The MacGuffin

by Stanley Elkin

  And Doug, considering, measuring Druff, sizing him up, apparently bought it. “Have a good walk then, Mr. Commissioner,” Doug said in his cop-cum-doorman’s negligibly effacing and commanding way, putting Mrs. Norman on hold, putting, Druff suspected, everything on hold; so long as the commissioner still sauntered to the door, not permitting, as if it were in his power, even a phone to ring. Druff had the sense that he was being safely conducted across a street while traffic waited.

  Not even to the pharmacist in the drugstore a good three blocks from City Hall from whom Druff bought the condoms. Or at least any particular asshole. Who you would think ought to know better. I mean, Druff meant, a fifty-eight-year-old guy with an ill-hanging suit on him and probably plenty more just like it home in the closet, who wasn’t even trying to appear casual, but simply, quite casually appears and bellies up to the counter requiring a packet of condoms? That was the word Druff used, “packet.” Meaning to imply by his carefully chosen diminutive just that. No in-for-a-penny-in-for-a-pound largesse here, only the smallest quantity that could possibly be purchased, as if whatever fling the fifty-eight-year-old type was contemplating was just that, too. A fling and, judging by the size of his order, possibly his last? Not even, mind you, as any high school boy would, specifying a brand? What, this isn’t an asshole? Just selling the so apparently hopeful last-flinging old-timer the generic packet of condoms he asked for, and maybe (because Druff would in his place if Druff were the pharmacist and the pharmacist the customer in the ill-hanging clothes) hoping that the condom would hang better on him than the clothes did. But then again, Druff knew, the man was a professional, and a professional—his license was right up there on the counter like a framed picture of the wife and kids—keeps his feelings to himself. So he could be wrong, Druff thought. Maybe he did look like an asshole.

  But (if you didn’t count the druggist) only to himself. And not because of the couple of condoms safe in his suit pocket next to the coca leaves (the condoms he knew he would not have a chance to use once even, and then throw away, throwing them away first, before they were used, or seen, like the flag he knew he not only didn’t have to show but wouldn’t even if he’d had to; hey, he was a guy who covered the bases, even if, not quite respectably he did have a spy, even if, he not only had a spy but maybe a MacGuffin, too, and certainly plenty of humbug in his heart) but because of the FTD flowers already on their way to Margaret Glorio’s home address.

  So you can imagine how he felt. You can just imagine.

  On the one hand anticipate, rampant with a kind of self-regard. In a way, he was already half in love with Miss Glorio, not for her perceived qualities (which he didn’t know about yet anyway) so much as for those which the contemplation of a relationship induced and released, or induced and released again, in Druff. Why, love, even half- love, was heady, hearty stuff, like the drugged aromatics of chemical flowers or the recovered toxins of adolescence. Thinking of it that way, years wilted from him, he filled his suits. He felt a sort of strutting potency and would have liked to get another gander at himself in Brooks Brothers glass. Love, contemplated Druff, was good for the gander, and the commissioner, like some world-class cuckold, had a temporary respite from the ordinary anxieties of ego, self-consciousness, was even enough liberated from himself to permit himself to regard—it was a festival of regard—some things which might please Margaret. Would she go to the fights or enjoy a day at the track? Was she a good sport, he meant, some down-and-dirty lady, the kind who would appreciate the unraveled arcana of a dope sheet? Because he could go that way, teach her the Racing Form, coach her in the codes of a low art, the stats, weights and measures of a compromised metrics, then tell her to forget all she’d learned, and to learn something new—that all bets were sucker bets, that the ponies in this town were fixed, that it was as well to know who was into whom—better!—than all the histories of all the horses in the field. And wasn’t this thrilling information too, to have this lowdown, this insider’s window on the world? He was sure it was the same in Sportswear, he’d tell her, and that he would be just as surprised to have his assumptions challenged, all the old warrants. Wasn’t it, wasn’t it thrilling? And then he would take her with him to the paddock for some private discussions because, he’d confide, you didn’t dope the horses so much as bet on those already doped. He longed to bring her along, a girlfriend like the son he’d always wanted.

