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by Michael Schoonmaker


  students entered and left during the school year) we met in the 4th, 5th,

  and 6th grades of the Garber School. Over the school year we engaged in

  media exercises with as many of the students as possible (including brief

  camera and editing training sessions) resulting in four different types of

  projects.

  Why Video?

  It is important to explain why this research project is framed around

  student-produced media—specifically video stories. We could have sim-

  ply asked the students to tell us what they thought of education and

  transcribed it. This comes down to three factors:

  • Public visibility of visual media—easily shared

  • Familiarity and comparative relevance of visual media with stu-

  dents

  • The opportunity for the university to strengthen student media

  skills

  • Past success with visual media in inspiring student discussion and

  expression

  • The eye of visual media in seeing in the shadows of everyday life

  Scholars have found additional merits of video in student settings. Visual

  media like digital video are an important part of urban high school stu-

  dents’ lives outside of school. However, “. . . [S]chools are arguably out of touch with the everyday literacies that many youth find relevant and into

  which they, in part, are socialized” (Alverman and Eakle, 2007).

  Miller and Borowicz (2005) found that digital video functioned to

  “awaken something in students that traditional academic tools of books

  and paper do not.” Approaches such as photovoice emphasize that giving people cameras to represent their lives promotes “critical group discussion about personal and community issues and assets” (Wang, Morrel-

  Samuels, Hutchison, Bell, and Pestronk, 2004).

  Talia’s Visual Story

  Talia was one of six Garber students we followed to the Corrigan

  School. Corrigan was seen as a better school than Garber because it was

  in a comparatively more upscale neighborhood, closer to the university

  and—unlike Garber where nearly all students were bussed in from outly-

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  ing neighborhoods—it was a community school where a large number of

  students were within easy walking distance.

  When it was Talia’s turn to respond to the question of what she

  wanted to tell a visual story about, she had no doubts.

  “Racism in the classroom,” she announced confidently. “My second

  period teacher is a racist and I want to do a story about it.”

  Messy Engagement: Collision of Communities

  Talia’s declaration was an example of one of the many flashpoints in

  the project that illuminated the rich complexities surrounding a seeming-

  ly simple process of collecting stories from young people.

  In an ecological sense, a community is a group of interdependent

  organisms of different species growing or living together in a specified

  habitat. By bringing the intellectually driven digital storytelling project from the university community into the pedagogically driven process of

  public education delivery, we were setting up, not only an intersection of

  community interests, but also possible collisions of interests, and ulti-

  mately changes in these communities. The question is, who and what

  principles govern such intersections, inevitable collisions, and ultimate

  transformations?

  Not only that, but also, where are the lines of communities and what

  rights do these communities possess when it comes to securing their

  boundaries? Certainly in a very broad sense, we were bringing commu-

  nities of higher education and public education together, but “zooming

  in” a little closer, we were also bringing together sub-communities with-

  in, including: teachers, administrators, grade levels, cultural groups

  (international and racial), two very different schools of a university with different practices, values, and politics, and the broad array of unique

  principles, actions, and needs within these communities. And as we

  moved closer to the creation of stories, we also unearthed storytelling

  communities (fiction, nonfiction, artistic)—each with their own set of

  principles, values, and techniques, not to mention the differences be-

  tween audiences of these stories—their expectations and needs. The fact

  is, all of these communities were touched in the process of making Smart

  Kids Visual Stories.

  The Story within Talia’s Story

  Talia was smiling when she arrived at the main office to pick up her

  camera and tripod. She would be recording her “Day in My Life”—her

  entire school day—on the next day by herself. It was an exciting prospect

  to think of what she would find in the wide open world of school-based

  verité. Talia was a strong personality, and she really believed in her story,

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  so we weren’t worried about her. It was easier to imagine all the things

  she might discover with her camera in real school life.

  Two days later when she arrived at the school office to return the

  equipment, Talia was not smiling; in fact she was completely avoiding

  eye contact. When asked if everything was ok, she replied, “No,” handed

  us the camera and tripod and started walking back to her class.

  Talia was obviously hurt, and we considered letting her leave and

  following up on the matter later, but given the fact that we were respon-

  sible for setting her up on this now venture-gone-wrong, we felt respon-

  sible for her and her well-being.

