Perception or The Oatmeal Cookie & Michelle's Mind

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by Michelle Hoogwoud


  DOUG

  (yells)

  You’re just friends, remember!

  HAHAHAHA!

  Doug drives away. Jon makes an angry sound. Matt walks up the front path. He looks at Jon, and then at Sandra. He waves to them.

  EXT. SANDRA’S FRONT YARD – EVENING/SUNSET

  Matt walks over to Sandra and Molly.

 

  MATT

  (to Sandra)

  Hey Sandra!

  SANDRA

  Hey Matt!

  MATT

  How’ve you been?

  SANDRA

  Good. Just about to make dinner

  for my special girl!

  MATT

  Alright, have a good evening!

  Sandra and Molly enter their house. Jon looks at Matt.

  JON

  Are you trying to rub it in?

  MATT

  If you really like her, you’d

  at least talk to her.

  JON

  I feel like I am losing her for

  the second time.

  MATT

  You never really tried in the

  first place. So talk to her sometimes.

  Anyways, I brought some video

  games, lets play the night away!

  INT. FAMILY ROOM – NIGHT

  A montage of the two men play RPG video games for 3 hours. Clock arms spins. They laugh. They munch on some food.

  JON’S POV – The video game

  Jon plays the game, and then everything appears as if he was in the game. He is then the main character in the game and he fights dragons.

  MATT (V.O.)

  (quietly)

  Jon.

 

  JON

  Not now Matt, Sandra needs to

  be rescued from the evil

  creatures!

  MATT (V.O.)

  Jon.

 

  JON

  What?

  INT. FAMILY ROOM

  Matt is next to Jon and he is waving his hand in front of him.

  MATT

  Snap out of it man.

  JON

  Huh?

  MATT

  You’ve been game over for almost

  five minutes. Is your work getting

  to you?

  JON

  No. I’m good. I’m good.

  Matt then sits on the couch and relaxes.

  JON

  Hey, do you think Sandra really

  likes Doug?

  MATT

  Man, you need to stop thinking

  about her.

  JON

  How can I when she lives next door?

  MATT

  Why did you decide to buy this

  house next to her? You’re obsessed.

  You need a woman.

  JON

  Yeah, I want Sandra.

  MATT

  No. You need a woman not Sandra.

  JON

  What? Why?

  MATT

  It’s been a freakin long time

  that you’ve known Sandra, and

  you’re too wimpy to do anything.

  So, obviously nothing is going

  to happen. You need a girlfriend.

  JON

  Yeah, stuff like that never just

  happens instantly.

  MATT

  Sure it does. I know a hot woman

  who’s single. You should meet her.

  I think it will help you stop

  thinking about Sandra.

  JON

  How will I meet her. On a date?

  MATT

  Nah, we’ll have a party in a few

  days. I’ll invite her.

  JON

  Alright. But, why don’t you date

  her? You’re single too.

  MATT

  You mean Sandra?

  JON

  (yells)

  No.

  MATT

  Calm down, I’m just kidding.

  INT. JON’S FAMILY ROOM - MORNING

  Jon is passed out on the couch and Matt plays with Jon’s chin pushing it down to make his mouth open when he voices over for him.

 

  MATT

  Hey Jon, what’s up?

  (higher)

  I’m going blind Matt, I can’t see.

  (normal)

  Oh my! That’s horrible. What are

  you gonna do?

  (higher)

  I’m going to be depressed because

  I won’t be able to see Sandra

  anymore.

  (normal)

  Wouldn’t you be depressed because

  you lost your vision in general?

  (higher)

  Yes that too. I’m a stupid head.

  (normal)

  Yes you are.

  Jon wakes up.

  JON

  I’m a what?

  MATT

  Gonna get ready soon because we’re

  going to the eye doctor.

  JON

  What time is it?

  MATT

  Ten fifteen. We got time.

  EXT. JON’S FRONT HOUSE – MORNING

  Molly has a jump rope and skips from Sandra’s to Jon’s. She skips in one spot and faces his door.

  MOLLY

  I like chicken, I like liver,

  meow mix, meow mix, please

  deliver.

  Molly sees a cat. She stops skipping and stares at the cat. The cat walks over to Molly.

  MOLLY

  Oh, I’m sorry. I don’t really have

  any meow mix.

  The cat looks up and turns around.

  MOLLY

  Wait!

  Molly puts her hand on the cat’s tail. It screams and claws at Molly. Jon exits his house. He DROPS his coffee mug and runs to help Molly. He grabs the cat and throws it across the street over a neighbour’s house. A CRASH is heard. Molly is in tears.

  JON

  Are you okay?

  Molly shakes her head ‘no.’ Jon carries Molly over to Sandra’s house. They enter through the front door.

