by Joe Dever
(231) Replaced ‘are a long line’ with ‘is a long line’.
(232) Replaced ‘throne of power’ with ‘Throne of Power’. Replaced ‘pathsmanship’ with ‘Pathsmanship’. Replaced ‘Rhunadan’ with ‘ ‘Rhunadan’ ’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘backpack’ with ‘Backpack’. Replaced ‘tome’ with ‘Tome’. Replaced ‘Ghandezh — the’ with ‘Ghandezh, the’. Replaced ‘Künae — the Lords of Decay — and’ with ‘Künae, the Lords of Decay, and’.
(235) Replaced ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’.
(236) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘motionless, then’ with ‘motionless; then’. Replaced ‘interior and’ with ‘interior, and’.
(237) Replaced ‘champion — Kekataag’ with ‘champion, Kekataag’.
(241) Replaced both occurrences of ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’. Replaced both occurrences of ‘reptillians’ with ‘reptilians’. Split the final sentence into its own paragraph for consistency.
(243) Replaced ‘Shamath, ‘it’ with ‘Shamath. ‘It’. Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption. Replaced ‘Avarvae — I trust’ with ‘Avarvae! I trust’.
(244) Replaced each occurrence of ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘Quiver,, but’ with ‘Quiver), but’. Replaced ‘sound — a grating squeal’ with ‘sound, a grating squeal’.
(245) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell — Teleport — and’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell Teleport and’. Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’.
(246) Replaced ‘spell — Teleport — and’ with ‘spell Teleport and’. Replaced ‘out-distance’ with ‘outdistance’.
(247) Replaced ‘Kai blast’ with ‘Kai-blast’. Replaced ‘attained, above’ with ‘attained above’.
(248) Replaced ‘Khor, in’ with ‘Khor in’. Replaced ‘platinum amulet’ with ‘Platinum Amulet’.
(249) Replaced ‘semi-circular’ with ‘semicircular’. Replaced ‘Cadak, and decide’ with ‘Cadak and decide’. Replaced ‘counter-attack’ with ‘counterattack’. Replaced ‘rib-cage’ with ‘rib cage’. Replaced ‘attack and, moments’ with ‘attack, and moments’.
(250) Replaced both occurrences of ‘artifacts’ with ‘artefacts’. Replaced both occurrences of ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’. Replaced ‘reptillians’ with ‘reptilians’. Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘orange and’ with ‘orange, and’. Replaced ‘armour and’ with ‘armour, and’. Replaced ‘an apex’ with ‘the apex’. Replaced ‘Dragonlord — the ruler of this realm of fire — and’ with ‘Dragonlord, the ruler of this realm of fire, and’.
(251) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell — Levitation — and’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell Levitation and’. Replaced ‘rockface, then’ with ‘rock-face. Then’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘leap on’ with ‘leap onto’.
(253) Replaced ‘Darkness — an’ with ‘Darkness, an’.
(254) Deleted ‘(Sommerswerd = +8; Skarn-Ska = +5)’ in view of the footnote added to The Game Rules regarding the COMBAT SKILL bonus conveyed by the Sommerswerd on the Plane of Darkness.
(255) Replaced ‘eg,’ with ‘e.g.’. Removed ‘If you possess Grand Huntmastery, and have attained the Kai rank of Grand Crown, turn to 115.’. According to the Improved Grand Master Disciplines section, Grand Crowns with Grand Pathsmanship ‘are able to create a clear passageway through dense undergrowth, forest, or jungle … This skill can also be employed by a Kai Grand Crown against magical foliage.’ A player could not arrive at this section if they possessed Grand Pathsmanship (cf. Section 85). We have therefore moved the link to Section 115 from here to Section 85 instead (cf. Errata for Section 85 and Section 115). Replaced ‘edged weapon’ with ‘edged Weapon’. Replaced ‘sword or axe), and’ with ‘a Sword or an Axe) and’.
(256) Replaced ‘potion’ with ‘Potion’. Added ‘(Remember to delete Shamath's Potion from your Action Chart.)’.
(258) Replaced ‘With respect’ with ‘But with respect’. Replaced ‘but the scabbard’ with ‘the scabbard’.
(259) Replaced both occurrences of ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’. Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘Crown’ with ‘Crown or higher’. Replaced ‘Thane’ with ‘Thane or higher’. Replaced ‘Mastery, and’ with ‘Mastery and’. Replaced ‘Kai-surge, and’ with ‘Kai-surge and’.
(260) Replaced ‘arrows’ with ‘Arrows’. Replaced ‘axes and’ with ‘axes, and’. Replaced ‘quiver’ with ‘Quiver’. Replaced ‘archway and’ with ‘archway, and’.
