by Joe Dever
(96) Replaced ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’. Replaced ‘psychic ability — Mindblend — as’ with ‘psychic Mindblend ability as’.
(97) Replaced ‘another, ‘cough’ with ‘another. ‘Cough’.
(99) Replaced ‘brings’ with ‘bring’. Replaced ‘saddlebags, then’ with ‘saddlebags, and then’.
(100) Replaced all occurrences of ‘Sun-Crystal’ with ‘Sun-crystal’. Replaced ‘Gwynian, ‘Just’ with ‘Gwynian. ‘Just’. Replaced ‘longer, I’ with ‘longer; I’. Replaced ‘maximum permissible’ with ‘maximum number permissible’.
(101) Replaced ‘cry, ‘we’ with ‘cry. ‘We’. Replaced ‘feet first’ with ‘feet-first’.
(102) Replaced ‘agonising’ with ‘agonizing’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(104) Replaced ‘cried, ‘I'm’ with ‘cries. ‘I'm’. Replaced ‘while away’ with ‘wile away’.
(105) Replaced ‘D‘Val’ with ‘D'Val’. Changed incorrect link to Section 253 to lead to Section 235. Replaced ‘Captain’ with ‘captain’.
(106) Replaced ‘points), then’ with ‘points); then’.
(107) Replaced ‘ambushers’ with ‘Ambushers’.
(108) Replaced ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’. Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘Sun-Crystal’ with ‘Sun-crystal’. Replaced ‘the Gate’ with ‘the Shadow Gate’. Replaced ‘Nexus, and’ with ‘Nexus and’.
(109) Replaced ‘1 Broadsword’ with ‘Broadsword’.
(110) Replaced ‘5 arrows’ with ‘5 Arrows’. Replaced ‘North — Chod — 250 miles’ with ‘Chod: 250 miles North’. Replaced ‘West — Holona — 50 miles’ with ‘Holona: 50 miles West’. Replaced ‘South — Tenzha — 20 miles’ with ‘Tenzha: 20 miles South’.
(111) Replaced ‘her majesty, and’ with ‘her Majesty and’. Replaced ‘reads: VANAMOR 280 miles’ with ‘reads ‘Vanamor 280 miles’ ’. Replaced ‘court cavalrymen’ with ‘Court Cavalrymen’. Replaced ‘by its East Gate and sets off towards the outlying village of Sharr. Here you cross the mighty River Phoen by way of a great stone bridge. On the far side of this bridge you notice a signpost which points to the east’ with ‘by its East Gate. Here you cross a great stone bridge on the far side of which is a signpost pointing to the east’ because both Sharr and the River Phoen are many miles to the northeast of Garthen near the city of Phoena (cf. The Jungle of Horrors Section 271).
(112) Replaced ‘facade’ with ‘façade’. Replaced ‘Lone Wolf’ with ‘Lone Wolf’ when referring to the series. Replaced ‘says, ‘I’ with ‘says. ‘I’. Replaced ‘says: LIBRARY’ with ‘says ‘Library’ ’. Replaced ‘words: HALLS OF LEARNING’ with ‘words ‘Halls of Learning’ ’.
(113) Added ‘(Remember to remove the Oede herb or Matho's Potion from your Action Chart.)’.
(114) Replaced ‘battle spells’ with ‘battle-spells’. Replaced ‘lavas'’ with ‘Lavas'’. Replaced ‘sky, ‘and’ with ‘sky. ‘And’. Replaced ‘wave of winged beasts come’ with ‘wave of winged beasts comes’. Replaced ‘Bow, and’ with ‘Bow and’.
(115) Replaced ‘anger and pain’ with ‘anger, and pain’.
(116) Replaced ‘treeline’ with ‘tree-line’.
(120) Replaced ‘Nathor, ‘it's’ with ‘Nathor. ‘It's’. Replaced ‘Hail Tranius!’ with ‘Hail, Tranius!’. Replaced ‘turn to 72’ with ‘turn to 72.’. Replaced ‘spluttering candles’ with ‘sputtering candles’.
