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(117) Replaced ‘silver bow’ with ‘Silver Bow’.
(118) Replaced ‘Paido and’ with ‘Paido, and’. Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’.
(119) Replaced ‘Instead their’ with ‘Instead, their’.
(121) Replaced ‘midnight his’ with ‘midnight, his’. Replaced ‘handiwork they’ with ‘handiwork, they’.
(123) Replaced ‘creatures sit’ with ‘creatures sits’. Replaced ‘green spindly’ with ‘green, spindly’. Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption. Replaced ‘spindly limbed’ with ‘spindly-limbed’.
(125) Changed the first choice to read in part ‘If you have another Arrow and wish to use it, … ’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(126) Replaced ‘ale the’ with ‘ale, the’. Replaced ‘amusement he’ with ‘amusement, he’. Replaced ‘conundrum’ with ‘conundrums’.
(127) Replaced ‘yell they’ with ‘yell, they’. Replaced ‘bow and’ with ‘Bow and’.
(128) Replaced ‘shut and’ with ‘shut, and’. Replaced ‘demand but’ with ‘demand, but’.
(129) Replaced ‘Taan-spider you’ with ‘Taan-spider, you’.
(133) Replaced ‘minutes but’ with ‘minutes, but’.
(135) Replaced ‘bridge you’ with ‘bridge, you’. Replaced ‘gate a’ with ‘gate, a’.
(137) Replaced ‘splash he’ with ‘splash, he’.
(138) Replaced ‘incline and, as’ with ‘incline, and as’. Moved the Pathsmanship choice into the first position.
(139) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
(144) Replaced ‘men and’ with ‘men, and’.
(145) Replaced ‘inn and’ with ‘inn, and’. Replaced ‘wheatcakes’ with ‘wheat cakes’.
(146) Replaced ‘curing surpresses’ with ‘Curing suppresses’.
(147) Replaced ‘swamp-jungle’ with ‘jungle-swamp’. Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption.
(150) Replaced ‘steadily and’ with ‘steadily, and’. Replaced ‘inhabitants but’ with ‘inhabitants, but’.
(151) Replaced ‘choose.’ with ‘choose?’.
(153) Replaced ‘around your’ with ‘around, your’. Replaced ‘tap but, instead’ with ‘tap, but instead’. Replaced ‘click and’ with ‘click, and’.
(154) Replaced ‘air and’ with ‘air, and’.
(156) Replaced ‘herb the’ with ‘herb, the’. Replaced ‘Oxydene’ with ‘Oxydine’. Added ‘(If you possess either the Tincture or the herb, you may use it immediately to cure the korovax infection.)’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.
(157) Replaced ‘deadly and’ with ‘deadly, and’.
We made extensive changes to the choices presented at the end of the section. The original reads as follows.
If you do not possess this skill, or have yet to reach the rank of Tutelary, you can:
hide in the Pulpit — turn to 96;
or
hide among the pews — turn to 198;
stand in the central aisle and await your pursuers — turn to 305.
We revised it to the following.
If you do not possess this skill or have yet to reach the rank of Tutelary, you can hide in the pulpit by turning to 96.
Or you can hide among the pews by turning to 198.
Or you can stand in the central aisle and await your pursuers by turning to 305.
(160) Replaced ‘dead writhing’ with ‘dead, writhing’.
(161) Replaced each occurrence of ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(162) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘Drakkar Horselord’ with ‘Drakkarim Horselord’ to reflect standard usage.
(163) Replaced ‘explodes and’ with ‘explodes, and’.
(164) Replaced each occurrence of ‘arrows’ with ‘Arrows’.
(165) Replaced ‘aside but’ with ‘aside, but’. Replaced ‘him but’ with ‘him, but’. Replaced ‘inside and’ with ‘inside, and’. Replaced ‘Bor-musket’ with ‘Bor musket’. Replaced ‘trigger and’ with ‘trigger, and’.
(166) Replaced ‘Dazudskul’ with ‘Dazudskul.’. Replaced ‘fortune whispers’ with ‘fortune,’ whispers’.
(168) Replaced ‘counter and’ with ‘counter, and’. Put dashes between each item on the list and its price. Replaced ‘arrows and’ with ‘arrows, and’. Set the items in initial capital letters. Replaced ‘quiver’ with ‘Quiver’. Replaced ‘bowstrings and’ with ‘bowstrings, and’. Replaced ‘finger and wrist’ with ‘wrist and finger’.
