by Joe Dever
(Kai Weapons) Replaced ‘elite’ with ‘élite’. Replaced ‘new-found’ with ‘newfound’. Deleted ‘at the front of the book’. Replaced ‘cave or’ with ‘cave, or’. Replaced ‘magical Axe, Sword or Broadsword’ with ‘magical Axe, Sword, or Broadsword’. Replaced ‘broadsword “Illuminatus”’ with ‘Broadsword “Illuminatus”’.
(Rules for Combat) Removed ‘on the inside back cover of this book’. Replaced ‘on the page after the Random Number Table’ with ‘in the back of this book’. Replaced ‘points reduced’ with ‘points possibly reduced’. Replaced ‘to zero’ with ‘to zero or below’. Replaced ‘at which point the one with the zero score is declared dead’ with ‘at which point that combatant is declared dead’. Replaced ‘only you’ with ‘only you’. Replaced ‘LW represents points lost by yourself — a disciple of Lone Wolf’ with ‘GM represents points lost by yourself — Grand Master’.
(Levels of New Order Grand Mastership) Replaced ‘rank and titles’ with ‘ranks and titles’. Replaced ‘New Order series’ with ‘New Order series’. Replaced ‘New Order adventures’ with ‘New Order adventures’.
(Improved Grand Master Disciplines) Replaced ‘ ‘Improved Grand Master Disciplines’ ’ with ‘Improved Grand Master Disciplines’. Replaced ‘Grand Master Superiors’ with ‘Kai Grand Master Superiors’. Replaced ‘Lone Wolf New Order series’ with ‘Lone Wolf New Order series’. Replaced ‘Lone Wolf New Order books’ with ‘Lone Wolf New Order books’.
(New Order Wisdom) Replaced ‘gods’ with ‘Gods’. Italicised ‘Lone Wolf’ when referring to the series. Replaced ‘New Order adventure’ with ‘New Order adventure’.
(1) Added a paragraph break between ‘you ask.’ and ‘ ‘It signifies’. Replaced ‘Korlinium’ with ‘korlinium’. Replaced ‘well-treated’ with ‘well treated’. Replaced ‘Record the Moonstone’ with ‘If you have not already done so, record the Moonstone’. Replaced ‘my Lord’ with ‘my lord’.
(2) Replaced ‘by, then’ with ‘by, and then’. Removed quotation marks from around the thought-speech.
(3) Removed the dash preceding ‘Gloar!’. Replaced ‘barge’ with ‘charge’. Replaced ‘power word’ with ‘power-word’.
(5) Replaced ‘metres’ with ‘yards’.
(6) Replaced ‘the Derby’ with ‘the derby’. Replaced ‘he warns, ‘he's ruthless’ with ‘he warns. ‘He's ruthless’.
(7) Replaced parenthetical numbers at the start of each respective line sans parentheses (e.g. replaced ‘Daggers (6)’ with ‘6 Daggers’). Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘gaily decorated’ with ‘gaily-decorated’. Replaced ‘emporiums’ with ‘emporia’. Replaced ‘Nobels’ with ‘Nobles’. Replaced ‘Unlike the’ with ‘Unlike at the’.
(8) Replaced ‘home, then’ with ‘home, and then’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘ie,’ with ‘i.e.’. Replaced ‘1,3,5,7,9’ with ‘1, 3, 5, 7, or 9’. Replaced ‘0,2,4,6,8’ with ‘2, 4, 6, 8, or 0’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘Lourdanian’ with ‘Lourdenian’. Replaced ‘well-fed’ with ‘well fed’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘Nobels’ with ‘Nobles’. Replaced ‘Nobel’ with ‘Noble’.
(10) Replaced ‘of the spiral’ with ‘of a spiral’.
(11) Added ‘If the Kai Weapon you wield is “Valiance”, you may apply the bonus gained due to its unique properties.’.
(12) Replaced each occurrence of ‘you have chosen’ with ‘you have picked’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘ie,’ with ‘i.e.’. Replaced ‘1,3,5,7,9’ with ‘1, 3, 5, 7, or 9’. Replaced ‘0,2,4,6,8’ with ‘2, 4, 6, 8, or 0’.
(13) Replaced ‘infra-vision’ with ‘infravision’.
(14) Replaced ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’.
(15) Replaced ‘score).’ with ‘score.)’. Removed quotation marks from around the thought-speech in both the section and the illustration's caption.
(16) Replaced ‘he orders, ‘Unfurl’ with ‘he orders. ‘Unfurl’. Replaced ‘thirty yards’ with ‘30 yards’. Replaced ‘The Captain's’ with ‘The captain's’. Replaced ‘me, Captain’ with ‘me, captain’.
(17) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Removed the dashes around ‘Levitation’.
