Counting Backwards

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by Helen Dunmore

I am nothing.

  Then I think how the train

  Then I think how the train

  from being a far blue point

  troubling the slick of track

  like thought in the dead of night

  with a rack of stations between

  the pulse of it and me

  suddenly breathes at my back.

  The platform stammers

  and I see my poems

  and see my youth in my poems

  look up and back – then I think how the train

  argues with a cloud of flowers

  and always wins

  cutting away with its cargo

  leaving me in the carpark.

  I tack the tarmac with footmarks

  but now the train

  switches its tail

  shaking the rails,

  then I think how the train

  was waiting for me, a mushroom

  put there for my hand

  in the cow-coloured dawn.

  That far blue point

  how fast it’s grown

  having visited each one of the rack of stations

  and found no one home.

  How quick you are, I think to the train,

  how near you’ve come.

  Skips

  If I wanted totems, in place of the poles

  slung up by barbers, in place of the clutter

  of knife-eyed kids playing with tops and whips,

  and boys in cut-down men’s trousers

  swaggering into camera,

  I’d have skips.

  First, red and white bollards

  to mark the road-space they need.

  A young couple in stained workwear

  – both clearly solicitors –

  act tough with the driver, who’s late.

  The yellow god with its clangorous emptiness

  sways on the chains.

  The young man keeps shouting BACK A LITTLE!

  as the skip rides above his BMW.

  The driver, vengeful, drops it askew.

  Next, the night is alive with neighbours

  bearing their gifts, propitiations

  and household gods – a single-tub washing-machine,

  a cat-pissed rug, two televisions.

  Soundless as puppets, they lower them

  baffled in newspaper, then score

  a dumbshow goal-dance to the corner.

  Time by Accurist

  Washed silk jacket by Mesa

  in cream or taupe, to order,

  split skirt in lime

  from a selection at Cardoon,

  £84.99,

  lycra and silk body, model’s own,

  calf-skin belt by Bondage, £73.99,

  tights from a range at Pins,

  deck-shoes, white, black or strawberry,

  all from Yoo Hoo,

  baby’s cotton trousers and braces

  both at Workaday

  £96.00; see list for stockists.

  Photographs by André McNair,

  styled by Lee LeMoin,

  make-up by Suze Fernando at Face the Future,

  hair by Joaquim for Plumes.

  Models: Max and Claudie.

  Location: St James Street Washeteria

  (courtesy of Route Real America

  and the Cape Regis Hotel),

  baby, model’s own,

  lighting by Sol,

  time by Accurist.

  The Silent Man in Waterstones

  I shall be the first to lead the Muses to my native land

  VIRGIL

  The silent man in Waterstones

  LOVE on one set of knuckles

  HATE on the other

  JESUS between his eyes

  drives his bristling blue skull

  into the shelves,

  thuds on CRIME /FANTASY

  shivers a stand of Virago Classics

  head-butts Dante.

  The silent man in Waterstones

  looks for a bargain.

  Tattered in flapping parka

  white eyes wheeling

  he catches

  light on his bloody earlobes

  and on the bull-ring

  he wears through his nose.

  The silent man in Waterstones

  raps for attention.

  He has got Virgil by the ears:

  primus ego in patriam mecum…

  He’ll lead the Muse to a rat-pissed underpass

  teach her to beg

  on a carpet of cardboard

  and carrier bags.

  The Wardrobe Mistress

  This is the wardrobe mistress, touching

  her wooden wardrobe. Here is her smokey

  cross of chrysanthemums

  skewed by the font.

  They have put you in this quietness

  left you here for the night.

  Your coffin is like a locker

  of mended ballet shoes.

  You always looked in the toes.

  There was blood in them, rusty

  as leaves, blood from ballerinas.

  Tonight it is All Souls

  but you’ll stop here quietly,

  only the living have gone to the cemetery

  candles in their hands

  to be blown about under the Leylandii.

  In your wooden wardrobe, you’re used to waiting.

  You know these sounds to the bone:

  they are showing people to their seats

  tying costumes at the back.

  Everything they say is muffled,

  the way it is backstage.

  A stagehand pushes your castors

  so you glide forward.

  You know Manon is leaning

  on points against a flat,

  nervously flexing

  her strong, injured feet,

  you’re in position too, arms crossed,

  touching your bud of wood.

  You needn’t dance, it’s enough

  to do what you always did.

