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(143) Replaced ‘birds who’ with ‘birds that’.
(146) Replaced ‘Main Square’ with ‘main square’.
(149) Replaced ‘greets your’ with ‘greet your’.
(151) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’.
(153) Replaced ‘bardsmanship’ with ‘Bardsmanship’.
(154) Added a period after ‘turn to 266’, ‘turn to 135’, ‘turn to 51’, and ‘turn to 230’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Elementalism, and’ with ‘Elementalism and’.
(158) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’.
(159) Replaced ‘Ren, but’ with ‘Ren but’. Replaced ‘rider, that's’ with ‘rider; that's’.
(161) Replaced ‘agonising’ with ‘agonizing’. Replaced ‘Conda's’ with ‘conda's’.
(165) Replaced ‘foot, then’ with ‘foot; then’.
(166) Replaced ‘drawbolt’ with ‘bolt’. Replaced ‘the key’ with ‘the Red Key’. Replaced ‘inside, then’ with ‘inside, and then’. Replaced ‘your backpack’ with ‘your Backpack’.
(167) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’.
(171) Replaced ‘Kai curing’ with ‘Magnakai Curing’.
(172) Replaced ‘on-rushing’ with ‘onrushing’. Replaced ‘continue, to 18’ with ‘continue, turn to 18’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘head over tail’ with ‘head-over-tail’.
(173) Replaced ‘Old Kingdom spell’ with ‘Old Kingdom Spell’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(174) Replaced ‘Siyenese compass’ with ‘Siyenese Compass’. Replaced ‘military quarter’ with ‘Military Quarter’. Replaced ‘compass, and your Kai sixth sense, both’ with ‘Siyenese Compass and your Kai Sixth Sense both’.
(175) Replaced ‘potion’ with ‘Poghlam’. Replaced ‘your backpack’ with ‘your Backpack’.
(176) Removed quotation marks from thought-speech. Replaced ‘patience and your effort is soon’ with ‘patience and your effort are soon’.
(177) Replaced ‘through, then’ with ‘through, and then’.
(178) Replaced ‘armour, then’ with ‘armour, and then’.
(181) Replaced ‘much-favoured’ with ‘much favoured’.
(182) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’.
(183) Replaced ‘five miles’ with ‘5 miles’.
(185) Replaced ‘shield spell’ with ‘Shield spell’.
(186) Replaced ‘have found who they’ with ‘have found whom they’.
(187) Replaced ‘metres’ with ‘yards’.
(188) Replaced ‘Kai curing’ with ‘Magnakai Curing’.
(190) Replaced ‘stikes’ with ‘strikes’. Replaced ‘bang’ with ‘bang’.
(195) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’.
(198) Replaced ‘side-steps’ with ‘sidesteps’. Replaced ‘rib-cage’ with ‘rib cage’.
(199) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Replaced ‘continue, to 18’ with ‘continue, turn to 18’. Replaced ‘the creature's head’ with ‘the closest creature's head’ since the specific target had not yet been stated.
(200) Replaced ‘much-practiced’ with ‘much practiced’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’. Replaced ‘Kai-surge, and’ with ‘Kai-surge and’.
(201) Replaced ‘Siyenese compass’ with ‘Siyenese Compass’.
(203) Replaced ‘metres’ with ‘yards’.
(204) Replaced ‘Siyenese compass’ with ‘Siyenese Compass’.
(206) Replaced each occurrence of ‘Khea Khan’ with ‘Khea-khan’. Replaced ‘tiger's head flag’ with ‘tiger's-head flag’.
(207) Replaced ‘Ring, and’ with ‘Ring and’.
(210) Replaced ‘Conda's’ with ‘conda's’.
(212) Replaced ‘pathsmanship’ with ‘Pathsmanship’.
(214) Replaced ‘Old Kingdom spell’ with ‘Old Kingdom Spell’.
(215) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’.
(217) Replaced ‘ante-chamber’ with ‘antechamber’.
(218) Replaced ‘gold crowns’ with ‘Gold Crowns’.
(219) Replaced ‘they enter’ with ‘they will enter’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Swapped the links to Sections 300 and 254 so that the Random Number inflicts less damage on the player with the higher resultant value. Replaced ‘pushing it forward’ with ‘pushing it forwards’.