(261) Replaced both occurrences of ‘eg,’ with ‘e.g.’. Replaced ‘edged weapon’ with ‘edged Weapon’. Replaced ‘sword or axe’ with ‘Sword or an Axe’. Replaced ‘quarterstaff or mace’ with ‘Quarterstaff or a Mace’.
(262) Replaced ‘slayed’ with ‘slain’. Split the final sentence into its own paragraph for consistency.
(263) Replaced ‘to try and’ with ‘to try to’.
(264) Replaced both occurrences of ‘reptillian’ with ‘reptilian’. Replaced both occurrences of ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’.
(265) Replaced ‘square and’ with ‘square, and’. Replaced ‘fulfilled; base’ with ‘fulfilled, base’.
(266) Replaced ‘stubbly legs’ with ‘stubby legs’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Crown’ with ‘Crown or higher’.
(267) Replaced ‘sound; it’ with ‘sound: it’. Replaced ‘source of the cacophony — the chamber’ with ‘source of the cacophony: the chamber’.
(268) Replaced ‘Special Item’ with ‘Backpack Item’ as the Muntaag Honey is definitely a Backpack Item (cf. Section 112, Section 191, Section 236, and Section 285).
(270) Replaced all occurrences of ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’. Replaced ‘reptillians’ with ‘reptilians’. Replaced ‘flames — a’ with ‘flames: a’.
(271) Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(272) Replaced ‘the Shamath Potion’ with ‘Shamath's Potion’. Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption. Replaced ‘A colossal chariot speeds forth driven by nine stunning astral beings’ with ‘A colossal chariot speeds forth, driven by a stunning astral being.’ in the illustration' caption. Replaced ‘Tormentress — the’ with ‘Tormentress, the’.
(273) Removed quote marks from thought-speech.
(275) Replaced ‘Vorndarol, in’ with ‘Vorndarol in’.
(276) Replaced ‘Grand Mastery skills’ with ‘Grand Mastery’.
(278) Replaced ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’. Replaced ‘firestorm’ with ‘fire-storm’.
(279) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘Crown’ with ‘Crown or higher’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’.
(280) Replaced ‘frames and’ with ‘frames, and’.
(281) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell — Vigour — and’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell Strength and’. Replaced ‘Amulet (remember your’ with ‘Amulet. (Remember: your’. Replaced ‘adventure).’ with ‘adventure.)’. Replaced ‘hot cindery’ with ‘hot, cindery’. Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption.
(282) Replaced ‘Kai!’ and’ with ‘Kai!’ — and’.
(283) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell — Levitation — and’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell Levitation and’. Replaced ‘Crown’ with ‘Crown or higher’. Replaced ‘shore, then’ with ‘shore; then’. Replaced ‘arachnids who’ with ‘arachnids that’.
(284) Replaced ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’.
(285) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘interior and’ with ‘interior, and’.
(286) Replaced ‘Darkness — an’ with ‘Darkness, an’.
(288) Replaced ‘firestorm’ with ‘fire-storm’. Replaced ‘platinum amulet’ with ‘Platinum Amulet’.
(289) Replaced ‘Rhunaguin’ with ‘ ‘Rhunaguin’ ’. Replaced ‘ends here’ with ‘end here’.
(290) Replaced ‘Then suddenly t
he’ with ‘Suddenly, the’. Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption. Replaced ‘realise’ with ‘realize’ in the illustration's caption. Replaced ‘powerful’ with ‘the powerful’ in the illustration's caption. Replaced ‘himself — the’ with ‘himself, the’ in both the main text and the illustration's caption. Replaced ‘face — like’ with ‘face, like’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Disciplines, or’ with ‘Disciplines or’.
(291) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘arrows’ with ‘Arrows’. Replaced ‘levitation spell’ with ‘Levitation spell’. Replaced ‘skill, or’ with ‘skill or’.
(293) Replaced ‘tips, then’ with ‘tips; then’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’.
(294) Replaced ‘ — Gloar! — ’ with ‘Gloar!’. Replaced ‘Sommerswerd, or’ with ‘Sommerswerd or’. Replaced ‘power word’ with ‘power-word’.
(296) Deleted ‘ which you keep in your Backpack’. Replaced ‘pictures or’ with ‘pictures, or’. Replaced ‘empty — devoid’ with ‘empty, devoid’.
(297) Replaced both occurrences of ‘special items’ with ‘Special Items’. Replaced ‘mask successfully’ with ‘successfully mask’.
(298) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell — Teleport — as’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell Teleport as’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘leap on’ with ‘leap onto’.