(121) Replaced ‘time, I’ with ‘time; I’. Replaced ‘e'er’ with ‘e'en’. Replaced ‘smile, ‘I’ with ‘smile. ‘I’. Replaced ‘replies, ‘the’ with ‘replies. ‘The’. Replaced ‘Lone Wolf’ with ‘Lone Wolf’ when referring to the series. Replaced ‘Stonewatch, in’ with ‘Stonewatch in’.
(122) Replaced ‘Kai alchemy’ with ‘Kai-alchemy’.
(125) Replaced ‘Discipline turn to 156’ with ‘Discipline, turn to 156’. Replaced ‘treeline’ with ‘tree-line’.
(127) Replaced ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’. Replaced ‘flight of Lavas emerge’ with ‘flight of Lavas emerges’.
(129) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’.
(131) Replaced ‘worse effects’ with ‘worst effects’.
(132) Replaced ‘gaoler, ‘I've’ with ‘gaoler. ‘I've’. Merged the paragraph that ends with ‘the cruel pincers’ with the following paragraph. Replaced ‘tough 'un’ with ‘tough un’. Replaced ‘Disciplines, or’ with ‘Disciplines or’.
(133) Replaced ‘dug-out, then’ with ‘dugout; then’. Replaced ‘line of Eldenoran soldiers have’ with ‘line of Eldenoran soldiers has’.
(134) Replaced both occurrences of ‘Sun-Crystal’ with ‘Sun-crystal’. Replaced ‘the Gate’ with ‘the Shadow Gate’.
(135) Replaced ‘smile, ‘they’ with ‘smile. ‘They’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘my Lord’ with ‘my lord’.
(136) Replaced ‘elite’ with ‘élite’. Replaced ‘Sun-Crystal’ with ‘Sun-crystal’. Replaced ‘shoulder, ‘you’ with ‘shoulder. ‘You’.
(137) Replaced ‘(imposters)’ with ‘(impostors)’. Replaced ‘guardsmen’ with ‘Guardsmen’. Replaced ‘horde of bogus castle guardsmen come’ with ‘horde of bogus castle guardsmen comes’.
(138) Replaced ‘bulls-eye’ with ‘bull's-eye’.
(139) Replaced both occurrences of ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’. Replaced both occurrences of ‘Sun-Crystal’ with ‘Sun-crystal’.
(140) Replaced ‘tersely, ‘he's’ with ‘tersely. ‘He's’. Replaced ‘Scade manor’ with ‘Scade Manor’. Replaced ‘Knight Tranius's guards’ with ‘Knight Tranius' guards’. Replaced ‘Knight Tranius's hunt’ with ‘Knight Tranius' hunt’.
(141) Replaced ‘the Gate’ with ‘the Shadow Gate’. Replaced both occurrences of ‘Sun-Crystal’ with ‘Sun-crystal’. Replaced ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’.
(142) Replaced ‘back-handed’ with ‘backhanded’. Replaced ‘Kai rank of’ with ‘rank of Kai’. Replaced ‘Assimilance, and’ with ‘Assimilance and’.
(143) Replaced ‘Grand Master discipline’ with ‘Grand Master Discipline’.
(145) Replaced ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’. Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘Huntmastery, and’ with ‘Huntmastery and’.
(146) Replaced ‘birdsong’ with ‘bird song’.
(147) Replaced ‘winged-horrors’ with ‘winged horrors’. Replaced ‘your Monastery’ with ‘your monastery’. Replaced ‘monastery of the Kai’ with ‘Monastery of the Kai’. Replaced ‘quietly. ‘the’ with ‘quietly. ‘The’. Replaced ‘my men men’ with ‘my men’. Replaced ‘Captain’ with ‘captain’. Replaced ‘previous encounter’ with ‘previous experience’ because you may have encountered Lavas more than once in the past.
(148) Replaced ‘Magnakai healing disciplines’ with ‘Magnakai Discipline of Curing’. Replaced ‘chains, then’ with ‘chains, and then’.
(149) Replaced ‘outwardly appearance’ with ‘outward appearance’. Replaced ‘dead, then’ with ‘dead; then’.
(150) Replaced ‘damp uncomfortable’ with ‘damp, uncomfortable’. Replaced ‘away, then’ with ‘away; then’.
(151) Replaced ‘treeline’ with ‘tree-line’.
(154) Replaced ‘birdsong’ with ‘bird song’. Replaced ‘Vaderish brethren’ with ‘Vaderish Brethren’.
(155) Replaced ‘Kai sixth sense’ with ‘Kai Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘gang of scurrilous rogues emerge’ with ‘gang of scurrilous rogues emerges’.
(156) Replaced ‘bow, and’ with ‘Bow and’.
(157) Replaced ‘emotion, ‘I'm’ with ‘emotion. ‘I'm’. Replaced ‘Reloni bridge’ with ‘Reloni Bridge’.
(158) Replaced ‘says, ‘yours’ with ‘says. ‘Yours’. Replaced ‘sky, ‘and’ with ‘sky. ‘And’. Replaced ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’. Replaced ‘side, so’ with ‘side; so’. Replaced ‘Bow, and’ with ‘Bow and’.
(159) Replaced ‘Mastery add’ with ‘Mastery, add’
. Replaced ‘Telegnosis, and have’ with ‘Telegnosis and have’.
(160) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘click’ with ‘click’.
(161) Replaced ‘infra-vision’ with ‘infravision’.
(163) Replaced ‘mastery of Kai-alchemy’ with ‘Kai-alchemy’. Added ‘If you possess both, add 6.’ in harmony with the recent Collector's Edition.
(167) Replaced ‘thug’ with ‘Thug’.
(168) Replaced ‘Sage, ‘I’ with ‘Sage. ‘I’. Replaced ‘recognise’ with ‘recognize’. Replaced ‘says: LIBRARY’ with ‘says ‘Library’ ’. Replaced ‘says: Quill Street’ with ‘says ‘Quill Street’ ’.
(170) Replaced ‘Silversmith's Guild’ with ‘Silversmiths' Guild’.
(172) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’.
(173) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(174) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Replaced ‘5 arrows’ with ‘5 Arrows’. Replaced ‘North — Chod — 250 miles’ with ‘Chod: 250 miles North’. Replaced ‘West — Holona — 50 miles’ with ‘Holona: 50 miles West’. Replaced ‘South — Tenzha — 20 miles’ with ‘Tenzha: 20 miles South’.
(175) Replaced ‘Varnos harbour’ with ‘Varnos Harbour’. Replaced ‘wharfs’ with ‘wharves’. Replaced ‘court cavalry’ with ‘Court Cavalry’. Replaced ‘quayside, then’ with ‘quayside; then’.
(176) Replaced ‘forest of Salony’ with ‘Forest of Salony’. Replaced ‘great forest’ with ‘Great Forest’.
(177) Replaced ‘riverbank’ with ‘river bank’. Replaced ‘city walls’ with ‘city's walls’.
(178) Replaced ‘the Tower’ with ‘the tower’. Replaced ‘the Tower's’ with ‘the tower's’. Replaced both occurrences of ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘cloud of Kai arrows are’ with ‘cloud of Kai arrows is’.
(179) Replaced ‘animal control’ with ‘Animal Control’.
(180) Replaced ‘Kai master’ with ‘Kai Master’. Replaced ‘layed’ with ‘laid’. Replaced ‘Sun-Crystal’ with ‘Sun-crystal’. Replaced ‘replies,’ with ‘replies.’. Replaced ‘though’ with ‘Though’. Split Rimoah's comments into a separate paragraph for clarity. Replaced ‘hopes;’ with ‘hopes:’. Replaced ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’. Replaced ‘lavas'’ with ‘Lavas'’.