(220) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘Magnakai healing’ with ‘Kai healing’.
(221) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Replaced ‘Whoomph!,’ with ‘Whoomph!’. Replaced ‘bow, then’ with ‘Bow, and then’. Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’.
(222) Replaced ‘armour, then’ with ‘armour, and then’.
(223) Replaced ‘skills, or if you choose not to use them, or a Bow’ with ‘skills, nor a Bow, or if you choose not to use them’. Replaced ‘Bow, and’ with ‘Bow and’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’. Replaced ‘Elementalism, and’ with ‘Elementalism and’. Replaced ‘Kai-surge, and’ with ‘Kai-surge and’.
(225) Replaced ‘distant ravine, ‘that gully’ with ‘distant ravine. ‘That gully’. Added a paragraph break before ‘Rimoah nods in reply’.
(227) Replaced ‘storeroom’ with ‘store room’. Replaced ‘creaks opens’ with ‘creaks open’.
(228) Deleted ‘which you carry in your pack’.
(230) Deleted ‘If you possess the Kai Weapon “Magnara”, add 3.’ as it is impossible to arrive in this section if you possess this particular Kai Weapon (cf. Section 106 and subsequent sections).
(233) Replaced ‘Old Kingdom spell’ with ‘Old Kingdom Spell’.
(235) Replaced ‘storeroom’ with ‘store room’. Replaced ‘mindblast’ with ‘Mindblast’.
(237) Replaced ‘lookout, then’ with ‘lookout; then’.
(239) Replaced ‘Bow, and’ with ‘Bow and’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Elementalism, and’ with ‘Elementalism and’.
(240) Replaced ‘pathsmanship’ with ‘Pathsmanship’. Replaced ‘a corridor of weather-worn pillars line’ with ‘a corridor of weather-worn pillars lines’. Replaced ‘Sentinel, or higher’ with ‘Sentinel or higher’. Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘Elementalism, and’ with ‘Elementalism and’.
(241) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
(242) Replaced ‘Xanons’ with ‘Xanon’. Replaced ‘queuing’ with ‘queueing’.
(243) Removed paragraph break between ‘Random Number Table.’ and ‘If you possess’. Replaced ‘metres’ with ‘yards’.
(245) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘Bow, and’ with ‘Bow and’.
(246) Replaced ‘pack, then’ with ‘pack; then’.
(247) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’.
(248) Replaced ‘Special Items list’ with ‘list of Special Items’.
(249) Replaced ‘pass, then’ with ‘pass, and then’.
(250) Replaced ‘plains' grass’ with ‘plains grass’. Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘five miles’ with ‘5 miles’.
(251) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘silence, then’ with ‘silence; then’. Replaced ‘metres’ with ‘yards’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘mound of rocks that now block’ with ‘mound of rocks that now blocks’.
(252) Replaced ‘Grand Mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced
‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’.
(253) Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘All four of your arrows find their mark’ with ‘Each of your four Arrows finds its mark’. Replaced ‘metres’ with ‘yards’.
(256) Replaced ‘Siyenese compass’ with ‘Siyenese Compass’. Replaced ‘military quarter’ with ‘Military Quarter’. Replaced ‘compass, and your Kai sixth sense, both’ with ‘Siyenese Compass and your Kai Sixth Sense both’. Replaced ‘dimly-lit’ with ‘dimly lit’.
(257) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’.
(258) Replaced ‘much-favoured’ with ‘much favoured’.
(261) Replaced ‘Kai rank of Grand Master Superior’ with ‘rank of Kai Grand Master Superior or higher’. Replaced ‘Grand Defender’ with ‘Grand Defender or higher’. Replaced ‘metres’ with ‘yards’. Replaced ‘Assimilance, and’ with ‘Assimilance and’. Replaced ‘Elementalism, and’ with ‘Elementalism and’.
(263) Replaced ‘Old Kingdom spell’ with ‘Old Kingdom Spell’.
(264) Replaced ‘Magnakai Discipline of Healing’ with ‘Magnakai Discipline of Curing’.
(266) Replaced ‘Old Kingdom spell’ with ‘Old Kingdom Spell’.
