by Adams, Liz
She slapped his hand away and engulfed him as far as she could take him down her throat. She twirled her tongue along the underside, sides, and top. Her nipples begged to be touched. She reached up and squeezed her breasts, rolled the nipples between her fingers. Satisfying sparks of bliss shot through her body.
Sean grabbed her wrists and pinned them over her head against the tree. “No. Not yet. Not until I say it’s okay.”
She whimpered. He guided his cock back to her mouth. She licked long licks from the base to the tip, making sure every part of his gorgeous length was wet. A thrill brewed inside of her as she sensed him watching her. What a show she must be giving him: Seeing her slurp him up, her breasts raised by the way he held her wrists above her head. Her arms were getting tired from being held high. She let his cock fall from her mouth. “Please, Sean.” She wanted to add “I need you,” but didn’t, couldn’t. Not yet.
He lifted her to her feet, shoving her back against the tree, and pressed his body against her. She felt his erection against her skirt.
“Listen to me carefully, Red. I will not let anyone decide our love for each other. You are mine.”
She pressed her hands on his firm chest and fervently unbuttoned his shirt.
He jerked her hands away. “Say it.”
Ignoring him, she tried to return her hands to his chest, but he fought her off. “Say it.”
“I am yours,” she finally said, looking into his blue eyes.
He fixed a kiss to her lips, grabbing her breasts. His clever mouth made her legs weak. His hands fulfilled the aching needs that welled at her chest. Squirming for his touch between her legs, she clenched her pussy.
He broke from the kiss, whispering through heavy breath, “Tonight you will prove it to me. You will be my bride.”
Amy wasn’t sure she heard him right.
“The next time anyone in the village sees you,” he continued, “you will be a married woman. My woman.”
She caught her breath. Her head was dizzy. Should she agree to wed him? The rest of her life could change after this decision.
He claimed her breast in his mouth. Amy sighed. So good was the hot, wet tongue at her nipple. She moaned. Of course, she would marry him, she wanted to say. There was no one else she wanted to love the rest of her life. But she had to think about it, right? She couldn’t just say “yes” now. Not at a time like this, when her body controlled every decision she made. What if she changed her mind, afterward? She thought it best to wait before telling him of her decision.
She opened his shirt. Her palms pushed flat against his lean, naked abdomen. So strong. So solid. Arching her back to give him more access to her other nipple, she closed her eyes and savored the sweetness of having a man’s tongue – no – it was more than that. Agreeing to be his bride meant her fiancé’s tongue was upon her breast.
My fiancé. The two words so rare, a woman could speak them only a brief moment in her lifetime. And now those words were hers. My fiancé. And that wasn’t all. Today she was going to lose her virginity. This moment. Now. Lost forever. Good riddance.
As his tongue lavished her nipple, he lifted her skirt and shoved a hand down her bloomers. Those fingers found her clit, massaged it, and sent tremors through her body.
She wrapped her arms around him, squeezing his head closer to her breast. There was a time she thought she wanted her first experience to be delicate. Her first time was to be a special, sacred moment. Eyes locked together as hips moved in a slow rhythm, and everything would last for hours. Now she wanted to be taken. Hard. Fast. Was that wrong? That’s not how her first time should be, was it?
His long, hot tongue swirled wet circles around the tips of her breasts. She gasped. His determined licks set her soaring.
She rested her hands on his bulging biceps. Giant. Solid. “What big arms you have.”
“All the better to hold you with,” he snarled.
He spun her around and pressed her chest against the tree. She felt his warm body behind her, grinding against her, while the rough tree bark scraped her belly and pinched her nipples. On the back of her neck, the sensation of teeth etching into her skin made her shiver. As though he were marking her as his own. Those teeth incised a line up the nape of her neck, then nipped her ear, treating her earlobe like a mouse in a cat’s jaws.
She moaned. “What big teeth you have.”
“All the better to eat you with.”
Memories of his head between her legs made her clench her pussy. She lay her cheek flat against the tree, her palms on the scratchy bark. He tugged down her bloomers. She was bare to the late afternoon air. His fingers toyed with her, reaching down between the cleft of her buttocks and between her legs. She felt them wiggle and jab at her folds as she dripped helplessly upon his fingertips. Then she gasped at the painful piercing into her core by an immense, thick finger. Huge!
“What a big finger you have.”
He chuckled. “That’s not my finger.” His cock plunged into her deeply, filling her past what she thought she was capable of holding. Her pussy clamped down, absorbing the jolts of pleasure and agony. She kept her eyes closed and bit her lip through the pain.
This was it. The end of her virginity. How did he know she wanted it this way?
As though reading her thoughts, he nibbled at her ear and whispered, “I know you well enough to know you’d say something if you didn’t like it.”
He reined her arms behind her. Amy gasped when he recommenced his pounding into her. She understood why she wanted it this way. Being ravished by Sean showed her just how much he desired her. She had to be taken this way. Rough and fierce.
His hand reached down the front of her waist and stroked her hardened clit. Lights popped behind her eyelids. She shuddered. Her legs felt limp. Her pussy tightened and body trembled. Another moan passed her lips. She responded by bucking back into him. Sliding along that long, thick rod of his.
Sean had his body pressed up hard against hers, mashing her into the tree. Hot chills built up within her body. Sean was inside of her. Her fiancé was inside of her. Their forbidden love expressed in its most powerful way. Sean’s fingers whisked at her cleft. She felt close to climax. Just a little more.
But he stopped his delicious thrusts. Stopped his loving fingers. “Not until you agree to wed me this day.”
She struggled to ride his cock and rub her clit against his hand. He wouldn’t allow it.
His voice grew louder. “Do you agree?” His cock stayed motionless, buried all the way inside of her.
Amy’s core throbbed, aching for release. “Sean, please.”
“Will you marry me?”
My fiancé. Sean will be all mine. Oh, how she needed him to batter her further and propel her into full ecstasy. “Yes!”
He released her hands, grabbed her by the waist, and hammered into her. She balled her hands up into fists and pounded on the tree. The bark chafed her nipples, flashing sensations of lightning and fire across her skin. Sean’s cock struck into her channel, hard and deep, his waist slapping against her fleshy rump.
Waves thrashed within her, her muscles clenched. She screamed out, a long and joyful wail.
He cried out and she felt him spurt inside her. She tightened around his cock and pulsed as her mind and body shattered to a million pieces.
In silent moments, the birds hung speechless. The wind was mute.
Amy panted from the exertion. Her thoughts glided down from their peak and she opened her eyes. Sean slipped out of her but still he kept her propped up against the tree. She could feel his warm body press against hers with every breath he took.
He clutched her hands and whispered. “Let’s find you something of Carmen’s that you can wear.”
***
Amy felt no guilt taking Carmen’s best dress for her wedding. She slipped it on. The red, satin fabric hung a little loose at the bust, but it showed off her curves well. Her aunt remained passed out on the bed.
“How do I look
?” She spread her arms wide and twirled for Sean.
“Like the most beautiful future I could ever hope for.”
Amy sprinted to him and leapt into his arms, wrapping her legs around him. He held her laughing, and then swung her legs around to hold her sideways against his chest. She placed her arms around his neck.
“I’m carrying you to the chapel.” He gave her a kiss.
She returned his kiss, relishing the velvety taste, then rested her head against his chest. Her fiancé’s chest. He carried her out the door into the woods.
The sun’s last rays of the day smiled through the trees and nuzzled its warm blessing against her shoulders. Birds chirped a love song of promise. A breeze blew softly. The trees bowed their branches in respect.
Amy realized there was only one moment in a woman’s life more magnificent than being able to say “My fiancé.” It was that moment when she would no longer be able to say those words. Under the bower of the forest chapel at marriage’s first kiss.
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About the Author
Liz Adams lives in the San Francisco Bay Area, CA. Amy “Red” Riding’s Hood is her first published short story of adult fairy tale erotica. Liz studied music and creative writing at UCLA and worked as a freelance model before making writing her career. In her spare time she cuddles with her husband on the couch to watch her favorite shows.
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Excerpt From
Alice’s Sexual Discovery
in a Wonderful Land
Liz Adams
About Alice’s Sexual Discovery in a Wonderful Land
Having returned from university for the holidays, Alice can’t shake the truth: She’s still in love with her childhood crush Jack, the buff and handsome gardener. But as inexperienced as she is with the fine art of sexuality, and having never been able to achieve the big O, will she ever be good enough to satisfy Jack?
A fall deep down a well takes her to an erotic wonderland fairy tale where she can do her due diligence at learning how to please a man and how to achieve orgasm. She shares her sexual discoveries with a young man named “Rabbit” who likes to explore, a group of strong villagers, a “Caterpillar” who has more hands than Alice can handle, a Mad Hatter who finds Alice’s exquisite weakness, and a whole host of talented characters.
All lead to the Queen and her majesty’s dark secret. Will Alice’s sexual discovery be just the thing to snag her desired man Jack? And will her erotic fairy tale help her discover the key to her own pleasure?
What readers are saying…
“Liz Adams’ Alice’s Sexual Discovery is an exciting new erotic twist on the old fairytale. As you follow Alice through her journey, you will find yourself slipping into her delectable fantasies. The descriptions involve all of your senses, letting you feel each teasing touch, taste every musky man, and smell the steam of sex. Just when you think Alice is done teasing you, a new scenario pops up that will leave you craving more. I highly recommend that you take a journey and lose yourself in the passionate wonderland you never knew existed...until now.” - Rebecca Hoffman, editor with Grit City Publications and author of Drop in the Ocean: http://rebeccamhoffman.blogspot.com
“I have to confess I always thought Alice in Wonderland was a bit stupid. It didn’t quite captivate me and I figured my imagination just wasn’t that obscure. The same however can’t be said for Liz Adam’s wonderfully creative erotic rewrite. Right from the moment Alice falls down the hole we realize this is a very different – yet similar – Wonderland. It helps to have read the original because it’s just wonderful to see how Adam’s has re-imagined the characters and events. A rabbit? Sure, but it’s the name of a deliciously cute naked man. Off with their heads? Absolutely...but not the heads the original queen was after. Overall? This is deliciously wicked. Have a man or a vibrator with you when you read it.” - Simone Sinna, erotic-romance suspense author of Embedded and Exposé: www.simonesinna.com
“I loved this book. I read it almost all in one go. The story pulls you in and won’t let you leave, very much like Alice’s experience between the pages. Every scene is deliciously sensual as you follow Alice on an adventure to find what’s eluding her. Even when some of the encounters are as strange as events in the original, they are so naughty and outrageous you can’t help but be turned on by them. Liz Adams has created a fantastical world where anything can happen and her characters are so vividly drawn you really feel as though you are in the story. She keeps you on a knife edge right to the very end, just like Alice. Liz is a brilliant storyteller and her words flow effortlessly across the page. I promise you, you won’t be able to put it down.” ~ Lexie Bay, author of Inside Looking Out: http://lexiebay.co.uk
“A wild, erotic ride through the scenes of the book’s namesake, complete with all the characters, but in x-rated versions. A sexy adventure for Alice, ending in a completely romantic happily-ever-after. Erotic fantasy readers will love this book.” ~ Randi Alexander, Author of Rode Hard and Put Up Satisfied: http://RandiAlexander.com
“Ms Adams has truly changed the way we look at fairy tales in this erotic tale that introduces you to the new rabbit hole! I look forward to more erotic tales from this talented author.” ~ Tonya Kinzer, Author of The Boss’s Pet series: http://www.tonyakinzer.com