(18) Replaced ‘the Grand Master Discipline of Pathsmanship’ with ‘Grand Pathsmanship’. Replaced ‘Nobels’ with ‘Nobles’.
(19) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Removed the dashes around ‘Lightning Hand’. Replaced ‘Valiance’ with ‘ ‘Valiance’ ’.
(20) Replaced ‘belt pouch’ with ‘Belt Pouch’. Replaced ‘Backpack and’ with ‘Backpack, and’. Replaced ‘rain storm’ with ‘rainstorm’. Replaced ‘Assimilance, and’ with ‘Assimilance and’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’.
(21) Replaced ‘belt pouch’ with ‘Belt Pouch’. Replaced ‘erase’ with ‘subtract’. Replaced ‘Special Item’ with ‘Backpack Item’.
(22) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘gaily decorated’ with ‘gaily-decorated’. Replaced ‘emporiums’ with ‘emporia’. Replaced ‘Unlike the’ with ‘Unlike at the’.
(24) Replaced ‘jail’ with ‘gaol’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘jailers’ with ‘gaolers’. Replaced ‘Kai rank of Grand’ with ‘rank of Kai Grand’. Replaced ‘Assimilance, and’ with ‘Assimilance and’. Replaced ‘Nexus, and’ with ‘Nexus and’.
(25) Replaced ‘sheer breathtaking’ with ‘sheer, breathtaking’.
(26) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Removed the dashes around ‘Invisible Shield’.
(30) Replaced each occurrence of ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’.
(31) Replaced ‘roar, then’ with ‘roar, and then’. Replaced ‘Kai weapon’ with ‘Kai Weapon’. Replaced ‘sea water’ with ‘seawater’. Replaced ‘weapon, before’ with ‘Weapon before’.
(32) Replaced ‘houses that borders’ with ‘houses that border’.
(33) Replaced ‘your weapons’ with ‘your Weapons’.
(34) Replaced ‘Old Kingdom spell’ with ‘Old Kingdom Spell’. Removed the dashes around ‘Power Word’.
(35) Replaced ‘sons and’ with ‘sons, and’. Replaced ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’.
(36) Replaced ‘Fryelund forest’ with ‘Fryelund Forest’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘timberyard’ with ‘timber yard’. Replaced ‘freshly sawn’ with ‘freshly-sawn’.
(37) Replaced each occurrence of ‘ie,’ with ‘i.e.’. Replaced ‘1,3,5,7,9’ with ‘1, 3, 5, 7, or 9’. Replaced ‘0,2,4,6,8’ with ‘2, 4, 6, 8, or 0’.
(39) Replaced ‘Oh Grand’ with ‘Oh, Grand’. Added a paragraph break between ‘her head.’ and ‘ ‘No, it’.
(40) Replaced ‘icy cold water’ with ‘icy-cold water’.
(41) Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’. Replaced ‘Kai-surge, and’ with ‘Kai-surge and’.
(42) Replaced ‘Dessi you say’ with ‘Dessi, you say’.
(43) Replaced ‘Bow, and’ with ‘Bow and’. Replaced ‘or choose’ with ‘or if you choose’.
(45) Replaced ‘jailer’ with ‘gaoler’. Replaced ‘jailer's belt’ with ‘gaoler's belt’. Replaced ‘jailers’ with ‘gaolers’. Replaced ‘drawbolt, then’ with ‘bolt, and then’. Replaced ‘(If you wish to keep this key, record it on your Action Chart as a Backpack Item.)’ with ‘(Mark this on your Action Chart as a Special Item. You need not discard another item in its favour if you are already carrying the maximum number of Special Items.)’.
(46) Replaced ‘Bow, and’ with ‘Bow and’.
(47) Replaced ‘Old Kingdom spell’ with ‘Old Kingdom Spell’. Removed the dashes around ‘Invisible Fist’. Replaced ‘not attack’ with ‘not attack you’.
(48) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’.
(49) Replaced ‘ninety miles’ with
‘90 miles’. Replaced ‘Kas-kalahmout’ with ‘Kas-kalahmout’.
(51) Replaced ‘slayed’ with ‘slew’.
(52) Replaced ‘your weapons’ with ‘your Weapons’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘jail’ with ‘gaol’. Replaced ‘city guard’ with ‘City Guard’.
(54) Replaced each occurrence of ‘weapon’ with ‘Weapon’. Replaced ‘Backpack Items list’ with ‘list of Backpack Items’. Replaced ‘Backpack and weapons’ with ‘Backpack and Weapons’.
(56) Replaced ‘and Coarse laughter’ with ‘and coarse laughter’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’.
(57) Removed quotation marks and the ellipses from the table. Replaced each occurrence of ‘Nobels’ with ‘Nobles’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘Nobel’ with ‘Noble’.