(301) Replaced ‘crowd are’ with ‘crowd is’. Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption.
(302) Replaced ‘echos’ with ‘echoes’.
(303) Replaced ‘Random Number Table. (0 = 10).’ with ‘Random Number Table (0 = 10).’. Replaced ‘Amulet (remember your’ with ‘Amulet. (Remember: your’. Replaced ‘adventure).’ with ‘adventure.)’. Replaced ‘hot cindery’ with ‘hot, cindery’.
(304) Replaced ‘rise up and flail’ with ‘rises up and flails’. Replaced ‘all — they’ with ‘all: they’.
(305) Replaced ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’.
(306) Removed quote marks from thought-speech.
(307) Replaced ‘artifacts’ with ‘artefacts’.
(308) Replaced ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’.
(310) Deleted ‘(Sommerswerd = +8; Skarn-Ska = +5)’ in view of the footnote added to The Game Rules regarding the COMBAT SKILL bonus conveyed by the Sommerswerd on the Plane of Darkness.
(311) Replaced ‘Suddenly a’ with ‘Suddenly, a’. Replaced ‘Rhunadan’ with ‘ ‘Rhunadan’ ’. Replaced ‘rib-cage’ with ‘rib cage’. Replaced ‘Dregants — a’ with ‘Dregants, a’.
(313) Replaced ‘take Avarvae’ with ‘takes Avarvae’. Replaced ‘late; you’ with ‘late: you’. Replaced ‘Damned — the’ with ‘Damned, the’.
(314) Replaced ‘undergrowth and when’ with ‘undergrowth, and when’.
(315) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’.
(316) Replaced ‘skill, or’ with ‘skill or’.
(317) Replaced ‘reptillian's’ with ‘reptilian's’. Replaced both occurrences of ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’. Replaced ‘reptillian’ with ‘reptilian’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(318) Replaced ‘attack; double’ with ‘attack: double’. Added a period to the end of the illustration's caption.
(319) Replaced ‘Rhunotar’ with ‘ ‘Rhunotar’ ’. Replaced ‘Rhunadan’ with ‘ ‘Rhunadan’ ’. Replaced ‘Rhunaguin’ with ‘ ‘Rhunaguin’ ’. Replaced ‘form, and the sudden cessation of mind contact, throws’ with ‘form — and the sudden cessation of mind contact — throws’. Replaced ‘Darkness — you’ with ‘Darkness: you’.
(320) Replaced ‘ribcage’ with ‘rib cage’. Replaced ‘Cadak — Arch Druid of the Cenerese — a’ with ‘Cadak, Arch Druid of the Cenerese, a’.
(321) Replaced ‘your choose’ with ‘you choose’.
(323) Replaced ‘all — they’ with ‘all: they’.
(324) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’.
(325) Replaced ‘your life and your quest ends’ with ‘your life and your quest end’. Replaced ‘battle wounds’ with ‘battle-wounds’.
(326) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell — Net — and’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell Net and’.
(328) Replaced ‘Rhunotar’ with ‘ ‘Rhunotar’ ’. Replaced ‘Rhunadan’ with ‘ ‘Rhunadan’ ’. Replaced ‘Rhunaguin’ with ‘ ‘Rhunaguin’ ’. Replaced ‘form, and the sudden cessation of mind contact, throws’ with ‘form — and the sudden cessation of mind contact — throws’. Replaced ‘Darkness — you’ with ‘Darkness: you’.
(329) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘Huntmastery, and’ with ‘Huntmastery and’.
(330) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘Kai rank of Grand Guardian’ with ‘rank of Kai Grand Guardian’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘backpack’ with ‘Backpack’. Replaced ‘morass yet’ with ‘morass, yet’. Replaced ‘Huntmastery, and’ with ‘Huntmastery and’.
(331) Replaced ‘firestorm’ with ‘fire-storm’. Replaced ‘sixth senses detect’ with ‘Sixth Sense detects’. Replaced ‘Suddenly a’ with ‘Suddenly, a’.
(334) Replaced ‘rise up and flail’ with ‘rises up and flails’.
(335) Replaced ‘Kai-shield’ with ‘Kai-screen’.
(336) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘Crown’ with ‘Crown or higher’. Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Moved the option to use Grand Nexus to the first place in the list. Replaced ‘Nexus, and’ with ‘Nexus and’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’.
(337) Replaced ‘Grand Mastery skills save’ with ‘Grand Mastery saves’. Replaced ‘legion — they’ with ‘legion; they’.
(338) Replaced both occurrences of ‘special items’ with ‘Special Items’. Replaced ‘mask successfully’ with ‘successfully mask’.
