Hyde

Hyde Page 7

by Roxanne Greening

  [RP239]Heartbreaking. End of sentence

  [RP240]She needed news, and I had none.

  [RP241]Comma before Hyde

  [RP242]gave

  [RP243]surprise. It

  [RP244]deeply

  [RP245]filleted

  [RP246]comma before and

  [RP247]herself, and my shirt

  [RP248]helpless. Something

  [RP249]times were due

  [RP250]comma after yeah

  [RP251]what do you thing…. “…didn’t even bother removing my shoes.”

  [RP252]Comma before and

  [RP253]“…Tom and no one..”

  [RP254]I cupped

  [RP255]tired

  [RP256]comma before Hyde

  [RP257]comma after darlin

  [RP258]I stood and walked

  [RP259]Did you mean bought?

  [RP260]I turned to look

  [RP261]knelt

  [RP262]fingernails

  [RP263]comma after Hyde

  [RP264]Question mark after Moment

  [RP265]“..a sign that it’s okay. “ Erase look and place period

  [RP266]New sentence. “I walked out the..”

  [RP267]Comma before and

  [RP268]Comma before and

  [RP269]Period after brother. “Once again, the woman..”

  [RP270]clouded

  [RP271]period after felt. Start new sentence with “I was..”

  [RP272]period after Beau

  [RP273]period after head, New senence with Talking

  [RP274]Comma after there

  [RP275]shocked, and I

  [RP276]comma before and

  [RP277]… tension, which was

  [RP278]Comma after know

  [RP279]Comma after some

  [RP280]Nodded. It was the …

  [RP281]Comma before and

  [RP282]Touching me. It sent

  [RP283]comma after closed

  [RP284]comma after things

  [RP285]comma before and

  [RP286]comma before and

  [RP287]comma before and

  [RP288]… alley. The

  [RP289]Comma after god

  [RP290]Comma before and

  [RP291]Comma before and

  [RP292]Period after Alissa. Start sentence with Three

  [RP293]once and it

  [RP294]watched

  [RP295]did you mean “…his eyes turned”

  [RP296]And leaned

  [RP297]tilted

  [RP298]It’s me, okay? If you..

  [RP299]Stop. I’ve drempt of this

  [RP300]Savor it, I needed

  [RP301]fought

  [RP302]Comma after instead

  [RP303]eyed

  [RP304]comma before and

  [RP305]comma before and

  [RP306]..him and widen

  [RP307]comma after please

  [RP308]comma before and

  [RP309]comma before and

  [RP310]my

  [RP311]comma before and

  [RP312]comma after rough

  [RP313]I ignored it

  [RP314]Anoher screamed escaped me as

  [RP315]Comma after way

  [RP316]Comma before but

  [RP317]Comma before and

  [RP318]Comma before and

  [RP319]…I started to pace.

  [RP320]… get them for me

  [RP321]Comma after child

  [RP322]Those, of course, didn’t

  [RP323]Comma before and

  [RP324]…our, I mean his room was

  [RP325]Comma before and

  [RP326]Not slow down. Not even

  [RP327]Comma before and

  [RP328]..combination of the night…

  [RP329]watched

  [RP330]climbed

  [RP331]hand with a …

  [RP332]climbed

  [RP333]comma after him

  [RP334]squealed

  [RP335]comma after years

  [RP336]watched

  [RP337]shades are more

  [RP338]stop, not by

  [RP339]helped

  [RP340]watched

  [RP341]removed

  [RP342]took

  [RP343]closed

  [RP344]reached

  [RP345]linked

  [RP346]comma before and

  [RP347]comma before and

  [RP348]walked

  [RP349]didn’t

  [RP350]I released him and walked

  [RP351]Like someone who hasn’t…

  [RP352]I turned and gasped

  [RP353]…captive and stared

  [RP354]knew

  [RP355]was written

  [RP356]comma after wrong

  [RP357]almost completely went out.

  [RP358]man and whispered

  [RP359]…he said had a fear of death…

  [RP360]I would join the sentences. …. beside me and he almost…

  [RP361]leaned

  [RP362]comma before and

  [RP363]alleyway

  [RP364]and pushed

  [RP365]pressed

  [RP366]madman

  [RP367]there

  [RP368]he removed the

  [RP369]knew

  [RP370]and it

  [RP371]Although, I wasn’t

  [RP372]me and deserved

  [RP373]Slowly, I

  [RP374]looked

  [RP375]wanted

  [RP376]I was, that he was

  [RP377]going. At

  [RP378]laughed as I

  [RP379]comma before and

  [RP380]grabbed

  [RP381]turned

  [RP382]pushed

  [RP383]I pulled

  [RP384]comma after lips

  [RP385]me, an coated

  [RP386]comma before and

  [RP387]…arms and the

  [RP388]remembered

  [RP389]remembered

  [RP390]comma before and

  [RP391]comma after pocket

  [RP392]noticed

  [RP393]comma before someone

  [RP394]clubhouse

  [RP395]I turned and looked

  [RP396]Comma before table

  [RP397]gave

  [RP398]watched

  [RP399]comma after now

  [RP400]I turned

  [RP401]…and gave him

  [RP402]…over, getting

  [RP403]….her, he

  [RP404]men

  [RP405]comma before and

  [RP406]…and watched

  [RP407].. and debated

  [RP408]Short-lived

  [RP409]Comma after time

  [RP410]looked

  [RP411]…this. Once again…

  [RP412]And tried

  [RP413]Comma after pocket

  [RP414]And called

  [RP415]I turned and looked

  [RP416]watched

  [RP417]climbed

  [RP418]…there and staired

  [RP419]I nodded

  [RP420]…and looked

  [RP421]The shocks gasped and echoed

  [RP422]And made me

  [RP423]…to me, it was

  [RP424]Comma after please

  [RP425]And I

  [RP426]Continued, since I didn’t…

  [RP427]Comma before and

  [RP428]Her hands covered her…

  [RP429]Comma before and

  [RP430]Comma before and

  [RP431]Comma before and

  [RP432]I stood and ran

  [RP433]I climbed

  [RP434]…car, and looked..

  [RP435]….place and it wanted

  [RP436]Comma after you

  [RP437]…I crossed

  [RP438]To look

  [RP439]…cliff. The..

  [RP440]Comma after her

  [RP441]Period after edge

  [RP442]Comma before but

  [RP443]on

  [RP444]watched

  [RP445]Comma before and

  [RP446]Comma before and

  [RP447]flatlining

  [RP448]watched

 
[RP449]…sound, the..

  [RP450]cradled

  [RP451]watched

  [RP452]mother’s

  [RP453]comma after boob

 

 

 

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