Parallel Stories: A Novel

by Peter Nadas

  Would this perfect human specimen, blessed with that marvelous smile, really accept my imperfection for an entire life, or am I but one of his many nocturnal adventures whom he’ll forget tomorrow.

  Whatever the situation, his smile proved to be a fiat of destiny in the feverish darkness.

  In the meantime his mustached assistant also kept watching me from among the heads turned in my direction.

  Doubt was pointless if the giant’s proximity was worth any humiliation. At the sight of his checkered shirt, I could already feel the hot whiff of his wild body, his enormous strong limbs, or perhaps I was overwhelmed by the odor of the tarred wall.

  Any humiliation, even my entire future, for a single touch from him.

  Let it be that way, any way it has to be. I’d do it in front of everybody too. That’s what everyone was trying to see, where I was headed, whether I’d pick someone else, what I was going to do.

  But at that moment—perhaps already the moment before, just as he set off to take his designated place in the phalanx of men about to go into the most secret war of the night and, as it were, to fill the gap with his presence during the waiting period—the lineup, as if moved by a gust of wind, began to disperse. Passionate whispering was heard from the far end of the urinal, words of indignation; somebody vehemently protested something that had been done to him, kept swearing, and at the same time a gray-haired old man appeared from the same area, his shirt outside his pants, his hard-on in his hand. His welted shoes squeaked weirdly and in a split second he closed the long line by taking the spot that fate had supposedly allocated and held reserved for the new arrival.

  As it turned out, he took away from me what the black-haired giant could not give me after all, because it was destined to happen differently.

  Only the loveliness and irony of an eternal promise remained, disappointment, longing, and a measure of consternation instead of an opportunity presented and missed. At the same time, others were also changing places but so quickly it was impossible to fathom what the prearranged plan was, what sort of strategy had brought about the new formation. The single possible vacancy was re-created at an entirely different location between entirely different individuals.

  Now there were three men between us.

  Actually, this was a characteristic of these nocturnal games: to make use of secret intentions and chance challenges lurking in the depths of the constant shifting of positions, in which one involuntarily lost rather than found and recognized oneself. There was nothing I could do but occupy the vacant spot.

  At least that.

  I don’t know how else it could have happened, and I understood even less the way it happened. The occurrence itself could be seen with the naked eye, yet the development of things went on being mysterious. Here we were, standing in this long, narrow space with our backs to the illuminated entrance. The lineup was now closed, man next to man. I was trembling among mobilized warriors waiting for orders, clenching my teeth to stop my trembling. It could have been a dream that one luckily forgets the next day, but it was not a dream. We pretended that all of us, precisely at this abandoned spot, precisely at this late hour of the night, were preparing to urinate or had just finished urinating and were ready to leave.

  The silence spread once again; one could barely hear a few small unidentifiable noises.

  I was staring at a tarred wall and my eyes were becoming more and more used to the darkness. Slowly I distinguished him in the blackness.

  At least his mustached assistant is here very close to me, I consoled myself.

  The giant must have been from the countryside and made a very strange impression in his blue worker’s overalls, but his assistant seemed to be from Pest, coming here from a distant suburb. Judging by his hands, he must have pursued a more refined trade, that of a turner or toolmaker. Behind his large, meaty nose and big Hungarian mustache, his features were positively childlike and delicate, though not his forehead or chin, which were thick, fleshy, and forceful. There was a tattoo on his lower arm, a coat of arms or bouquet of flowers, I could not make out which. I had stolen quick glances at it during the previous nights. A letter was tattooed on the hairy upper digit of every one of his fingers. Perhaps the letters of a favored woman’s nickname, perhaps of his own. Between us stood a nervous, blindingly blond, ungainly, idiotic-looking young man who once very carefully had approached me under the yellow acacias during one of the previous nights. He had something of the wild boar in him. Short light bristles covered his loins, his short stubby fingers, and his thighs. His hair stood up straight from his head, like gleaming stubble that couldn’t be combed. A disproportionately small, reddish pointy bulb glowed atop his misshapen, thick, short solid cock, swelling with veins and nerves.

  He had sneaked up on me unnoticed, startled me, which in turn alarmed him, and he would have collapsed if he hadn’t leaned against the silky trunk of a thin tree and pressed his cock to it.

  He pressed it against the tree so as not to come.

  Now he alternated between watching the mustached assistant’s cock and mine, and he wanted to get his hand on mine. Then, by the tree trunk, he’d come with loud screams, his sperm shooting up incredibly high, and I’d run away through branches slapping my face. I did not want to look at his face now, either, or see any part of him.

  Our shoulders almost touched.

  One filled one’s place and became a captive of the somber lineup of men. I didn’t want to see who was standing on my other side. That man was very close to me too. I wanted to remain strictly with the impossible fiction to which all the others also clung.

  We’re here to urinate, nothing else. Locked into this fiction, everyone stood there utterly alone.

  Everyone was careful to avoid unwarranted glances.

