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by Alfred Bendixen


  slap has seemed like “ kissing the cheek of the dead, ” because their common mourning

  for their child had estranged them. It is not until section V that Eugene can articulate

  his specifi c grievance: “ Your little girl … said, ‘ Mama, my throat hurts me, ’ and she

  was dead in three days. You expected her mother would watch a fever, while you were

  at the offi ce. … But you never spoke of it, did you? ”

  Several voices across the city contribute to the story ’ s theme of barriers or divisive-

  ness, versus ways of escape or openness. Walking by a bar, Eugene hears, “ Open the

  door, Richard! ” The streetcar conductor shouts “ Divisadero! ” The ordinarily comfort-

  ing sight of fi re escapes – everywhere in San Francisco since the Great Fire – through

  associational logic morph into images of entrapment, which cause him to pause

  outside the bar, to hear again the song about openings. The song brings a memory

  of music from back home in Mississippi. This older memory and his next recollection

  of his present crisis in which he has struck his wife, together with his identifi cation

  with “ a sprawled old winehead sleeping up here far away from his kind, ” all combine

  to prompt an emotional crisis – a feeling of “ secret tenderness toward his twin, Ran

  MacLain, whom he had not seen for half his life. … Was all well with Ran? … For

  … he might have done some reprehensible thing. ” Eugene “ half fainted upon the

  body of the city, the old veins, the mottled skin of pavement. Perhaps the soft grass

  in which little daisies opened would hold his temples and put its eyes to his. ” Here

  is another realistic image that transforms itself into a lyric one: a surrealistic image

  of city streets personifi ed as an older (lover ’ s? father ’ s?) body that Eugene imagines

  holding him as he faints. But it is also a psychologically realistic mind - link with his

  twin, who, in “ The Whole World Knows, ” actually does a reprehensible thing. Not

  to be ignored are the several references to “ half ” things ( “ half his life, ” “ half fainted, ”

  “ half - lifted across the street ” ), which suggest the loss incurred by separating twins,

  but also the possibility that he has lived a sort of half - life since his self - exile to San

  Francisco. That this is the low point in Eugene ’ s day is confi rmed by the death wish

  at the end of the passage, for the grass and daisies are imagined as covering and press-

  ing down on him, as if he were in the grave. Carey Wall also sees him dealing with

  death in this story: “ Eugene MacLain enters the season of dying, ” Wall says, “ [He]

  assimilates his daughter Fan ’ s death … as a part of his own death … [which, however,

  is also] to assimilate her love of life. … When the Spaniard whirls him about at Land ’ s

  End, he and Eugene retrieve the child in Eugene … [and] life is validated within the

  inevitable movement toward death ” (Wall 103).

  The crisis will pass quickly for Eugene, much as it does for Mrs. Larkin in “ A

  Curtain of Green, ” at the touch of rain. But Eugene has the additional touch of the

  Spaniard, who, acting the part of the parent/lover, “ patted him and straightened him

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  up. … And rain fell on them. ” Then, as he and the Spaniard climb over rocks and

  look out over the sea in a beating wind, Eugene remembers a recurring dream, in

  which he is in bed with a sleeping Emma. In his dream he seems to be trying to

  swallow the huge stem of a cherry. This passage and the succeeding one, in which

  the Spaniard holds Eugene up in the air, combine to precipitate the moment outside

  of time that brings relief for both men. The dream ’ s phallic image of the huge and

  growing stem in Eugene ’ s mouth, together with the exhilaration of the men at the

  edge of the cliffs, has prompted several readings that demonstrate sensual/sexual

  content. “ This is Eugene ’ s real homecoming, ” Mark says, “ his discovery of his own

  body, his own sexuality, and his release from social convention. … Eugene thinks ‘ My

  dear love comes,

  ’

  and the Spaniard makes a loud emotional cry.

  ”

  (

  Dragon ’ s Blood

  225

  –

  6).

