For the Tempus-Fugitives
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To gain safe entrance to the other place,
That tranquil “corner of some foreign field.” Here they
Can act out their heroics in a space
Reserved for poetasters who obey,
Like him, the rule: let prosody outface
All such threats to its sacrosanct domain
As might come from a poetry that veers
Rhyme-wise and metrically against the grain,
As also from the moral shift of gears
Whereby those two condemned the whole insane
Scenario where escalating fears
On both sides conjured up the very bane
Both sides made war on. For indeed the spheres
Where warmongers and lyric warblers dwell
Are not so far apart as might be thought
Since, after all, the stories both lots tell
By popular request are of the sort
That help conceal whatever glimpse of hell
Might otherwise poke through and so cut short
Those stirring tales with accents that rebel
Against the martial beat. If they distort
The victor’s view of things it’s by the kind
Of dislocating jolt that shocks the old-
School prosodists as much as those who find
The devil’s hand in all that breaks the mould
Of custom or explodes the lies that bind
Bad poets to bad causes. These take hold
Through formulas that line us up behind
Their source in myths or meters tight-controlled
By emanations of the Nietzschean Will-
To-Power whose long dissimulated drive
Adopts more subtly muted forms until
It spawns those calls-to-slaughter that contrive
To sound like elegies, or tales that thrill
The warrior nerve yet whose narrators strive
To couch them in such tones as might instil
No craving more malign than to revive
Time-honoured pieties. We may expect
This age-old ruse itself to undergo
Revivals on the principle that Brecht
Spelled out with grim precision: that although
They’d stood up, killed the bastard, and so checked
One Hitler in his tracks, still they should know
That all their hopes of progress might be wrecked
The next time round. Brecht’s closing comments go
More snappily: that even now “the bitch
That bore him is in heat again,” so they’d
Best not allow this latest hard-won switch
Of fortunes to annul the gains they’d made
By letting false assurances bewitch
Their wiser minds. That’s roughly what’s conveyed
By Owen’s off-key rhymes that queer the pitch
For anyone whose aural nerves are frayed
When poets heed Brecht’s lesson and refuse
The Brookean way of melding perfect rhymes
With classic verse-forms. It’s a mode that woos
The unresisting reader and so primes
The violence masked by all those strict taboos
That bid state-chroniclers ignore state-crimes
Or teach tame versifiers how to schmooze
The regnant powers by any style that chimes
With regnant tastes. Yet Brecht’s point still applies
When free-verse zealots tout a final break
With rhyme and meter since they’d otherwise
(They think) be fobbing readers off with fake
Emotions like the old-time poet guys
Who wrote such stuff. In which case better take
The creed on board full-strength and improvise,
Like true verse-liberators, ways to make
A virtue of relinquishing control
And, above all, not adding to the pile
Of well-formed verbal icons. So the sole
Constraint you’ll need to have in mind—since style
Comes down to what permits an easy stroll
Through genial themes—is how best to beguile
The passive reader who’s assigned a role
With no allowance for such versatile
Capacities as once required a keen
And practised ear. Such were the skills that went
Into that amicable strife between
Speech-rhythms and how meter would accent
The poet’s vocables had they not been
Still part-immersed within the element
Of ordinary speech that had them mean,
Up to a point, what those words would have meant
In plain-prose talk. Yet—some would say—beyond
That point the poem enters realms unknown
To all save some few readers who respond
In ways that verbal acumen alone
Could scarcely grasp. At least they won’t be conned,
Those vers-libristes, by any jumped-up tone
That strives to transcendentalize the bond
Of sound and sense, so leaving sceptics prone
To seek salvation in a cult of free-
Form verse that yokes its star to the eclipse
Of formal structure since its apogee
Comes often when a martial fervour grips
The poets and induces them to see
No merit but in poetry that whips
Up kindred sentiments. For them, the key
To truth in verse is that which promptly tips
The reader off that here we have a case
Of skilled technique so splendidly at one
With its high theme that every verbal grace
Conspires to spin the yarn routinely spun
By poets keen to show their public face
To best advantage through a lengthy run
Of formal features perfectly in place.
