by Joe Dever
(158) Replaced ‘disappear and’ with ‘disappear, and’. Replaced ‘thrawl’ with ‘thrall’.
(160) Replaced ‘The Azan, then’ with ‘The Azan; then’.
(162) Replaced ‘you, then’ with ‘you, and then’.
(163) Replaced ‘co-operate’ with ‘cooperate’.
(164) Replaced ‘Backpack item’ with ‘Backpack Item’. Replaced ‘for any weapon’ with ‘for any Weapon’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘Nobels’ with ‘Nobles’. Replaced ‘Nobel’ with ‘Noble’. Replaced ‘the door you’ with ‘the door, you’.
(165) Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘arrow's’ with ‘Arrow's’.
(166) Replaced ‘creatures surges’ with ‘creature surges’. Added ‘If the Kai Weapon you wield is “Ulnarias” or “Spawnsmite”, you will benefit from the bonus gained due to its unique properties.’
(167) Replaced ‘people and’ with ‘people, and’. Replaced ‘Use only once’ with ‘One use only’.
(168) Replaced ‘home, then’ with ‘home, and then’. Replaced ‘Lourdanian’ with ‘Lourdenian’.
(169) Replaced ‘Kaisurge’ with ‘Kai-surge’. Replaced ‘Valiance’ with ‘ ‘Valiance’ ’.
(170) Italicised ‘Lone Wolf New Order’ when referring to the series. Replaced ‘metres’ with ‘yards’.
(171) Replaced ‘Niguma-sa’ with ‘Nigumu-sa’.
(172) Replaced ‘market place’ with ‘marketplace’.
(173) Replaced ‘lives.Mindful’ with ‘lives. Mindful’. Replaced ‘Eldenoran Captain’ with ‘Eldenoran captain’. Replaced ‘Kai-surge, and’ with ‘Kai-surge and’. Replaced ‘Bardsmanship, and’ with ‘Bardsmanship and’.
(174) Replaced ‘solely aware’ with ‘sorely aware’.
(175) Replaced ‘jail’ with ‘gaol’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘jailers’ with ‘gaolers’. Replaced ‘Kai rank of Grand’ with ‘rank of Kai Grand’. Replaced ‘Kai mastery or’ with ‘Kai Mastery, or’. Replaced ‘Assimilance, and’ with ‘Assimilance and’. Replaced ‘Nexus, and’ with ‘Nexus and’.
(177) Replaced ‘body, then’ with ‘body; then’. Replaced ‘Kai weapon’ with ‘Kai Weapon’.
(178) Replaced ‘help, then’ with ‘help, and then’. Replaced ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘The Captain’ with ‘The captain’.
(180) Replaced ‘the southern Karnali’ with ‘southern Karnali’. Replaced ‘flask and’ with ‘flask, and’. Replaced ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’.
(182) Replaced ‘Grand Mastery skills’ with ‘Grand Mastery’. Replaced ‘drawbolt’ with ‘bolt’.
(184) Replaced ‘hustle and’ with ‘hustle, and’. Replaced ‘fact it’ with ‘fact, it’. Replaced ‘jade green’ with ‘jade-green’.
(185) Replaced ‘rainswept’ with ‘rain-swept’.
(186) Replaced ‘enchantments and magical mists and winds’ with ‘enchantments, magical mists, and mage winds’ as that is the phrase Joe originally wrote. Replaced ‘my Lord’ with ‘my lord’.
(187) Replaced each occurrence of ‘jailers’ with ‘gaolers’. Altered the links to read ‘Turn to 314’ since it is impossible to arrive in this section carrying an Iron Key. They originally read:
If you possess an Iron Key, turn to 125.
If you do not possess this item, turn to 314.
(188) Replaced ‘twenty miles’ with ‘20 miles’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
(189) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’.
(190) Replaced ‘drawbolt’ with ‘bolt’.
(191) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Removed the dashes around ‘Sense Evil’. Replaced ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’.
(192) Removed the dashes around ‘Silence’.
(193) Replaced ‘Old Kingdom spell’ with ‘Old Kingdom Spell’. Removed the dashes around ‘Shield’.
(195) Replaced ‘parallel with’ with ‘parallel to’.
(196) Replaced ‘Kai Disciplines of Animal Control’ with ‘Kai Discipline of Animal Control’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Elementalism, and’ with ‘Elementalism and’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’.
(200) Replaced each occurrence of ‘Nobels’ with ‘Nobles’. Replaced ‘Nobel’ with ‘Noble’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘Coppersmith's Hall’ with ‘Coppersmiths' Hall’. Replaced ‘ship, Captain’ with ‘ship, captain’. Replaced ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’. Replaced ‘the Sergeant’ with ‘the sergeant’.