  However, everyone peeked out a little from behind his seclusion. Not to dispel solitude but to search for prey and gain some advantage; to keep an eye on the others lest they commit some incautious act. Being able to see someone else’s without showing one’s own was considered an advantage. Which allowed one to gauge and judge the members of others without submitting one’s own to a similar scrutiny. That would keep one’s place open in a virtual hierarchy. At first, most of the men relied on their peripheral vision. The mustached one showed his to me, but the boar-headed man could see it much better, which made him very aggressively proffer his own. The purpose of the jockeying was to see who could stimulate better and therefore emotionally surround the other one, who was the more adroit, the more cunning, the more attractive, the more competitive, who could exercise more power over the other and who would submit first to the secret hierarchy.

  The more protracted the preparation, the higher the fever rose and the more general the tension became. Everyone received some of it and everyone helped increase it. It was enjoyed even by those who for some reason had been excluded from seeking a mate or didn’t want to participate actively and instead preferred to take larger gulps from the common source of pleasure.

  With little tricks and a constant increase of tension, it was possible to compel a targeted person to leave his foxhole at last and submit to the potential verdict of the phalanx.

  This was not an entirely new situation for me because I had conducted serious fieldwork in the subterranean urinals on Grand Boulevard, though I thought the results not quite satisfactory. I had worked there like a thoughtful ethnologist who had to keep a distance from the influence of observed forms of behavior. If one man felt confidence in another or, because of his deep attraction, lost patience and showed a small measure of initiative, it remained an open question whether the second man would be satisfied with what he saw and, abandoning the mutually nurtured polite appearances, reciprocate the confidence, and also who else might profit from this secret dialogue disguised as a chance occurrence, and as a third party might be induced, precisely by what he had seen, to interfere in the adventure.

  At any rate, after a while it was possible to know who was or was not curious abou
t someone, whom one feared, who might wind up as a third party, insinuating himself between the initial two and snatching away the chosen one, who was ready to flirt with anyone or everyone, what a person’s cock was like and whether it would fulfill the promise of the man’s body. Or, if it was impossible to answer these questions right then, because the chosen one was too far away and concealed by others, at least one could guess by their behavior where his place might be in the secret hierarchy.

  One could also be aware that the subject, direction, and temperature of a person’s interest, despite every visual agreement, even despite the hierarchy, might change very rapidly and sometimes for no good reason.

  What happened then was probably something other than what the men had expected even of themselves.

  After another bit of time had passed in this seemingly motionless silence, one could sense who were the ones who had already managed to establish contact, how they were flooded by their mutual attraction, how they began to lose their inhibitions and find their way around obstacles. One could also spot the ones who remained hopelessly alone, or guess who’d be scrounging off the sights of developing reciprocity between others. Because there were men who wanted nothing more than to watch and follow others only with their glances. From the beginning these men behaved as if they had no interest at all in the busy activity around them. With their eyes and ears they followed and absorbed the smallest movement and coldly rejected any attempt to approach them. They refrained almost pathologically from direct bodily contact. They must have been satisfied with very little. Peeping was their profession and they had no shame about it. Persistently, for hours at a time, they’d stand in the same spot and, no matter what happened, their faces remained indifferent to everyone and everything.

  Of course they never showed their own to anyone.

  They took the rich nourishment of their sense organs with a certain reservation, which had a touch of gourmandise.

  It was impossible to know when and with what they had their fill, but suddenly they’d button up their flies and, behind countenances transformed into masks with neutral gazes, they’d make their way from the depths of the urinal up the stairs to take home their daily booty.

  Occasionally, though, they were denied even this small gain. Not everyone liked having others witness their pleasure. Some were angered or embarrassed by the presence of others, though some were indifferent to voyeurs or even liked the peepers’ quiet indifference, gaining an unexpected boost from the mute witnesses’ enjoyment.

  Many things could be clarified in the motionless silence in which the tap kept dripping evenly.

  It must have been leaking somewhere, because there were glistening spots of water on the flagstones.

  The question of what one’s intentions were regarding the other was left open.

  Among these men, intentions had well-defined genres, and they strictly observed the borders between genres. It was impossible to tell by another’s exterior what that person wanted to do, how reserved he was or how far in shamelessness he would be willing to go, where he would want to do it, whether he had a place of his own or would insist on staying here and doing it in front of the others, or what they might do with each other emotionally, whether this connection would last for only a few minutes or possibly for a lifetime, and what the others would make of all this, but, based on a certain amount of practice, everyone could have his own intuition.

  There were many questions, but not one of them referred to an entire personality—only to its various characteristics and the ever-shifting basic situation. To how these characteristics could be made to speak without having to exchange a single word with the other man.

  To make contact with the other man directly, without an intermediary, and somehow with all the others as well.

  Even the most experienced ones kept turning around, like birds, because they feared being exposed and, in their fickleness, had to keep an eye now on this one, now on another one.