Whence their late-comers’ stake in work begun
In that primordial tryst of sound and sense
Through which, as Benjamin obscurely said,
Adam once had the genius to condense
Kind-fixing essences in names that led
Him, first and last among us, to dispense
With l’arbitraire du signe and instead
Bestow God’s signatures. Thus would commence
The poets’ endless quest for what might wed
Sound, sense and reference in a union blessed
By the old Cratylist belief that signs
Might once again reveal themselves possessed
Of such Adamic power. When this combines
With lyric feelings of the sort expressed
In (let’s admit) the most effective lines
From Brooke’s Grantchester poem—like the rest
Of those whose martial character defines
“War poetry” pre-Owen and Sassoon,
And all too often since—the mixture’s apt
To stir emotions through an opportune
Deployment of the language-functions mapped
By formalists as an almighty boon
To poets and recruiting-sergeants wrapped
In words like flags. That’s why the more rough-hewn
Verse-forms and rhythms nowadays adapt
So readily to what the ear perceives
As beauty’s crying need to give the beast
Its chance, or anyway be sure it leaves
Some space where verse-disorder can at least
Find elbow-room. That’s also why what “heaves
The heart into the mouth”—what old Lear ceased
To credit far too late—is that which weaves
A story-line whose mob-appeal’s increased
Ten-fold by those well-practised verse techniques
Which prompt the disaffected to resist
Their suasive force by all the Brechtian tweaks
Of formal structure that contrive to twist
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br /> The sense around and skew whatever seeks
To reinforce the customary gist
Of martial oratory with verse that speaks
Only those noble lies that serve as grist
To some warmonger’s mill. And yet, and yet,
How should we hope to figure out what’s true
In poetry, or even—just to let
The Larkin qualifier have its due—
Not wholly untrue, if the meter’s set
At zero deviance from what will do
In daily chatter? Then it’s a safe bet
That, since such attributes are now taboo,
All remnant rhymes or half-rhymes will be held
Just chance events, or put down to some sad
Since past-fixated practice, or expelled
From poet-school as witnessing a bad
Since rhyme-fixated ear. Though they rebelled,
Those anti-prosodists, against what had
By then such false allure as might have quelled
Those poets’ songs at source or sent them mad
Through formal servitude, still they’d have hit
A truer key-note if they’d picked the route
That led to Owen’s off-rhymes as the grit
In his best pearls, or chosen to permute
The rhyme-rules so as each time to commit
A well-judged breach of concord and so suit
Medium to message in an age unfit
For ampler harmonies. Let’s not impute
Some failure of poetic nerve or lapse
Into false consciousness should poets opt
To use verse-forms that, though they may set traps
For less attentive readers, might have stopped
Those readers, plus some poets—Brooke perhaps—
From doing war-work elegantly propped
By classic rhyme and meter. If this taps
A formal drive we moderns should have swapped
For manners less amenable, that’s not
To play Cassandra to the greatest gift
That rhyme and meter bring with them, like plot
In fiction, one that promises to lift
The curse of mythic claims to know the lot
Back to year zero then down through each shift
In Being’s tone. Rather, they help us spot
The sorts of claim where Being is likelier miffed
At such portentous talk but also those
Where an off-rhyme or rhythmic twist athwart
The metric pulse conveys to one who knows
How poems work that this must be the sort
Of verse, like Owen’s, to help diagnose
What shock first cracked rhyme’s bell were we but taught
Such hermeneutic tact as might disclose
Where things went wrong. The lessons here, in short:
Watch out when rhyme’s seduction starts to lead
The mind on etymo-poetic tracks
Since that’s where (vide Heidegger) there breed
Monsters in plenty. Still we should relax
The veto just so far as to concede
How verse-forms might not merely fill the cracks
In culture’s edifice but meet a need
Unmet by any poetry that lacks
A sense of rhyme’s beneficence or feel
For meter’s gift to thought. Else it’s as if
We took the Schoenberg line as a done deal,
Made a fixed rule of his high-profile tiff
With tonal harmony, and set our seal
Of musical approval on no riff
Or note-row that betrayed a flagging zeal
For atonality. So there’s a whiff
Of self-denying ordinance or sheer
Perversity about the drive against
Those formal features that, vers-libristes fear,
Will leave the realm of poetry so fenced
Around with props and outworks that to clear
Them off’s the Sisyphean task commenced
Each time from scratch by those at the frontier
Where art has to negotiate its tensed
Encounter with Apollo. Thus what tends
To shield it from exposure to the “air
Of a new planet” (Schoenberg) and so lends
Fresh courage to the tribe of derrière-
Gardistes is just what sundry later trends
Of free verse helped to propagate since they’re
Intent on smoothing out all that offends
A cautious ear and mind whose only care
Is not to interact in risky ways
That might expose their partnership to some
Full-scale dérèglement. It’s here rhyme plays
Its duplex role through sound-effects that come
Most often as the tribute music pays
To speech in a well-tuned sensorium
But sometimes, as in Owen, out-of-phase
With any vibes remotely tuned to drum
Up sentiments in that heroic vein
That Plato said defined the only mode
Of music fit to hear. The vocal grain
Of rhyme, once brushed against, may then encode
Resistance to the grand-heroic strain
Of thought or feeling with a force that’s owed
To its still pitching camp on rhyme’s terrain
Now mined with off-rhymes ready to explode.
