In fact, Henry was not so much completing his western tour as aborting it—cutting short his travels, as he complained to his editor, on account of “excruciating gastric distress.” Indeed, the Jamesian digestive apparatus had been in chronic disrepair ever since its exposure a month earlier to the cuisine of St. Louis, a series of “desperate variations upon the inherently unpromising culinary theme of fried catfish.” To make matters worse, Henry’s back was killing him. In the terminology of today’s psychiatry, the Jameses were notorious somaticizers: Their psychological conflicts often manifested in the form of such physical symptoms as painful digestive disturbances, crippling constipation, mysterious visual weaknesses, and blazingly aching backs. (William James, fresh out of the Harvard medical school, diagnosed his brother’s spinal symptoms as “dorsal insanity.”) In this instance, we might suspect that an underlying reason for Henry’s distress—and Henry James was never one to deny any reason its fair weight and then some—was that the young author had come to realize he had neither talent nor taste for newspaper writing. “Try as he might,” wrote his biographer Leon Edel, “Henry James could never speak in the journalistic voice. It was as if a man, fluent, suddenly reduced himself to a stutter.” In his own mind, James was destined to be a great literary artist, not a newspaper hack, and his true vocation would hardly suffer a whit, he no doubt told himself, if he were never to describe another thundering herd of bison, painted Red Indian, or towering Rocky Mountain. Mark Twain could have the lot. Henry’s idea of “roughing it” was any hotel under a two-star rating, and the truth, which must have been painfully apparent to him as he stared out over the western Missouri landscape described by Jesse James’s biographer T. J. Stiles as resembling “a rug pushed into a corner: rumpled, wrinkled, rippled with ravines,” was that all of that open space—those endless empty miles with scarcely a shanty, much less a café or cathedral to break the sheer geology of it all—had literally made him sick.
Fortunately, the interior scenery of the coach was to prove far more to Henry’s taste: Across the aisle from the writer sat a young woman who would soon introduce herself as Elena Phoenix and who would come to play a singularly significant role in the lives of the entire James clan. Though he scarcely could have been characterized as a ladies’ man in the vulgar, predatory sense, Henry James was nonetheless a connoisseur of what he once described as the “more complicated” sex. Even at this early stage of his literary career, he had long since determined that womanhood, particularly the freshly emerging American strain, was to be a salient subject of his work. (“My Bible is the female mind,” declares a diarist in Henry’s 1866 tale “A Landscape Painter.”) Like Winterbourne, the protagonist of Daisy Miller, Henry had a great relish for feminine beauty; he was addicted to observing and analyzing it, and though the features of the specimen presently under his scrutiny were partially obscured by the magazine in which she was engrossed, he could not have helped but discern that the coils of her golden tresses framed a face of remarkable beauty—though it was a beauty, he might have been compelled to note, of the sort more properly designated “handsome” than “pretty.” If contemporary photographs of Elena are a suitable guide, Henry’s practiced eye doubtless would have registered a slightly too firm set to her mouth, which seemed to war with the sensuous fullness of her lips, and that the angles of her glowing cheeks were perhaps a shade too sharply chiseled for one of the “gentle gender.” Nonetheless, the softness of her sex and age—she was then only twenty-two—no doubt lent a sweetness and vulnerability to her patrician countenance that served to take the chill off its sheer sculptural achèvement.
On this occasion, the softer facet of her being was accentuated by a fashionable mauve frock, which blossomed with fantastic frills and flounces and from which a daring flash of lemon-yellow petticoat peeped fetchingly at the ankle. Her narrow waist was garnished with a crimson sash, and around her neck, falling low over her rounded bosom, hung a double strand of glowing amber beads. But more striking to Henry James than the young woman’s fine features and modish attire would have been a certain larger-than-life aspect of her bearing, an altogether “finished” quality proclaiming the presence of a public personage. She might have seemed to him—in a phrase he would later apply to Isabel Archer in The Portrait of a Lady—to have “the general air of being someone in particular.” Here, he could have been moved to speculate, was a talented diva bearing the bright torch of the operatic art to the benighted provinces of the West, or perhaps a celebrated comedienne—a radiant Juliet or heartrending Camille honing her art on the coarser sensibilities of the hinterlands before essaying to captivate the more sophisticated audiences of the great metropoli back east.