(169) Replaced ‘Psi-shield’ with ‘Psi-screen’. Replaced ‘duck and’ with ‘duck, and’. Replaced ‘clawed skeletal’ with ‘clawed, skeletal’. Added ‘If you win the combat against the Vordak you are able to retrieve the Weapon and keep it noted on your Action Chart.’ as clarified by the Lone Wolf Club Newsletter Summer Special 1987.
(172) Replaced ‘him and’ with ‘him, and’.
(174) Replaced ‘Kai lord’ with ‘Kai Lord’.
(175) Replaced ‘north and, for’ with ‘north, and for’. Replaced ‘scuttling and slithering and’ with ‘scuttling, slithering, and’.
(176) Replaced ‘trigger and’ with ‘trigger, and’.
(177) Replaced ‘starguider but’ with ‘starguider, but’. Replaced ‘192’ with ‘292’. Replaced ‘click’ with ‘click’.
(178) Replaced ‘chest you’ with ‘chest, you’.
(179) Replaced ‘book but’ with ‘book, but’.
(182) Replaced ‘pain it’ with ‘pain, it’. Replaced ‘you and’ with ‘you, and’. Replaced ‘aim and’ with ‘aim, and’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(183) Replaced ‘Psi-screen you’ with ‘Psi-screen, you’. Replaced ‘Lore-Circle of the Spirit you’ with ‘Lore-circle of the Spirit, you’. Replaced ‘COMBAT SKILL’ with ‘ENDURANCE’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.
(184) Replaced ‘true but’ with ‘true, but’. Replaced ‘wound but’ with ‘wound, but’. Replaced ‘clothing and’ with ‘clothing, and’. Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(185) Replaced ‘chase but’ with ‘chase, but’. Replaced ‘harrass’ with ‘harass’. Replaced ‘chase, they’ with ‘chase; they’.
(186) Replaced ‘discipline’ with ‘Discipline’. Replaced ‘eyes you’ with ‘eyes, you’.
(187) Replaced ‘grip and’ with ‘grip, and’.
(188) Replaced ‘wheatcakes’ with ‘wheat cakes’. Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption.
(189) Replaced ‘past a’ with ‘past, a’.
(190) Replaced ‘weapon but’ with ‘weapon, but’. Replaced ‘skill or have’ with ‘skill, or if you have’.
(191) Moved the Pathsmanship/Divination choice into the first position. Replaced ‘vial of clear liquid’ with ‘Vial of Clear Liquid’. Replaced ‘vial’ with ‘Vial’. Replaced ‘Action Chart’ with ‘Action Chart as a Special Item’. Replaced ‘is a wooden door and’ with ‘are a wooden door and’.
(192) Replaced ‘ground and’ with ‘ground, and’. Replaced ‘korlinium and’ with ‘korlinium, and’.
(194) Replaced ‘Or, if’ with ‘Or if’.
(195) Replaced ‘occurred, but’ with ‘occurred, but’. Replaced ‘bow and’ with ‘Bow and’.
(196) Replaced ‘spreadeagled’ with ‘spread-eagled’. Replaced ‘quiver’ with ‘Quiver’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(197) Replaced ‘death cry’ with ‘death-cry’.
(200) Replaced ‘bang’ with ‘bang’.
(201) Replaced ‘aside and’ with ‘aside, and’. Replaced ‘glowing silvery’ with ‘glowing, silvery’. Replaced ‘Tan-ash-oka, Nadoknar Gnaag!’ with ‘Tan-ash-okja Nadoknar Gnaag!’. Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
(202) Replaced ‘remains and’ with ‘remains, and’. Replaced ‘robes presumably�
�� with ‘robes, presumably’.
(204) Replaced both occurrences of ‘watch-tower’ with ‘watchtower’. Moved the map choice into the first position and the Pathsmanship choice into the second position. Replaced ‘options;’ with ‘options:’. Replaced ‘building. Constructed’ with ‘building constructed’.
(206) Replaced ‘bow and’ with ‘Bow and’. Replaced ‘bow or do’ with ‘Bow, or if you do’.
(208) Replaced each occurrence of ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’.
(209) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(210) Replaced ‘Kai lord’ with ‘Kai Lord’. Replaced ‘spreadeagled’ with ‘spread-eagled’.
(211) Replaced ‘being but’ with ‘being, but’.
(212) Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption. Replaced ‘bow, and’ with ‘Bow and’. Replaced ‘bow, or’ with ‘Bow or’.
(213) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(214) Replaced ‘(eg, a sword, dagger, axe, short sword or broadsword)’ with ‘(i.e. a Sword, Dagger, Axe, Spear, Short Sword, or Broadsword)’. Replaced ‘(eg, a mace, warhammer, quarterstaff or bow)’ with ‘(i.e. a Mace, Warhammer, Quarterstaff, or Bow)’.
