by Dante King
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[1]SB: Blade Master
[2]OL: artifact that will bring the various parts of the tower back together.
[3]SB: Minnie
[4]SB: Brock
[5]Note: I removed the parts where Zito flirts with the women. Harem readers really don't like that kind of thing--they are ultra protective over the MC's harem members.
[6]which tower is it that he own? There was a red, blue and green one? Which are they headed for?
[SG7]SB: Siphon can be used at a greater distance
[SG8]Note this in case he has her other spells later in the book
[SG9]OL
[10]changed ice to electricity because he knows a lot of types of magic as it (teleketentic, telepathic, lightning)
[11]Julien had summoned vines here but I changed it for the same reason as above
[12]So, he took the crystal with him? I thought he just had to leave it there and he could teleport back to it? The tower said teleporting took a lot of magic, whose is it using?