The Carhart Series

by Courtney Milan

  Ned and mental illness

  Q. Though heroes suffering from various forms of mental illness are not unheard of, Ned, who is presumably bipolar, is a rather severe case. It has a huge effect on just about everything he does. Did you ever balk at approaching it in such an unflinching manner and, since it was traditionally published, was there any resistance to your portrayal?

  A. Sigh. This book. This book. This is the hardest book I have ever written, and the one that I feel (and I know others don’t agree, but this is my personal feeling) is my least successful book.

  So let me quibble with that premise. I don’t approach Ned’s bipolar disorder in an unflinching manner, and yes, I did get pushback—a lot of pushback.

  The original version of Trial by Desire that I turned into my publisher was absolutely nothing like the final version. I mean that literally: I lifted about five hundred words of a sex scene from that first version for the version you just read. Kate was not helping abused women; she was working in tandem with her father on political questions.

  The Ned of the first book that I wrote was bipolar, and very much in the depressive state when the book started. This was that Ned:

  If he realized she’d thrown his words back at him, he took no notice. He shook his head impatiently. “You didn’t want a husband. You wanted me to be a bloody hero, who worshipped chastely at your feet without the slightest physical importunity. Pardon me for misunderstanding.”

  It was bad enough that he’d laughed at her best prose. But to have him stand here in accusation because she’d dared to make something of her life—to have him demand with the bulk of the shadow he cast across her, that she back down from him—was too much.

  Kate raised her chin, took one step forward, and snatched the letter from his hands.

  “No,” she said. “I wouldn’t expect any kind of heroism from you. You abandoned me the day after we returned from our wedding trip. You made me the laughing stock of all London. I had no power, no influence—and I received nothing but scorn and pity. When you left me, I didn’t want a hero. I needed one.”

  “I married you,” he said with a frown. “Your reputation—”

  Men were such colossal idiots, thinking a marriage license would serve as a universal panacea for all a woman’s woes.

  “Not all marriages are equal. I didn’t just need a marriage.” She glared up at him. “I needed a husband. Everyone knew we’d been married hastily, a patched-over affair that came after we were caught together sharing what looked like a kiss. And we had but two weeks together before you ran off to the other side of the world. My father has powerful enemies. They didn’t hesitate to hurt me, just to see if they could shut his mouth. To my face, they suggested my skills in bed were so poor that you escaped in horror. Can you imagine what they said when I was not present?”

  He took a step towards her. He now stood so close that she could feel the power of his presence, a bubble that enclosed him. She felt as if she ought to move, as if there were no air for anyone’s lungs but his for a yard around his bulk. He radiated distance unconsciously. But Kate was done retreating. He’d pushed her out of her own life once—he’d made it so that she could trust almost no one of her acquaintance. He was not going to shove her another inch.

  She was half a foot shorter than he, and many stone lighter. He’d run away once. Well, he had best retreat again, because she was not going to step back any longer. She clenched her fists and stood tall.

  “I suppose you can’t imagine what was said. Let me give you a choice tale.” She straightened her spine, as if that extra half-inch of height could intimidate him. “You left in disgust, upon discovering I was not a virgin. That condition being apparent upon initial inspection, because I was afflicted with an obvious illness of a venereal nature.”

  He winced.

  “Of course, not everyone believed those stories. Still, they pitied me. They laughed at me.” She stood on her tiptoes, the better to glare into his eyes. “So, yes, I invented a husband who loved me by letter. I invented a man who left England to do his duty to his country. Had you been the recipient of a thousand meaningful glances—if you’d been shoved aside and treated as a puny, pitiful thing—you would have needed a hero, too.”

  He stood mere inches from her. Kate jammed her finger into his lapels. This close, she could smell him—smell the faintly sweet, but oh-so-masculine scent of bergamot that clung to his skin.

