Nailed

by Patrick Jones

  nailed

  PATRICK JONES

  CONTENTS

  Cover

  Title Page

  Dedication

  One

  Two

  Three

  Four

  Five

  Six

  Seven

  Eight

  Nine

  Ten

  Eleven

  Twelve

  Thriteen

  Fourteen

  Fiftteen

  Sixteen

  Seventeen

  Eighteen

  Nineteen

  Twenty

  Twenty–one

  Twenty–two

  Twenty–three

  Twenty–four

  Twenty–five

  Twenty–six

  Twenty–seven

  Twenty–eight

  Twenty–nine

  Thirty

  Thrity–one

  Thrity–two

  Thirty–three

  Acknowledgments

  Also by Patrick jones

  Imprint

  To my mom, Betty Jones, and in memory of my father, Vaughn Paul Jones, who never hammered, always encouraged, and provided me with love, support, and my first typewriter.

  One

  July 25, Before Junior Year

  “Bret, what the hell is wrong with you?”

  I stand mute for a moment as my dad shakes his head. “What do you mean?” I reply, playing Mr. Innocent without much conviction.

  “Why don’t you go inside with the women?” my dad says in a voice that kills. “Go bake cookies with your mother or play dolls with your sister, Robin.”

  I don’t say anything, because words don’t matter. What matters is changing the oil filter on Mom’s car. I turned sixteen yesterday, and with my new driver’s license I was ready to burn up summer on the road, except my father imposed rules not required by Michigan’s secretary of state. It wasn’t enough that I knew how to drive, there were other conditions to be met before I would be allowed to take Mom’s molting Geo Metro onto Flint’s freeways. There was no way he’d give me the keys to his old NASCAR bumper sticker tattooed black pickup, and he wouldn’t even let me stand within ten feet of his vintage red Camaro Beretta, which he paid more attention to than me. To get the rights to Mom’s Metro rust ride I had to show him I could maintain her car. I could change a tire, but that wasn’t enough. He wanted me to show him I could change the oil. This wasn’t a class they taught—or that I would take—at Southwestern High School.

  “Why can’t I just use the car, like everyone else?” I ask, but he never listens. He just stares at my green-tinted ponytail and the goofy Goodwill clothes draped over my lanky and ludicrously unathletic six-foot frame, gazing at an offspring he’s embarrassed to be seen with, let alone admit to siring. He’s in his usual dull gray grease-stained coveralls.

  Laughing, he shakes his head, and grunts, “Stop whining and do like I showed you.” In the driveway, he’s teaching me the hard way, his way, the only way. He hands me the oil filter and points. “It goes there. It fits right in.”

  He turns away to light up another Marlboro while I just stare at the car’s engine. Changing the tires, stuff on the outside, that was easy, but stuff on the inside was a lot more complicated. I’m A-student smart, so I could learn to do this, but I won’t give my dad the satisfaction of making me. I’ll walk everywhere or catch a ride with my buds and band mates, Alex and Sean. I’ll do anything; anything other than this thing Dad wants me to do.

  “Guess Mr. Douglas doesn’t teach you this in theater class,” he says, rubbing in his disdain like grease into his coveralls. His eyes avoid me, they are asking his ongoing but unsaid question being, “What do you think you’re doing with yourself?”

  I have no reply, and can only shrug. My dad and I never talk anymore, and this is why.

  “You don’t learn this in books,” he adds, angry that I was still up reading (The Grapes of Wrath) at 5:00 a.m. when he got up for work, knowing it would mean I’d sleep in until noon, which ticked him off. But that’s his fault too; he and Mom were yelling at each other late into the night, so I ducked under the covers and behind the headphones, letting the loud sounds of London Calling by punk patriarchs The Clash drown them out.

  “Not in the classics,” I say under my breath. All Dad ever reads are car magazines, the sports section, and the Sunday comics.

  “Jesus H. Christ, Bret, this is a simple task.” He almost spits out the words. Unsaid is that my older brother, Cameron, would be able to do it. In fact, Cam did this particular task so well that he now does oil changes for a living. If you call that living; there’s a lot of that in Flint.

