by NAM LE
Mai felt a hot breath in her ear: "If they come, follow Chi, nha? Jump out and swim into the reeds. You can swim, no?"
"If who comes?"
"Fuck your mother, I said keep your head down!"
Someone behind her hissed and the canoe rocked wildly from side to side. The rower whirled around. Then, through the reeds, a light like a car beam flashed on and off. Fumbling, the rower lit a new incense stick, planted it at the canoe tip and paddled, swiftly and silently, back out. They saw it ahead, barely visible in the weird, weakly thrown light from the banks. An old fishing trawler, smaller than she'd imagined – maybe fifteen meters long – sitting low in the water. It inched forward with a diesel growl. A square pilothouse rose up from the foredeck, a large derrick-crane straddling its back deck, and the boat's mid-section congested with short masts and cable rigs. Two big eyes painted on the bow. The canoe drew alongside and three men leaned over the gunwale above them and pulled them up, wrist by wrist. Everyone was aboard within a minute. Before being ushered down the hatch, Mai looked back and saw the canoe, abandoned in the boat's wake, rocking on the dark river.
Inside the hold, the stench was incredible, almost eye-watering. The smell of urine and human waste, sweat and vomit. The black space full of people, bodies upon bodies, eyes and eyes and eyes and if she'd thought the first boat was crowded, here she could hardly breathe, let alone move. Later she counted at least two hundred people, squashed into a space meant for fifteen. No place to sit, nor even put a foot down; she found a crossbeam near the hatchway and hooked her arm over it. Luckily it was next to a scupper where the air came through.
Quyen settled on the step below her, whispering to a young boy. She caught Mai's eye and smiled firmly.
The boat continued its creeping pace. People padded the engines with their clothes to reduce the noise.
"Quiet," an angry voice shushed downward. "We're near the gate."
But no one had been speaking. Through the scupper Mai peered into the night: their boat was gliding into a busy port. Pressed hard beneath her was the body of the boy Quyen had been talking to.
"Natural gate a hundred meters long," she heard suddenly. The water carried the low sound clearly. Then she realized the voice came from above deck, so subdued the person might have been talking to himself. "About ten meters wide. On the rising tide."
Then another voice under the wind, "Viet Cong . . . manned with two M30S – " "Automatic, no?"
"Machine guns."
"What did Phuoc say about the permit?"
In the darkness, thought Mai, to feel against you the urgent flutter of a child's heart. The hopped-up fragility of it.
A tense sigh, "Even with the permit."
"Leave at night and they shoot. They shoot anything."
The speakers paused for a short while. Then a voice said, "We'll find out soon enough."
She settled forward against the young boy, not wanting to hear any more. Trying to block it all out: the voices, the smell. It was unnerving to think of all those other bodies in the darkness. Black shapes in the blackness, merging like shadows on the surface of oil. She crouched there, in the silence, beneath the hatchway. Spying on the bay through the scupper. Gradually, inevitably, the dark thoughts came. Here, in the dead of night, contorted inside the black underbelly of a junk – she was being drawn out into an endless waste. What did she know about the sea? She was the daughter of a fisherman and yet it terrified her. She watched as Quyen reached back and with a surprisingly practiced gesture pressed her palm against the boy's forehead. From above, watching the set of his grim face, Mai thought of her father. Their last meeting. His blindness. He'd taught her not to blame the war but how could she not? – all the power of his own sight seemed still intent on it.
Through the crack of the scupper the land lights, like mere tricks of her eyes, were extinguished one by one. Someone cut the engines.
She pulled the young boy's body closer to her; it squirmed like a restless animal's.
"Truong," a voice whispered sharply from beneath them.
She peered down. It was Quyen.
"Don't be a nuisance, Child." Quyen looked up at Mai, then said ruefully, "This is my little brat. Truong."
"Yours?" Mai frowned. "But – "
From the deepest part of the hold, several voices shushed them. In the silence that followed, even the tidal backwash seemed loud against the hull. Then a grind of something against the boat. Mai had never heard a sound so sudden and hideous.