(201) Replaced ‘if knows’ with ‘if he knows’. Replaced ‘Nobels’ with ‘Nobles’.
(202) Replaced each occurrence of ‘you have chosen’ with ‘you have picked’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘ie,’ with ‘i.e.’. Replaced ‘1,3,5,7,9’ with ‘1, 3, 5, 7, or 9’. Replaced ‘0,2,4,6,8’ with ‘2, 4, 6, 8, or 0’. Replaced ‘your wounds’ with ‘your wounding’.
(203) Replaced ‘Fryelund forest’ with ‘Fryelund Forest’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘timberyard’ with ‘timber yard’. Replaced ‘freshly sawn’ with ‘freshly-sawn’.
(204) Replaced ‘tavernkeeper’ with ‘tavern-keeper’. Replaced ‘The Captain’ with ‘The captain’. Replaced ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’.
(206) Replaced ‘favourite Forlu-zhan came’ with ‘favourite, Forlu-zhan, came’. Replaced parenthetical numbers at the start of each respective line sans parentheses (e.g. replaced ‘Swords (3)’ with ‘3 Swords’). Replaced ‘Nobels’ with ‘Nobles’.
(207) Replaced ‘jailers’ with ‘gaolers’. Replaced ‘Jailers’ with ‘Gaolers’. Replaced ‘drawbolt’ with ‘bolt’. Replaced ‘bonuses)’ with ‘bonuses.)’.
(208) Added ‘If the Kai Weapon you wield is “Valiance”, you may apply the bonus gained due to its unique properties.’.
(209) Replaced ‘creature who is seeking’ with ‘creature seeking’. Replaced ‘scared and’ with ‘scared, and’. Replaced ‘game and’ with ‘game, and’. Replaced ‘fresh water streams’ with ‘freshwater streams’. Replaced ‘Mastery, and’ with ‘Mastery and’. Replaced ‘Kai-surge, and’ with ‘Kai-surge and’. Replaced ‘Bardsmanship, and’ with ‘Bardsmanship and’.
(210) Replaced ‘your weapons’ with ‘your Weapons’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘jail’ with ‘gaol’.
(211) Replaced ‘timberyard’ with ‘timber yard’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘Nobels’ with ‘Nobles’.
(213) Replaced ‘rendering him unconscious’ with ‘rendering it unconscious’.
(214) Replaced ‘your weapons’ with ‘your Weapons’.
(216) Replaced ‘the Derby’ with ‘the derby’. Replaced ‘he says, ‘he's ruthless’ with ‘he warns. ‘He's ruthless’. Replaced ‘innkeeper frowns:’ with ‘innkeeper frowns.’. Replaced ‘blanket’ with ‘Blanket’. Added the prices for the listed items that were missing from the original Red Fox edition of the book; the prices are taken from the French translation.
(217) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘emporiums’ with ‘emporia’. Replaced ‘Unlike the’ with ‘Unlike at the’.
(219) Replaced ‘not attack’ with ‘not attack you’.
(220) Replaced ‘trek (there’ with ‘trek. (There’. Replaced ‘Meals).’ with ‘Meals.)’. Replaced ‘Elementalism, and’ with ‘Elementalism and’.
(221) Replaced ‘City Guard patrol confiscate’ with ‘City Guard patrol confiscates’. Replaced ‘march’ with ‘marches’. Replaced ‘your weapons’ with ‘your Weapons’.
(222) Replaced ‘jailers’ with ‘gaolers’. Replaced ‘bonuses)’ with ‘bonuses.)’. Replaced ‘Jailers’ with ‘Gaolers’.
(223) Replaced ‘belt pouch’ with ‘Belt Pouch’. Replaced ‘Gallowbrush’ with ‘gallowbrush’. Replaced ‘Nobels’ with ‘Nobles’.
(224) Replaced ‘Valiance’ with ‘ ‘Vali
ance’ ’.
(228) Replaced ‘your weapons’ with ‘your Weapons’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘jail’ with ‘gaol’. Replaced ‘Weapon and backpack items’ with ‘Weapon, and Backpack Items’.
(230) Replaced ‘Bow nor’ with ‘Bow, nor’. Replaced ‘The Captain’ with ‘The captain’. Replaced ‘Bow, and’ with ‘Bow and’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’.
(232) Replaced ‘belt pouch’ with ‘Belt Pouch’. Replaced ‘Nobels’ with ‘Nobles’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’.
(233) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(234) Altered the links to read ‘Turn to 314’ since it is impossible to arrive in this section carrying an Iron Key. They originally read:
If you possess an Iron Key, turn to 125.
If you do not possess this item, turn to 314.
(235) Replaced ‘two days time’ with ‘two days' time’. Replaced ‘the Captain's’ with ‘the captain's’.