By this stage, reader, you’ll be quick to catch
Me out in having taken pains to rhyme
Ear-charmingly, and making sure to match
Speech-stress with metric pulse, while all the time
Admonishing that poets not attach
Such weight to mere effects of verbal chime
Or fluent verse-technique. Let me dispatch
That point with this tu quoque: think what I’m
Essaying here, then think of what they did
In verse, the Owens and Sassoons, to stave
Off horrors such that pity might forbid
Some Dante redivivus to engrave
Their truth in words that opened wide the lid
On sufferings worse than even God could crave,
That stoker of infernos. It’s the quid
Pro quo of verse-redemption that they save,
Those poets, from co-option by the force
Of habit, usage, rhythm, rhyme, or all
Thought-regimens that coax us to endorse
The way things are. These readily enthral
Our morals, like our language, to some source
Of wisdom or authority on call
When needed since, with custom’s late divorce
From conscience, every case is apt to fall
Under some code or other. So it’s crass
(Forgive me, reader) to suppose my verse
Must risk a flat performative impasse
Should it flunk Conrad’s dictum to “immerse
In the destructive element,” amass
The bitter truths accrued from Adam’s curse
To Auden’s “history may say alas,”
And through discordia concors then disburse
Scant reparation. Hence the tribute paid
By Owen’s ars poetica to both
The savagery those clashing rhymes portrayed
And the farewell to it (“My hands were loath
And cold”). Most likely a denouement they’d
Reject, the pacifists, since it’s the sloth
Of sheer war-weariness that’s here displayed
And not, as might be hoped, the heartfelt troth
Of one who finds “kill or be killed” at last
A deathwatch maxim that indeed pertains,
Like Maxim guns, to a benighted past
Or kingdom of the blind. That’s why the strains
Show up in verse-forms not so much recast
As wrenched to fit what little now remains
Of their old dig
nity and so hold fast,
Despite the language-ravaging campaigns
Of neo-barbarism, to the chance
That in such broken rhymes there might endure
Something of Psyche’s strength to look askance
At each new threat. What vanquishes the pure
In heart, bloodline or diction may enhance
That strength and help such hybrid types ensure
Survival through the half-averted glance
That joins with subtlest mindset to secure
Just the apotropaic power required
To ward off swarming horrors from the sleep
Of reason. Better then it not get tired
For lack of formal exercise to keep
On the qui vive against those long-expired
Verse-genres now retailing on the cheap,
Yet also have its rhythmic nerve-ends fired
And its imagination take a leap
Not just when subject to the usual sorts
Of poet-prompt but at the kinds that bare
A nerve so raw that rhyme itself contorts
Into strange couplings that may seem to share
No more with old ideas of what comports
With what than we’ve good warrant to compare
Wars new and old. And so it self-aborts,
Old rhyme, or else attempts to self-repair
Only to self-transform into a stun-
Grenade with pin drawn ready to be thrown
Back in and finish any work undone
In war’s long harrowing of the border-zone
Where rhyme and reason merge. If, then, there’s none
Of that discordant music in my own
Traversal it’s because this mother’s son
Wrote, thankfully, of things he’d never known.
DAYS
I tend to take the groundhog view of days,
Those chronic revenants, but you,
My darling, wake most mornings and, before
I’ve time to phrase
The self-fulfilling thought, undo
Some catch that kept the door
Shut tight against all hopes that might erase
The groundhog loop. For it’s a new
Day, as you now remind me, and what’s more