(58) Replaced ‘forty miles’ with ‘40 miles’. Replaced ‘come to village’ with ‘come to a village’.
(59) Replaced ‘jailers’ with ‘gaolers’.
(60) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘Nobels’ with ‘Nobles’. Replaced ‘your weapons’ with ‘your Weapons’.
(61) Replaced ‘roots and’ with ‘roots, and’. Replaced ‘Nobels’ with ‘Nobles’. Replaced ‘Nobel’ with ‘Noble’. Replaced ‘potions cost’ with ‘potions costs’. Replaced ‘one or more’ with ‘one or both’.
(62) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’.
(65) Replaced ‘drawbolt’ with ‘bolt’.
(66) Replaced ‘timberyard’ with ‘timber yard’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘Nobels’ with ‘Nobles’.
(67) Added ‘If the Kai Weapon you wield is “Ulnarias” or “Spawnsmite”, you will benefit from the bonus gained due to its unique properties.’
(70) Replaced ‘Old Kingdom spell’ with ‘Old Kingdom Spell’. Removed the dashes around ‘Invisible Fist’.
(71) Replaced each occurrence of ‘Nobels’ with ‘Nobles’.
(74) Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘Valiance’ with ‘ ‘Valiance’ ’.
(75) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Removed the dash preceding ‘Levitation’.
(76) Replaced ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’.
(77) Replaced ‘tavernkeeper’ with ‘tavern-keeper’. Replaced ‘The Captain’ with ‘The captain’. Replaced ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’.
(78) Italicised ‘Lone Wolf New Order’ when referring to the series. Replaced ‘absence, then’ with ‘absence, and then’.
(81) Replaced ‘jailers' torches’ with ‘gaolers' torches’. Altered the links to read ‘Turn to 314’ since it is impossible to arrive in this section carrying an Iron Key. They originally read:
If you possess an Iron Key, turn to 125.
If you do not possess this item, turn to 314.
(83) Replaced ‘timber and leather’ with ‘timber, and leather’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘Nobels’ with ‘Nobles’. Replaced ‘Nobel’ with ‘Noble’.
(84) Replaced ‘Lourdanian’ with ‘Lourdenian’. Replaced ‘The Captain’ with ‘The captain’.
(85) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘first volley of arrows come’ with ‘first volley of arrows comes’.
(87) Replaced ‘broad-leafed’ with ‘broad-leaved’. Replaced ‘Bow, and’ with ‘Bow and’. Replaced ‘or choose’ with ‘or if you choose’.
(90) Replaced ‘consciousness, then’ with ‘consciousness; then’. Replaced ‘disorientated’ with ‘disoriented’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’. Replaced ‘Kai-surge, and’ with ‘Kai-surge and’.
(92) Added a paragraph break between ‘you retort.’ and ‘ ‘But … ’. Added a paragraph break between ‘the Captain.’ and ‘ ‘I've no’. Replaced ‘kilometre’ with ‘mile’. Replaced ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’.
(95) Replaced ‘desk, then’ with ‘desk, and then’. Replaced ‘metres’ with ‘yards’. Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘Coppersmith's Hall’ with ‘Coppersmiths' Hall’. Replaced ‘hall’ with ‘Hall’.
(96) Added ‘If the Kai Weapon you wield is “Valiance”, you may apply the bonus gained due to its unique properties.’.
(97) Replaced ‘timber and leather’ with ‘timber, and leather’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘Nobels’ with ‘Nobles’. Replaced ‘Nobel’ with ‘Noble’.
(98) Replaced ‘potion of Laumspur’ with ‘Potion of Laumspur’. Replaced ‘Nobels’ with ‘Nobles’.
(99) Replaced ‘count out 10 Gold Crowns’ with ‘count out 7 Gold Crowns’. Replaced ‘belt pouch’ with ‘Belt Pouch’. Replaced ‘erase’ with ‘subtract’. Replaced ‘Special Item’ with ‘Backpack Item’.
(101) Replaced ‘Kholo’ with ‘kholo’.
(102) Replaced ‘proud and nobel’ with ‘proud and noble’. Replaced ‘potions of Laumspur’ with ‘Potions of Laumspur’. Replaced ‘Hulhuk mountains’ with ‘Hulhuk Mountains’ in both the section and the illustration's caption.
(103) Replaced ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’.
(104) Replaced ‘potions of Liera’ with ‘Potions of Liera’.
(105) Replaced ‘Kai weapon’ with ‘Kai Weapon’.
(106) Replaced ‘jail’ with ‘gaol’. Replaced ‘arrow’ with ‘Arrow’. Replaced ‘clang’ with ‘clang’. Replaced ‘section 215’ with ‘Section 215’.
(107) Replaced ‘by, then’ with ‘by, and then’. Removed quotation marks from around the thought-speech.