(340) Replaced both occurrences of ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’.
(341) Replaced ‘hands, ‘it’ with ‘hands. ‘It ’.
(343) Replaced ‘reptillian’ with ‘reptilian’. Replaced ‘ribcage’ with ‘rib cage’. Replaced ‘semi-circular’ with ‘semicircular’. Replaced ‘Helgor, in’ with ‘Helgor in’. Replaced ‘Discipline of divination’ with ‘Discipline of Divination’. Replaced ‘familiar yet’ with ‘familiar, yet’. Replaced ‘shimmering — it’ with ‘shimmering: it’. Replaced ‘Künae — the rulers of this hellish domain — but’ with ‘Künae, the rulers of this hellish domain, but’.
(344) Replaced both occurrences of ‘lavas’ with ‘Lavas’. Replaced ‘reptillian’ with ‘reptilian’. Replaced ‘Zhula’ with ‘Zheva’ (cf. Section 86).
(346) Replaced ‘slayed’ with ‘slain’. Replaced ‘blinded and’ with ‘blinded, and’. Replaced ‘descend’ with ‘descends’. Replaced ‘burst forth’ with ‘bursts forth’.
(347) Replaced ‘korlinium scabbard’ with ‘Korlinium Scabbard’. Removed quote marks from thought-speech.
(348) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’.
(349) Replaced ‘Old Kingdom spell — Invisible Fist — and’ with ‘Old Kingdom Spell Invisible Fist and’.
(350) Replaced ‘artifact’ with ‘artefact’. Replaced ‘spiraling’ with ‘spiralling’. Removed quote marks from thought-speech. Replaced ‘safe keeping’ with ‘safekeeping’. Replaced ‘Farewell Lone Wolf’ with ‘Farewell, Lone Wolf’. Replaced ‘to rank of’ with ‘to the rank of’. Replaced ‘VOYAGE OF THE MOONSTONE’ with ‘Voyage of the Moonstone’.
(Combat Rules Summary) Replaced ‘cross reference’ with ‘cross-reference’. Replaced ‘top of chart’ with ‘top of the chart’. Replaced ‘fall to 0’ with ‘falls to 0 or below’. Replaced ‘Kai Disciplines’ with ‘Grand Master Disciplines’. Repl
aced ‘Pick number from’ with ‘Pick a number from the’. Replaced ‘Turn to Combat’ with ‘Turn to the Combat’. Replaced ‘to random number’ with ‘to the random number’. Replaced ‘when ENDURANCE’ with ‘when the ENDURANCE’. Replaced ‘ignored, only’ with ‘ignored; only’.
Footnotes
[1] (The Game Rules) The Discipline bonuses mentioned do not affect your permanent scores. If you have completed previous adventures, the Disciplines that you have mastered may still be beneficial. See the Grand Master Rules section of the Readers' Handbook for details.
[2] (The Game Rules) If you have completed any previous Lone Wolf Grand Master adventures, remember to choose an additional Grand Master Discipline and add +1 to your basic COMBAT SKILL and +2 to your basic ENDURANCE for each adventure you successfully completed (cf. Grand Master Disciplines).
[3] (The Game Rules) If you possess the Sommerswerd, Section 98 of Dawn of the Dragons suggests that you may be able to add 4 to your COMBAT SKILL when using it in the Plane of Darkness (in addition to all other combat bonuses for this Special Item).
[4] (Grand Master Disciplines) Weaponmastery bonuses are replaced by Grand Weaponmastery bonuses, not added cumulatively (cf. Lone Wolf Club Newsletter 28).
If you have completed previous adventures, already possess the Magnakai Discipline of Weaponmastery with Bow, and have reached the rank of Mentora, it seems that you should already be able to add 5 to numbers picked from the Random Number Table (i.e. the basic Weaponmastery with Bow bonus of 3 added to the Mentora bonus of 2 for all missile weapons). Likely, the author intended the Weaponmastery bonus at the Mentora rank to be a ‘hidden loyalty bonus’ (cf. Lone Wolf Club Newsletter 28). In view of this, the +2 Mentora bonus is therefore not cumulative with Grand Weaponmastery with Bow.
Certain sections direct the reader to use different bonuses when using a Bow, ranging from 3 to 5, if you have Grand Weaponmastery with Bow. This may be the author adjusting the Grand Weaponmastery bonus on a case-by-case basis (and therefore this bonus should be used instead of the standard bonus) or an error (and therefore all of these bonuses should be 5). It is up to you to decide, but it seems most reasonable to follow the first alternative, to replace the Grand Weaponmastery bonus with whatever bonus is mentioned in that section.