by Joe Dever
(Equipment) Replaced each occurrence of ‘Lone Wolf’ with ‘Lone Wolf’ when referring to the series. Replaced ‘eg,’ with ‘e.g.’. Replaced ‘combat, therefore’ with ‘combat; therefore’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘quiver’ with ‘Quiver’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘arrows’ with ‘Arrows’. Deleted ‘(see the inside front cover of this book)’. Added a paragraph about Gold Crowns to the section ‘Equipment — How to use it’. Replaced ‘have to your’ with ‘have on your’. Replaced ‘Before you leave Elzian and begin your long voyage south to the Isle of Lorn, you take with you a map of south-eastern Magnamund’ with ‘Before you leave the Port of Suhn and begin your long voyage to the Isle of Sheasu, you take with you a map of central Southern Magnamund’. Set the items on the list of equipment in Initial Capitals. Replaced ‘the previous New Order adventure (Book 21)’ with ‘completed either of the previous adventures in the Lone Wolf New Order series (Books 21–22)’. Replaced ‘Grand Weaponmastery with a Bow’ with ‘Grand Weaponmastery with Bow’. Replaced ‘a sword or an axe’ with ‘a Sword or an Axe’. Replaced ‘weapons’ with ‘Weapons’. Replaced ‘weapon’ with ‘Weapon’. Deleted ‘If you have the Discipline of Grand Weaponmastery with Bow, you may add 3 points to any number you pick from the Random Number Table, when using the Bow.’. Replaced ‘record these on your Weapons List’ with ‘record these on your Action Chart’ for clarity. Replaced ‘the total sum of’ with ‘the number of’. Replaced ‘Disciplines then’ with ‘Disciplines, then’. Added the section on ‘Gold Crowns’ which reads: ‘The currency of Siyen is the Lune. These are always carried in the Belt Pouch. It will hold a maximum of 200 Lune or 50 Gold Crowns. Gold Crowns are also readily accepted at a rate of 1 Gold Crown for 4 Lune. In the course of your journey you may also come across Ren. Ren is accepted at a rate of 10 Ren for 1 Gold Crown, and accordingly your Belt Pouch can hold a maximum of 500 Ren.’. Replaced ‘normal weapons’ with ‘normal Weapons’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘weapon’ with ‘Weapon’ in the ‘Equipment — How to Use It’ section. Added ‘You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat.’ in harmony with the Collector's Edition.
(Kai Weapons) Replaced ‘elite’ with ‘élite’. Replaced ‘new-found’ with ‘newfound’. Deleted ‘at the front of the book’. Replaced ‘cave or’ with ‘cave, or’. Replaced ‘magical Axe, Sword or Broadsword’ with ‘magical Axe, Sword, or Broadsword’. Replaced ‘broadsword “Illuminatus”’ with ‘Broadsword “Illuminatus”’.
(Rules for Combat) Removed ‘on the inside back cover of this book’. Replaced ‘on the page after the Random Number Table’ with ‘in the back of this book’. Replaced ‘points reduced’ with ‘points possibly reduced’. Replaced ‘to zero’ with ‘to zero or below’. Replaced ‘at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead’ with ‘at which point that combatant is declared dead’. Replaced ‘sumary’ with ‘summary’.
(Levels of New Order Grand Mastership) Replaced ‘rank and titles’ with ‘ranks and titles’. Replaced ‘New Order series’ with ‘New Order series’. Replaced ‘New Order adventures’ with ‘New Order adventures’.
(Improved Grand Master Disciplines) Replaced ‘Weaponmastery’ with ‘Grand Weaponmastery’. Replaced ‘Kai Grand Master Superior’ with ‘Kai Grand Sentinel’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘Kai Grand Master Sentinels’ with ‘Kai Grand Sentinels’. Replaced ‘three hours’ with ‘3 hours’. Replaced ‘fifteen square kilometres’ with ‘ten square miles’. Replaced ‘ ‘Improved Grand Master Disciplines’ ’ with ‘Improved Grand Master Disciplines’. Replaced both occurrences of ‘steadily increases’ with ‘steadily increase’. Replaced ‘Lone Wolf New Order series’ with ‘Lone Wolf New Order series’. Replaced ‘Lone Wolf New Order books’ with ‘Lone Wolf New Order books’.