  Oh, thought Druff, let it begin, not just the touchy-feely but the philosophy parts too, all the shared sentimentals they sought to hook you with in the love classifieds. He’d been hooked years, reconstructing hypothetical dreamgirls from the tiny bytes of smuggled, implied tastes revealed there, played out like line to kidnappers. Oh, he thought, let it! Wanting to trade on special theories—that you’d make a killing, if you bet the professional wrestling, as fixed, everyone knew, as the stars. That all you had to do was to be willing to offer high odds and depend upon turnover, or find out when the champion agreed to stand down and the belt was about to change hands. You bet, he meant, the practicals in life, only first determining which these were. Only then did you stand to gain. (Was this too poetic? Not for his dreamgirl! She, no matter what she said about the love of a good fire after a walk in the woods on a drizzly, overcast day, would take such things in like aphrodisiac, or what did one talk about around those fires?)

  Oh, thought Druff, surprised to be made to feel so male—those ponies and percentages, his cryptic dreamgirls in those classifieds—pleased by what he felt, some ballsy, weighted swagger of a vain regard, his discrete maleness urgent as mercury, forceful as magnetism, like some phantom erection paraded in a bath towel, seduced by his hankerings for all the tutorials of love, the thought of those shared pensées of a street commish.

  On the other hand…

  His hopes that afternoon were hedged all around by what he would tell Rose Helen.

  It wasn’t that he was stuck for things to say. What, an old campaigner like him? Trippingly on the tongue. He’d qualms, but he didn’t doubt his ability to lie, even his ability to lie to Rose Helen. He just didn’t want to be caught out in a campaign promise. He rarely made them. (Because he knew he was a goner. For whatever reason, what he’d said to her, to Margaret Glorio, was true. He’d thrown his hat into the ring. He would pursue her, had already started.) It was what he would tell Rose Helen if his suit was successful.

  They’d been married thirty-six years, after all. What was he, twenty- two when he married her? Just a kid. And Rose Helen, sixty now—sixty, Jesus!—had been twenty-four. Jesus! too, as far as that was concerned. Because hadn’t a deep part of her attraction been, as, God help him, it was something of an aversion now, those two extra years she had on him, as if she lived in a distant, telling time zone, coming to him, it could be, from alien geography, bringing alien geography, the covered flesh she’d not permitted him to see until their wedding night and teased him with—only it was nothing near so playful as teasing—denying him its light even then, granting him access to her only beneath the sheet and thin cover in the darkened room? The mysterious functions of her moving parts as much mysterious. Allowed to bring away with his eyes, like some impinged victor of guarded rewards, only what he could make out in that hobbled, weighted light. Only what he felt on his lips, the moistened tips of her powdered, perfumed nipples in licked conjunction with his moving, frantic tongue, a thick, yielded chemistry of a clayey, bridal milk. The source of her sweet and sour odors protected as the upper reaches of some under Nile. And what Druff was able to take away with him on his fingers, lifted like fingerprint from that dark and solemn scene.

  Things were different then. At least for Druff. Well, give him credit, for others too. This was the earliest fifties. A time of girdled sexuality. (Poodle skirts were a sort of Su’ad’s veil.) If you knocked someone up you married her as much to make an honest man of yourself as an honest woman of the girl. Guilt was champ. He hadn’t thought the belt would ever change hands.

  Now he knew, too la
te, it had all been just so much magic, the superstitious flimflam of conspired, agreeable fears. There’d been no especial power in her, he’d fallen through the net was all, squeezed through the cracks by his times, assigned, like others of his generation, high-flown attributes to what was mere rumor, the prose of innocence, guilt, the hype of “upbringing.” It was as if—truly—he’d lived by almanacs, “fun facts,” lore, raised in weathers controlled by swallows punctually returned to Capistrano or Puxatawney Phil frightened of his own shadow. He’d bought into such notions. It was like someone deciding to flesh out his portfolio because the NFL had won the Super Bowl that year, or someone pushed into buying or selling off because hems were high or low. (He didn’t remember the formula and reminded himself he would have to ask Margaret about that one when they were around the fire.) Well, why should he chastise himself, they all did. For who gave blowjobs then, who took it up the ass? Poor Druff, Druff thought, who was new to self-pity, a man who’d missed his season, who’d—you can imagine how he felt, you can just imagine—wasted ripeness and mourned girls—dreamgirls, indeed—he not only had never had but had never even dreamed about in dreams.

