Rewriting Stella

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by Tuttle, Dan;


  they’re photogenic. Crew’s not murderous –

  I think, at least! – enough to play the parts

  for real.” They neared. One people-herder fussed

  with who should lean which way so selfie pic

  showed acme of themselves and party tricks.

  173.

  “On second thought, let’s let that run its course

  before going back for burgers,” Mona said,

  “Stel, you still look a little bit divorced

  from present. This was not some watershed,

  big moment. Know we like what you wrote. And

  we’ll stay tuned for next episode.” “Oh, that’s

  not worrying me, no. But thanks. Wet sand…

  brings back a lot. These coastal habitats

  were ’bout as real as outer space when I

  was young.” “You grew up far from water?” “Ponds,

  lakes, creeks, we had the small stuff. Nothing wide

  as ocean.” Clouds arrayed now as dull fronds

  to fan hid sun. “This much was dream where I

  grew up, like Disney tales or lords’ Versailles.”

  174.

  Mo smiled, “It’s funny, line between what’s real

  and what’s imagined. Disney stretched my mind,

  and it’s pure make-believe; French feudal zeal

  was fact, yet feels remote. I’d leave behind

  the latter for the former.” “I recall

  a teacher’s stump speech saying lands exist

  I’d not heard of, but trusted. Guess that’s all

  you can do: trust.” Cade: “Truths themselves subsist

  on stories. They’re one in the same. Believed

  your teach who spoke of oceans? All folks err

  toward trust. We think we’ll know if we’re deceived,

  ’spite fact that tales are honed before they’re shared.”

  “You’re saying I should distrust everything?”

  “No. I say you should know you’ve puppet strings.

  175.

  Pull them yourself. I bridge my dreams and days

  with hip-hop ethos, all about the grind.

  I caretake for a grandpa who displays

  behavior nearly Keller deaf and blind.

  I wake up, wrap the story ’round me tight,

  and turn to it to fuel the day. The church

  identically pretends.” “They think it’s right.”

  “The process is the same. We keenly search

  until our brains have facts to match our guts,

  and suddenly decide we’ve hit the truth.

  We stop predictably, mute what rebuts.”

  Cade looked back to the fire’s pleased Fawkes-clad youth,

  shrugged shoulders as if truer point could not

  be made, debate concluded: truth’s kill shot.

  176.

  Round bonfire motley masses huddled close,

  as onshore gusts left heated scene quite cool.

  Conversants ranged from kind to bellicose

  depending on which drugs they’d used as fuel.

  The people carving little men obsessed

  with rasps perfecting human form in wood.

  Mo asked and learned they partly were protest,

  to burn small Boys in effigy, and stood

  as well as Burning Man idolatry.

  They saw no oddity in such an act.

  One even said, “You know, my doll’s a plea

  to Powers That Be – if they exist – for tact.

  Boy’s ‘fuck-it-all’s a message I want heard,

  and like, that’s buried by his flipping birds.”

  177.

  Admission brought the vodka birthday boy

  into their conversation. “Evening, Joe.

  And happy birthday,” Cade said. “Do enjoy

  the Lagunitas, Pliny, Veuve, Bordeaux

  chilled over there, my tiny gift of thanks

  as host to you for coming,” Joe replied.

  He put two other dried-out logs as planks

  beneath the grill face. “Meat’s all getting fried

  from being too up-close and personal

  to all that flame,” he said, and moved toward Mo.

  “Ugh, every time behavior’s worse! Until

  he has someone to use and lose, Lord knows…”

  Joe: “Tula, what the pleasantest surprise!”

  Tee: “Birthdays don’t mean lechery’s advised.”

  178.

  “Affection, dear.” “Nope, slime. I’ll help police

  your callowness. Say, take that champagne case

  at spot where most folks guzzle Dos Equis

  as blatant signal you won startup race.

  Consider discount food and beverage.” “First,

  you’re welcome, and it’s good to have you here.

  And next, you think me far too Randolph Hearst.”

  “Your bathrooms, Joe, have crystal chandeliers.”

  “That’s taste,” he said, “and better to have all

  instead of solo one in ensuite bath.

  You give no credit that I’ve shared.” “The gall!

  It’s ostentatious, shoving in our path

  repeated signs that you’re rich and we’re not.”

  “That’s never my intent. The cash I’ve got

  179.

  is meant to let me have more fun with friends.

  Stop, look around: tonight my grill convenes.

  I’m glad you’re here. Remember that’s the ends

  when thinking so unkindly of my means.”

  He turned to pose as self-styled Charlemagne

  for portrait Dar requested by the fire,

  a standing Citizen aware that Kane

  regretted turning from his Rosebud flyer.

  “I’ve got no beef when big men throw down seeds,”

  Cade added, “I don’t need to like them to

  eat up their meals for reals. This belly feeds

  just fine when I’m the small fry. Kings keep crews,

  look after all their entourage. Just clowns

  pretend that wealth is worn without the crown.”

  180.