(108) Replaced ‘belt pouch’ with ‘Belt Pouch’. Replaced ‘voice, ‘Let me’ with ‘voice. ‘Let me’.
(109) Replaced ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘dismal mood of its natives and the large number of street beggars leaves’ with ‘dismal mood of its natives and the large number of street beggars leave’. Replaced ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’.
(110) Replaced ‘Nobels’ with ‘Nobles’.
(111) Replaced ‘parallel with’ with ‘parallel to’. Replaced ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’.
(112) Replaced ‘try and’ with ‘try to’. Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’.
(114) Replaced ‘Nobels’ with ‘Nobles’.
(115) Replaced ‘drawbolt’ with ‘bolt’.
(116) Replaced ‘potion of Laumspur’ with ‘Potion of Laumspur’. Replaced ‘Nobels’ with ‘Nobles’.
(118) Replaced ‘your weapons’ with ‘your Weapons’.
(119) Replaced ‘Guyan trees’ with ‘guyan trees’. Replaced ‘gulleys’ with ‘gullies’. Replaced ‘fifty miles’ with ‘50 miles’.
(121) Replaced ‘metres’ with ‘yards’.
(122) Removed the dash preceding ‘Gloar!’. Replaced ‘Valiance’ with ‘ ‘Valiance’ ’.
(123) Replaced ‘belt pouch’ with ‘Belt Pouch’. Replaced ‘jovial Captain’ with ‘jovial captain’.
(124) Replaced ‘tallow and’ with ‘tallow, and’.
(125) Replaced ‘jailers’ with ‘gaolers’.
(127) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Removed the dash preceding ‘Levitation’.
(128) Replaced each occurrence of ‘you have chosen’ with ‘you have picked’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘ie,’ with ‘i.e.’. Replaced ‘1,3,5,7,9’ with ‘1, 3, 5, 7, or 9’. Replaced ‘0,2,4,6,8’ with ‘2, 4, 6, 8, or 0’.
(131) Replaced each occurrence of ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Removed the dashes around ‘Lightning Hand’. Replaced ‘light, then’ with ‘light, and then’. Added ‘If the Kai Weapon you wield is “Valiance”, you may apply the bonus gained due to its unique properties.’.
(132) Replaced ‘open and’ with ‘open, and’.
(137) Replaced ‘taverns and’ with ‘taverns, and’. Replaced ‘wharfs’ with ‘wharves’. Replaced ‘emporiums’ with ‘emporia’.
(138) Replaced ‘price or’ with ‘price,
or’. Replaced ‘Nobels’ with ‘Nobles’. Replaced ‘here costs’ with ‘here cost’.
(139) Replaced ‘help, then’ with ‘help, and then’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’. Replaced ‘The Captain’ with ‘The captain’.
(140) Replaced ‘Bow, and’ with ‘Bow and’.
(141) Replaced ‘remedies and’ with ‘remedies, and’. Replaced ‘Nobels’ with ‘Nobles’.
(144) Replaced ‘hush, then’ with ‘hush; then’. Replaced ‘neck and’ with ‘neck, and’. Replaced ‘boorish Captain’ with ‘boorish captain’. Replaced ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’. Replaced ‘Eldenoran Captain’ with ‘Eldenoran captain’.
(146) Replaced ‘predators who’ with ‘predators that’. Replaced ‘Elementalism, and’ with ‘Elementalism and’.
(147) Replaced ‘sheer breathtaking’ with ‘sheer, breathtaking’.
(148) Replaced ‘your weapons’ with ‘your Weapons’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘jail’ with ‘gaol’. Replaced ‘shortlived’ with ‘short-lived’. Replaced ‘city guard’ with ‘City Guard’.
(149) Replaced ‘slayed’ with ‘slew’.
(150) Replaced ‘sixth sense’ with ‘Sixth Sense’. Replaced ‘mob have’ with ‘mob has’. Replaced ‘the Captain’ with ‘the captain’. Replaced ‘Bow, and’ with ‘Bow and’.
(151) Replaced ‘Brotherhood spell’ with ‘Brotherhood Spell’. Removed the dashes around ‘Lightning Hand’. Replaced ‘barge’ with ‘charge’.
(152) Replaced ‘skilfully crafted’ with ‘skilfully-crafted’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘weapons’ with ‘Weapons’.
(154) Added ‘If the Kai Weapon you wield is “Valiance”, you may apply the bonus gained due to its unique properties.’.
(155) Replaced each occurrence of ‘on to’ with ‘onto’. Replaced ‘Magi-magic, and’ with ‘Magi-magic and’. Replaced ‘Kai-alchemy, and’ with ‘Kai-alchemy and’.
(156) Replaced ‘Arrows (6)’ with ‘6 Arrows’. Replaced each occurrence of ‘Nobels’ with ‘Nobles’.