  Following her down the hall on her way back to class, we discovered

  that the teacher Talia had been trying to tell a story about suspended her

  for bringing a camera into the class. The teacher told her that she had no

  right to bring a camera into her class even if the principal said it was OK.

  We assured Talia that based on what she had told us she had done

  nothing wrong and apologized for the hurt this experience had caused

  her. We let her know that we would be talking to the principal about

  what happened.

  “Can I leave now?” she asked, obviously still hurting from the experi-

  ence.

  Teacher’s Rights

  Enter the dialectic between teaching community and the student com-

  munity. Who were we as university outsiders to support the idea of a

  student going into a teacher’s classroom with a camera looking for inci-

  dents of racism?

  Granted, the student was not proclaiming such an objective to the

  teacher. She was simply documenting her entire school day, part of

  which was her second period class with this teacher.

  Regardless, was it right for us to encourage this activity knowing that

  the student’s objective was to portray racism on the teacher’s part in

  conducting the class? This is another instance of messy engagement that

  warrants careful consideration. In our minds, we were staying close to

  the objectives of our research project—to support students in the process

  of creating their visual stories. The other side of this messy equation: Is it right for us to question the student’s story topic and motives behind it,

  and conceivably judge it as appropriate or inappropriate as a v
isual sto-

  ry? The simple answer was, “No.” But this was not by any means a

  simple issue.

  What if a student wanted to do a story about a “bad teacher?” We

  certainly would not want to put ourselves in the position of saying to a

  student who has been invited to tell the stories that must be told, “No,

  we’re sorry you can’t do that.” But at the same time, we cannot ignore the

  fact that such a story objective may hurt both the teacher and the school it

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  is about, placing us squarely between the interests of teachers and stu-

  dents.

  The Teacher-Student Dimension

  Early in the project, we established an environment of listening where

  students came to accept the idea that we would listen first. Our belief was that difficult topics could come out of an environment of trust and openness. Many times when we would be talking to the students about their

  lives and perspectives, we could sense the growing ease of their expres-

  sion. Oftentimes, students would warn one another that they shouldn’t

  be talking about what they were talking about because it was a danger-

  ous topic, particularly when it came to discussions of teacher attitudes,

  bad behavior, and racial issues.

  When Talia first mentioned doing a story on racism in the classroom,

  we were both proud—that she trusted us to bring up a topic that stu-

  dents, and teachers generally found difficult to talk about—and worried.

  The worry came from the cultural and political power of the word ra-

  cism, considering that this African-American girl was surrounded by

  mostly white and privileged researchers, teachers, and administrators.

  We also considered what little ground we had to stand on in this

  issue. Who were we to negotiate a public conversation on racism? If we

  stayed close to the project, assisting students in their efforts to “articulate a public voice and share insights on urban education reform in ways that

  are meaningful to them,” then we had a great deal more ground. But

  within the converging communities of university, public school, and stu-

  dent, we faced limits. With this in mind, we talked extensively about the

  subject of racism and how she would like to tell the story.

  Talia’s Story: Concept and Genre

  We began by discussing what she meant by racism and how she felt it

  materialized in the class. Talia explained that all the black students were in one corner of the class and all the white students in the other, and the teacher treated the two groups very differently, favoring the white kids.

  She also said the teacher was “very mean.”

  It didn’t take long for Talia to decide on the vérité style for her story.

  She would employ the “day-in-my-life” technique some of the students

  had used in the previous year in documenting a typical day for them

  outside of school to help others in their class learn more about them. In

  Talia’s case, the day in her life would be a typical school day. In order for Talia to do this, we felt it best to get permission from the principal.

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  The Administrative Culture

  Though we knew Lori Pettine and her school very well, the air of

  messy engagement was coming on strong as we approached her office.

  Being at Corrigan was truly personal. Our own children had attended

  this very school. Plus, the school was no stranger to the impact of being

  on the periphery of a major university. Principal Pettine had been very

  close to the project from the beginning, holding the initial meetings be-

  tween the kids and our research team in her office to make sure she

  understood the project and also to insure that we, as researchers, felt

  welcome in her school. She wanted to make sure we had the necessary

  resources to conduct our research.

