13. This is left a little unanswered in Arc 1. That’s deliberate.
14. I rather admire writers who come up with cool heists. It’s surprisingly difficult to come up with a fictional heist which is complex enough to be challenging without being confusing or tedious.
15. The main thing to accomplish in this chapter was to make Kay seem actually threatening and scary. Sure, she’s Kay, and she’s great, and funny, and has her heart in the right place. But given the wrong motivation, she could do terrible things.
16. This is one of those point-of-no-return moments. Not just in the story, but for me as a writer. Given I publish ADoF as an online serial, once a chapter is published it pretty much locks me into that direction. There was no going back from here.
17. Thus far, this hasn’t happened. In fact, it went the other way - I now write a chapter on the same day it is published.
18. This joke actually becomes rather more important in Arc 2. But I won’t spoil that here…
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