Yet it was neither her elegant apparel, nor her exquisite facial contours, nor even her “general air,” to which his gaze was ultimately drawn, but rather to the reading matter upon which her own attention appeared so fiercely fixed. Henry could not have helped but recognize the familiar typography of The Atlantic Monthly—indeed, one of the issues in which his first novel, Roderick Hudson, had recently been serialized.
In his later years, after the turn of the century, James would be widely revered as “The Master,” with an imposing oeuvre comprising dozens of novels, scores of novellas, and hundreds of short stories. But in that centennial summer of 1876, all of this was far ahead of him and by no means assured as his destiny. He was still in the thrall of what he once called “the hungry futurity of youth,” and we can only imagine the maelstrom of emotion generated by the fledgling author’s realization that this lovely young woman was in fact perusing his very own words. Her lips moved silently, voluptuously forming the shape of his every syllable—a reading habit he might normally have deemed jejune but which, considering the exquisite syllables in question (to say nothing of the exquisite lips), must have struck him as infinitely charming.
To achieve a better view, he cranked his reclining chair to its forwardmost position so energetically that he may have feared pitching himself headlong into the aisle. Sensing the high voyeuristic voltage being generated across the way, the young woman lifted her eyes to intercept the writer’s intense gaze with a cool, quizzical look of her own. (Though proper ladies of the era were conventionally admonished never to encourage “acquaintanceship” with strangers on trains, Elena was hardly one to abide by the rigid strictures of mid-Victorian propriety.)
“I beg your pardon, sir?”
Henry James colored as if caught in some particularly unclean act.
“I gather from your, ah, oscillations,” she went on, “that you must be exceedingly interested in my magazine.” She held out The Atlantic, offering it across the aisle. “Would you care to peruse it at closer range?”
“I…I…I…no…I…,” Henry stammered, for however gracefully his words may have glided across the smooth plane of the printed page, in the more turbulent atmosphere of the three-dimensional world, they often flapped wildly about, like chimney swallows flushed into a drawing room.
“Well, if you don’t care to read it, then I would be most grateful if you would kindly desist from staring at it so.” The young woman delivered this remonstrance with a prim nod and a satisfied half-smile, feeling, as she later recorded in her diary, in equal measure pleased and amused by the firmness of tone she was taking with this imposing stranger. James was now thirty-three and, by at least one account, a fine figure of a man: “He had mildly swelled, not to fatness, not to stoutness, but well nigh to the brink of plumpness,” wrote William H. Huntington, a colleague at the Tribune. “Also hath whiskers, full but close trimmed. By reason of these fulfillments…he has much more waxed in good lookingness, and is in his actual presentment (specially qua head) a notably finer person than one in the next 10,000 of handsome men.”
All these fine fulfillments notwithstanding, at this moment Henry appeared to Elena “for all the world like a schoolboy harshly scolded” as he hurriedly averted his gaze and made an elaborate show of scribbling in the pages of the notebook
on his lap.
“Really,” the young woman insisted, “I’d be most happy to let you have the magazine. But I simply cannot abide anyone reading over my shoulder. It gives me the willies.”
This remark, accompanied by an exaggerated mock shudder that no doubt struck Henry—especially in conjunction with the slang expression—as disarmingly girlish, at last emboldened him to speak.
“I’m terribly sorry,” he said, seeming relieved with the smoothness and profundity of his vocal presentation, “I would be loath to knowingly inflict ‘the willies’ upon anyone. I was merely curious about that story you’re reading.”