  “It’s hard to talk to Joe without the thought

  that he, right there, in front of you, could fix

  your lifetime’s worth of problems: house, car bought,

  plus cash to live off, if he just handpicks

  you as a case for charity,” Tee said.

  “I don’t get what you’re really trying to solve,”

  said Mo, “you’re caught somewhere in your own head,

  in thinking his green stacks would all resolve

  your conflict. At Deluxe you savaged wealth

  in politics, now envy Joe’s the same.

  You’re chasing what erodes your mental health.”

  Stel thought: and ought to try a different game.

  “Hey Mo,” nudged Cade, “let’s chill. Don’t work up sweat.

  Come Stel. You wanna try a cigarette?”

  181.

  He pulled a pack of dark blue Spirits out

  and Stella thought of many reasons not

  to finally try. “They say to fear it. Doubt

  that story heard, decide yourself. Upshot

  is if you like it, then you’re more alive.”

  “But Cade, they give you cancer. That’s more dead.”

  “You get my point. And you, Stel, won’t nosedive

  down some long chainsmoke chimney.” Mona led

  them slightly from the group so zephyr blew

  their pending plant exhaust the other way.

  The crowd’s clothes ranged from thrift store to J. Crew,

  no single dominating dossier.

  It pleased to see diversity (at face)

  lit by camaraderie and pit fireplace.

  182.

  Forbidden fruit it wasn’t: all Stel’s life

  she’d
hacked upon encountering the smog

  ejected by a cigarette, the knife

  of acrid vapors jamming muscles’ cogs,

  unleashing breath control in coughing fits

  made worse by sharpened inhalations of

  the same putridity of death stick’s hits,

  recycled exhaled smoke dropped from above.

  But those, Stel thought, reactions were in youth.

  I’m in control now, I’m the one to choose

  between experiences my own truth.

  Kneejerk rejection’s laziness in views.

  So something in the way of offer’d made

  decision come from where brain’d not forbade.

  183.

  Stel guessed Mo seethed at Tee: she wanted oil

  to soak her canvas fist in fire and flip

  a flaming phoenix at Tee’s mind turmoil,

  oblivious to its own authorship

  of life. Tee drifted out like bleeding ink,

  its point diluted, watery, and weak.

  She was a victim of her doublethink:

  you can’t excoriate that which you seek.

  In that, her course to individuate’s

  identical to every other’s, so

  her journey dumbly mimics. Did coup take

  more than awareness she’s her only foe?

  Cade lit one up, held high the glow in fist,

  then passed to Stella, quite the dramatist.

  184.

  A deep breath taken in, yet split in two

  helped Stel avoid the coughing from the past:

  a carcinomic breath when taken through

  a filter, mixed with standard air, could last.

  Immediately her left brain turned a-right

  and noticed nuance in environment,

  as if faint stars’ cast temperature of light

  increased a hundred Kelvin (three percent).

  As nature came to focus, so did chi,

  perception’s center migrating from core

  of every limb out to skin actively

  exposed to air, like waves expand to shore.

  It felt like life both calmed and stretched out thin,

  translucent tickling film through which soothed sin.

  185.

  “Tobacco’s powerful,” shared Stel. She stood

  a little wobbly in the wind, post-drag.

  “It’s bad, yeah, sure, but also kinda good,”

  said Mona. “Makes me feel a ghostly swag.”

  “And right away.” “Yeah, really hits you quick.

  The catch is that it just as quickly fades;

  it’s daring you to light another stick.

  That’s how uncautiously you’ll spend decades

  hooked on the stuff. My mom and dad both were.”

  “Oh… sad. I’m sorry, Mo. And yet you still

  go smoke yourself?” “Addiction’s not preferred,

  Stel. They put this on me. Someday I will

  take time to kick it, but for now the hit’s

  an easy way to rise above the shit.”

  186.

  Benita joined with vape pen. “Stel!” she said,

  “I liked your Insta-verse. Weird poetry

  refreshes in the midst of photo thread.

  I thought its cadence nice, its flow. It reads

  a little singsong, little hard. I’d poke

  a little on your syntax – oddly spliced –

  but… fun.” “Thanks, Benny.” Stel coughed, slightly choked.

  “In honesty, I had to read it twice

  before I understood it.” “That’s the rub.

  It makes you slow and think, it makes you read.

  We swallow so much everyday hubbub

  that chewing something feels like it impedes.”

  “As counterpoint, it’s powerful. I stopped.

  But, why’d you end at fourteen lines? I’d opt

  187.

  to read some more.” “That’s not how sonnets work.

  They’re just that long, ten syllables in each,

  and singsong beat you mentioned,” Stella smirked,

  “remains throughout and can’t be skipped or breached.”

  “It’s up, and down, and up, and down, and up?”

  “Not quite. It’s down then up, five times a line.”

  “Screw that. I’d stop at one. That’s crazy.” “Yup.”

  “So why’s it all that forcibly designed?”

  “Blame Shakespeare? I don’t know. Italians had

  a form from Petrarch. Far too many rhymes

  for English. William used an end dyad

  resolving what three quatrains jointly primed.”