  Again, more silence from me. I don’t know what I’m supposed to say. When I’m acting on stage, I can ad lib if needed because I know who the characters are, but in real life I can’t figure out my or my father’s character. To him, I’m some alien life-form holed up in his house.

  “Bret, why do you always want to do things the hard way?” my father asks, but the question is rhetorical, not that he knows what that word means. “Your mom can’t protect you forever. You need to learn to do stuff for yourself.”

  “Why do I need to learn to change the oil?” I ask, not as a challenge, but out of a desperate need to know why something so small matters so much. To him and to me.

  “Because.”

  I wait for the rest of the sentence, but it doesn’t come as he backs away from me.

  “Because I said so.” He finally finishes the sentence, and the conversation. Throwing his smoke onto the driveway, he walks back into the garage and his tabernacle of tools, returning to work on another project, once again giving up on me. I put my headphones back on and close the hood of the car, ending my chance of driving and resembling a normal sixteen-year-old.

  I retreat toward my room, while my father starts hammering away at the gun rack he’s building for his hunting rifle, a new pawn shop purchase. The loud pounding breaks through the wall of sound in my Discman. I walk away realizing I surrendered my chance at being normal a long time ago. As I look over my shoulder back toward the garage, I see, hear, but mostly feel the thumping as my father slams the heavy hammer against the skinny nails. He’s not just building something or tearing me down. He’s also teaching me yet another angry lesson that I’m too stubborn to learn: the nail that sticks out farthest gets hammered hardest.

  Two

  August 6, Before Junior Year

  “Alex, why are we driving ourselves crazy like this?”

  “Drive? I thought you weren’t allowed to drive,” Alex cracks back. It’s his typical smartass statement. “Crazy is within walking distance for us.”

  Alex Shelton, my best pal, sits on a bench with me in front of the theater at Genesee Valley Mall. We pass a Camel cig between us, watching half the world go by. The better half.

  “She’s a seven,” I say as we spy a gorgeous Gothwannabe girl, clad in black skirt and tight black T-shirt, walking by on the outskirts of her group of friends. Alex and I started this girl-rating ritual on a trip to Stratford, Ontario, for a Shakespeare festival. The number represents the number of fingers or toes we would sacrifice to any deity who could arrange for us to spend horizontal time with these unattainable angels.

  “She’s for you,” Alex responds, yet I know none of these ladies will look at me, then simply smile. Just as well, since most of my crushes end in crushing disappointment after weeks or months of flirtation. Except for Megan the Imposter, who crushed me a whole different way last spring.

  “In my dreams,” I reply. We know Rule One is that no guy is ever less good-looking than the girl he’s with. We keep searching for, but not finding, duos where homely horny toads like us couple with killer lookers. My fellow troglodyte
s must stay underground, while blond-haired blue-eyed beautiful boys like Sean, our band’s drummer, roam the earth. Sean’s a near ten among men, while Alex, challenged in vertical reach and clear skin, and I strive to be fives. Math may be my worst subject, but even I understand the awful arithmetic of animal attraction: guys who are fives like me don’t get girls who are tens.

  Rule Two is to find the outsider. Every group has an odd one out, like our gorgeous Goth girl, and that’s the one we make our focus. We figure since every other wolf pack ignores the outsider, we will flatter her with attention, even if it’s from a safe distance.

  Rule Three is to never make eye contact. That is the difference between those of us who appreciate the captivating splendor of the female form from a respectful distance and the rude, crude bullyboys with stalker tendencies. We want love but settle for lust, or even just a look.

  “Nine,” Alex says, slapping my knee as a Mona Lisa Cheerleader, a girl from our school who remains unattainable to all but members of the jockarchy, walks by. The jockarchy is what we call the ball-bouncing bloc at school. Bob Hitchings, a former elementary school friend who now punches me for kicks and ridicules Alex like it was an Olympic event, is the three-letter king of that hill. At our school, these knuckle draggers score points and win rewards, but from most of us in theater, they earn only our scorn and ridicule. It’s not just that they kick the ball; it’s that they seem to think they deserve to walk on water and stomp on those less privileged. They’re so admired at school that standing up to them isn’t an option; it’s a daydream.