(181) Replaced ‘naptha’ with ‘naphtha’. Replaced ‘Assimilance, and’ with ‘Assimilance and’.
(183) Replaced ‘ambushers’ with ‘Ambushers’.
(184) Replaced ‘Durncrag mountains’ with ‘Durncrag Mountains’.
(185) Replaced ‘dug-out’ with ‘dugout’.
(187) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘face-down’ with ‘face down’.
(188) Replaced ‘Lune).’ with ‘Lune, which has the equivalent value of 10 Gold Crowns. It takes up the same space in your Belt Pouch as would 10 Gold Crowns.)’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition. Replaced ‘you (if’ with ‘you. (If’. Replaced ‘Potion).’ with ‘Potion.)’. Replaced ‘mule, then’ with ‘mule; then’.
(189) Replaced ‘animal control’ with ‘Animal Control’. Replaced ‘Kai alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Kai-surge, and’ with ‘Kai-surge and’. Replaced ‘Disciplines, or’ with ‘Disciplines or’.
(190) Replaced ‘zig-zags’ with ‘zigzags’. Replaced ‘who've’ with ‘who have’ in the illustration caption.
(191) Replaced ‘Meal and’ with ‘Meal or’.
(192) Replaced both occurrences of ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(193) Replaced ‘try and’ with ‘try to’.
(194) Replaced ‘Lone Wolf’ with ‘Lone Wolf’ when referring to the series. Replaced ‘says, ‘I’ with ‘says. ‘I’. Replaced ‘says: LIBRARY’ with ‘says ‘Library’ ’. Replaced ‘words: HALLS OF LEARNING’ with ‘words ‘Halls of Learning’ ’.
(195) Replaced ‘5–−8’ with ‘5–8’.
(196) Replaced ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’. Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘Sun Lord, or higher’ with ‘Sun Lord or higher’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’.
(197) Replaced both occurrences of ‘dug-out’ with ‘dugout’. Replaced ‘are marching’ with ‘is marching’.
(198) Replaced ‘tunic, ‘what’ with ‘tunic. ‘What’. Replaced ‘gulleys’ with ‘gullies’. Replaced ‘Kai-screen’ with ‘Psi-screen’. Replaced ‘lest it detects’ with ‘lest it detect’. Replaced ‘In the name of the Gods’ with ‘In the name of the gods’. Replaced ‘my Lord’ with ‘my lord’.
(200) Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’.
(201) Replaced ‘Sir’ with ‘sir’.
(202) Replaced ‘co-operation’ with ‘cooperation’. Replaced ‘3 arrows’ with ‘3 Arrows’. Replaced ‘a line of soldiers come’ with ‘a line of soldiers comes’. Replaced ‘half mile’ with ‘half-mile’. Replaced ‘smile, then’ with ‘smile, and then’.
(203) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘ultra-violet’ with ‘ultraviolet’. Replaced ‘Kai alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Captain's’ with ‘captain's’. Replaced ‘Captain’ with ‘captain’. Replaced ‘Nexus, and’ with ‘Nexus and’.
(204) Replaced ‘delight, ‘I’ with ‘delight. ‘I’. Replaced ‘Darklords War’ with ‘Darklands War’.
(206) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘Deliverance, and’ with ‘Deliverance and’.
(207) Replaced ‘spy-glass’ with ‘spyglass’.
(208) Replaced ‘to your friend Banedon for providing you with’ with ‘for’ because Lone Wolf could have received the Platinum Amulet from Gwynian.
(209) Replaced ‘town as well’ with ‘town’ because the reader may not have already encountered signs of the plague. Replaced ‘message: Abisko — 25 miles’ with ‘message ‘Abisko — 25 miles’ ’.
(210) Replaced ‘Vaderish monastery’ with ‘Vaderish Monastery’. Replaced ‘wharfs’ with ‘wharves’. Replaced ‘monk's’ with ‘monks' ’. Replaced ‘son, then’ with ‘son, and then’. Replaced ‘River Phoen’ with ‘river’ because the River Phoen is actually many miles to the northeast of Garthen near the city of Phoena (cf. The Jungle of Horrors Section 271).
(211) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘Telegnosis, and’ with ‘Telegnosis and’.
(212) Replaced ‘new order’ with ‘New Order’. Replaced ‘Abisko, turning to 3’ with ‘Abisko, by turning to 3’. Replaced ‘Narsha’ with ‘Nursha’. Replaced ‘words: Nursha Stables’ with ‘words ‘Nursha Stables’ ’.
(213) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
(214) Replaced ‘animal control’ with ‘Animal Control’.
(215) Replaced ‘shouts, ‘Ride’ with ‘shouts. ‘Ride’. Replaced ‘Captain’ with ‘captain’. Replaced ‘Captain's’ with ‘captain's’.
(216) Replaced ‘pack launch’ with ‘pack launches’.
(217) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘tracks of quicksand’ with ‘tracts of quicksand’. Replaced ‘Telegnosis, and’ with ‘Telegnosis and’.
(218) Replaced ‘half-way’ with ‘halfway’. Replaced ‘Sadly your’ with ‘Sadly, your’. Replaced ‘comes to’ with ‘come to’.
(220) Replaced ‘plague-lords’ with ‘Plague Lords’.
(221) Replaced ‘muscle, then’ with ‘muscle; then’.
(222) Replaced ‘guildhouse’ with ‘guild-house’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
(223) Replaced ‘rock face’ with ‘rock-face’. Replaced ‘hand hold’ with ‘handhold’.
(224) Replaced ‘Sadly your’ with ‘Sadly, your’. Replaced ‘comes to’ with ‘come to’. Replaced ‘flight, then’ with ‘flig
ht, and then’.
(226) Replaced ‘shouts, ‘Ride’ with ‘shouts. ‘Ride’. Replaced ‘wound it’ with ‘wound, it’. Replaced ‘Captain’ with ‘captain’. Replaced ‘Captain's’ with ‘captain's’. Replaced ‘elation, then’ with ‘elation, and then’.
(227) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Replaced ‘fatique’ with ‘fatigue’.
(228) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’.
(230) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’. Replaced ‘Kai-surge, and’ with ‘Kai-surge and’.
(231) Replaced ‘inkeeper’ with ‘innkeeper’. Replaced ‘kind Sir’ with ‘kind sir’.
(232) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘Sun Lord, or higher’ with ‘Sun Lord or higher’. Replaced ‘Sun Thane, or higher’ with ‘Sun Thane or higher’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Telegnosis, and’ with ‘Telegnosis and’.
(233) Replaced both occurrences of ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’. Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘Sun-Crystal’ with ‘Sun-crystal’. Replaced ‘the Gate’ with ‘the Shadow Gate’. Replaced ‘Nexus, and’ with ‘Nexus and’.
(234) Replaced ‘five Gold Crowns’ with ‘five Gold Crowns (or 20 Lune)’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.
(236) Replaced ‘horsedrawn’ with ‘horse-drawn’. Replaced ‘weapons, money pouch, backpack,’ with ‘Weapons, Belt Pouch, Backpack,’. Replaced ‘Items however’ with ‘Items, however’. Replaced ‘taken)’ with ‘taken. These Eldenoran soldiers are especially superstitious and fearful of touching magical weapons and artefacts)’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.
(237) Replaced ‘ear, ‘you’ with ‘ear. ‘You’.
(238) Replaced ‘graciously, ‘we’ with ‘graciously. ‘We’. Replaced ‘co-operation’ with ‘cooperation’. Replaced ‘Garthanians’ with ‘Garthenians’. Replaced ‘your majesty’ with ‘your Majesty’. Replaced ‘court cavalry’ with ‘Court Cavalry’.