  Mortimer

  , while acknowledging the sensual content, also sees Eugene

  ’

  s

  Perseus -

  like wrestling with the Minotaur

  -

  like Spaniard as occasion for Eugene

  ’

  s

  regeneration ( Daughter of the Swan 102). 17

  However, another part of the sensual content of the dream is Eugene ’ s feeling that

  he has “ the world on his tongue. ” This image of a round object on the tongue recalls

  Welty ’ s description of a very sensual connection she made as a child between herself,

  the natural world, and words to describe that world. It is the moon she remembers

  in One Writer ’ s Beginnings : “ The word ‘ moon ’ came into my mouth as though fed me

  out of a silver spoon. Held in my mouth the moon became a word. It had the round-

  ness of a Concord grape Grandpa took off his vine and gave me to suck out of its skin

  and swallow whole, in Ohio ” (10). Until his hilltop exultation, it has been only in

  dreams that Eugene has experienced sensual passion; in this dream, Welty has given

  him the tactile vision of a budding artist.

  For a moment, at least, Eugene fi nds relief in self - expression – to a stranger on the

  cliff; but the Spaniard himself remains a mystery. Eugene has realized that the guitar-

  ist ’ s seeming detachment during last night ’ s concert was only “ the outer semblance

  of passion. ” Now, as he lights a cigarette on the cliff overlooking the Pacifi c Ocean,

  the Spaniard ’ s face muscles “ grouped themselves in hideous luxuriousness ” ; and in

  the midst of images like those describing the passionate jazz musician in Welty ’ s

  “ Powerhouse, ” the guitarist erupts in “ a terrible recital ” : “ a bullish roar opened out

  of him. ” Eugene, who has never spoken of his own sorrow, is astonished at “ a man

  laying himself altogether bare like that. ” Yet the passage suggests a profound link

  between the two men: they share the very human traits not only of repressed passion,

  but also of doubleness, such that they seem almost alter egos, or mirror images, in

  terms of passion and control in their lives. The guitarist pours his passion into his

  music, but in a highly controlled fashion; whereas Eugene, who spends his days regu-

  lating clock time, manages his emotions in a way that David Kaplan has identifi ed

  as

  “

  silent outbursts [which] occur in Eudora Welty

  ’

  s fi ction when a character

  ’

  s

  impulse to strong expression is checked by circumstances that make such expression

  impossible. ” 18 In other words, they are safely voiced in the text as narrated thoughts,

  or either in words spoken to himself or to one who cannot possibly understand him.

  Eugene ’ s astonishment comes from his own lifelong inability to “ lay bare ” the desires

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of his heart, much less pursue them passionately, as does the Spanish guitarist. At

  last, after the Spaniard is “ fl ung out at [him], like the apples of Atalanta, ” he becomes

  both the storyteller and his own listener; and he achieves a purging oral outburst.

  The Spaniard has also shown him how to express joy, but he cannot sustain it. The

  story ends not in this moment of expansive openness, but back in Eugene and Emma ’ s

  upstairs apartment, where nothing has changed. His extraordinary experience goes

  unnoticed, except for his missing hat. The fi nal, overriding, image is not of a sensual

  experience for Eugene but, rather, of his sitting meekly at the kitchen table, listening

  to his wife and Mrs. Herring, and watching Emma “ pop the grapes in. ” “ Music from

  Spain ” is a major reason Thomas J. McHaney calls The Golden Apples “ Eudora Welty ’ s

  chronicle of human longing ” (113).

  Welty employs the lyric/realistic technique in both short stories and novels, as I

  have argued elsewhere ( “ Lyric Novelist ” 29 – 31). Especially in the works of her matu-

  rity, this technique contributes to the aesthetic structure of a story: delineating,

  through visible images that relate to inner states, the curve of emotion that is traversed

  by a character who is in some way an outsider, and who is often outside of ordinary

  time. The voice of the storyteller, as it rises and falls with that curve, and with the

  corresponding environment and terrain of outer reality, defi nes the shape of the story.