  Sixty, his wife was sixty. Rose Helen was a golden-ager. Who’d dyed her hair since the first gray appeared in it in her late twenties, and had begun to let it go gray on her fifty-fifth birthday, and allowed the gray to go white, gradually turning the color of house salt. His golden-ager, his silver citizen.

  And now recalled how he’d met her, how it had been on just such an almanac occasion as those he’d lived by years. On a pseudo-holiday, Sadie Hawkins Day, named for a character in a comic strip, a day of suspended decorums, when the girls chased the boys, were permitted to ask them on dates, make first moves. (Only even that didn’t happen, or happened only timidly, some vouchsafed mistletoe indulgence which would never stand up in court, all of them playing a Mardi Gras in the head.)

  In some gymnasium now forgotten. (Who’d forgotten so many details, his life chewed by remoteness and Druff left standing there holding on to a big bag of first impressions which hadn’t lasted, just some gray overview, and him a guy, this latent pol, whose stock-in-trade it was to recall everything, everybody’s facts and figures, who seemed, here at least, to have misplaced his own.) But, though this may only have been his politicals speaking, instincts of the retrograde enhanced, he seemed to remember bunting. (Perhaps it was a function only quasi-Sadie Hawkins, some student council thing, or even a do where Republicans asked Democrats to dance.) Well, it was gone. But in a gym at the state university. And Rose Helen, already twenty-two, already at her roots’ roots the melanin fading, a chromosome snapping in her aging hair. Sure, he remembered now. The only Sadie Hawkins part to it—for them, he meant; it really had been Sadie Hawkins Day—was that both of them had agreed to be there. A friend of his from her graduating class in high school had given him her name, had given her his, who’d never mentioned either to the other before, was not fixing them up but only supplying on some mutual demand (though he couldn’t, in truth, conceive of Rose Helen’s ever having asked for it) this unwritten letter of introduction, the names like a sort of reference—To whom it may concern, say.

  His friend had told him Rose Helen was a cripple.

  “She’s crippled?”

  “What are you, Druff, planning to enter her in a footrace? She has this minor deformity. Some hip thing you can’t even notice. It’s no big deal, don’t be so narrow. She’s very insecure. I think she has an inferiority complex. My mother plays cards with her mother. She’s very self-conscious, that’s why she started college late. If I were you, I’d call her, Druff. It’s the crippled-up girls with the inferiority complexes who are hot to trot.”

  “How come you never took her out?”

  “Hey, don’t you listen? Our mothers are friends. Though, personally, my mom would love it. She keeps giving me this shit about her beautiful skin. Druff, I don’t know how we ever got born at all. To hear my mother tell it, you’d think clear skin was a secondary sex characteristic.”

  And, really, you didn’t notice it, and after he met her the notion of her invisible physical deformity was vaguely exciting. It was a mild scoliosis, the slight curvature of her spine lifting her left hip and thrusting it faintly forward, providing a small shelf where she characteristically rested the palm of her hand and lending her the somewhat hard look of a dance hall girl in westerns. (“Miss Kitty,” he would call her later.)

  But on the Sadie Hawkins Day in question they almost missed each other. He looked for a girl with a deformity. He looked for a girl with clear skin. And, though he found no cripples, two or three clear-skinned girls actually agreed to dance with him when he went up to them. He said his name, they told him theirs. Then he bowed out. (Jesus, Druff thought, do you see what I mean? I was this shit-scared guilt avoider! They could have sainted me, for Christ’s sake! Because it was only the knowledge that somewhere in that bunting’d, made-over gymnasium there must have been this shy, suffering Rose Helen lurching around looking for me that spooked me. Not just that her ma knew the ma of my friend, not even that my friend’s ma could connect me to the scene of my friend’s ma’s friend’s daughter’s shameful stand-up, but that I made the connection, I did, that these particular two or three clear- skinned girls were not that particular clear-skinned girl, and how would I feel if I were a crip and told, urged, Come on, Sadie Hawkins Day falls on a weekend this year, you can sleep in Saturday, come on, whaddaya say, how about it, come on, we have a mutual friend, and then get caught dancing with two or three girls who weren’t even deformed? No thank you. Thanks, but no thanks. Jesus, he thought, I was, I was—this Mikey!)

