No, said Chi-Chi. But we need to start. Round of Jack, neat.
You got it.
Roy looked around. Whos missing? Wheres Moondog?
Chi-Chi removed his toothpick and shook his head. Two months ago.
Didnt hear, said Roy.
It was quick, said Coltrane. Nobody expected.
Whats happening to us? said Roy. We used to run this place.
Time, said Chi-Chi. The old guards almost all gone. First Greek Tommy, then Mort the Undertaker, now Moondog. Soon, no one will be left to tell these kids how it was.
To happier topics, said Roy. You mentioned on the phone about some swag?
Chi-Chi placed a shaving bag on the bar. Good score. He began removing watches. Most are low-end but we got two beauts.
Roy stuck a jewelers loupe in his eye and held the watches to his face. These are nice. He picked up another. Whod you hit?
JCPenney.
Youre joking.
Chi-Chi took the toothpick out again. Candy from a baby.
Roy grabbed another watch. What game did you use?
Electric scooter.
Thats a good game, said Roy.
Should have been there, said Coltrane. It was priceless. Sergio was just supposed to create a diversion, but he kind of overdid it.
Never seen so much broken glass, said Chi-Chi. Thought he wasnt going to be able to get up, and wed have to abort.
You have to remember how suppressed the times were, said Sergio. They slipped all kinds of secret stuff into that movie. Like when Timothy Huttons dad, Jim, is hitchhiking, and the convertible
full of spring-breaking coeds pulls up, and the driver asks, What size are your feet? He says, Thirteen. And she says, Get in!
Roy took the jewelers loupe out of his eye. I can give you three.
Sounds fair.
The bartender arrived with shots.
The studio was going to use Hollywood heavies for the score, said Sergio. But then newcomer Connie Francis said she only worked with a friend from Brooklyn. They thought she was crazy until they heard the demo. That young composer? Neil Sedaka!
Dont mind me asking, said Roy. But why do you still do it? You dont need the money.
Same reason as you, said Chi-Chi. Feel alive.
Heres to that, said Coltrane.
Roy set his empty glass down. Speaking of trivia, Sergio, you seen that grandson of yours lately? The police came around again.
Little Serge? Who knows? Hadnt heard from him for six months. Then hes banging on my window at three in the morning with a crazy story about figuring out the mystery of how that hermit pioneer moved twenty-ton boulders to build the Coral Castle south of Miami. Says hes off to build an even bigger one and runs away. That was July.
Takes after you, said Chi-Chi.
Where you going for lunch? asked Roy.
Cafeteria, said Coltrane. Want to join us?
Not the cafeteria again! said Sergio.
Whats wrong with the cafeteria?
Old people eat there.
Were old.
Thats the point, said Sergio. The Big Clocks ticking. Whenever Im in a cafeteria line, all I can think about is death breathing down my neck, and Im stuck behind some slow-motion putz who cant decide whether he wants the bowl of Jell-O cubes.
Were leaving for the cafeteria now, said Chi-Chi. Come or dont.
Wait up! yelled Sergio.
TAMPA
Farther south on Nebraska Avenue, the hooker motels thin out. Traffic becomes lighter, then none at all as the road reaches an abandoned stretch of downtown so lifeless it appears radioactive. Not even bums or roaches. The only thing open is the historic Union Station, recently restored and used by Amtrak to service a skeleton clientele.
A 71 Buick Riviera rumbled across the train tracks and pulled around behind a boarded-up brick warehouse. A Lexus was already there.
Why are we stopping here? asked Coleman, pulling a sixer from a paper sack.
I have to have sex with that woman.
But we were going to do stuff.
I know, but I gave her my word. Serge opened the door. This wont take long.
If you dont want to be here, why dont we split? People blow off appointments all the time.
Thats the problem with society, said Serge. No premium on being dependable. Like when I drop off one-hour photos, Im back in fifty-nine minutes and fifty-nine seconds. But are they ready? Oh, no. Theyre shorthanded today or got an overflow of Christmas orders. But if my coupon is one day past expiration sorry, they have rules.
What does all that have to do with coming here?
I believe in personal responsibility, said Serge. If you want to change society, start with yourself and hope for karma. So now Im forced to have sex if I want my photos on time.
A piece of plywood had already been crowbarred off a ground-floor window on the back of the building. They climbed inside. Serge headed up a rickety staircase. Coleman stayed on the bottom step, keeping lookout through a knothole.
Fifteen minutes passed in silence. Coleman was completing his third Schlitz when he began to detect a rhythmic creaking in the overhead joists. He pulled another can off the plastic ring and looked up toward the closed door at the top of the stairs.
Behind the door was a loft the one film crews had used as The Punishers hideout in the fictitious Railroad Hotel. All evidence of that was now gone, just two people and a sleeping bag.
They shot the Puerto Rico scenes at Fort DeSoto and Honeymoon Island, said Serge, thrusting hard. The restaurant with the Memphis assassin was the venerable Goody Goody, 119 North Florida Avenue
Ohhhh! Ohhhh! My God! Ohhhh! Im almost there! Dont stop! Faster, you maniac, faster!
