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by M. K. Tod


  Beyond these journals I found many translated documents, particularly those on the World War I Document Archive, maps showing French army deployments and battles, and a wide range of WWI information on websites like firstworldwar.com and Trenches on the Web. Understanding life on the home front was critical and other sources helped: Women’s War Work, edited by Lady Randolph Churchill; You Who Can Help by Mary Smith Churchill; as well as photos available from various sites, books and museums.

  In 2010, my husband and I travelled to northern France to visit the battlefields, monuments, cemeteries and museums dedicated to WWI. It was a wonderful opportunity to see first hand the area where I imagined Beaufort to be, to hear the sounds of rural life, experience the smells, watch people interact with shrugging shoulders and waving arms, and to appreciate the rhythm of spoken French, all the while absorbing the atmosphere. I took hundreds of pictures, which have fuelled descriptions of meadows, stone fences, doorways, village settings and other aspects of life.

  There is no town called Beaufort in northern France so the train station, Rue Principale, the central square, St. Jerome’s church and Café Pitou are all figments of my imagination stoked by that trip. For purposes of the story, the town had to be close enough to Vimy for the battle to have a profound impact on the local citizenry. Beaufort represents the enduring ways and values of rural life and I tried to place it in stark contrast to Paris, where Helene had been raised and where Lise and Mariele had made their way in society prior to the war.

  On the subject of Vimy Ridge, it is important to note that there were three attempts to take the ridge. The first two—one by the British and one by the French—were unsuccessful and resulted in enormous casualties. The third and successful attempt was assigned to the Canadians. What Jean and Helene see from their hilltop perch (assumed to be near Mont St. Eloi) and what Edward relates to Helene are based on Pierre Berton’s non-fiction account of the battle in his book titled Vimy. To avoid complexity, I chose not to mention those first two attempts.

  While Helene is the main character and voice, some scenes are from the perspectives of Lise, Mariele and Henri. I became very fond of the interaction that occurred amongst three generations of women, which made me appreciate even more the relationships I’ve had with my mother and grandmother. Wisdom passed down the generations takes time to come to fruition; often the impact is felt years after the advice is given.

  Helene’s father Henri Noisette plays the role of experienced civil servant, a man who walks the corridors of power and thus knows more than most citizens. He provides us with a behind the scenes view of war from the very first chapter. In my mind, he is also an archetypical upper-class French father, rather a snob when it comes to those from outside his class. An attitude with devastating effects.

  I love the serendipity of researching. Monsieur Garnier and his pig, Emmeline, came from an early twentieth century photo of a French farmer and his prize-winning pig. The red Tonneau emerged from a Google search for turn of the century cars. I attempted to model the style of letters going back and forth between members of the family on a lengthy article about French letter writing. Many other small details were sacrificed to the cutting room floor.

  I found it refreshing, if one can call any view of war refreshing, to investigate WWI from the French perspective rather than the British, Canadian or American. Battles and campaigns mentioned in Lies Told in Silence are as accurately depicted as I could make them. Any errors are solely my responsibility.

  M.K. (Mary) Tod

  June 2014

  Acknowledgements

  Just as it takes a village to raise a child, so does it take a raft of talent and support to create a novel. I am grateful to friends and family who read early drafts and strengthened the story with honest feedback. As with Unravelled, Jenny Toney Quinlan provided wonderful editorial and cover design expertise. In an email exchange, Jenny said “I’ve got your back, babe” and indeed she has. The other individual who ‘has my back’ is my husband Ian. His support has been more than amazing.

  Many other writers have given their time and encouragement via email, Facebook and telephone. I’m not sure what I would do without this welcoming community of historical fiction authors. I am delighted to have found them and count them as friends.

  In the early days of Lies Told in Silence, Sylvia Rayner offered advice and encouragement and was instrumental in finding an agent for it. While that connection did not ultimately secure a publishing deal, it did provide an incredible boost of confidence at a vulnerable time.

  I’ve also been fortunate to join the Historical Novel Society and become a volunteer. Richard Lee, Sarah Johnson, Lucinda Byatt, Helen Hollick, Claire Morris and others have encouraged my survey efforts and welcomed me into the fold.

  Finally, I would like to thank Margaret Evans Porter, Donna Russo Morin, Amy Bruno, Richard Lee and Sharon Kay Penman for reading and endorsing Lies Told in Silence.

  About M.K. Tod

  I have enjoyed a passion for historical novels that began in my early teenage years immersed in the stories of Rosemary Sutcliff, Jean Plaidy and Georgette Heyer. During my twenties, armed with Mathematics and Computer Science degrees, I embarked on a career in technology and consulting continuing to read historical fiction in the tiny snippets of time available to a working woman with children to raise.

  After working thirty years, an unexpected sojourn as an expat in Hong Kong prompted me to begin writing. At first I dabbled, but within months I was hooked, not only with the intensity of writing but also with the fascination of researching the details to lend authenticity and atmosphere. Unravelled—the story that took hold—was released in September 2013.Lies Told in Silence is my second novel.

  Beyond writing I run a blog called A Writer of History and do book reviews for the Historical Novel Society. In 2012 and 2013 I conducted reader surveys reaching a total of more than 3,000 participants from around the world. Survey results are accessible on my blog.

  I live in Toronto, Canada, am very happily married and have two adult children.

  I love hearing from readers … you can reach me at [email protected].

  Table of Contents

  Praise for Lies Told in Silence

  Chapter 1

  Chapter 2

  Chapter 3

  Chapter 4

  Chapter 5

  Chapter 6

  Chapter 7

  Chapter 8

  Chapter 9

  Chapter 10

  Chapter 11

  Chapter 12

  Chapter 13

  Chapter 14

  Chapter 15

  Chapter 16

  Chapter 17

  Chapter 18

  Chapter 19

  Chapter 20

  Chapter 21

  Chapter 22

  Chapter 23

  Chapter 24

  Chapter 25

  Chapter 26

  Chapter 27

  Chapter 28

  Chapter 29

  Chapter 30

  Chapter 31

  Chapter 32

  Chapter 33

  Chapter 34

  Chapter 35

  Chapter 36

  Chapter 37

  Chapter 38

  Chapter 39

  Chapter 40

  Chapter 41

  Chapter 42

  Chapter 43

  Chapter 44

  Chapter 45

  Chapter 46

  Chapter 47

  Epilogue

  UNRAVELLED - Chapter 1

  Afterword for Lies Told in Silence

  Acknowledgements

  About M.K. Tod

  Table of Contents

 

 

 
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