“Liz has written a story that blows your mind. With lots of sloppy fingers, Alice’s clit throbs for attention from the naked buff men she meets along the way. With tongues that make Alice flood the world with her sweet elixir. Wow! In between that, the swallowing, chewing and licking certain types of...um body parts. Alice grows or shrinks to help her reach the perfect orgasm erotic style. With continual prodding and poking throughout the book, in search for sexual arousal. You’re going to wish you had a dress like Alice’s that will take you to Wonderland and back. So the whimpers will escape your lips.” - Melissa Craig, author of Plentiful Package: http://www.melissacraigauthor.wordpress.com
Author’s Note
I found writing this erotic version of Alice’s Adventures in Wonderland more challenging than I had anticipated. Wanting to stay true to the original story, I noticed that Alice never stayed with one character long enough to build a meaningful relationship. As a result, in this erotic version, she ends up traveling from character to character having sexual encounters with each one. If you prefer erotic romance, I’m afraid you’ll be greatly disappointed. But if you’re looking for a fun frolic in Alice’s wonderland with many of the familiar characters, this will be just your cup of tea!
This excerpt of Alice’s Sexual Discovery in a Wonderful Land starts at the third chapter of the 23-chapter novella. The first two chapters are Alice’s experiences at home before she falls down the hole into Wonderland. To set up the scene, Alice is fond of Jack the gardener and has a nightmare of him mocking her lack of sexual experience and her inability to orgasm. She asks her sister’s friend Carol to give her sexual advice and senses that Carol and Jack are attracted to each other. Frustrated, she runs off only to fall into the start of her adventures.
Read the above paragraph for chapters 1 and 2.
Chapter 3
The drop hurt like hell.
Alice landed on a patch of roots and dirt. She clutched the tender part of her waist that had hit a large tree root. There would be a bruise there for days. Standing up in this dark area, she took a damage report, patting herself down. A bruised hip and a bit of a scratched hand. Her dress was dirty, but had survived the fall. She straightened her hair.
Where was she? The dirty brick walls were just a dark, hollow cylinder straight up. Alice knew this place. It was the estate’s old well, forgotten and left for nature to reclaim.
Something moved on the walls. She froze. If she didn’t know any better she’d say it was a naked man that went through an
imperceptible doorway. A man down here? It made no sense.
Alice reached out to find the wall and feel if it led to a doorway. Her hands landed on skin.
“Oh!” She yanked back her hands. “Sorry!”
She waited for a response, but there was none. Was there really someone there? Instead of reaching her hands out again, she shifted closer, ready to delicately nudge against whatever or whoever it was with her shoulder. She connected, and felt his fingers graze across her arm. She stepped back.
“Who’s there?”
Silence. Whoever it was didn’t come after her. As though stepping into the center of the well was her safe zone.
Alice slowly stepped back into his vicinity. Delicate fingers touched her arm once more. She shivered. Her breaths came, uneven. He – it had to be a man even though she couldn’t see him – was exciting her with the gentlest of touches.
What would Jack say if he found out Alice let herself be touched by a stranger? Would he be jealous? Would he be angry? Alice could see him now getting red in the face. Alice smiled and stepped closer to the groping hands.
Desiring to be a little more passive, she turned away from him. Powerful muscular hands massaged her shoulders. Alice dropped her head forward and let his strong fingers push out the tension inside her. His oh-so-good hands swept down her back toward her waist.
Where else would his fingers touch her? How far would she let this anonymous man go?
This is a dangerous game, Alice, she told herself.
But, oh, it felt so good! Alice’s nipples hardened. Would their desire for his touch be fulfilled? Surely he wouldn’t go that far. But Alice did indeed feel his warm hands reach her waist and inch upwards along her sides. She shivered. She never knew she was so sensitive there.