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by B. S. Johnson


  into carpet toolbag again and takes out a

  Mediterranean. Her husband is

  short length of model wire fencing. This

  understood to be a very understanding

  he places carefully beside the red line

  man. When this child is born it turns out

  opposite the upright of the tee junction.

  to be — surprise! — the third part of

  He then returns the motorcycle to first

  himself! When this third part grows up

  position and speeds it towards the

  he goes around stirring up a right load of

  pileup. As before, he releases it so it

  trouble, gets on the wrong side of the

  goes anywhere, then tidies it up: he

  local law, and ends up dead. He then

  sends the motorcycle one way, under the

  proceeds to join the other two parts of

  tanker, and the rider flying towards the

  himself in wherever, which is now called

  fence.

  heaven.

  PRIVATE: (to himself) The wires cut

  through him like a cheesecutter.

  SLEEPER: (vo) You don’t think it’s

  new?

  PRIVATE indicates over shoulder to

  camera: for the first time his face can be

  PRIVATE: They’ve heard it all before.

  seen.

  BCU SLEEPER, also seen for the first

  SLEEPER: Like that? On the Epilogue?

  time. He is about sixty, fat, bald, jovial.

  They both break into loud laughter.

  Full shot of set. The two men are on a

  squash court. A carpet bag identical to

  PRIVATE’s and belonging to SLEEPER

  is in the right corner of the front wall.

  Cameras are generally looking at court

  from back wall position.

  SLEEPER stands with his back against

  the front wall. He is dressed in a long,

  striped winceyette nightgown which

  stretches to his ankles, and is barefoot.

  On his head he wears a tasselled red

  nightcap.

  SLEEPER stops laughing suddenly, is

  serious.

  SLEEPER: I haven’t been feeling myself

  today.

  PRIVATE: You want me to do it for

  you?

  SLEEPER walks slowly but directly to

  where PRIVATE is squatting with cars,

  overturns tanker with bare big toe,

  delicately.

  SLEEPER: I’m beginning to feel sad

  about my extremities, too, particularly

  the smaller ones.

  PRIVATE begins packing the models

  away in his bag.

  PRIVATE: Sometimes you treat me as

  though I’m from another planet.

  SLEEPER: But you are, aren’t you?

  PRIVATE fishes in bag, brings out a

  book entitled Essays: David Hume.

  PRIVATE: How about Hume?

  SLEEPER: Whom?

  PRIVATE: Hume. Pronounced Hume. Of

  The Standard of Taste.

  SLEEPER takes book, opens it, begins

  SLEEPER: Yes. Of the Standard of

  reading.

  Taste. “Men of the most confined

  knowledge are able to remark a

  difference of taste in the narrow circle of

  their acquaintance, even where the

  During this speech, establish detail of

  persons have been educated under the

  squash court: CU of comers, red lines at

  same government, and have early

  various levels, different material of

  imbibed the same prejudices. But those

  lower board, and so on.

  who can enlarge their view to

  contemplate distant nations and remote

  ages, are still more surprised at the great

  inconsistence and contrariety. We are apt

  to call barbarous whatever departs

  widely from our own taste and

  apprehension; but soon find the epithet

  of reproach retorted on us. And the

  highest arrogance and self-conceit is at

  last startled, on observing an equal

  assurance on all sides, and scruples,

  amidst such a contest of sentiment, to

  pronounce positively in its own favour.”

  BCU PRIVATE

  PRIVATE: (eagerly) You mean it doesn’t

  matter what they think of us?

  SLEEPER: No, it doesn’t matter.

  Though it may be painful.

  PRIVATE: It’s all subjective opinion?

  SLEEPER: Yes.

  PRIVATE: So what does matter?

  SLEEPER: Me. (pause) And perhaps you.

  PRIVATE: Me! And perhaps you!

  SLEEPER: Me!

  SLEEPER: Me!

  (pause)

  SLEEPER: There you are, then.

  PRIVATE: There you are!

  SLEEPER: Where?

  PRIVATE takes from his bag the

  smallest 8mm home movie projector

  available, sets it up to face front wall,

  gets up, takes plug lead towards back

  wall. Just before he reaches the flush

  door in back wall it opens: a West Indian

  Immediately door opens, sound of a

  railway PORTER hands PRIVATE a tea

  diesel express passing at high speed

  tray (two mugs of tea on it) with one

  through a main line station.

  hand while with the other he takes the

  projector plug and lead. Exit PORTER,

  Sound off immediately door shuts.

  door shuts.

  PRIVATE puts tray down on floor, goes

  back to projector, switches it on. Shown

  on front wall is now a film of a squash

  court with two women (pretty, athletic,

  early twenties) playing squash very well.