“Roderick Hudson?”
“Oh, is that the title?” Henry asked disingenuously. In his preface to the 1907 edition of that early work, he recalled the “quite uplifted sense with which my idea, such as it was, permitted me to at last put quite out to sea. I had but hugged the shore on sundry previous small occasions; bumping about, to acquire skill, in the shallow waters and sandy coves of the ‘short story’ and master as yet of no vessel constructed to carry a sail.” Roderick Hudson, then, was his maiden voyage into the deep waters of full-length fiction. In it he had sounded the opening chords of his great themes: the artist and society, European decadence versus American innocence, the labyrinthine divagations of the female mind. It had taken him over a year of intense labor to bring forth his opus, and upon its popular success rode all of Henry’s hopes for a career that would permit him to devote his efforts exclusively to fiction.
“Oh, it’s dreadful,” pronounced the young woman.
Whatever head of steam had built up behind Henry’s vocal machinery suddenly fizzled. “D-d-d-dreadful?” he stammered.
“Well, you may judge for yourself. I certainly have no desire to finish it,” she said, again offering the magazine across the aisle.
Henry waved aside the proffered journal as though it were yet another portion of detested fried catfish.
“Of course, there are many other perfectly excellent pieces in this number,” the young woman chattered on enthusiastically. “Mark Twain has a charming description of old times on the Mississippi, how he became a cub pilot on a steamboat, and Oliver Wendell Holmes has a fascinating essay on crime and automatism in which he argues, if I understand him correctly, that the criminal is not necessarily the same thing as the sinner, since the former is, in some sense, a moral idiot, or morally insane; that just as some men are unable from birth to distinguish between certain colors—red and green, for instance—”
“In what way…dreadful?”
The young woman, caught up in her breathless synopsis of the Holmes piece, was momentarily confused. “The story?”
“Yes, the story. This Roderick Hudson,” Henry insisted. He was now breathing through his nostrils. “In what way is it so…dreadful?”
“Why, in almost every way, really.” The young woman delivered her harsh evaluation with a tinkling laugh, amused by the boldness of her critique and pleased with the opportunity to display her erudition. “To begin with, it’s far too mannered. The characters seem very stiff, the language is often unpleasantly curly, and the whole thing is completely void of any recognizable human emotion. It’s very…chilly, if you know what I mean.”
“Chilly,” repeated Henry with a glacial smile. It was the very word his brother William had used in his own critique of the novel. Henry was anxious to end this ungratifying exchange, no doubt sorry he had let himself be drawn forth from his cozy cocoon of observation. But his interlocutress, delighted to be liberated from the rigors of her reading, kept her elegant shoulder to the conversational wheel.
“And might you by any chance be a literary gentleman yourself?” she inquired brightly, dropping her gaze toward Henry’s open notebook, a handsome black leatherette volume with wine-marbled endpapers.
Henry shifted uncomfortably in his seat and closed the portfolio with a sharp snap. “In a manner of speaking,” he answered, then hastily added: “That is, I write the occasional travel piece—herds of bison, Rocky Mountains, Red Indians—that sort of thing. Nothing in the fiction line.”
“And might I be familiar with your work, Mr….?”
“Jones,” the writer supplied quickly. “Harry Jones.” (Though the surname he blurted was randomly, almost comically, fictional, the Christian name he appended to it was in fact his old family moniker, employed during his youth to distinguish him from his father, Henry Sr., and the numerous other Henrys festooning the James family tree.)
The young woman squinted in a pretty pantomime of cogitation, but clearly, she was drawing a blank. “I’m afraid I’ve never heard of you, Mr. Jones,” she confessed with some embarrassment.
“It would have surprised me immensely if you had,” Henry replied dryly.
“But now that we’ve met, I’d love to read something of yours.”