(268) Replaced ‘click’ with ‘click’. Replaced ‘The Innkeeper’ with ‘The innkeeper’ in the illustration's caption. Replaced ‘breath, then’ with ‘breath, and then’. Replaced ‘Telegnosis, or’ with ‘Telegnosis or’.
(269) Replaced ‘bowfire’ with ‘bow-fire’.
(271) Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’. Replaced ‘Bow, and’ with ‘Bow and’.
(272) Replaced ‘Grand Sentinel’ with ‘Grand Sentinel or higher’. Replaced ‘Pathsmanship, and’ with ‘Pathsmanship and’.
(273) Replaced ‘Well I vowed’ with ‘Well, I vowed’. Replaced ‘two, then’ with ‘two, and then’. Replaced ‘a gust of ale-soaked air and the jingle of bells interrupts the’ with ‘a gust of ale-soaked air and the jingle of bells interrupt the’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Bardsmanship, and’ with ‘Bardsmanship and’.
(275) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
(277) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’.
(279) Replaced ‘bang’ with ‘bang’.
(280) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
(281) Replaced ‘mindblast’ with ‘Mindblast’.
(282) Replaced ‘battle cry’ with ‘battle-cry’.
(283) Replaced ‘become irate’ with ‘becomes irate’.
(284) Replaced ‘Old Kingdom spell’ with ‘Old Kingdom Spell’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(286) Replaced ‘gold crowns’ with ‘Gold Crowns’.
(287) Replaced ‘your startled horses on to the end of the alley and then turn him’ with ‘your startled horses on to the end of the alley and then turn them’.
(290) Replaced ‘Grand Guardian’ with ‘Grand Guardian or higher’. Replaced ‘metres’ with ‘yards’. Replaced ‘Herbmastery, and’ with ‘Herbmastery and’. Replaced ‘Kai-surge, and’ with ‘Kai-surge and’.
(293) Replaced both occurrences of ‘ie,’ with ‘i.e.’. Replaced ‘0, 2, 4, 6, or 8’ with ‘2, 4, 6, 8, or 0’.
(294) Replaced ‘your life and your mission ends here’ with ‘your life and your mission end here’. Replaced ‘the Sergeant’ with ‘the sergeant’.
(295) Replaced ‘Siyenese compass’ with ‘Siyenese Compass’. Replaced ‘military quarter’ with ‘Military Quarter’. Replaced ‘compass, and your Kai sixth sense, both’ with ‘Siyenese Compass and your Kai Sixth Sense both’.
(297) Replaced ‘The Captain’ with ‘The captain’.
(298) Replaced both occurrences of ‘compass’ with ‘Siyenese Compass’. Replaced ‘soldier's mess hall’ with ‘soldiers' mess hall’. Replaced ‘Nexus, and’ with ‘Nexus and’. Replaced ‘Assimilance, and’ with ‘Assimilance and’. Replaced ‘Elementalism, and’ with ‘Elementalism and’.
(301) Replaced ‘storerooms’ with ‘store rooms’.
(302) Replaced ‘silence, then’ with ‘silence; then’.
(304) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replacd ‘bow, and’ with ‘Bow and’. Replaced ‘with the other’ with ‘with the others’. Replaced ‘weapon’ with ‘Weapon’.
(306) Replaced ‘the patrol are’ with ‘the patrol is’.
(307) Replaced ‘bang’ with ‘bang’.
(309) Replaced ‘three miles’ with ‘3 miles’.
(310) Replaced ‘the dazed Captain’ with ‘the dazed captain’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘Magnakai healing’ with ‘Kai healing’. Replaced ‘dazed Captain’ with ‘dazed captain’.
(311) Replaced ‘ietms’ with ‘items’.
(312) Replaced each occurrence of ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’. Replaced ‘Elementalism, and’ with ‘Elementalism and’. Replaced ‘Kai-surge, and’ with ‘Kai-surge and’.
(313) Replaced ‘lookout, then’ with ‘lookout, and then’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’.
(316) Replaced ‘gold crown’ with ‘Gold Crown’. Replaced ‘this crown’ with ‘this Crown’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
(317) Replaced ‘Kai Grand Guardian, or higher’ with ‘Kai Grand Guardian or higher’. Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’.