  “Very nine,” I add.

  “Bret, my pants are getting tighter,” Alex whispers.

  “No wonder they call it longing,” I say. Alex cracks up. We want love and would settle for lust, but we have to make do with making each other laugh with bad puns and quick comebacks.

  “Get the blood back into your brain,” he says, snapping his fingers off my skull.

  “Do you think they know we’re doing this? Are we that obvious?” I ask.

  “We should wear sunglasses,” Alex says as he puts on a pair of shades to match his similar green-streaked (but naturally blond) hair, and the gold rims balance his numerous silver earrings. The sunglasses fit, since Alex is always the star of the show. He’s arrogant, but he’s also the smartest and funniest person I know, and a damn good friend. He’s also a first-class secondhand store shopper. Today’s getup is typical: the oversized black pants, a Captain Crunch T-shirt, and like me, bright green Chuck Taylor Converse All Stars; basketball shoes for two guys who can’t dribble or dunk. We both prefer to hit the hardwood of the stage rather than the gym, where the pituitary cases that make up the starting five of the Flint Southwestern Spartans bang bodies. Whether it’s not having a dad that beats him down, his distaste for people who don’t share his taste, or his lack of fear in the face of adversity, Alex mostly avoids the problems I have swimming upstream against the high school gene pool.

  “Then we’d be cool, like Sean,” I say. Sean should be part of the jockarchy like his neighbor Bob Hitchings, but he’s not. It’s not really about sports aptitude, but a superior attitude. Sean’s common love of radio-unfriendly music, smartass comments, and offbeat books and movies makes him one of us. Besides, he and Alex go way back, and loyalty matters.

  “I bet those girls wouldn’t even care,” Alex says. “They’d prefer the validation of their beauty over the invasion of their privacy. They’re all beautiful, someone should tell them. I tell you Mr. Bret Hendricks, there’s not a girl in the world who isn’t beautiful in some way.”

  “Especially Kylee Edmonds,” I say. “So, Alex, tell me, what do you think Kylee is?”

  He pauses to think. I’ve thrown him between the rock and the hard place. I’ll watch him squirm while I wait for the next eye harem to pass. He takes the smoke from me and stalls.

  Kylee is everything. During summer theater, Mr. Douglas invited students from Flint Central to team up for a play with us Westies. She told me she was a big deal over there, having starred in their musicals the last two years. But since we’re doing The Odd Couple, with no singing or dancing, she opted to run the show behind the scenes as stage manager. If only she would opt for me, and let me hang on her arm like her twenty-bracelet parade.

  A year older, Kylee is cynical, sarcastic, and sexy beyond belief. Petite, with a dancer’s sexy body, she has a fondness for too-small tank tops and tight hip-hugging cutoffs, allowing for maximum skin exposure. This girl from Central knows how to center attention on herself, and I’ve gladly noticed her every second of every minute of every day. She was easy to find as the only person involved in the production with short, violet hair and a bottom lip like a plum. She never walks; she glides gracefully across the stage. Kylee’s beauty is organic, original, and unbearable. After our final show in two weeks, there’ll be a cast party and I’ll need to make a move or lose my chance to know her. She’ll be back at Central and on the outskirts of my life.

  “Depends who is doing the rating,” Alex finally says, but I know he thinks that’s Kylee’s a total ten. Alex noticed her first but backed off, like a true trustworthy friend, once I expressed a passionate (rather than passing) interest. “I know what she is for you.”

  “What a succubus suck-up you are. Okay, she’s a ten,” I confess.

  “I don’t think so,” Alex replies in his most annoying singsong put down voice.

  “What, she’s not a ten?” I ask nervously, the need for his approval noticeable.

  “For you, she’s a twenty!” he shouts.

  “Twenty? That’s all my fingers and toes! No wonder figuring out a way to approach her has me stumped!” I crack back, then we low-five. “Did you find out about a boyfriend?”