  INT. SANDRA’S KITCHEN – MORNING

  Jon carries Molly into the kitchen. Sandra faces the wall and washes dishes.

  SANDRA

  Didn’t want to play outside

  anymore, Molly?

  JON

  No, a cat scratched her.

  Sandra turns around.

  SANDRA

  Oh baby! Are you okay?

  MOLLY

  (whines)

  It hurts.

  SANDRA

  Jon, can you go to the laundry

  room and get some Band-Aids and

  disinfectant?

  JON

  Sure.

  Molly sits on the ledge of the counter and Sandra grabs a dish cloth from the drawer, dampens it with water and dabs it on Molly’s knee.

  INT. SANDRA’S HALLWAY – MORNING

 

  Jon walks through the hallway and looks at the photo on the wall: A wedding photo, a baby picture of Molly, a family portrait, and one of Jon and Sandra… the same photo that’s on Jon’s fridge. He smiles.

  INT. SANDRA’S KITCHEN – MORNING

  SANDRA

  So what made the mean ol’ cat want

  to hurt you?

  MOLLY

  I dunno.

  SANDRA

  Are you sure you don’t know?

  Molly shrugs. Jon enters the kitchen and hands the disinfectant and cotton swabs to Sandra and stands near Molly. He places the Band-Aids on the counter.

  SANDRA

  Thanks.

  Sandra dabs the disinfectant on Molly’s cuts. Molly grabs onto Jon and whines. Molly kicks the bottl
e of disinfectant out of Sandra’s hand. The bottle falls and both Sandra and Jon reach to grab it. They bump into each other and Jon loses his balance and falls on Sandra.

  SANDRA

  Woah!

  They land on the ground. The bottle empties near them. Jon looks at Sandra’s face and smiles.

  JON

  You ever wondered what would’ve

  happened if we were--

  Doug enters the kitchen and sees Jon on top of Sandra. Molly’s legs dangle above them. Doug has a look of shock.

  SANDRA

  Hey Doug.

  JON

  We were just trying to help

  Molly’s scratches.

  Jon moves and they both stand up. Sandra gets the Band-Aids and puts some on Molly.

  JON

  (to Doug)

  We just tripped.

  Doug moves closer to Sandra and Jon moves away. Doug kisses Sandra on the cheek and pats Molly’s head.

  DOUG

  Everything alright with MY special

  little girl?

  MOLLY

  A cat scratched me, and it hurt!

  DOUG

  Oh, in that case—

  Doug pulls out a lollipop from his bag and hands it to Molly.

  MOLLY

  Yay! Thanks Doug!

  Doug gives Jon a snarky look.

  JON

  Alright, I better get going.

  DOUG

  That’s right.

  SANDRA

  Thanks Jon. Bye.

  MOLLY

  (shouts)

  Jon. Can I help you on the video

  later?

  JON

  Tomorrow, Molly.

  MOLLY

  Okay!

  Jon leaves the kitchen.

  EXT. JON’S FRONT HOUSE – MORNING

  Jon walks over to his house. Matt comes out through the front door. He looks down at the porch.

  MATT

  (disgusted)

  Ugh, there’s coffee everywhere.

 

  They walk towards Matt’s car.

  MATT

  So what happened?

 

  JON

  I dropped the mug.

  MATT

  No, not that. You came from

  Sandra’s.

  JON

  I think Sandra still likes me.

  MATT

  Dude, you dated in college, that

  was a long time ago. Give up.

  JON

  You’re supposed to motivate me,

  Matt. You’re my best friend.

  They enter Matt’s car and the doors slam shut.

  INT. OPTOMETRIST’S OFFICE – DAY

  Jon and Matt are in the waiting room. A RECEPTIONIST sits at her desk. A sign on the desk shows “MISS DIMWIT.” A ROBBER 1 runs into the waiting room. He is holding a can opener.

  ROBBER 1

  Okay everybody! This is a stick

  up! Put your hands up!

  The receptionist screams.

  ROBBER 1

  (yells)

  Gimmie your money.

  RECEPTIONIST

  I only have files.

  ROBBER 1

  What kind of a bank is this?

  RECEPTIONIST

  (stutters)

  I… It… It’s… not…

  ROBBER 2 enters the waiting room holding a banana.

  ROBBER 2

  (yells)

  Okay, everybody freeze.

  (squints and looks around room)

  ROBBER 2

  Wow, You’re all fast.

  ROBBER 1

  Hey, I was here first.

  ROBBER 2

  What? Well I’m here now.

  ROBBER 1

  Find your own bank you fool.

  ROBBER 2

  Well apparently you didn’t

  accomplish anything.