  In her essay “ Words into Fiction, ” Welty says, rather mysteriously, about fi ction in

  general, “ The words follow the contours of some continuous relationship between

  what can be told and what cannot be told ” ( Eye of the Story 143 – 4). Understanding

  the techniques of lyrical realism, aesthetic structure, and the storyteller ’ s many voices

  enables the reader to negotiate the barriers of Welty ’ s narrative obstructions and sense

  the true aesthetic shape of the story. Neither is it beside the point to remember that,

  whether in fi ction or non - fi ction, Welty is always writing about the artistic process

  and the passionate artist as outside observer of the world.

  Notes

  1

  For accounts of Welty ’ s publishing history,

  thetics of Place (1994; rpt. Columbia: Univer-

  see Noel Polk, Eudora Welty: A Bibliography

  sity of South Carolina Press, 1997).

  of Her Work

  (Jackson: University Press of 4

  See especially her One Time, One Place (New

  Mississippi, 1994); Suzanne Marrs,

  The

  York: Random House, 1971) and Photographs

  Welty Collection: A Guide to the Eudora Welty

  (Jackson: University Press of Mississippi,

  Manuscripts and Documents at the Mississippi

  1989).

  Department of Archives and History (Jackson:

  5

  Schmidt (57 – 8) sees in this image “ a pro-

  University Press of Mississippi, 1988); and

  foundly threatening vision of the female body

  Michael Kreyling , Author and Agent .

  –

  especially its genitalia

  –

  as a devouring

  2

  Lohafer, “ Introduction to Part I. ” In Lohafer

  landscape. ” He also notes that Howard ’ s sense

  and Clarey, eds., Short Story Theory at a Cross-

  of time is artifi cial, while Marjorie ’ s is “ asso-

  roads , 3.

  ciated with her biorhythms. ” See also Weston ,

  3

  Quoted in May (51). For an examination of

  Gothic Traditions , for a book - length study of

  the confl uence between Welty and Chekhov,

  Welty ’ s images of entrapment and relevant

  see Jan Nordby Gretlund, Eudora Welty ’ s Aes-

  narrative techniques.

  Eudora

  Welty

  293

  6

  Or is the murder imagined, as was the earlier

  13

  See, for example, Pollack, “ Words Between

  violence? See Kreyling,

  “

  Modernism in

  Strangers

  ”

  ; and Merrill Maguire Skaggs,

  Welty ’ s A Curtain of Green , ” in Turner and

  “ Eudora Welty ’ s ‘ I ’ of Memory, ” in Turner

  Harding, eds., Critical Essays , 24.

  and Harding, eds., Critical Essays , 153 – 65.

  7

  For an extended analysis of Welty ’ s narrative

  14

  See Kreyling , Welty

  ’

  s Achievement of Order ,

  reticence and altered story expectations in

  77 – 105, for an analysis of the organic integ-

  her fi nal collection, see Weston,

  “

  Reticent

  rity of The Golden Apples .

  Beauty, ” 42 – 58.

  15

  Mark links this passage with one in Joyce ’ s

  8

  Mark sees in “ The Winds ” “ not a tale of

  Ulysses on the topic of Spanish passion.

  choice but a story of female sexual fulfi llment

  16

  “ He felt … ” was fi rst staged as a work

  and power embodied in both of Josie ’ s muses,

  in progress for the Eudora Welty Society

  the cornetist and Cornella. ”

  at the American Literature Association con-

  9

  Lohafer, “ Preclosure and Story Processing, ” in

  ference in San Francisco, in May 2004,

  Lohafer and Clarey, eds., Critical Essays , 249.

  starring Brenda Currin and Phil Fortenberry,

  10

  Miller, The Heroine

  ’

  s Text: Readings in the

  directed by David Kaplan. A complete

  French and English Novel, 1722 – 1782 (New

  version of the show was performed at the

  York: Columbia University Press, 1980), x.