  And found her, of course, where he should have looked first, along that wall of wallflowers, which isn’t always a wall, or even a partially occupied row of chairs, but often as not just an area, some dead space in the room which, occupied or not, busy or not, is something set aside, set off, a kind of sanctuary, as necessary to the practice of civilized life as flatware or toilets. Asking as soon as he saw her, “Are you Rose Helen Magnesson?”

  “Yes, I am. Are you Robert Druff?”

  “Yes. Happy Sadie Hawkins Day. Would you care to dance?”

  Dancing wasn’t his specialty, even a simple box step, though now he thought that if it had only been a few years later, when people first began to dance to rhythm and blues, it might have been a different story. He could have handled the fast stuff, accommodated the large motor movements of funk. It was going in close that clumsied him, moved him, that is, toward unearned intimacy, pulled him, he meant, toward love. Dancing with Rose Helen that evening, moving his hand to rest casually on her left hip when she suddenly started, bolted, pushed it away, as if he’d grabbed her haunch.

  Assuming he’d found it, accidentally touched her invisible deformity, whatever secreted, hidden-away thing it was (running on instinct here, believing, without knowing he held such beliefs, in some compensatory system of synergistics, of absolute justice, the up side of eye-for-eye) that, wounding her in one place, fixed her in another, cleared her skin, say—it was beautiful, remarkable, radiant in fact, incandescent, burning with the pearly collagens, moisturizers and organic steams, the mossy herbals and chemical brews of flush, full pores, all the natural cosmetics of, at once, a shining virginity and devastating pregnancy—and transfigured self-consciousness into a sort of shy, suffering charm.

  Druff blurting, “Did I hurt you? I’m sorry, I didn’t mean…”

  “No,” she said, “I’m not a good dance partner. I think I’d like to sit down now.”

  “Oh sure,” he said, “but I’m the one who’s the lousy dancer. I’m sorry if I hurt you.”

  “You didn’t hurt me,” Rose Helen said, “I’m not hurt. My dancing’s okay, I’m not a good partner.”

  They were having coffee in the Union Building. Rose Helen guessed their friend had told Druff all about her. “All there is to tell,” she said. “I’m not a good partner,” she said, “because, well,
I don’t like it when a boy touches me there.”

  “I wasn’t trying anything. I mean all he said was it was some hip thing, that it isn’t even noticeable. It really isn’t.”

  “I’m sitting down.”

  “I didn’t see anything when you weren’t.”

  “A full skirt covers a multitude of sins.”

  He thought it a wonderful sentence. He believed she was clever. The synergistics again, the very thing which had driven her underground and caused her shyness, had given her wit. He actually laughed out loud.

  “Look, I’m sorry if I loused up your Sadie Hawkins, okay?” Then she laughed.

  “What?”

  “Nothing.”

  “No, what?”

  “Well, look at me. Sadie Hawkins! I mean did you pick the right girl for Sadie Hawkins, or what? I guess I’m just not the Sadie Hawkins Day type.”

  “Why do you say that?”

  “Well, I mean I’m too nervous to dance, aren’t I?” She looked at him. “I’m two years older than you, you know.” Sure, he thought, his deformity. Their friend was a good reporter. He’d spilled the beans about both their deformities. (Druff as self-conscious about his age as Rose Helen about that raised left hip.)

  They discussed their majors. Rose Helen said she enjoyed being around kids and thought she would become a teacher, possibly declare a minor in English since, counting this semester, she would already have six hours of credit in that subject. Druff confessed he was still undecided, that he hadn’t realized until this year how important it was to have a plan since you’d probably be stuck for life with whatever you chose, adding that it wasn’t fair to expect someone only nineteen or twenty—not, he amended in deference to that two-year difference in their ages, that being nineteen or twenty was anything of a handicap (that was the word he used, ”handicap“)—to lock in on what he wanted to be doing fifteen or so years later. It was a serious business, and sad, really, when you thought about it, that you had to start your life off on the right foot or otherwise you could wake up when you were thirty-five and find out that you weren’t where you thought you belonged. Because how many times were you alive? Once, right? He thought, he said, that to waste your life was the worst thing you could do with it. It was like self-murder, suicide.