  However long ago their one-time entanglements had been, he had been her husband in every sense of the word. What kind of a cruel joke was it, that now, with the bare skin of her hand pressed against his chest, she remembered their wedding night?

  She’d felt his body on hers, over hers, in hers. She’d not appreciated that painful stretching the first time it had happened; and after that first time, she recalled a few weeks of mingled frustration and confusion. But after all this time, her treacherous and forgetful body dismissed that memory. He was a stupid, cruel brute. He also appeared to be a marvelous specimen of a man, so long as he didn’t open his mouth. And now, at this most inconvenient time, her flesh chose to leap up in recognition.

  He hadn’t said a word. Instead, he stood over her. His eyes fell on her lips and held there.

  It was an illusion, but she imagined she could sense his heart beating in time with her own. Her flesh burned, remembering the feel of those muscles atop hers. She set her hands on his chest. He didn’t move, not by so much as an inch. But beneath her palms, he tensed, like some giant creature preparing to pounce.

  Of all the losses she’d suffered when her husband absconded to the other side of the world, that one particular loss—the loss of his lips against hers—had never counted a snap. But now she realized he had stolen more than her pride and her position when he left so abruptly. He’d taken from her eight years of tender, loving moments. And he’d left her so vulnerable that even now her body longed for the false intimacy of flesh.

  She stood on her tiptoes, claiming the space he’d stolen from her. She was so close that she could see a raw, red spot on his chin, where he might have been nicked by an ill-placed razor. He leaned down to her on an inhale. Kate pressed her hands to his chest—he let out a long, lingering breath—and she shoved him with all her might. He stumbled backwards, unbalanced. He caught himself on a narrow table against the wall.

  “What the devil—!”

  “I needed a hero,” Kate said. “Instead, I got you. I won’t ask your forgiveness because I rescued myself instead.”

  He stood there, clutching the polished cherry for long moments. Finally he straightened and righted himself. “I hadn’t any idea,” he finally said. “I suppose I imagined that your life would keep on…keeping on, much as it had been before we married. Only, I supposed you’d have the freedom of a married woman.”

  “Ah, the freedom of a married woman.” She could not help but let the bitterness steep into her voice. “That would be the freedom to hold my head up high in London while my husband gallivanted around the globe? Or are you speaking of the freedom to pretend that your every childish whim is my dearest desire?”

  He dropped his eyes at her words.

  “Maybe you are referring to the freedom to smile at every unkind hint dropped about your absence. Some freedom, Ned. I thank you for it, but you’ll understand if I chose to replace that…that freedom with a liberty of my own choosing.”

  He looked up, biting his lip. “God, Kate. I—”

  “Don’t tell me you’re sorry,” Kate snapped. “I don’t want you to feel sorry for me. I don’t want anyone to feel sorry for me, ever. I survived. I won.”

  He let out a breath. That fierce light dimmed in his eyes. “Yes.”

  “And you’re not going to take that away from me,” she said ferociously. “You will not leave me an object of pity. I won’t have it, Ned. I won’t. Not again. I’ve told everyone you adore me. Don’t you dare let them make a liar of me.”

  I sent that first version in. My then-editor hated i
t. Absolutely hated it. My agent read it and said the book was very dark and completely relentless. After lengthy consultations with my editor, her boss, and my agent, we agreed on the following:

  1. They hated everything about the book, and it needed to be completely rewritten.

  2. They didn’t want Ned to be gone abroad for a long time—I had to argue them up from “some months” because, as I pointed out, back then you couldn’t really get anywhere in a matter of months.

  3. They wanted me to make Ned not bipolar any longer. “Didn’t he get better after Proof by Seduction?” someone asked. I had to put my foot down and explain that no, you don’t just get better, and I refused to write a book where his depression just disappeared and was never, ever acknowledged again.

  4. With that being off the table, the one absolute thing they insisted on was that Ned could not have a depressive episode in the book. He couldn’t have suicidal thoughts. Could not. It was not heroic, it wasn’t sexy, and readers wouldn’t want it.