  92nd Street Y in New York City, April 11,

  Miller defi nes “ the heroine ’ s text … [as]

  2005, under the title of “ A Fire Was In My

  a locus of commonplaces about woman

  ’

  s

  Head. ”

  identity and woman ’ s place … [and thus] the

  17

  Pitavy - Souques, in “ Technique as Myth, ”

  inscription of a female destiny. ”

  258

  –

  68, has brilliantly shown that

  The

  11

  Bowen, quoted in May (123) (ellipses May ’ s);

  Golden Apples

  as a whole is framed, and

  Harris, quoted in May (13

  –

  14);

  Eye of the

  given shape and perspective, by both

  Story , 90.

  Celtic and Greek myth, especially the Perseus

  12 Eye of the

  Story, 108;

  Prenshaw

  , ed.,

  More

  story.

  Conversations , 77. Dramatizations include the

  18

  Kaplan, “ Silent Outbursts and Silenced Out-

  Broadway production of The Ponder Heart in

  bursts in Eudora Welty ’ s Fiction. ” Unpub-

  1956 and a recent PBS movie version of it, as

  lished paper, n.d. (2004). Kaplan is an

  well
as stage and fi lm versions of many other

  independent theatre director and writer (see

  stories.

  Eye of the Story 105).

  References and Further Reading

  Cassirer , Ernst. Language and Myth . Trans. Susanne

  — — — . “ History and Imagination: Writing

  K. Langer. 1946 . Rpt. New York : Dover , 1953.

  ‘ The Winds. ’ ” Mississippi Quarterly 50 ( 1997 ):

  Frye , Northrop. Anatomy of Criticism: Four Essays .

  585 – 99 .

  1957 . Rpt. Princeton : Princeton University

  Lohafer , Susan , and Jo Ellyn Clarey , eds. Short Story

  Press , 1990.

  Theory at a Crossroads . Baton Rouge : Louisiana

  Joyce , James. A Portrait of the Artist as a Young

  State University Press , 1989 .

  Man . 1916 . Rpt. in “ A Portrait of the Artist as a

  McHaney , Thomas L. “ Eudora Welty and the

  Young Man

  ”

  : Text, Criticism and Notes . Ed.

  Multitudinous Golden Apples.

  ” 1973 . Rpt.

  Chester G. Anderson . Viking Critical Library.

  in Turner and Harding, eds.,

  Critical Essays ,

  New York : Viking Penguin , 1968.

  113 – 41 .

  Kreyling , Michael. Eudora Welty

  ’

  s Achievement of Mark , Rebecca. The Dragon ’ s Blood: Feminist Inter-

  Order . Baton Rouge : Louisiana State University

  textuality in Eudora Welty ’ s “ The Golden Apples . ”

  Press , 1980 .

  Jackson : University Press of Mississippi , 1994 .

  — — — . Author and Agent: Eudora Welty and Diar-

  — — — . “ Pierced with Pleasure for the Girls:

  muid Russell . New York : Farrar, Straus & Giroux ,

  Eudora Welty ’ s ‘ The Winds, ’ ” Journal of Con-

  1991 .

  temporary Thought 7 ( 1997 ): 107 – 22 .

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  May , Charles E. The Short Story: The Reality of Arti-

  Vande Kieft , Ruth M. “ Further Refl ections on

  fi ce . Studies in Literary Themes and Genres, 4.

  Meaning in Eudora Welty ’ s Fiction. ” 1982 .

  New York : Twayne , 1995 .

  Rpt. in Turner and Harding, eds.,

  Critical

  Mortimer , Gail L. Daughter of the Swan: Love and

  Essays , 296 – 309 .

  Knowledge in Eudora Welty ’ s Fiction . Athens : Uni-

  Wall , Carey. “ Collective Life, Liminality and

  versity of Georgia Press , 1994 .

  Sexuality in Welty ’ s The Golden Apples ; or

  O ’ Connor , Frank . The Lonely Voice: A Study of the

 

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