(New Order Wisdom) Replaced ‘You are about to embark upon the final stage of a vital mission to return the fabled Moonstone of the Shianti to its creators.’ with ‘You are about to embark upon a vital mission to save the realm of Siyen from the clutches of the evil Baron Sadanzo and his robber knights. It is a noble quest and its success will bring great honour upon you and the Kai.’. Replaced ‘Books 1–21’ with ‘Books 1–22’. Replaced ‘gods’ with ‘Gods’. Italicised ‘Lone Wolf’ when referring to the series. Replaced ‘New Order adventure’ with ‘New Order adventure’.
(1) Replaced ‘Dessi consulate’ with ‘Dessian consulate’. Added a paragraph break between ‘orb of light.’ and ‘ ‘Ah,’. Italicised ‘Lone Wolf New Order’ when referring to the series. Replaced ‘adventure)’ with ‘adventure),’. Replaced ‘30 metres’ with ‘100 feet’. Replaced ‘The Captain’ with ‘The captain’.
(2) Replaced ‘under way’ with ‘underway’. Replaced ‘clang’ with ‘clang’. Replaced ‘fifteen’ with ‘five’, since the fifteen-minute call was sounded earlier in Section 78.
(3) Replaced ‘river (Make’ with ‘river. (Make’. Replaced ‘kilometre’ with ‘mile’. Replaced ‘which weapon’ with ‘which Weapon’. Replaced ‘five kilometres’ with ‘three miles’.
(4) Replaced ‘Items (Ren’ with ‘Items. (Ren’.
(6) Replaced ‘prince’ with ‘Prince’.
(7) Replaced ‘rolling clouds’ with ‘roiling clouds’. Replaced ‘grimly, ‘I’ with ‘grimly. ‘I’. Replaced ‘the crew give’ with ‘the crew gives’.
(8) Replaced ‘speed an’ with ‘speed and’. Replaced ‘Each potion’ with ‘Each Potion of Laumspur’. Replaced ‘gleaming bronze now’ with ‘gleaming bronze, now’.
(9) Replaced ‘emmissaries’ with ‘emissaries’. Replaced ‘mules and’ with ‘mules, and’. Replaced ‘Kai curing’ with ‘Magnakai Curing’. Changed the link to Section 166 to Section 116 instead, as the original is clearly wrong. Replaced each occurrence of ‘Inquisitor-Major’ with ‘Inquisitor-major’.
(10) Replaced ‘Kai weapon’ with ‘Kai Weapon’. Replaced ‘gulley’ with ‘gully’. Replaced ‘agarashi’ with ‘Agarashi’. Replaced ‘add 5 to’ with ‘add 5 points to’. Added the illustration caption ‘The drooling horror utters a chilling cackle and quickly moves towards the narrow gulley.’ that was missing from the first printing of the book. Added ‘If the Kai Weapon you wield is “Raumas”, you may apply the bonus gained due to its unique properties.’.
(12) Replaced ‘Merchant's Quarter’ with ‘Merchants' Quarter’. Replaced ‘upon him’ with ‘upon the Baron’. Replaced ‘Disciplines or weapon’ with ‘Disciplines, nor a Bow’. Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘constitution of Siyen’ with ‘Constitution of Siyen’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘prince’ with ‘Prince’. Replaced ‘prince's’ with ‘Prince's’. Replaced ‘The crowd give’ with ‘The crowd gives’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’. Replaced ‘Bow, and’ with ‘Bow and’.
(13) Replaced ‘prince’ with ‘Prince’.
(14) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Replaced ‘well being’ with ‘well-being’. Replaced ‘effects of the mind charm’ with ‘effects of the spell’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘prince’ with ‘Prince’.
(16) Replaced ‘rooms and’ with ‘rooms, and’. Replaced ‘patrols who’ with ‘patrols that’. Replaced ‘swordbelt’ with ‘sword belt’. Replaced ‘tunic, then’ with ‘tunic, and then’. Replaced ‘prince’ with ‘Prince’.
(17) Removed the paragraph break between ‘politely.’ and ‘ ‘My’. Replaced ‘this night?’ with ‘this night.’ Replaced ‘Yay’ with ‘Yea’. Replaced ‘t'is’ with ‘ 'tis’. Replaced ‘nerve.’ with ‘nerve?’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’.
