Writing Deep Point of View
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Is this what Paul felt, this lust to hurt? It feels surprisingly good. The long-suppressed part of you cracks its chrysalis.
What will it feel like to slice a knife into those pale cheeks? To peel off his skin. To let his warm blood trickle over your hands. How soon will the scents of blood and fear outgrow those of beer and mint? To see the fear in his eyes. Uncertainty first. Then fright. Panic. Terror. Knowledge of death.
Will you give him what he deserves? What all men deserve.
Nobody knows who he is going to meet, so his body, when finally found, won’t be linked to you. He’s the perfect first object for your vengeance.
Only a fool would let this chance pass by.
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ACKNOWLEDGEMENTS
Thanks to the members of the Professional Authors group who critiqued the chapters, and to beta readers Melissa Tacket, Beate Buchta and Graeme Tollins who checked the manuscript and alerted me to flaws before publication.
The book cover is by Erica Syverson. The proofreading was done by Julia Gibbs. The formatting was done by Eled Cernik.
I also wish to thank my sweet black cat Sulu who lay on the desk snuggling between my arms while I wrote this book. Every writer needs a muse like this.