(236) Replaced ‘canopy of branches swirl’ with ‘canopy of branches swirls’. Replaced ‘and then grow’ with ‘and then grows’.
(237) Replaced ‘icy cold water’ with ‘icy-cold water’.
(239) Replaced ‘isle of Kobra’ with ‘Isle of Kobra’. Replaced ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’.
(240) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Removed the dashes around ‘Lightning Hand’.
(242) Replaced ‘roar, then’ with ‘roar, and then’. Replaced ‘sea water’ with ‘seawater’. Replaced ‘weapon, before’ with ‘Weapon before’.
(244) Replaced ‘The Captain’ with ‘The captain’.
(245) Replaced ‘jail’ with ‘gaol’. Replaced ‘clang’ with ‘clang’. Replaced ‘section 215’ with ‘Section 215’. Replaced ‘Oriah's body’ with ‘Oriah's unconscious body’.
(247) Replaced each occurrence of ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘bridge, then’ with ‘bridge, and then’.
(250) Replaced ‘Council elder’ with ‘Council Elder’. Replaced ‘Praise the Gods’ with ‘Praise the gods’.
(252) Replaced ‘won and’ with ‘won, and’. Replaced ‘Lourdanian’ with ‘Lourdenian’.
(253) Added a paragraph break between ‘her head.’ and ‘ ‘No … ’. Replaced ‘Vassagonian funtal’ with ‘Vassagonian Funtal’. Replaced ‘asks, ‘ … and’ with ‘asks. ‘And’.
(254) Replaced ‘Kai mastery’ with ‘Kai Mastery’. Replaced ‘of Grand’ with ‘of Kai Grand’. Replaced ‘Assimilance, and’ with ‘Assimilance and’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’.
(255) Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’.
(257) Replaced ‘mob disperse’ with ‘mob disperses’.
(259) Replaced ‘darkly patterned’ with ‘darkly-patterned’. Replaced ‘master Kai’ with ‘Master Kai’. Replaced ‘Silversmith' Guild’ with ‘Silversmiths' Guild’. Replaced ‘Sadi desert’ with ‘Sadi Desert’. Replaced ‘Western Magnamund’ with ‘western Magnamund’. Replaced ‘Nobels’ with ‘Nobles’.
(260) Replaced ‘the Sesketera’ with ‘The Triasus’. Replaced ‘breath, then’ with ‘breath; then’.
(261) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
(262) Replaced ‘It's name means’ with ‘Its name means’. Replaced ‘semi-circle’ with ‘semicircle’. Replaced ‘the Captain's’ with ‘the captain's’.
(263) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Removed the dashes around ‘Lightning Hand’.
(264) Replaced ‘o'moved’ with ‘o' moved’. Replaced ‘Nobel’ with ‘Noble’. Replaced ‘mind, she's’ with ‘mind; she's’. Replaced ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’. Replaced ‘Telegnosis, and’ with ‘Telegnosis and’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’.
(265) Replaced each occurrence of ‘jail’ with ‘gaol’. Replaced ‘jailers’ with ‘gaolers’. Replaced ‘and,when’ with ‘and, when’. Replaced ‘cell, then’ with ‘cell, and then’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘your weapons’ with ‘your Weapons’. Replaced ‘Elementalism, and’ with ‘Elementalism and’. Replaced ‘Kai-surge, and’ with ‘Kai-surge and’. Replaced ‘Nexus, and’ with ‘Nexus and’.
(266) Replaced ‘the creatures’ with ‘the creature’.
(267) Replaced ‘Bow nor’ with ‘Bow, nor’. Replaced ‘Bow, and’ with ‘Bow and’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Elementalism, and’ with ‘Elementalism and’.
(268) Replaced ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’.
(270) Replaced ‘to be indulged’ with ‘to be indulged in’. Added ‘If the Kai Weapon you wield is “Valiance”, you may apply the bonus gained due to its unique properties.’.
(271) Replaced ‘Item.’ with ‘Item.)’.
(272) Replaced ‘the Derby’ with ‘the derby’. Replaced ‘he warns, ‘he's ruthless’ with ‘he warns. ‘He's ruthless’.
(274) Replaced each occurrence of ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(275) Replaced ‘of sly and cunning’ with ‘of sly cunning’. Replaced ‘called Vargas’ with ‘called the Vargas’. Replaced ‘As Vargas’ with ‘As the Vargas’. Replaced ‘Nobel’ with ‘Noble’. Replaced ‘Grand Master’ with ‘Journeyman’ as the Captain is not aware of your true identity. Replaced ‘Elementalism, and’ with ‘Elementalism and’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’.
(276) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’.
(277) Replaced ‘the Captain's’ with ‘the captain's’.