  Without much effort, I too adjusted my behavior to these rules and open questions, and therefore caught myself doing everything the same way; in the name of pure sensory perception I was just as fickle as the others. Soon there was no situation I didn’t scrutinize and evaluate according solely to my senses, evading morality and reason.

  The difference between the two kinds of knowledge became measurable during the night.

  I learned continually from and with my sense organs, adding, as it were, to everything I’d learned earlier according to the scales and standards of reason so that I could put each item, sorted by moral viewpoint, in its proper place in my consciousness. But since everything was open, changing continuously, and continuing awkwardly to stay open, I could reach no final knowledge; the most I could do was notice the repetitions, or sense in the rhythm of recurrences vague signs of an elusive natural law. I did not realize it was impossible to find the underlying cause of anything by learning. At best I comprehended it as yet another situation; slowly accepted the reality of occurrences that appeared in parallel within and around me; resigned myself to the possibility that whatever happened within and around me would become a part of my life, after all; and as a result my knees even stopped their humiliating shaking.

  But I did not believe we had reached the end of anything.

  Several men in the long line showed an immediate interest in me, stretching a bit to see past some of the others, leaning forward, out of the line, but I had to pretend not to notice these summoning signals because I did not belong to these intrusive strangers. They could clearly see that I belonged to this black-haired navvy or stonecutter, to this I don’t-know-who, whose shoulders and chest nearly burst from his checkered shirt, and with whom I had practically nothing in common. I belonged to his mustached assistant also, and to nobody else. With my reticence and obstinacy I signaled to the others that they should expect nothing from me.

  But I did not even have to look up to see the cock of the man on the other side of me.

  It was exactly my obstinacy, reticence, and hesitation that made him turn in my direction and show me his, immediately.

  He was rearing up with it.

  He wanted to use his cock to jolt me out of my fickleness. I couldn’t have known what sort of man came with this cock, and he counted on my inability to resist the curiosity that lurks in every single man without exception. Carefully, I did take a good look at it. I decided he wouldn’t have a chance even if I hadn’t been waiting for the giant. Whose black hair falls so flamboyantly on his forehead, and who with his metallically flashing eyes probably follows my every move in the darkness, checking up on my very existence. I had to think quickly of something else to ward off any possible effect of the stranger’s cock on my curiosity. There were no more vacant places, and in the tense silence something had irrevocably ended. Nobody could fit in between the two of us; true, I did not see him and wouldn’t dare look at him by leaning either forward or backward, to see something of him between the strange bodies.

  He towered above them all.

  I should see his illuminating smile.

  At the mere thought, at the mere fancy of the possibility of such proximity, my cock filled my hand and began to grow stiff.

  Maybe I should urinate first.

  I felt his domination on the nape of my neck, in the roots of my hair. His power gained strength in my hand, my body became the inevitable emblem of his power, and I entered into his service exactly the same way his mustached assistant had. As if my entire life until then had been nothing but a preparation for this nightmare, which caught me while wide awake, with its secret pleasures promising compensation for all my past and future suffering. In the phalanx we stood foot to foot, elbow to elbow, almost touching, shoulders on both sides rubbing against me occasionally, which naturally increased the promise of this unnamable community.

  I had no idea how much time passed; it may have been growing light outside.

  I had to violate this unnamable common activity because I could not aband
on my urge to urinate. Curiously, they watched what I was going to do. For security reasons too, they wanted to know what the newcomer would do because it determined whether they’d continue the games among themselves that they had interrupted at my arrival. I could no longer use some ordinary dissembling to hide the real meaning of my behavior; my overstretched bladder could not relax under such tension, its functioning was also hindered by active waves of hyperemia. It would have been hard to avoid a complete erection. From my left the unknown man offered his own, from the right the blond idiot. Because of bladder tension, I should have avoided an erection and kept to a sensible sequence. Slowly, indulgently, holding their cocks at the root to make them visible in their entirety, both men kept pulling their foreskins over and off their bulbs to steady their strong erections or rather to keep them permanent. With which they not only held themselves in the daze of hyperemia but also showed off to the best advantage the tumescence of their genitals. They were competing with each other but also with the mustached assistant.

  They offered a sight from which, theoretically, another man could not escape without excitement. At the very least his eyes would grow round, his pupils would enlarge to take everything in, as if injecting himself into the other man with his look, setting out involuntarily with his head to observe what it would be like to be that other man. And that causes the fragrance of the strange cock to invade his nostrils.

  To take that bulb into his mouth, to eat it, to trigger and experience the other man’s pleasure.

  The memory of mothers’ breasts surges in the mouths.

  He won’t, he cannot do it; some men delay it, defer it throughout a lifetime, but the mere thought of the act makes them breathe faster and hear how the other man’s breath speeds up too. A few steps over, the mustached one was doing the same thing in his own way, while on the other side the gray-haired old man kept turning and busying himself, and next to him stood the giant, but I didn’t know what he was doing.