"Pretending to be my wife, though," I smiled. "Where did that come from?"
She giggled. "You didn't like it?"
I shrugged. "Oh, I liked it. Perhaps a little too much."
I took one of her nipples in her mouth, sucked on it gently, breathing her in, mulling over the intoxicating strangeness of a beautiful woman straight after sex with another man.
"Too much?" she asked.
"Well, you know I don't have a great record when it comes to marriage."
Now I kissed my way down her stomach, detecting the other man's cologne, the other man's body, even though the spicy scent of Bella's arousal now strengthened considerably.
"But you know you can't prove anything based on a single result," she said.
"That right?" I kissed my way to her mound, to the little strip of blonde hair guiding the way to her stunning, glistening sex.
"Oh yeah..." she moaned. "I should know... I'm studying for a biochemistry degree. It's a key tenet of science..."
She moaned as my mouth arrived at her exquisite pussy, as I kissed around her reddened lips, taking in the sight, jarred by the memory of it taking such a large cock barely minutes before. I loved making her writhe as I lay between her thighs and ate her. She was truly a goddess. My goddess, I realized.
I said, "Maybe we need to practice a little more. You know, before we actually talk about improving my record."
If I was honest, I did feel a little disturbed how much I wanted this girl to be my wife. My hotwife. And really, we'd known each other for such a short time. I had a bad experience with woman I married after only a relatively short time dating her. But once again, that theory was based on only a single occurrence.
Bella smiled, said, "I'm happy to practice as long as you like."
She moaned as I made her come with my mouth. She moaned and she sighed and she sang like a songbird. And as I hauled myself up her gorgeous body, and slid my hard cock into her sweet pussy, feeling the lubrication of another man's come around it, I figured that actually, Bella was a better fit for me than Heidi.
There was no thought of me having to dominate her, to pretend to be someone I wasn't in order to fulfill her overarching fantasy. Bella wanted to be my naughty wife. She shared my fantasy.
I held her tight and came powerfully within her, and figured I'd been right about Heidi all along, she hadn't been the one for me. So why couldn't I be right about Bella?
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Author's Note
This book started off as a short story exploring a girlfriend-sharing arrangement, rather than a wife-sharing situation. As it developed, however, the characters propelled the story along so that it became a novella, and not long afterwards a full-length novel (at least as far as this genre goes).
It also saw Heidi becoming Joe's ex, rather than his girlfriend, and a kind of ex-wife at that if you can say that about an annulled marriage.
I was trying to mix things up in the wife-sharing sub-genre, I suppose, but as often happens with these things, the characters ran away with the plot and it became something I didn't entirely expect. I do still intend to write a girlfriend-sharing story, perhaps even soon, because I think that is a dynamic different from the commitment involved in marriage.
I don't think the ending of Heidi, Corrupted, was quite the normal kind of thing for this sub-genre either, but it felt right for these particular characters. It also seems to me that it's nice to shake up the expectations of the sub-genre from time to time, because then the reader feels a similar kind of tension as the narrator (husband), that perhaps the risks to the central relationship are real, and things might not pan out as the couple originally hopes.
Anyway, I do hope you've enjoyed reading this story. If you have a spare moment, why not share your thoughts in a review wherever you purchased this book. It might seem like vanity on my part, but reviews help indie authors like myself reach more readers, and as a result I can justify spending more time in writing these stories rather than attending to other paid writing assignments. More reviews mean more stories from me, basically.
And I wouldn't have been able to write half the stories I've written without the support readers like yourself have given me by purchasing or borrowing my books, so whether you're a review or not, sincere thanks to you, dear reader — you can personally take credit for this particular tale seeing the light of day.
I'd also like to drop a quick line of thanks to the other fine authors at Hotwifebooks.com, who are a constant source of inspiration and support, including Kenny Wright who shared his thoughts on the story and provided a wonderful cover design. And, I'd like to thank my team of beta readers — Anjali, Chris, Dan, Ian, Jay, Nick and Robert — who have worked quickly and diligently to iron out the typos and glitches in the story.
Until next time,
Max Sebastian
London, March 30, 2016
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