  That was the second bell. You feel it

  tang through the crush. The wind

  pours on like music

  drying everyone’s lips,

  they’re coming, your dancers.

  You hate the moment of hush.

  There. The quick luck-words

  knocking on wood.

  When You’ve Got

  When you’ve got the plan of your life

  matched to the time it will take

  but you just want to press SHIFT /BREAK

  and print over and over

  this is not what I was after

  this is not what I was after,

  when you’ve finally stripped out the house

  with its iron-cold fireplace,

  its mouldings, its mortgage,

  its single-skin walls

  but you want to write in the plaster

  ‘This is not what I was after,’

  when you’ve got the rainbow-clad baby

  in his state-of-the-art pushchair

  but he arches his back at you

  and pulps his Activity Centre

  and you just want to whisper

  ‘This is not what I was after,’

  when the vacuum seethes and whines in the lounge

  and the waste-disposal unit blows,

  when tenners settle in your account

  like snow hitting a stove,

  when you get a chat from your spouse

  about marriage and personal growth,

  when a wino comes to sleep in your porch

  on your Citizen’s Charter

  and you know a hostel’s opening soon

  but your headache’s closer

  and you really just want to torch

  the bundle of rags and newspaper

  and you’ll say to the newspaper

  ‘This is not what we were after,

  this is not what we were after.’

  Afterword

  Forty is a good age for thinking ab
out the body. These poems were written in three and a half years or so between thirty-seven and forty, and if there is an underpinning web to this collection, if there is a conversation going on between the poems which is more than the sum of what each poem is saying, then I think it is to do with the body.

  Sexuality, ageing, death, reproduction – these are all so much more relative than we think when we confront them first as absolutes in childhood or adolescence. At forty I find myself living in a time of almost overwhelming physical change. The first swathe has been cut through contemporaries by sickness, accident and death. Now ours is the generation that organises funerals: funerals of parents, funerals of colleagues and mentors who were thirty or more years older and have suffered that strange thing called a natural death. We have to watch weakness in those who were strong, and strength developing in the dependent. People in the rich West stay late-middle-aged for so long now. The years tick on and then suddenly, astonishingly, the world narrows to a white bed and the wink of the electrocardiograph. Our children are growing fiercely, claiming their own sexuality, taking up more room in the house than we dare to do. Their skin and hair and smiles bloom breathtakingly.

  And those familiar bones in the mirror are covered by flesh which is beginning to change in ways I scarcely understand. No longer the youngest person on the bus, no longer automatically raked by male eyes in public places, no longer constantly made conscious of who I am and where I am by whistles and comments. Go on darling, give us a smile. Now I can forget how to smooth my face to unresponsive blankness in public or how to walk past building-sites with apparent unconcern. There’s great freedom in this, and a powerful sense of recovering a body which for years seemed to belong as much to other people as to me.

  The instability of the body is a source of comedy too. It swells and shrinks, presents itself one day as beautiful, the next as awkward and unsure. It sweats for fitness to stave off an autumn which is already wrinkling the edges of the leaves. It relishes an intimate, unshared life of snores, farts, bum-reducing exercises, masturbation and nose-picking, then walks out into public immaculately sheathed in whatever appearance suits it that day. The flesh-pinching reality of our bodies is constantly undermined by their surreality.

  A late pregnancy has concentrated these thoughts in me. A woman of forty begins to look back on nearly thirty years of menstrual cycles, of the fear of pregnancy or the hope of pregnancy, of being always somewhere in a hormonal pattern which is both private and socially significant. Ahead of her is the menopause with its promise of a stability not experienced since childhood. And yet suddenly the body proves itself fertile again, capable of re-engaging in that flux of making bright, new creatures to walk out into the world clothed in flesh. Suddenly I am sitting at the word-processor with two hearts beating inside me.

  There is a darker side to the past three years and to the poems. In public places bodies lie on damp concrete, wrapped in blankets and newspapers. Nothing is private – not the shivering nor the open-mouthed sleep nor the need which has to be exposed so that it can be ignored. Bare tattooed flesh on cold November days, shaven heads and pierced faces: these say what can be said with a body and without words except for the ritualised plea for spare change. This is the counterpoint to every trip to town, every humping of groceries into the car boot for the trip home. When I was little and there were no beggars on the streets I read of Victorian children shivering in doorways on Christmas Eve and wondered how anyone could bear to walk past, could refrain from opening their pockets and the doors of their warm houses. Now I know.