"What is it?" "A mine? I heard they put mines – "
The metal shrieked each minute movement of the boat.
"Heavens!"
"But boats pass here, must pass here every day – "
Fiercely: "Quiet!"
The sound sheared off – leaving behind a deep, capacious silence. Mai stiffening at every creak of the boat, every dash of water against its rotten sidewood. Then, without warning, the call and fade of a faraway voice. She crushed her cheek against the crown of the young boy's head and for the first time felt him respond – both of his small fists clamping her forearm. She shut her eyes and trained herself to his frenzied heartbeat, as though its pulse – its fine-knitting rhythm – carried the only possible thread of their escape. Long minutes passed. The boat glided on, pointed headfirst into the swell. Finally the fierce voice coughed:
"We're safe for now."
Murmurs rose up. The hatch was lifted. Under the sudden starlight Mai could see the whole of the boy's face, arching up to meet the fresh air.
"Child," said Quyen, "greet Chi. Properly."
He looked up at Mai – his eyes black and clear and unblinking. "Chao Chi," he said in his reed-thin voice.
All around them people's faces were untensing, bodies and voices stirring in restless relief. But Mai, clutching this strange young boy, found herself shivering in the warm night, relief only a sharp and unexpected condensation in her eyes.
***
ONCE THE STORM PASSED, six days out, everything changed.
Fishermen on the boat agreed that this storm had come on faster than any they'd ever experienced. It destroyed the caulking and much of the planking on the hull. The inboard was flooded, and soon afterward, both engines cut out completely.
What food had been left was spoiled. Water was short. Anh Phuoc, whose authority was never questioned, took charge of rationing the remaining supply, doling it out first to children, then the infirm, then everyone else. It amounted to a couple of wet mouthfuls a day.
The heat was unbearable. Before long the first body was cast overboard. Already a handful of people had been lost during the storm, but this was the first casualty witnessed by the entire boat. To the terrible drawn-out note of a woman's keening the bundle was tossed, a meek splash, into the water.
Like everyone else, Mai looked away.
After the storm it seemed to Mai that a film had been stripped from the world. Everything became more intense – the sun hotter, the light more vivid, the sea darker, every word a discordant affront to the new silence. The storm had forced people into their privacies: the presence of others now assailed each person's solitude in facing up to the experience of it. Children turned introverted, playing as though conducting conversations with themselves.
Even time took on a false depth: the six days before the storm stretched out, merged with memory, until it seemed as though everything that had ever happened had happened on the boat.
A man burned his clothes to let up smoke. He was quickly set upon, the fire smothered – the longer they drifted the more fearful they became of pirates. That night another bundle was thrown overboard. Minutes later they heard a thrashing in the water. It was too dark to see anything, yet, still, everyone averted their gaze.
Thirst set in. Some people trapped their own urine. Some, desperate for drinkable water, even allowed themselves the quick amnesia and prayed for another storm. It was fantastic to be surrounded by so much water and yet be dehydrated. Mai soon realized she wouldn't make it. The day following the st
orm she imitated some of the other youth, hauling up a bucket tied to the bowline. Under the noon sun the seawater was the color of amethyst.
She drank it. It was all right at first. It was bliss. Then her throat started scalding and she wanted to claw it out.
"You stupid girl," Quyen reproached her, demonstrating how to use her fingers to induce vomiting. She hugged her fiercely. "Heavens, you can't wait? We're almost there."
But what did Quyen know? Mai had heard – how could she possibly have not? – that other boats had successfully made the crossing in two days. She tried to sleep, to slide beneath the raw scour of pain in her throat. They'd been out seven days. How much longer? Her father was persistent in her thoughts now – all those weeks, even months, he'd spent on this same sea, in trawlers much like this one. He'd been here before her.
That afternoon, when she awoke, her muscles felt as though they had turned to liquid. She could feel her heart beating slurpily. She followed the weakening palpitations, counterpoint-ing them to the creak and strain of the boat, the occasional luff of the sail. The sun brilliant but without heat. She was even thirstier than before.