  The situation was bad enough (on multiple levels) that I ended up switching editors. (I had known for months at that point that my original editor was not a good editorial fit. Nothing against her; just stylistically, she and I were not meshing and it was causing both of us grief.)

  My new editor (who was and is amazing) got to work with me on the new book—and it was an entirely different book.

  I don’t want to sound like I’m blaming my publisher for a difficult book. There were a lot of things that went wrong with this book. Second books are notoriously difficult to produce—it’s a combination of pressure and authorial hubris. I was taking on subject matter that I did not yet have the writing chops to accomplish. I’d also written myself into a corner in Proof by Seduction—not only was Ned bipolar, but I’d set the plot of his story in motion in a way that I couldn’t alter the beginning much at all.

  Ned was already married. His wife had a secret that made her leave balls in the ton. I don’t know that there was any flawless way for me to fill in the gaps between what I wanted, what my publisher wanted, and what I’d committed myself to in Proof by Seduction. The only question was how flawed the final result would be.

  I learned a lot about writing, and about writing series, while writing this book, mostly because I made every mistake that it was possible to make and had to work as hard as I’ve ever worked on anything just to make it come out…halfway acceptable. All my books have scenes that I love—all of them but one. Trial by Desire is the only book I’ve written where I never loved a single scene of the published version.

  But there’s something else. In many ways, I think the entire Carhart series is not at the same level as my later work. I’m not saying it’s bad, but I don’t think I would write those books even remotely the same way today. But the failures in This Wicked Gift and Proof by Seduction were failures of questioning. I hadn’t yet started asking some of the questions I was asking myself in later books, questions about class and consent and relationships between women. My failure in Trial by Desire was a failure of execution. I had a vision of the book I wanted to write in my mind, and I fell totally, completely short.

  The version I originally sent in had this as part of the Author’s Note at the end:

  Somewhere between two and six percent of all people suffer from some form of bipolar disorder. Many more will suffer at least one major depressive episode that is biochemical in origin. Up until a handful of years ago, historically speaking, nobody even knew that biochemical depression was an illness.

  Through the years, people who suffered from depression were no doubt frightened by what was happening in their heads. There were no drugs. There were no support groups. These people did not even have the comfort of a diagnosis, because until this last century, the illness did not have a name, and the people who suffered from it were too ashamed of their own feelings to ask for help. That’s why the list of people who have died because of what is essentially a fault of brain chemistry is painfully long.

  But as long and painful as that list is, there’s another list you will never see.

  Because the numbers don’t add up. Two percent of everyone that has ever lived is an awful lot of people. The number of people who have killed themselves is much, much smaller than the number of people who have lived with depression.

  Those people—the ones who experienced an illness they could not name, one that attacked their mind and their sense of self-worth—those people who suffered through that and lived…well, they are perhaps some of the greatest unsung heroes we have.

  I wanted to show you why.

  I ended up deleting this from the final version of Trial. The final version was no longer anywhere close to that.

  To this day, it’s hard for me to talk about Trial by Desire. I spent more time on this book than on any other book, and it doesn’t show.

  Here’s Mr. Milan and I talking about how I really feel.

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  Courtney and Mr. Milan discuss Trial by Desire (1:21)

  Author’s Notes

  Kate’s trial takes place without an indictment being presented to a grand jury. This is mostly because that step in the process would be boring to read about and boring to write about. In 1842, that step would have been necessary. I’ve taken the liberty of bending time a little in this regard; in 1849 legislation was passed that allowed police magistrates to certify that indictments could proceed to trial without being presented to a grand jury.

  In early Victorian England, summary trials (that is, trials without a jury) could come before police magistrates under some circumstances (certain petty, nonviolent crimes). In many instances, particularly for the lower classes, magistrates sat as judges of fact over other crimes, too, so long as the parties agreed that no jury was necessary. It’s not always clear that the parties under those circumstances consented to the lack of jury; in some cases, they may not even have known they were entitled to a jury. Kate’s first abortive trial, interrupted by Ned, is one such. Both the speed and the apparent laxity of the courtroom depicted here are in keeping with the few accounts I’ve read of such proceedings.