  “They taught this stuff in China?” “No, adult

  thought I might like it ’cause it’s difficult.”

  188.

  “Ha. Clearly they were right. So why’d you put

  it on the web?” “Remember Club Deluxe?”

  “Yeah, what about it?” Cigarettes kaput,

  they stayed between two cold-breeze-blocking rucks.

  “Our evening wrapped,” she looked at Cade, “when Dar

  whipped out the camera for her followers.

  If someone that blah’s now a superstar,

  and if I’m interesting, less hollow, per

  the standards of our crowd, then why not play?”

  “You’re taking aim at her adoring fans?”

  “Or others, there are lots of fish in Bay.”

  “The sea, you mean. But, yeah. okay. With plans

  for what?” “Stay tuned. For now it’s simply proof

  attention can be gathered if you hoof.”

  189.

  Tall flames behind the quartet made them turn.

  Stel witnessed one scene, taken in two ways.

  The first was by and for those of the Burn:

  a coroneted chief’s chant ohm, a blaze

  of handmade figurines thrown in the flame,

  a vestige of druidic sacrament.

  The second was much more mainstream, and tame:

  grilled meat, tunes, beers; textbook kicked-back event.

  It struck her ’cause Cade nailed it earlier:

  they both were true at once, if and because

  participants believed they were. Each chirr

  on its own branch. Four walked past where Tee was

  mid-clink with man-bun, toasting prosecco,

  Occult high, friends low? Cade said, “Mo, let’s go.”

  190.

  They took N-Judah past Parnassus, got

  off right as it was crossing Cole, before

  the tunnel to Duboce. “Right there’s a spot

  called Ice Cream Bar, old timey, sweets galore.

  Let’s grab a sundae prior to going home,”

  said Cadence, who was thrilled by company

  (both shop and Mo). Aluminum and chrome

  of soda fountains, cookie clumps in need

  of sherbet custard bedding laid in wait

  upon their entrance, begging to be noshed.

  “Pistachio ought to resuscitate

  my senses,” Mo said. “Yeah, you’re looking sloshed,”

  said Cade. They ordered, sat, and ate. “So, Stel,

  I don’t know of your childhood. Do pray tell.”

  191.

  As innocent a question as it was

  from Mona, hoping to befriend her more,

  the inquiry was hard, namely because

  it wasn’t stuff Stel ever mentioned, or,

  in honesty, could think about. She’d blocked

  titanic portions out and all the rest

  were bricolage that hopeful minds concoct

  when overwhelmed with more than can ingest.

  “I guess, you know, there’s nothing special there,”

  she started, then satori hit her square.

  “Except, of course, the rescued puppy, cared

  for him for years. We made a knockout
pair.”

  “A dog? How fun! I didn’t know you’d grown

  up in a busy house.” “Oh no… no. Lone,”

  192.

  Stel countered, “fairly quiet place, our home.

  Just me and dog. The dog. And me.” “No mom?”

  “No mom.” “Or dad?” “Or dad. Just grandmum.” Foam

  on root beer float flowed over on her palm,

  and gave her an excuse to wipe and think.

  One dog. No parents. That was clean and clear,

  a normalcy that wouldn’t make you blink.

  She dared to step out further, “Pioneers

  are what we called ourselves, our duo.” “Chic!”

  exclaimed a stabilizing Mo, impressed.

  “That’s dope,” said Cade, “I never got a peek

  into your past.” That came at Stel’s behest.

  They both seemed eager to learn more. Stel drew

  electric breath at such a smooth debut.

  193.

  Stel flipped the script thereafter, asking more

  of Mona, so to fill time till they’d part.

  It worked. Back home, Stel’s heart still little sore

  from thinking of her past, she planned her art.

  Instead of writing a riposte ’gainst ways

  the Opposition acted, she’d not fret.

  More power could come from ditching everyday

  of young years, words erasing held regrets.

  She opened Apple, flipped her screen to black,

  turned out the other lights, and let prints drift,

  imprints of mind, touchprints on keys, the plaque

  of memories she’d repressed mixed up. She’d riffed

  some basic facts that if restyled could

  become the basis for a Stel childhood.

  194.

  From up to down to fortunate and hexed,

  from gladdening to maddening, agree

  adventuring you’ll find in pages next

  is true as memories made can be to me.

  Unchained childhood began with what you’ll read,

  in many ways adulthood too was born

  as self-reliance started supersede

  conformist expectations feared outworn.

  While chiseled by untempered nature’s edge

  I’d get to know my dog and friend like book.

  We had but one another’s binding pledge

  to rise till social mores were overlooked.

  This tale is mine alone, of nicer youth,

  shared now so followers can trace own truth.

  195.

  If verse instead, she thought, can focus on

  advice to pass to younger cherubs, I’m

  then freed to use embellishment as con

  to polish points so that they better shine.

  She opened up her Insta feed and saw

  last two days’ waiting time was good for biz,

  as friends online reacted with some awe,

 

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