  The messiness of our engagement at Corrigan was in the fact that our

  work was built upon an academic protocol. Because of that, we had no

  intention of telling Lori that a student in our IRB-approved research

  study was interested in telling a visual story about the incidence of ra-

  cism in one of her classrooms. Our priority was in allowing students the

  opportunity to express their perspectives on school experience. Revealing

  this story topic could conceivably put the principal in the position of

  blocking it. The spirit of our research project was to encourage expres-

  sion, not to block it.

  But that wasn’t all. At the same time, we had no intention of letting a

  student’s pursuit of a story harm the school. There would be several

  layers of oversight in our research process that would provide the oppor-

  tunity, if necessary, to consider the harm a student-produced visual story

  might do to the school and/or other students. But we did not think the

  beginning of the project was the point to intervene.

  Ironically, years ago we had witnessed an event in this very school

  where some very young students and the school were harmed because of

  a nationally broadcast new magazine exposé involving children’s (out of

  context) views on the subject of sex. Though the major motive of our

  research study may have been to help students express their perspectives

  on education, it was not without concern for simultaneous and complex

  interests of teachers, administrators, and parents surrounding them.

  In the meeting with Principal Pettine, we informed her that one of the

  six students involved in the Smart Kids Visual Stories Project wanted to

  bring a video camera with her to document a day in her life at school. It

  was important that she approved of the idea in principle and had the

  chance to notify the seventh grade teachers who would be affected. She

  not only approved the request, but also thought it was a very good idea.

  Talia’s Suspension

  Despite her cooperation, we were not sure how Principal Pettine

  would react to the problem surrounding Talia’s in-school suspension by

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  her second period teacher. As soon as we saw her she shook her head and

  apologized, saying the teacher had overreacted. She had spoken to the

  teacher about the experience in a special meeting involving Talia’s par-

  ents, and assured us that Talia was perfectly welcome to return to the

  class with the camera, and finish her project.

  But when Talia was informed of the good news the next day, she

  explained that she was no longer interested in doing a Smart Kids story.

  The experience had been completely humiliating for her and she didn’t

  want it to happen again. When she asked if she could go back to class, we

  seized on the opportunity to ask her if she could at least help Leia, the

  other 7th grader, with her project as opposed to leaving the project all

  together. She agreed.

  Walking the Line

  Talia had attempted to tell a story about racism in school and had

  been silenced before she could finish making it. In battling with the idea

  of pushing her to stay with the project, or letting her return to normal

  student life, we pondered whether we were doing this for our interests or

  hers. We were clearly walking the line of possibly harming this child
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  our gut feeling that she would be better telling the story somehow, some

  way, rather than walking away with the scar of having failed. So we

  decided to be patient and slowly try to work Talia back into her story

  once she had a little recovery time.

  In the free moments around planning and shooting Leia’s story, we

  continued talking to Talia about her unfortunate experience in shooting

  her day-in-the-life story, and little by little she warmed up, eventually

  agreeing to try her hand at a story. But she really did not want to face her second period teacher with a camera again, as that had hurt her too

  much.

  Given the passion she had shown for her original story idea, we asked

  her if she would consider telling the story of what had happened to her in

  the class when she was suspended. She was curious about how she

  would do this. A good start would be for her to write down in her own

  words what had happened and then read it into the camera microphone

  as a voiceover. After that, we could talk about what kinds of pictures—

  moving or still—might complement the reading of the story. We decided

  to have Leia record Talia’s voiceover in our video editing complex during

  one of the regularly scheduled field trips to the university. The field trips brought Smart Kids from four area schools together to talk about their

  stories and help each other with the creative and technological processes.

  Acting like long term veterans of the editing suites, Leia and Talia

  went straight to their favorite room to begin their work. A few minutes

  later, Leia called us back into the room to look at something.

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  They had discovered a short recording of the actual 2nd period class

  where Talia had been suspended. It appeared to be an unintentional

  recording because the camera view was oddly tilted, with off-screen

  sound—apparently an adult woman shouting at someone—as if it was

  recorded by accident. We sat down in the editing suite and watched and

  listened to the inadvertent clip over and over. It was about ten seconds in total—not a lot to work with.

  VIDEO:

  “You need to put that camera away!”

 

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