  Harcroft’s statements to the magistrate as to the elements and legality of abduction of a wife by persuasion were drawn (with little alteration) from Blackstone’s Commentaries on the Laws of England—presumably the source of our hypothetical Harcroft’s cribbed notes, anyway. Magistrate Fang was borrowed from Charles Dickens’s Oliver Twist.

  Acknowledgments

  For This Wicked Gift: This novella, appearing in an anthology, originally had no space for acknowledgments. So here I am, five years later, finally acknowledging the people who helped me.

  Tessa Dare, Carey Baldwin, and Franzeca Drouin were all extremely helpful.

  The Northwest Pixies came through in my hour of need and read this novella on extremely short notice—Kris Kennedy, Darcy Burke, Tatia Talbot, and Rachel Grant all read this and discussed the ending, the middle, and the beginning. Without them, I would never have had any edits at all.

  This was my first published work, and the response from readers was amazing. If you read This Wicked Gift in its original inception, and cared about it… Thank you so much. The beginning of an author’s career is often the shakiest part. I would never have made it off the ground it without your enthusiasm. Thank you, thank you, thank you.

  For Proof by Seduction: Every book—especially a debut novel—owes a debt to an enormous number of people.

  This list is lengthy, but not exhaustive:

  Tessa and Amy, for everything.

  Franzeca Drouin saved me from innumerable errors more times than I can count. David Berry, Rupert Baker and Stephanie Clarke answered strange and nitpicky questions.

  Amy Atwell, Jackie Barbosa, Anna Campbell, Lenora Bell, Darcy Burke, Diana Chung, Amanda Collins, Lacey Kaye, Lindsey Faber, Sara Lindsey, Terri O
sborn, Elyssa Papa, Janice Rholetter, Erica Ridley, Maggie Robinson and Sherry Thomas all read pages at various points along the way and encouraged me. Kristin Nelson, my extraordinary agent, and Sara Megibow, her awesome assistant, made all my dreams come true, even the ones I was scared to dream.

  Thanks to the team at Harlequin Books, particularly my editor, Ann Leslie Tuttle, and Charles Griemsman, for believing in this book and doing such a beautiful job in launching it.

  Finally, to all the readers who found me through this book… Thank you. Thank you for enjoying this book. Thank you for telling your friends about this book. Thank you for everything. I wouldn’t have a career without you, so thank you.

  For Trial by Desire: I’ve heard before that second books are hard. This one was…very hard. I am first and foremost grateful for all the readers who contacted me demanding Ned’s story. Without your encouragement and enthusiasm, I might have given up on this.

  As always, I am deeply grateful for Tessa and Amy, who offered support, encouragement and advice. Elyssa Papa and Kris Kennedy gave valuable feedback on various drafts. Franzeca Drouin saved me from about a billion errors. Nancy, my mother-in-law, answered a thousand questions about horses for me. And Kim Castillo truly is an author’s best friend.

  Kristin Nelson, my awesome agent, and all the Nelson Agency staff—Sara Megibow, Julie Kerlin, Anita Mumm, and Lindsay Mergens—provided the absolute best support an author could want.

  A great many people who put up with my whining about this book: the Pixie Chicks, the Vanettes, the Bon Bons, and my favorite debut loop ever.

  Margo Lipschultz, my wonderful editor, provided the proper balance of encouragement and gentle prodding, and Ann Leslie Tuttle let me know when I was going off the rails. I wish I had space to thank everyone on the entire team at Harlequin by name for the amazing job they have all done launching my career—from the extraordinary sales force, to the marketing department, to the editorial enthusiasm at HQN Books—but that would take pages and pages.