  The two robbers fight each other. The receptionist looks over the edge of her desk.

  RECEPTIONIST

  This is an optometrist’s office.

  ROBBER 1

  Really?

  ROBBER 2

  I hadn’t noticed. Did you?

  ROBBER 1

  I can’t actually see too well.

  RECEPTIONIST

  Well how about I book you both

  an appointment?

  ROBBER 1 & 2

  Okay.

  The two look at each other. A CLIENT 2 exits the doctor’s office with two eye patches on. DR. JIMMY exits the office and he looks exactly like Dr. Oetker.

  CLIENT 2

  Thanks doctor.

  DR. JIMMY

  Keep those on for two weeks. Have

  DR. JIMMY

  a safe drive home now!

  Client 2 exits the waiting room. The two robbers are at the desk booking an appointment. Dr. Jimmy grabs a folder off the desk.

  DR. JIMMY

  Jon Castillo?

  JON

  Dr. Oetker?

  DR. JIMMY

  Oh no, I’m Dr. Jimmy. Oetker is

  my sister’s best friend.

  Jon gets up and follows Dr. Jimmy into the office.

  INT. DR. JIMMY’S OFFICE – DAY

  Dr. Jimmy has a light flashing in Jon’s eye. He turns it off and lifts up one of Jon’s eyelid.

  DR. JIMMY

  How long have you been having these

  problems?

  JON

  It’s been getting worse slowly over

  the past six or seven months.

  DR. JIMMY

  Well mister Castillo, looks like

  you are hyperopic.

  Jon looks confused.

  DR. JIMMY

  You are far sighted and you need

  glasses.

  JON

  (shocked)

  I need glasses?

  Dr. Jimmy writes up a prescription.

  JON

  Doctor, I’ve also had problems

  sleeping at night. Could that

  also be part of the problem?

  DR. JIMMY

  Your probably worried about the

  headaches you’ve been getting.

  JON

  Am I going blind?

  DR. JIMMY

  No. You need glasses.

  JON

  How long do I have?

  DR. JIMMY

  A week. These lenses are thicker so

  I need to order these in.

  JON

  (loudly)

  Oh my god. I’ll look like a freak!

  DR. JIMMY

  (pauses)

  Young man, this is not such a big

  deal.

  JON

  (traumatized)

  I’ll look like a nerd.

  DR. JIMMY

  All right then. Come back in a

  week.

  INT. MATT’S CAR – DAY

  Matt drives the car. Jon grips onto the prescription. Matt looks at the papers.

  MATT

  It’ll be okay.

  Jon looks depressed.

  MATT

  I won’t be able to stay over

  tonight. I need to check up on my

  monkey.

  Jon nods. Matt stops the car at Jon’s house.

  MATT

  I’ll see you later.

  Jon nods and exits the car.

  EXT. JON’S HOUSE – DAY

  Depressing violin music plays. Jon opens up his mailbox and takes out a notice. He opens it. CLOSE UP on paper. It states that the mortgage hasn’t been paid in full for the last year. CLOSE UP on the word ‘EVICTION,’ and CLOSE UP on the words ‘3 MONTHS.’ Jon slowly walks up the walkway. He passes by an OLD WOMAN in black mourning.

&nbs
p; OLD WOMAN

  (cries)

  WAAAHHHHHH! OOHHH WHY?

  AAAHHHHHHHHHH!

  Jon passes by a CHILD. He is on the grass with a tricycle on its side. The child is in tears and cries loudly. Jon passes a HOBO.

  HOBO

  (panhandling)

  Money for the poor? Money for the

  poor?

  Jon passes by a teen couple: TEEN BOY and TEEN GIRL.

  TEEN GIRL

  (yells)

  I don’t love you anymore Billy!

  TEEN BOY

  But why, Veronica? Why?

  TEEN GIRL

  I found someone else!

  Teen girl goes off screen.

  TEEN BOY

  (screams)

  NOOOOOO---

  Jon walks up his porch steps, and enters his house.

  INT. JON’S FAMILY ROOM – DAY

  Jon sits in a chair and looks straight ahead. He has a blank look in his face. The clock hands spin faster.

  INT. JON’S FAMILY ROOM – EVENING – JON’S POV

  Jon’s hand is in front of his face, and it’s a blur.

  INT. JON’S BEDROOM – EVENING

  Jon lies on his bed and sighs. The phone rings. Jon answers the phone.

  JON

  Hello?

  DOUG (ON PHONE)

  Hey, Jon. It’s Doug.

  JON

  Hey. What’s up?

  DOUG (V.O.)

  I have some news for you. It’s

  not good.

  JON

  Fine, my day can’t get any worse

  as it has already.

 

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