Sucker for the Boss

by Blue Sky Books

  “I should have listened to you long ago.” He smiled back at her before trailing her neck with a line of hot kisses.

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  THE END

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  [bc1]‘little’ is used quite a lot, and not necessary in this sentence.

  [bc2]an ellipsis requires a space either side.

  [bc3]not a proper noun in this context

  [bc4]‘low’ and ‘lowly’ are used frequently.

  [bc5]Separate lines for dialogue in this story. Amended.

  [bc6]blond-male, blonde-female.

  [bc7]punctuation missing after dialogue in this story, amended.

  [bc8]punctuation required after dialogue, paricularly in terms of commas.

  [bc9]Dialogue needs to be on separate lines in this story.