"I'm not going to make it," she said. Saying it touched the panic, brought it alive.
"Don't speak," said Quyen. "Go back to sleep."
Mai struggled into a half-upright position. She made out a small group of children next to the bulwark, then pressed her imagination to find him again, little Loc, turning with a snarl as he growled, "Dragon!" She smiled, bit back tears. Behind him, her old school friend Huong was selling beef noodles in front of the damp stink-shaded fish market. Straight through the market she followed her daily route, picking up speed, past fabric stalls and coffee yards, the dusty soccer field where sons of fishermen and truck drivers broke off from the game to buy cigarettes, and then to the wharf, her main place of business, among the taut hard bodies crating boxes, the smell of fish sauce, the rattling talk of men and the gleaming blue backs of silver fish, ice pallets, copper weighing scales bright in the sun, the bustle of docking and undocking, loading and unloading –
A bare-chested man turned around and looked directly at her.
"Ba?"
It filled her with joy to see him like that again: young and strong, his eyes clear and dead straight. He looked like he did in the altar photograph. It was her father before the war, before reeducation, hospitalization. Back when to be seen by him was to be hoisted onto his shoulders, gripped by the ankles. His hands tough, saltish with the smell of wet rope. She moved toward him, she was smiling, but he was stern.
"Child promised," he said.
During his long absences at sea she had lived incompletely, waiting for him to come back so they could tell to each other each moment of their time apart. He spoiled her, her mother said. Her mother was right and yet it changed nothing: still he went away and still, each time, Mai waited.
Her sudden, fervent anger startled her.
"Why send Child away? Child obeyed Ba." Her mind sparked off the words in terrific directions. "Child could have waited for Ba to get better." They had promised each other. He had left for ten days and returned, strange and newly blind, after two years. A thought connected with another: "It was Ba who left Child."
He stood there, tar-faced, empty-eyed, looking straight at her. She lifted her hands to her mouth, unable to believe what she had just said. The words still searing the length of her throat.
"Child is sorry," she whispered. "Ba and Ma sacrificed everything for Child. Child knows. Child is stupid."
He would leap off the boat and swing her into the crook of his arm, up onto his shoulders. Her mother fretting her hands dry on her silken pants, smiling nervously. I can't get it off me, he would say. His hands quivering on either side of Mai's rib cage – It's stuck, I can't get this little beetle off me!
She missed him with an ache that was worse, even, than the thirst had been. All she'd ever known to want was his return. So she would enjoy the gift of his returning, and not be stupid.
"Child is sorry."
He didn't respond.
"Child is sorry, Ba."
"Mai."
He was shaking her. She said again, "Child is sorry," then she felt fingers groping around in her mouth, a polluting smell and then her eyes refocused and she realized it was not her father she saw but Truong, standing gaunt over her.
"Thank heavens," came Quyen's murmur.
Looking at him she finally understood, with a deep internal tremor, what it was that had drawn her to the boy all this time. It was not, as she had first assumed, his age – his awkward build. Nothing at all to do with Loc. It was his face. The expression on his face was the same expression she had seen on her father's face, every day, since he'd returned from reeducation. It was a face dead of surprise.
She gasped as the pain flooded back into her body. She was awake again, cold.
"Mai's fever is gone," Quyen said. She smiled at Mai, a smile of bright industry-such a smile as Mai had never hoped to see again. Unexpectedly she was reminded of her mother, and, to her even greater surprise, she found herself breaking into tears.
"Good," whispered Quyen. "That's good."
Mai wiped her eyes, her mouth, with the hem of her shirt. "I'm thirsty," she said. She looked around for Truong but he seemed to have slipped away.
"You should be. You slept almost two days."
It was evening. She stood up, Quyen helping her. Her legs giving at first. Slowly she climbed up the hatch. On deck she shielded her eyes against the sunset. An incandescent red sky veered into the dark ocean. Rows and rows of the same sun-blotched, peeling faces looked out at nothing.