(18) Replaced ‘death of’ with ‘deaths of’. Replaced ‘jaw, then’ with ‘jaw; then’.
(19) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘my lord. Will’ with ‘my lor
d, will’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’.
(24) Replaced ‘carrying (Erase’ with ‘carrying. (Erase’. Replaced ‘Backpack list’ with ‘list of Backpack Items’. Replaced ‘backpack’ with ‘Backpack’.
(25) Replaced ‘prince's’ with ‘Prince's’. Replaced ‘add 5 to’ with ‘add 5 points to’. Replaced ‘Inquisitor-Major's’ with ‘Inquisitor-major's’. Replaced ‘Inquisitor-Major’ with ‘Inquisitor-major’.
(26) Replaced ‘prince’ with ‘Prince’.
(28) Replaced ‘ribcage’ with ‘rib cage’. Replaced ‘sharp, popping’ with ‘sharp popping’.
(30) Replaced ‘face, then’ with ‘face, and then’. Replaced ‘prince’ with ‘Prince’.
(31) Replaced ‘prince’ with ‘Prince’.
(32) Replaced ‘30 kilometres’ with ‘30 miles’. Replaced ‘Action Chart).’ with ‘Action Chart.)’. Replaced ‘prince’ with ‘Prince’.
(34) Replaced ‘add 5 to’ with ‘add 5 points to’. Replaced ‘combat skill’ with ‘COMBAT SKILL’. Replaced ‘Cavalian bandits’ with ‘Cavalian Bandits’. Added the illustration caption ‘As soon as you pass through the stable door, you are attacked by six Cavalian bandits.’ that was missing from the first printing of the book. Replaced ‘four (or more) rounds’ with ‘four rounds or more’. Replaced ‘prince's’ with ‘Prince's’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘Karvas's’ with ‘Karvas' ’.
(35) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘kilometre’ with ‘mile’. Replaced ‘20 kilometres’ with ‘20 miles’. Replaced ‘20 metres’ with ‘20 yards’. Replaced ‘ten metres’ with ‘10 yards’. Replaced ‘saddle is’ with ‘saddle are’. Replaced ‘great forest of Kelderwood’ with ‘Great Forest of Kelderwood’.
(36) Replaced ‘loaded ready’ with ‘loaded, ready’. Replaced ‘your weapons’ with ‘your Weapons’. Replaced ‘backpack’ with ‘Backpack’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘men at arms’ with ‘men-at-arms’.
(37) Replaced ‘your crowns’ with ‘your Crowns’.
(38) Replaced ‘five kilometres’ with ‘5 miles’. Replaced ‘struck’ with ‘strikes’.
(39) Replaced ‘1 Bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘1 Spear’ with ‘Spear’. Replaced ‘1 Axe’ with ‘Axe’. Replaced ‘swordbelt’ with ‘sword belt’. Replaced ‘your weapons’ with ‘your Weapons’. Replaced ‘confiscated weapons’ with ‘confiscated equipment’. Replaced ‘less than’ with ‘more than’ since Section 275 states ‘you bide your time until an hour later’. Replaced ‘Karvas's’ with ‘Karvas' ’.
(40) Replaced ‘Kai weapon’ with ‘Kai Weapon’.
(41) Replaced ‘first floor corridor’ with ‘first-floor corridor’. Replaced ‘stairs, ‘we’ with ‘stairs. ‘We’. Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’.
(42) Replaced ‘rolling clouds’ with ‘roiling clouds’. Replaced ‘the crew give’ with ‘the crew gives’.
(43) Replaced ‘accept and’ with ‘accept it and’.
(44) Replaced ‘Inquisitor-Major’ with ‘Inquisitor-major’. Replaced ‘this Special Item’ with ‘this item’ for consistency with changes made to Section 288.
(45) Replaced ‘timber-yard’ with ‘timber yard’. Replaced ‘two-storeyed’ with ‘two-storey’. Replaced ‘arm band’ with ‘armband’. Replaced ‘a patrol of armed guards who are marching’ with ‘a patrol of armed guards which is marching’.
(46) Added a paragraph break between ‘wistfully.’ and ‘ ‘Yes’. Added the illustration caption ‘Two Seroan City Guardsmen stop passengers at the end of the gangplank to collect their riverboat tickets.’ that was missing from the first printing of the book.