  TV and radio hammer out a moment-by-moment account of wars we engage in or hold back from. Crackly voices tell of flesh melting in bunkers which the snout of a smart missile has penetrated. I am told of the battle about to start, the one which will transform living bodies to shreds of flesh and will use giant earthmovers to heap sand over them until they are obliterated. We are forced into a conspiracy where we inhabit the same time as sufferings which we pay our taxes to inflict, but cannot alleviate. As we spectate we combine physical immunity with a profound, grievous sense of complicity. In poems such as ‘In the Desert Knowing Nothing’ and ‘Poem on the Obliteration of 100,000 Iraqi Soldiers’, I have tried to express this without, I hope, seizing on the sufferings of others in order to demonstrate my own sensitivity.

  Mandelstam wrote

  I have the present of a body – what should I do with it

  so unique it is and so much mine?

  For me that question raises a hundred others. These poems are ways of finding forms for all these questions, rather than a set of answers.

  FROM

  Secrets

  (1994)

  Lemon sole

  I lay and heard voices

  spin through the house

  and there were five minutes to run

  for the snow-slewed school bus.

  My mother said they had caught it

  as she wiped stars from the window –

  the frost mended its web

  and she put her snow-cool hand to my forehead.

  The baby peeked round her skirts

  trying to make me laugh

  but I said my head hurt

  and shut my eyes on her and coughed.

  My mother kneeled

  until her shape hid the whole world.

  She buffed up my pillows as she held me.

  ‘Could you eat a lemon sole?’ she asked me.

  It was her favourite

  she would buy it as a treat for us.

  I only liked the sound of it

  slim, holy and expensive

  but I said ‘Yes, I will eat it’

  and I shut my eyes and sailed out

  on the noise of sunlight, white sheets

  and lemon sole softly being cut up.

  Christmas caves

  A draught like a bony finger

  felt under the door

  but my father swung the coal scuttle

  till the red cave of the fire roared

  and the pine-spiced Christmas tree

  shook out plumage of glass and tinsel.

  The radio was on but ignored,

  greeting ‘Children all around the world’

  and our Co-op Christmas turkey

  had gone astray in the postal system –

  the headless, green-gibletted corpse

  revolved in the sorting-room

  its leftover flesh

  never to be eaten.

  Tomorrow’s potatoes rolled to the boil

  and a chorister sang like a star

  glowing by the lonely moon –

  but he was not so far,

  though it sounded like Bethlehem

  and I was alone in the room

  with the gold-netted sherry bottle

  and wet black walnuts in a jar.

  That violet-haired lady

  That violet-haired lady, dowager-

  humped, giving herself so many

  smiles, taut glittering smiles,

  smiles that swallow the air in front of her,

  smiles that cling to shop-mirrors

  and mar their silvering, smiles

  like a spider’s wrinklework

  flagged over wasteland bushes –

  she’s had so many nips and tucks,

  so much mouse-delicate

  invisible mending. Her youth

  squeaks out of its prison –

  the dark red bar of her mouth

  opening and closing.

  She wants her hair to look black,

  pure black, so she strands it with violet,

  copperleaf, burgundy, rust –

  that violet-haired lady, dowager-

  humped, giving herself

  so many smiles, keeping the light on.

  Whooper swans

  They fly

  straight-necked and barely white

  above the bruised stitching of clouds

  above wind and the sound of storms

  a
bove the creak of the tundra

  the howl of weather

  the scatter

  and wolfish gloom

  of sleet icing their wings,

  they come

  on their strong-sheathed wings

  looking at nothing

  straight down a freezing current of light,

  they might

  astonish a sleepy pilot

  tunnelling his route above the Arctic,

  his instruments darken and wink

  circling the swans

  and through his dull high window at sunrise

  he sees them

  ski their freezing current of light

  at twenty-seven thousand feet

  past grey-barrelled engines

  spitting out heat

  across the flight of the swans,

  and they’re gone

  the polar current sleeking them down

  as soon as he sees them.

  Snow Queen

  Long long I have looked for you,

  snowshoeing across the world

  across the wild white world

  with my heart in my pocket

  and my black-greased boots

  to keep the cold out,

  past cathedrals and pike marshes

  I’ve tracked you,

  so long I have looked for you.

  In your star-blue palace

 

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