“Oh, you mustn’t be too certain of that.” At this point Henry was becoming visibly irritated. He must already have been irked with this woman for having made him lie about his name—and such a clumsy, unimaginative lie at that—and he would have had no wish to become any more profoundly enmeshed in this fruitless web of deceit. We can imagine him finding himself conscious of the distinctly ungallant compulsion to discover some hint of imperfection in her apparently flawless appearance, as if some subtle misalignment of feature—some soupçon of coarseness about the mouth or blemish in the smooth complexion—might have established grounds for discounting her painful literary judgment. But the more closely he scrutinized her, the more he would have been obliged to concede that his initial assessment of her beauty had been, if anything, insufficiently generous: She was as bright and soft as an April cloud, and beaming at him with such a fresh, open smile that he no doubt could have throttled her.
“Oh, I’m terribly sorry,” she pressed on, extending a hand across the aisle. “Here you’ve told me your name, and I haven’t introduced myself. I’m Elena Phoenix.”
Henry took her creamy-kidskin-gloved hand and gave it a perfunctory pump. “Ah, yes,” he ventured, “that marvelous mythical bird that perishes in flames and rises from its ashes.”
“Indeed,” she replied with a practiced enigmatic smile, “that marvelous mythical bird.”
“And would it be Miss Phoenix, then?” Henry inquired.
At this Elena abruptly withdrew her hand. Her lips pursed and her cheeks colored. “If you mean to inquire whether or not I’m married, Mr. Jones,” she replied tartly, “the answer is certainly not. I’m in no hurry for that when there are so many other, more rewarding things a woman might achieve.”
The vehemence of this short piece of oration seemed to take Henry aback. In searching for the proper term of address, he had no doubt intended merely to provide assurance that any ensuing conversation would be conducted at the highest level of propriety. He could scarcely have expected to provoke a lecture.
“You’re making a face, Mr. Jones.”
“A face?”
Elena Phoenix scrunched up her fine features to mirror a contorted grimace of disgust.
“I’m dreadfully sorry,” said Henry. “One tends to have such imperfect control over one’s physiognomy.”
“Perhaps,” Elena countered, “that may be because one tends to believe that a woman’s proper place is in the home.” She was building up a considerable head of rhetorical steam. “But let me assure you, Mr. Jones, women are awakening in this land. We have the ability—and the right—to do anything you men do. A woman can go to school or teach school. She can be a doctor, a lawyer, an architect, an artist, a writer….”
Henry James nodded mechanically at the enumeration of each line of work to which the awakening American woman might rightfully aspire. In fact, he felt not so much out of sympathy with feminist politics as weary of them. He had noted on his visit to Boston that winter how the boundless emancipatory energies that had once fueled the abolitionist movement of the 1860s now seemed to have been redirected from Negroes to women. His sister, Alice, when no
t incapacitated by one of her chronic neurasthenic “episodes,” was an active advocate of the cause, especially in the area of female education. She had managed to convince her literary brother of the justice of at least that portion of the feminist agenda. Yet whatever opinions Henry may have held on the subject, at the moment he probably clung to them less tenaciously than to his desire not to be betrayed once again by his facial musculature.
“Or, if such be her inclination,” Elena Phoenix concluded with a proud heavenward thrust of her chin, “she can walk the streets and peddle her favors to the highest bidder!”
Henry’s eyes widened. He searched Elena’s face for a clue as to whether she might be joking, but her countenance evinced nothing beyond its loveliness. If indeed this were a joke on her part, Henry must have felt, it was one entirely too provocative for the circumstances. In Europe a proper young lady would scarcely dare ride a train unescorted, much less engage in such familiar badinage with a perfect stranger. On the other hand, he couldn’t have helped but think that if this woman turned out to be—the word would have rushed to his mind with a tingle of excitement and revulsion—a common whore, why then might he not discount her poor opinion of Roderick Hudson entirely?
“And which of these, ah, worthy professions,” asked Henry, “might it be your pleasure to substitute for the sorry satisfactions of the wedded estate?”
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