  Establish beyond doubt that the two men

  are on a similar court by widest shot of

  Music over: distantly, the sound of a

  full set to include them, the projector,

  boys’ bugle band rehearsing in a tin

  front wall and as much as possible of

  hall.

  side walls.

  BCU PRIVATE watching screen as

  though he had never seen either women

  or squash before.

  BCU SLEEPER calm, taking it in his

  SLEEPER: (to himself) A man taking

  stride.

  pictures of a man taking pictures: there

  is something in that!

  SLEEPER crosses to projector, switches

  it off.

  PRIVATE: But what happened in the

  end?

  SLEEPER plugs in another lead (i.e. at a

  take-off point), which trails from his

  own bag. On the other end is a miniature

  slide projector (e.g. Ilford Elmo CS)

  which SLEEPER sets up to throw on

  right side wall.

  PRIVATE: Once more you’re in the

  forefront of non-stop developments.

  SLEEPER: It’s my nature — don’t

  crucify me for it.

  PRIVATE: I wouldn’t crucify you with

  SLEEPER smiles, settles himself,

  someone else’s nails!

  punches up the first slide: which is of a

  Biblical pastoral scene (hills, shepherds)

  of the cheapest printed kind (crude

  colours and drawing) as given to

  SLEEPER: The change in the rules of

  children at some Sunday schools.

  the game is that anyone can now gain

  entry to this place called heaven. The
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br />   trouble is that the regulations for entry

  are rather obscure, and there’s no way of

  telling whether it’s worth going to

  anyway.

  New slide: El Greco’s “Christ expelling

  At the same time as heaven was

  the moneylenders”

  christened, two other parts of wherever

  were renamed purgatory and hell.

  Purgatory is a sort of halfway house

  between heaven and hell. There is also

  another place called limbo, which is

  BCU PRIVATE: sulking

  where he has sent all those unfortunate

  enough to have been born between

  himself and the third part of himself.

  Residents include such all-time

  favourites as Moses, Job, Socrates,

  Change slide to Roman soldier, grinning

  Heraclitus, the Unknown Centurion, and

  foolishly

  Julius Caesar. Few actual details of

  limbo have been allowed to seep out,

  but it does not appear to be as bad as

  hell; nothing, it was said, could be as

  bad as hell.

  Change slide to another pastoral scene

  To qualify for entry into any of the new

  of same type as before.

  places you had first of all to be dead.

  Then, if you had satisfied the regulations

  and been what was accepted as good,

  Change slide back, as if by accident, to

  you were at once translated to heaven

  grinning Roman soldier.

  and given over to endless pleasure —

  whether you felt like it or not. If you had

  PRIVATE begins to get restless, fiddles

  not been good, then you went to hell,

  to change reel on his own projector.

  which was very painful and also without

  end. If there was any doubt about

  whether you had been good or not good,

  Proper slide replaces soldier: which is of

  then you did a stretch in purgatory while

  Frank Lloyd Wright’s house Falling

  he sorted things out in what might

  Water.

  presumably be called his mind. Later you

  would be posted either up to heaven or

  down to hell, though these directions, up

  and down, must be considered

  Change slide to still of Skylon at 1951

  metaphorical, of course. But even if you

  Festival of Britain.

  made it into heaven, you still had to

  watch it: there were examples of people

  being chucked out for one kind of

  mafficking about or another.

  PRIVATE finishes changing reels.

  Once you were in hell, however, you had

  to settle down to it: you were not

  allowed out, however good you tried to

  be through the unimaginable pain.

  Silence.

  When it is clear SLEEPER has finished,

  PRIVATE starts his projector. On front

  wall is now projected a film loop of a

  dolphin leaping out of water up towards

  an object held high, failing to reach it,

  and falling back again into the pool.

  Loop repeats endlessly during following

  conversation and until indicated.

  PRIVATE: (proudly, indicating screen)

  That’s a genuine Turkish bath.

  SLEEPER: The Turks overran these

  parts?

  PRIVATE: (nods) Yes. They were

  bastards then, the Turks.

  SLEEPER: (mildly) We’ve been bastards

  ourselves, in our time.

  PRIVATE: Yes. Not now, though. Nor

  the Turks.

  SLEEPER: How come there’s still much

  bastardy about, then?

  PRIVATE: Must be. . . .others. . .

  SLEEPER: Other who?

  PRIVATE: Other Turks.

  SLEEPER tosses florin at PRIVATE in

  token contempt. PRIVATE picks it up,

  flips it high in the air, catches it, looks at

  it.

  PRIVATE: Nineteen sixty-one! Did you

  know that you can read that upside

  down?

  SLEEPER comes across to him, takes

  the coin back.

 

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