Saints and Sinners nightclub was the Bank of America, Kennedy and Cass
At the foot of the stairs, Coleman picked at a chip of paint, trying to ignore the female shrieks.
Yesss! Yesss! Yesss! Yesss! Punish me!
Adlai Stevensons running mate in fifty-six?
Estes Kefauver!
Serge gasped and quivered at the apex. His eyelids fluttered, a montage of nanosecond images from a half-century of Florida celluloid flashed across his minds eye. Hell Harbor, A Guy Named Joe, Tarzans Secret Treasure, 30 Seconds Over Tokyo, Mr. Peabody and the Mermaid, Follow That Dream, Absence of Malice, The Creature from the Black Lagoon, Black Sunday, Ace Ventura, Theres Something About Mary
Dont stop!
He stopped. His eyes flew wide. Ive got it! Ive got the opening hook!
Coleman saw the lofts door fly open. Serge raced down the stairs, zipping his pants. Ive got the hook!
A womans voice screamed through the open door behind them. You son of a bitch! Come back here!
** Chapter 7
HOLLYWOOD
A man floated facedown in a swimming pool.
Is he dead?
Definitely.
But how can he be dead? asked Mark. You said the movies about him.
It starts at the end and then goes back.
Shhhh! said Ford. The scene with our apartment is coming up.
On TV: a black-and-white Hollywood street sloping down into the city. A sign at the corner: ALTO NIDO. The picture panned up to an open third-story window with gauzy curtains blowing out.
I was living in an apartment house above Ivar and Franklin
The camera zoomed through the curtains to a man in a bathrobe hunting and pecking on a manual typewriter. A pencil was clutched sideways in his teeth.
Is that the guy from the pool? asked Mark.
I cant believe youve never seen Sunset Boulevard, said Pedro.
It had been two weeks since a pair of full-time slots opened up in the props department, and Ford and Mark had turned in their food court uniforms for good. They were assigned the same shift as Pedro, who introduced them to the rest of the gang in the hernia belts: Tino Carbella and Ray Butter Fingers Koch, who regularly had his pay docked.
Theyre also aspiring actors, said Pedro. Even had a few small speaking parts. A line here and there, but their characters are never fleshed out.
These were the good times. They worked together, and they played together.
They zipped set to set in golf carts. They talked the industry while tagging Westminster mantel clocks with red reservation slips. They brown-bagged it together in Central Park, the all-purpose New York sliver of backlot behind the Sphinx and the all-purpose jungle lagoon. There was chemistry.
I hate props, said Mark.
Then, a FOR RENT sign went up. Pedro placed a security deposit on a third-floor unit at the Alto Nido, and they all moved in together. Ford kept polishing his script and kept arriving early for work. He ignored Pedros subtlety advice, instead delivering copies of his screenplay to the offices of every Vistamax exec remotely near the decision chain to green-light a project.
Youre being too pushy, said Pedro.
Cant help it, said Ford. I just have this feeling, like something big is about to happen.
VISTAMAX STUDIOS
Guards in a glass booth checked IDs and waved luxury vehicles through the antique iron fr
ont gates, which had been used as props in a recent send-up of Paramount Pictures.
Golf carts whizzed between soundstages. Two workers carried a plastic mountain range. At the very rear of the compound was the administration building. Twin silver Rolls-Royces flanked the entrance, twin names stenciled on cement curbs: M. GLICK, I. GLICK.
Mel and Ian sat at identical mahogany desks, side by side, in their spacious office overlooking Warner Bros. Studios in beautiful downtown Burbank. Behind their desks was a giant, scowling portrait of their grandfather and studio founder Horatio Lockjaw Glickschitz.
Horatio had originally launched his new studio as Screen Gems, until the lawsuit from the first Screen Gems, and it became Screen Jewelry for a brief period from 1931 until 1933, when it was finally and fatefully rechristened Olympus Films, a name that would grow in stature for five decades until the studio was acquired in an extremely hostile takeover by the Japanese generic VCR giant Vistamax. The brothers were out. But the new owners had bet heavily on the Beta format and, after the manufacturing division tanked in Osaka, they brought the Glicks back on board with a controlling interest of voting shares and a mandate to cut costs to the bone.
Accidentally, it worked.
A Vistamax production rarely cracked the top ten, but the budgets were so farcically low it didnt matter. The big main-street theaters had long since been replaced by mall-plex-o-ramas with twenty-odd screens that all needed to be filled. Multiplied by thousands of malls across America and, by default, a bad Vistamax film paid for itself the first weekend.
The Japanese said: More.
The Glicks were up to it, cranking out a preposterous volume with three-week shooting schedules and zero production values. An assembly line of eighty films a year, just like in the old days when everyone was under contract. This is how Vistamax became known as a throwback studio. That, and they fucked everyone. The highest-paid department was legal.
The Japanese were thrilled. They pumped dividends back into the studio, which the Glicks invested in a series of extremely profitable teen slasher flicks and personal cocaine habits that lasted to this day. Which was a Monday
. A secretary knocked on the door.
Come in.