  “Yes and no,” Alex replies, disturbingly delighted by my discomfort.

  “And?”

  “Yes, she has a boyfriend,” Alex says, looking away from me at the sky above, while my heart sinks six feet underground. “But I don’t think she would be opposed to your advances.”

  “And tell me how you can predict that, Nostra-dumbass?”

  “Her boyfriend’s some college guy named Chad Lake.”

  “So what?” I ask, literally moving toward the edge of my seat.

  “Well, she said, and I quote, ‘He’s less like a lake and more like a puddle.’”

  “What does that mean?” I ask, knowing it will be Kylee-style: smart and sarcastic.

  “She said he’s more like a puddle because he’s shallow and casts a nice reflection,” Alex says, cracking us both up and drawing unwanted attention to our observation outpost, just as a major ten passes. I hear my heart beat faster, pumping blood south, as I point the girl out to him. This girl is like a flag: red hair, white T-shirt, and blue jeans. She makes us stand at attention.

  “I didn’t realize you liked redheads,” Alex comments.

  “Don’t you know by now what kind of girls I like?”

  “None, if you ask your dad!” Alex chortles. My dad thinks both Alex and I are gay.

  “I don’t ask my dad anything,” I say sharply. Alex’s dad died when he was ten, and I never tell him how much I envy him for that; almost as much as I envy his ability to write songs.

  “Well, you don’t seem to have one type,” Alex says, stating the obvious.

  “I like redheads, blonds, brunettes, and Goths with black hair. Of late, I find that I’m especially interested in dancers with violet hair, and I’m sure if I saw a bald girl go by I would find something to like about her.”

  “I’ll be on the lookout for one of those,” Alex says with a sly grin.

  “You think girls do this?” I ask, trying to distract myself.

  “I hope not. We’re not tens by any means,” he says, stating the vicious and the obvious.

  “Well, except for Sean,” I acknowledge.

  “Maybe our band should be called the Blond Shy Guy and the Multicolored Mangy Miscreants rather than Radio-Free Flint,” Alex says.

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bsp; “Maybe,” I mutter, totally befuddled by the unfairness of beauty.

  “Or how about the Mental Babes?” Alex cracks, but I don’t respond. Last spring, there was a story about the theater club in the school paper. There was a quote from this popular-crowd girl, Becca Levy, calling me a “mental babe.” I’m a successful student, an improving actor, a kick-ass bass player and energetic lead singer in my band. I try to be a good brother to my younger sister, Robin, even though she’s twelve now and wants nothing to do with her weird older brother. Despite my problems with Dad at home and Bob Hitchings at school, the last few years have been a sweet life. But this “mental babe” memory sours me. It hurts even more coming from Becca, who, like me, is smarter than she is pretty. I’ve secretly always had a hard spot for her. Mental babe? Kill me now.

  “I bet Kylee thinks that about me too,” I say sadly, just as Sean joins us. Looking at Sean, I wonder if I was more like him and less like Alex, if I’d have more of a chance with Kylee.

  “What, you don’t think any girl would lose a finger over you?” Alex asks.

  “Most just give me the finger,” I say with a laugh.

  Sean jabs me in the ribs, then points at a blond walking by. “She’s tenriffic!”

  Three

  August 18, Before Junior Year

  “Don’t miss your cue, cutie,” Kylee reminds me as I take my place backstage, getting ready for a curtain call.

  We’ve just finished our last show of the summer, but right now that doesn’t matter. The only Odd Couple I’m thinking about is me and Kylee, and her tiny hands dancing over my skinny body. As I get ready to take my bow, I tip my hat and shoot her my best smile.

  “See you at the cast party?” I ask, trying to mask my terror. Standing onstage in front of hundreds is easy compared to this audience of one. Two, if Chad waits in the wings.

  “I’m bringing my dancing shoes,” Kylee says, pointing for me to go onstage. After soaking up audience appreciation, I retreat from the stage into the dressing room. I take off my stage makeup, knowing I’ve made up my mind about Kylee: now or never; death or glory.