(278) Removed each — from the table. Replaced each occurrence of ‘Nobels’ with ‘Nobles’.
(279) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Removed the dashes around ‘Mind Charm’. Replaced ‘your weapons’ with ‘your Weapons’.
(280) Replaced ‘belt pouch’ with ‘Belt Pouch’. Replaced ‘eh lads!’ with ‘eh, lads!’. Replaced ‘o'ruffled’ with ‘o' ruffled’. Replaced ‘in Ghol-Tabras market’ with ‘in the Ghol-Tabras market’. Replaced ‘The Seasprite’ with ‘the Seasprite’. Replaced ‘The Captain’ with ‘The captain’.
(281) Replaced ‘forty miles’ with ‘40 miles’.
(282) Replaced ‘Coppersmith's Hall’ with ‘Coppersmiths' Hall’.
(283) Replaced ‘Dessi Consulate’ with ‘Dessian Consulate’. Replaced ‘north quarter’ with ‘North Quarter’.
(284) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘to be be pleased’ with ‘to be pleased’.
(286) Replaced ‘jailers’ with ‘gaolers’.
(287) Replaced ‘twenty miles’ with ‘20 miles’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘on to’ with ‘onto’.
(288) Replaced ‘hold, then’ with ‘hold, and then’.
(290) Replaced ‘wharfs’ with ‘wharves’. Replaced ‘city guardsmen’ with ‘City Guardsmen’. Replaced ‘city guard’ with ‘City Guard’. Replaced ‘the head of’ with ‘the heads of’.
(291) Replaced ‘clifftop’ with ‘cliff-top’. Replaced ‘eyes rolling’ with ‘eyes roll’. Replaced ‘Wytch-King’ with ‘Wytch-king’. Replaced ‘group are’ with ‘group is’ in the illustration's caption. Replaced ‘MS5054’ with ‘MS 5057’ as, according to Section 1 of War of the Wizards, Grey Star was in the Daziarn for seven years.
(294) Replaced ‘drawbolt’ with ‘bolt’.
(295) Replaced each occurrence of ‘Tikulu’ with ‘Tiklu’. Replaced ‘twenty miles’ with ‘20 miles’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘Nobels’ with ‘Nobles’.
(297) Replaced ‘agonising’ with ‘agonizing’.
(298) Replaced ‘man frowns:’ with ‘man frowns.’. Added a paragraph break between ‘man frowns[.]’ and ‘ ‘Wrok's’. Replaced ‘he says, ‘he's ruthles
s’ with ‘he warns. ‘He's ruthless’.
(299) Replaced ‘the words’ with ‘the words:’. Replaced ‘Bad … dragon … is good’,’ with ‘Bad … dragon … is good,’ ’. Replaced ‘the words’ with ‘the words:’ and italicised the speech in the illustration's caption.
(300) Replaced ‘the Derby’ with ‘the derby’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘Nobels’ with ‘Nobles’.
(301) Replaced ‘weapon’ with ‘Weapon’.
(302) Altered the links to read ‘Turn to 314’ since it is impossible to arrive in this section carrying an Iron Key. They originally read:
If you possess an Iron Key, turn to 125.
If you do not possess this item, turn to 314.
(303) Replaced ‘thrawl’ with ‘thrall’.
(304) Replaced ‘Backpack Items list’ with ‘list of Backpack Items’. Replaced ‘Backpack and weapons’ with ‘Backpack and Weapons’.
(305) Replaced ‘icy cold water’ with ‘icy-cold water’.
(306) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’.
(308) Replaced ‘weapons and’ with ‘Weapons, and’. Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘Bottle of rice wine’ with ‘Bottle of Rice Wine’. Removed italics from ‘Special Item’. Replaced ‘Fish Hooks (3)’ with ‘3 Fish Hooks’.
(309) Replaced ‘jailer's weapon’ with ‘gaoler's weapon’. Replaced ‘at the foot of the spiral stairs’ with ‘at the foot of a set of spiral stairs’.
(310) Replaced ‘asleep it’ with ‘asleep, it’. Replaced ‘your weapons’ with ‘your Weapons’.
(311) Replaced each occurrence of ‘ie,’ with ‘i.e.’. Replaced ‘1,3,5,7,9’ with ‘1, 3, 5, 7, or 9’. Replaced ‘0,2,4,6,8’ with ‘2, 4, 6, 8, or 0’.
(313) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Removed the dashes around ‘Net’.
(314) Replaced ‘jailers’ with ‘gaolers’.
(317) Replaced ‘bow’ with ‘Bow’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’.
(319) Replaced ‘Begone y'scabs’ with ‘Begone, y'scabs’. Replaced ‘others, ‘this’ with ‘others. ‘This’.