"Everyone's up here," Quyen whispered, "because down there are all the sick people."
"Sick people?"
Mai checked the deck, then searched it again with growing unease. He'd been standing over her. Keeping her voice even, she asked, "Where is Truong?"
"Truong? I don't know." "But I saw him – when I woke up."
Quyen considered her carefully. "He was very worried about you, you know."
He wasn't in the clearing with the other children. Mai shuffled into the morass of arms and legs, heading for the pilothouse. Nobody made way for her. At that moment Truong emerged from the companionway. She almost cried out aloud when she saw him – gone was the pale, delicate-faced boy she'd remembered: now his lips were bloated, the skin of his cheeks brown, chapped in the pattern of bruised glass. An awful new wateriness in his gaze. He stood there warily as though summoned for punishment. Mai mustered her voice:
"Is Child well?"
"Yes. Are you better?"
"Truong, speak properly!" scolded Quyen.
"How is Chi Mai?"
"Well. Better." She leaned toward him, probing the viscosity of his eyes. His face's swollenness gave it a sleepy aspect.
"Ma said Chi Mai was very sick."
"Chi is better now."
"Tan and An were more sick than Chi," he said. "But Ma says they were lucky."
Mai smiled at Quyen; she hadn't heard him talk so much before. His voice came out scratchy but steady. He stood before them in a waiting stance: legs together, hands by his sides.
"Chi is glad for them."
"They died," he said. When Mai didn't respond he went on: "I saw the shark. All the uncles tried to catch it with that" – he pointed to a cable hanging off the derrick-crane – "but it was too fast."
"Truong!"
His eyes flicked to his mother. Then he said: "Fourteen people died while Chi Mai was sleeping."
"Child!"
He balled up his hands by his sides, then opened them again. "Chi Mai isn't sick anymore, ha?"
"That's right," Mai and Quyen said together.
It was difficult to reconcile him with his frail, wasting body. Seeing him, Mai's own body felt its full exhaustion. "Now . . . let's see ..." She lifted one hand until it hovered between them, palm down. "Child wants to play slaps?"
His black eyes stared at her with somethin
g akin to pity.
"Pretend this is the shark," she exclaimed. Quyen glanced up at her. Immediately – horrified, shocked by herself – Mai pulled back her hand. "Chi is just joking."
Later that evening, a young teenage girl with chicken legs wandered over to the gunwale and in a motion like a bow that didn't stop, toppled gracefully over the side.
"Wait!" someone cried.
"Let her be," another person said. "If she wants to, let her be."
"Heavens, someone save her. Someone!"
The first man stumbled to his feet, wild-eyed.
"You do it. Go on. Jump."
He stood like a scarecrow, frozen. Everyone watched him. He walked to the side and looked down at the shiny, dusk-reflecting water.
"I can't see her," he said.
"She must not have any family," Quyen whispered to Mai.
"She has the right idea," another low voice said. "Is there any better way to go?"
"Thoi," Anh Phuoc said, coming over. "Thoi, that's enough."
***
REEDUCATION CAMP. For two years those two words had framed the entirety of her imaginative life. Her father, of course, hadn't talked about it when he returned – nor her mother. Now, for the first time, someone talked to her about it. Anh Phuoc had fought in the same regiment as her father – had been sentenced to a camp in the same district. No, he hadn't known him. By the time the Communists took Ban Me Thuot in March 1975, the Americans were long gone and the Southern regiments in tatters – soldiers deserting, taking cover as civilians, fleeing into the jungles. Escape on every man's mind. Soon they all learned there was no escaping the Communists: not in the country they now controlled. They were skilled, he said, at turning north against south, village against village. He fell quiet.
Mai waited. She watched him remembering. Nine days had passed and now she noticed how severely he had aged: his eyes gone saggy, his skin mottled with dark sun spots.
"In the camps," he said, "they do what they do best. They take a man – and then they turn him against things."
From the back deck a middle-aged woman started wading in their direction through the sprawl of bodies. She held the port gunwale with both hands for balance.