(318) Replaced ‘elite’ with ‘élite’. Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘If you have attained the Kai rank of Sun Lord’ with ‘If you possess Grand Huntmastery and have attained the Kai rank of Sun Lord’ since you can also arrive in this section from Section 334 by using Grand Pathsmanship. Replaced ‘If you have yet to attain this level of Kai rank’ with ‘If you do not possess this Discipline, or if you have yet to attain this level of Kai rank’. Replaced ‘tiger's head emblem’ with ‘tiger's-head emblem’.
(319) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’.
(320) Replaced ‘the ring’ with ‘the Tiger Ring’.
(321) Replaced ‘commit, then’ with ‘commit; then’. Replaced ‘Kai weapon’ with ‘Kai Weapon’.
(322) Replaced ‘out-running’ with ‘outrunning’. Replaced ‘in a wooded hillside’ with ‘on a wooded hillside’.
(323) Replaced ‘Special Items list’ with ‘list of Special Items’.
(325) Replaced ‘your axe’ with ‘your Axe’.
(326) Replaced ‘battle cry’ with ‘battle-cry’. Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(327) Replaced ‘claim back’ with ‘reclaim’. Replaced ‘me, Captain’ with ‘me, captain’.
(330) Replaced ‘Old Kingdom spell’ with ‘Old Kingdom Spell’. Replaced ‘on-rushing’ with ‘onrushing’. Replaced ‘continue, to 18’ with ‘continue, turn to 18’. Replaced ‘thud’ with ‘thud’. Replaced ‘the onrushing creature’ with ‘the closest of the onrushing creatures’ since the specific target had not yet been stated.
(331) Replaced ‘storeroom’ with ‘store room’.
(333) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’.
(334) Replaced ‘squad are’ with ‘squad is’. Replaced ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’. Replaced ‘Huntmastery, or’ with ‘Huntmastery or’.
(335) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’.
(336) Replaced ‘report, then’ with ‘report, and then’.
(337) Replaced ‘agonising’ with ‘agonizing’.
(338) Replaced ‘the speed of his movements increase’ with ‘the
speed of his movements increases’.
(339) Replaced ‘steeply sloping’ with ‘steeply-sloping’. Replaced ‘belt, then’ with ‘belt, and then’.
(340) Replaced ‘Kai sense’ with ‘Kai Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘Siyenese compass’ with ‘Siyenese Compass’. Replaced ‘military quarter’ with ‘Military Quarter’. Replaced ‘compass, and your Kai sixth sense, both’ with ‘Siyenese Compass and your Kai Sixth Sense both’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’.
(342) Replaced ‘middle track’ with ‘middle of the track’.
(343) Replaced ‘head, then’ with ‘head, and then’. Replaced ‘much-favoured’ with ‘much favoured’. Replaced ‘watch you, now begin’ with ‘watch you now begin’.
(344) Replaced ‘and rolls away’ with ‘and he rolls away’.
(345) Replaced ‘you whisper, ‘I’ with ‘whisper. ‘I’.
(350) Replaced ‘Lone Wolf adventure’ with ‘Lone Wolf New Order adventure’.
(Combat Rules Summary) Replaced ‘Items or’ with ‘ Items, or’. Replaced ‘falls to 0’ with ‘falls to 0 or below’. Replaced ‘Pick number from’ with ‘Pick a number from the’. Replaced ‘Turn to Combat’ with ‘Turn to the Combat’. Replaced ‘to random number’ with ‘to the random number’. Replaced ‘when ENDURANCE’ with ‘when the ENDURANCE’.
Footnotes
[1] (The Story So Far … ) Lone Wolf 18: Dawn of the Dragons
[2] (The Story So Far … ) Lone Wolf 26: The Fall of Blood Mountain
[3] (The Game Rules) If you have completed any previous Lone Wolf New Order adventures, remember to choose an additional Grand Master Discipline and add +1 to your basic COMBAT SKILL and +2 to your basic ENDURANCE for each adventure you successfully completed (cf. Grand Master Disciplines).
[4] (New Order Kai Grand Master Disciplines) Given the rules for the previous Lone Wolf books, it seems odd that a Grand Master is only allowed to choose to be proficient in one of the few Weapons listed in the Equipment section. In view of the unprecedented nature of this rule, you might decide that it is acceptable to be proficient in any of the ten Weapons that the Kai typically train to use.