(47) Replaced ‘Dammerdon mountains’ with ‘Dammerdon Mountains’. Replaced ‘an north-easterly’ with ‘a northeasterly’. Replaced ‘200 kilometres’ with ‘200 miles’. Replaced ‘Karvas's’ with ‘Karvas' ’.
(48) Added a paragraph break before ‘You have no difficulty’. Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘prince’ with ‘Prince’.
(50) Replaced ‘emotion, ‘welcome’ with ‘emotion. ‘Welcome’.
(51) Replaced ‘parallel with’ with ‘parallel to’. Replaced ‘shock-wave’ with ‘shock wave’. Replaced ‘30 metres’ with ‘100 feet’. Replaced ‘a second deafening’ with ‘another deafening’.
(52) Replaced ‘the river’ with ‘the river.’. Replaced ‘kilometres’ with ‘miles’. Replaced ‘equivalent = 2 Gold Crowns’ with ‘equivalent — 2 Gold Crowns’.
(53) Replaced ‘skills, or’ with ‘skills, nor a Bow, or’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’.
(54) Replaced ‘by way of its east gate’ with ‘by way of its west gate’.
(55) Replaced ‘your weapons’ with ‘your Weapons’. Replaced ‘half mast’ with ‘half-mast’. Replaced ‘muses out aloud’ with ‘muses aloud’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘Guard Captain’ with ‘guard captain’ when it is not followed by a specific name.
(57) Replaced ‘crack’ with ‘crack’. Replaced ‘spell of levitation’ with ‘Levitation spell’.
(59) Replaced each occurrence of ‘river boat’ with ‘riverboat’. Replaced ‘to try and’ with ‘to try to’. Replaced ‘75 kilometres’ with ‘75 miles’. Replaced ‘prince’ with ‘Prince’. Replaced ‘Sainus's’ with ‘Sainus' ’.
(60) Replaced ‘Kai weapon’ with ‘Kai Weapon’. Replaced ‘battle cry’ with ‘battle-cry’. Replaced ‘30 metres’ with ‘100 feet’. Added the illustration caption ‘The armour-clad leader bellows a challenge, demanding that you face him in personal combat.’ that was missing from the first printing of the book.
(61) Replaced ‘emotion, ‘welcome’ with ‘emotion. ‘Welcome’.
(62) Replaced ‘stuck by’ with ‘struck by’. Replaced ‘knight, ‘or’ with ‘knight. ‘Or’. Replaced ‘prince's’ with ‘Prince's’.
(63) Replaced each occurrence of ‘prince’ with ‘Prince’. Replaced ‘Pathsmanship, and’ with ‘Pathsmanship and’.
(64) Replaced ‘Each potion’ with ‘Each Potion of Laumspur’. Replaced ‘gleaming bronze now’ with ‘gleaming bronze, now’.
(65) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Removed the dashes around ‘Mind Charm’.
(66) Replaced ‘Dagger you’ with ‘Dagger, you’.
(67) Replaced ‘shortlived’ with ‘short-lived’. Replaced ‘prince's’ with ‘Prince's’.
(70) Replaced ‘loathe to’ with ‘loath to’. Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘kilometres’ with ‘miles’. Replaced ‘choice; these’ with ‘choice: these’. Replaced ‘the troop unfurl’ with ‘the troop unfurls’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘Lodamos's’ with ‘Lodamos' ’.
(71) Replaced ‘to go and save’ with ‘to go to save’. Replaced ‘crack’ with ‘crack’.
(72) Replaced ‘a solid wall of water and loose rock come rushing’ with ‘a solid wall of water and loose rock comes rushing’. Replaced ‘Animal Control’ with ‘Animal Mastery’.
(73) Replaced ‘Kai rank of Kai’ with ‘rank of Kai’. Replaced ‘Inquisitor-Major’ with ‘Inquisitor-major’. Replaced ‘Bardsmanship, and’ with ‘Bardsmanship and’. Replaced ‘Kai-surge, and’ with ‘Kai-surge and’.
(74) Replaced ‘Belt pouch’ with ‘Belt Pouch’. Replaced ‘Reeve-sergeant's’ with ‘reeve-sergeant's’. Replaced ‘Torq’ with ‘Torqs’ as everywhere else in this book.