(215) Replaced each occurrence of ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(216) Replaced ‘few but’ with ‘few, but’. Moved the Divination choice into the first position. Replaced ‘thistles and’ with ‘thistles, and’.
(217) Replaced ‘Kai lord’ with ‘Kai Lord’.
(218) Replaced ‘turn to 235’ with ‘turn to 253’.
(220) Replaced ‘symmetry confront’ with ‘symmetry, confront’. Replaced ‘stratas’ with ‘strata’. Replaced ‘sapphire and’ with ‘sapphire, and’.
(222) Replaced ‘subsides but’ with ‘subsides, but’.
(229) Replaced ‘north-western’ with ‘northwestern’.
(232) Replaced ‘dwarf. They're’ with ‘dwarf. ‘They're’.
(233) Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption.
(234) Replaced ‘dexterity and’ with ‘dexterity, and’.
(236) Replaced ‘Luukos and’ with ‘Luukos, and’. Replaced ‘they'll’ with ‘there'll’.
(239) Replaced ‘new-found’ with ‘newfound’.
(240) Replaced ‘Kai lord’ with ‘Kai Lord’. Replaced ‘spreadeagled’ with ‘spread-eagled’.
(242) Replaced ‘swop it’ with ‘swap one of them’.
(243) Replaced ‘rail and’ with ‘rail, and’.
(246) Replaced ‘wait’ with ‘await’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(248) Replaced ‘bow and’ with ‘Bow and’.
(249) Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption.
(251) Replaced ‘silver bow’ with ‘Silver Bow’.
(255) Replaced ‘stomach and’ with ‘stomach, and’. Replaced ‘Ghorkas’ with ‘ghorkas’. Replaced ‘bank and’ with ‘bank, and’. Replaced ‘lie’ with ‘lay’.
(256) Replaced ‘these and, judging’ with ‘these, and judging’.
(258) Replaced ‘flame and’ with ‘flame, and’. Replaced ‘Weapons list’ with ‘Weapons List’.
(259) Replaced ‘dead-ends’ with ‘dead ends’.
(261) Replaced ‘a potion of Laumspur’ with ‘any Laumspur, Rendalim's Elixir, or Oede herb,’. Replaced ‘this healing herb’ with ‘these healing potions’ (cf. Section 317).
(262) Replaced ‘says to Topham’ with ‘says: ‘To Topham’ ’.
(263) Replaced ‘membrane and’ with ‘membrane, and’.
(265) Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption.
(266) Replaced ‘north-west’ with ‘northwest’. Replaced ‘high and’ with ‘high, and’. Replaced ‘Walk and’ with ‘Walk, and’.
(267) Replaced ‘wings and’ with ‘wings, and’.
(271) Replaced ‘horses abroad’ with ‘horses aboard’. Replaced ‘Ghorkas’ with ‘ghorkas’.
(272) Replaced ‘worth but’ with ‘worth, but’. Replaced ‘bow and’ with ‘Bow and’.
(274) Replaced ‘uneventfully and, as’ with ‘uneventfully, and as’.
(275) Replaced ‘deceased but’ with ‘deceased, but’.
(276) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘skill, or’ with ‘skill or’. Replaced ‘Kai training’ with ‘Magnakai training’.
(277) Replaced ‘attack but’ with ‘attack, but’. Replaced ‘again but’ with ‘again, but’.
(278) Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption.
(279) Replaced ‘sharp rending’ with ‘sharp, rending’.
(280) Replaced ‘Evaine but’ with ‘Evaine, but’. Replaced ‘a-piece’ with ‘apiece’. Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption.
(281) Replaced ‘poison but’ with ‘poison, but’.
(282) Replaced ‘Half-way’ with ‘Halfway’.
(284) Replaced ‘Primate’ with ‘Primate or higher’.
(285) Replaced ‘hidden but’ with ‘hidden, but’. Replaced ‘identities and’ with ‘identities, and’.
(287) Replaced ‘Psi-shield’ with ‘Psi-screen’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
(288) Replaced each occurrence of ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘Magnakai rank’ with ‘Kai rank’ for consistency with the rest of the series. Replaced ‘skill or have’ with ‘skill, or if you have’.
(289) Replaced ‘legs and’ with ‘legs, and’ and removed the last choice which was essentially the same as that in Section 39 and therefore redundant.
(291) Replaced ‘forward but’ with ‘forward, but’.
(294) Replaced ‘jauntiness but’ with ‘jauntiness, but’. Replaced ‘discipline of hunting’ with ‘Discipline of Hunting’. Replaced ‘bunch these’ with ‘bunch, these’.
(295) Replaced ‘senses and, in’ with ‘senses, and in’. Replaced ‘bang’ with ‘bang’.
(296) Replaced ‘5–9’ with ‘5–12’.
(297) Replaced ‘north-west’ with ‘northwest’. Replaced ‘Alley and’ with ‘Alley, and’.
(299) Replaced ‘Ghorkas’ with ‘ghorkas’. Replaced ‘a-piece’ with ‘apiece’.
(300) Replaced ‘pool and’ with ‘pool, and’. Moved the Nexus choice into the first position.
(301) Moved the Huntmastery choice into the first position.
(302) Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption.
(303) Replaced ‘reins and’ with ‘reins, and’. Replaced ‘head and’ with ‘head, and’. Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘stumbles, then’ with ‘stumbles, and then’.
(304) Replaced ‘bowyery and’ with ‘bowyery, and’. Replaced ‘your bow’ with ‘your Bow’. Replaced ‘silver bow’ with ‘Silver Bow’.
(305) Changed the first choice to read in part ‘If you have a bow and two Arrows, and wish to use them, … ’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’.
(306) Replaced ‘chair and’ with ‘chair, and’.
(307) Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption. Replaced ‘skill, or’ with ‘skill or’. Replaced ‘Kai training’ with ‘Magnakai training’.
(308) Replaced ‘staff but’ with ‘staff, but’. Replaced ‘Psi-shield’ with ‘Psi-screen’. Replaced ‘COMBAT SKILL’ with ‘ENDURANCE’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.
(310) Replaced ‘side steps’ with ‘sidesteps’. Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’.
(314) Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption.
(315) Replaced ‘revolting jelly-like’ with ‘revolting, jelly-like’.
(316) Replaced ‘gullible but’ with ‘gullible, but’. Replaced ‘rods and’ with ‘rods, and’.
(318) Replaced ‘doomwolves’ with ‘Doomwolves’ and the second choice — ‘If first you wish to help Paido fight off his attackers, turn to 169’ — to ‘If you choose to continue your ride north to Tharro, turn to 280’. The
second change was given in Lone Wolf Club Newsletter: 1987 New Year's Special p.9.
(323) Replaced ‘master and’ with ‘master, and’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(324) Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(326) Replaced ‘it but’ with ‘it, but’.
(327) Replaced ‘watch-tower’ with ‘watchtower’. Replaced ‘horse and’ with ‘horse, and’.
(328) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’.
(329) Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption.
(331) Replaced ‘into it and shake’ with ‘into it, and shake’.
(333) Replaced ‘Psi-shield’ with ‘Psi-screen’.
(334) Replaced ‘death cry’ with ‘death-cry’. Replaced ‘crossbolt’ with ‘crossbow bolt’.
(335) Replaced ‘trees and’ with ‘trees, and’.
(336) Replaced ‘smells and’ with ‘smells, and’. Replaced ‘one motioning’ with ‘one, motioning’. Replaced ‘Have you eaten’ with ‘Have they eaten’.
(340) Replaced ‘ceiling and’ with ‘ceiling, and’.
(341) Replaced ‘bow and’ with ‘Bow and’.
(342) Replaced ‘half-way’ with ‘halfway’.
(346) Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption.
(344) Replaced ‘thistles and’ with ‘thistles, and’.
(349) Replaced ‘the Laumspur’ with ‘the potion’. Replaced ‘wall and tip’ with ‘wall, and tip’.
(350) Replaced ‘spoke and’ with ‘spoke, and’. Replaced ‘Magnamund and’ with ‘Magnamund, and’. Replaced ‘book 9’ with ‘Book 9’.
(Combat Rules Summary) Replaced ‘cross reference’ with ‘cross-reference’. Replaced ‘top of chart’ with ‘top of the chart’. Replaced ‘fall to 0’ with ‘falls to 0 or below’. Replaced ‘Kai Disciplines’ with ‘Magnakai Disciplines’. Replaced ‘Pick number from’ with ‘Pick a number from the’. Replaced ‘Turn to Combat’ with ‘Turn to the Combat’. Replaced ‘to random number’ with ‘to the random number’. Replaced ‘when ENDURANCE’ with ‘when the ENDURANCE’. Replaced ‘ignored, only’ with ‘ignored; only’.
Note on Standard Usage
Quite a number of contributors to Project Aon have reported inconsistencies regarding the use of words such as Drakkar across the series. After much research into the usage of Drakkar/Drakkarim, Nadziran/Nadziranim, and Ligan/Liganim across the books, we have decided to standardise the usage of the words in the following ways, which represent majority usage: