An Introduction to Oz Before Dorothy

by Tarl Telford

  "Where are we?" Oscar asked.

  "In the laboratory. With the mirrors. Most of them are shattered now. I don't know what time it is."

  Oscar sat up, carefully placing his hands away from the broken glass. "I was going to ask how long I was asleep."

  "I thought you were dead. I couldn't get any response from you."

  Oscar ran his hands through his hair. He looked at Glinda's tear-stained face and felt great regret in his heart. "I saw you crying."

  "How could you? You were not responding to anything. It felt like your heart was slowing down."

  "I was standing right there. You were there...but you were holding a book. Oh." The pieces of the dream snapped together in his mind like a puzzle.

  Glinda shook her head. "I was holding you. I fell asleep after a while. Then I woke up. Then I fell asleep after a long time of crying. Then you woke up."

  "I must have been dreaming. Your father was there. At least his giant floating head was. And he was asking me questions. I said I wanted to help you, but he took me to a sinking ship." Oscar got to his feet and pulled Glinda up.

  He looked around. Everything was sideways. The floor was the wall. The wall was the floor. "What happened?"

  "The lighthouse fell. Don't you remember?"

  Oscar scratched his head and stared blankly, trying to return to the reality of his situation. "That seems like another lifetime ago. The dragon came up and I shot at it with the beam. And then there was an explosion. Everything was frozen in the air. I was floating. The lighthouse was right in front of me, but so far away. I saw that the sand was below. There was lightning. I saw two flashes. And then...I guess I was dreaming."

  Glinda shook her head. "I don't know how much of a dream it was. Only when the tower started to fall, I remembered you. I made it to the door and saw you. There was the explosion, but I only saw you against the sky. I reached out and screamed for you."

  "What did you say?"

  Glinda's face reddened, giving bright color to her pale cheeks. "Come be with me." She forced an embarrassed smile and wiped away a hanging tear, "And then you were there. The tower crashed to the ground. We fell in here. And this is where we've been."

  "Magic. What did your father say when he gave you the Cap?"

  Glinda thought back, "That it's a focusing device for wishes and dreams. So maybe that's why--because you can dream, so it brought you back to it."

  "Or because you wished it."

  Their eyes met and connected. Glinda stepped into Oscar and kissed him. Surprised, pleasantly so; Oscar kissed her back. Warmth and life flooded through them both. In that instant, everything was acceptable and the world was filled with magic.

  They parted. And Glinda looked away, bashful. "I shouldn't have done that."

  "It had to be done. You were just the first one to get there." Oscar smiled.

  "We can't tell anyone else right now."

  "I don't see anyone. Your secret is safe with me, Princess."

  "And your secrets are ever safe with me, Wizard."

  HH1: Guide for Readers

  This is an example of the Guide for Readers included with each Hidden History of Oz book. This guide for readers covers HH1: The Orphan Sorceress of Oz.

  Overview

  This review is based on the format used by Common Sense Media (http://www.commonsensemedia.org). This is not an official Common Sense Media review. The author created this review to give parents an idea of what the book contained, to determine whether or not it would be appropriate for their children to read, and to provide questions for discussion.

  What Parents Need to Know

  Parents need to know that this book is a prequel to L. Frank Baum's novel, The Wonderful Wizard of Oz. The character names are familiar, but the characters themselves are youthful and inexperienced. They make mistakes, get angry, and do things normal to young people, but very different from their older selves encountered in Baum's books. The story takes place in the year 1852 A.D., forty-eight years before Dorothy enters the Emerald City. The character of Oscar is from the western frontier of America before the Nebraska Territory was made a state. His ideas and stories of independence and revolution are much closer to the founding of America than we are now. The ideas presented may come across as old-fashioned and America-centric, but they are intended to be accurate to the time period in which this story takes place.

  There is some violence, as soldiers made of magic sand fight against human soldiers, and against other sandy soldiers. Witches use their own blood to mix with the sand to make stronger soldiers. A character is physically and verbally abused.

  There is material that may be ideologically sensitive. Slavery, freedom, liberty, and responsibility are dealt with in various situations in the story. Slavery is dealt with in both broad and personal terms. This is not intended to downplay the seriousness of slavery. To demonstrate the generational effects of slavery a tribe of Winged Monkeys is magically enslaved to the possessor of a certain magical item. The king of the tribe is willing to do anything except lie to win freedom for his people.

  Liberty and freedom are discussed at length, and demonstrated in examples both good and bad to show the differences between freedom and tyranny (rule by fear and terror). With freedom comes responsibility to act and to protect that freedom, for the individual and for others. A character has the chance to free the Winged Monkeys from slavery, but misses the opportunity. Multiple perspectives are offered on liberty, freedom, slavery, tyranny, and responsibility. This story is not intended to preach one specific course of action, though it is clear which course the main characters believe. These multiple perspectives are intended to allow the reader to explore and see how different ages, cultures, and classes of people view these concepts.

  The main character, Glinda, is inexperienced, rash, and impulsive. She makes promises, but then she does not act on them. This character flaw is intended by the author to demonstrate the effect that one person can have on another, and on an entire land, today, and through the generations. These unfulfilled promises are intended to make the reader think about the proper course of action.

  This book is the first of many planned stories in The Hidden History of Oz series. The main series is intended for readers age 10 and older.

  Educational Value

  This story is written at a fifth-grade reading level. For unfamiliar words, readers may want to use a dictionary, or figure the meaning out themselves through context.

  Readers may be interested in learning about principles of history and freedom from the early United States, prior to 1852 A.D. (when this story takes place).

  Readers may be interested in comparing some parts of the story to L. Frank Baum's original novel, The Wonderful Wizard of Oz, to see how everything fits together.

  This story is a prequel, or a story that comes before another already-told story. Comparing The Wonderful Wizard of Oz to this story gives many answers to questions that L. Frank Baum did not answer in his book. Consider this question: Why would the author, Tarl Telford, write this story?

  Positive Messages

  Much of this story deals with freedom in all of its forms. Glinda wanted freedom from her sheltered, protected life, and she became an orphan on the run from the Wicked Witches. She wanted help from others to accomplish impossible goals. In the end, she learns that she has to make the decision to act, and then do whatever is required, to accomplish her goals.

  Glinda makes some promises that she can't keep. She recognizes the consequences of her actions, and she works to fix what her actions ruined.

  Locasta has been verbally and physically abused for years. After talking with Glinda, and seeing the actions that Glinda takes, Locasta finds her way to freedom from the abuse. She leaves a bad situation to find a better life.

  Positive Role Models

  Glinda gets herself and others into trouble by refusing to conform to others' expectations of her. By the end of the story, she has learned that every action has a consequence, fo
r good or bad. She takes responsibility for her actions, and she works to make the Land of Oz a place of freedom, where everyone can choose for themselves to live free.

  Omby-Amby believes in liberty and freedom. He protects those who need help. He is a loyal and good friend.

  Oscar hides his true feelings behind tricks. It is only in his dreams that he is honest with himself. His dreams literally change the land around him. Everyone believes that he is a wizard, but he does not think he is anything special. He learns to trust others and works to build a city where people can live free from fear and slavery.

  Violence

  Magic hourglasses create sandy soldiers, which make up the Sandy Armies. Characters discover that blood mixed with the sand makes more powerful sandy soldiers. Sand and blood-sand soldiers fight human soldiers and each other. A character uses a large solar ray to turn a sand dragon into glass. Buildings are destroyed. Forest fire. A character with telekinetic magic throws things into the air, including fallen trees, rocks, and a house.

  A character talks about being abused and thrown into the sky. The character has bruises from the abuse.

  A non-human character is critically burned by fire.

  Romance / Sex

  Two characters kiss. Two different characters kiss goodbye. Innocent exploration into first love--holding hands, flirting, and one kiss.

  Language

  A character uses words like "poppycock", "pish-posh", and "fiddlesticks" when she is frustrated. A character is verbally abused by another character.

  Consumerism

  Characters purchase magic hourglasses.

  Drinking, Drugs, and Smoking

  None.

  What is the story?

  Glinda is the rebellious teenage daughter of a sorceress. She wants freedom from the life she has. She refuses to conform to her parents' plan, which disrupts everything, and destroys everything that Glinda knew. She runs for her life and finds friends to stand beside her. The Wicked Witches want control over all the land. Glinda and her friends stand against the armies of the Witches and fight for freedom. They fail, time and again, but they keep working for what they believe is right. Glinda and Oscar make a clever plan to fight against the Witches and end this war, once and for all. Through their efforts, they learn the consequences of both action and inaction. Glinda's broken promises change her life, and she vows to become a better person. They establish two havens of freedom in Oz: one is The Emerald City, and other is in the South. The Witches divide the other parts of Oz among themselves, taking East, West, and North. Glinda rules in the South, and Oscar becomes the Wizard in the Emerald City.

  Is it any good?

  Glinda has a good life, but she feels like she is a slave. She refuses to cooperate with her parents, and runs away from her responsibilities. As a result, enemies of her family put their plan into action, and Glinda loses her parents and her home. Now she has the freedom she wanted. She comes to realize that all she has is what is inside of her. She makes friends and finds courage to stand against the Wicked Witches. She makes promises, but doesn't follow through, hurting other characters. She learns from her mistakes. She learns to be responsible. However, she still keeps her rebellious attitude as a way of holding on to her independence.

  Families can talk about

  Parents may wish to discuss the idea of slavery. What types of slavery are there? (economic, ignorance, addiction, physical) What is the difference between feeling like a slave, and actually being in slavery?

  Parents may wish to talk about keeping promises. Glinda makes promises, but she does not follow through immediately. What is the result of her procrastination?

  Glinda acts in opposition to what she is asked to do. What are the results of her actions? Why is it important to recognize that all actions have consequences?

  At the beginning of the story, Glinda wants freedom from her life. What events provide her this "freedom"? How is this freedom different from the freedom and liberty that Oscar talks about?

  Oscar quotes Benjamin Franklin in saying that the United States of America was "A republic, if you can keep it." How does liberty require responsibility? What is the difference between being ruled by a king, and the people ruling themselves? Why is it important to recognize that you are responsible for your own freedom?

  The characters talk about freedom and choosing their own destiny. What is the difference between talking about ideas, and actually working to accomplish them?

  Nobody in Oz dreams. Then Oscar comes to Oz, and he is a dreamer. His dreams literally change the land and other things around him. The people believe he is a great wizard. Oscar doesn't believe that he is anything special, but his friends, and other people do. Why is it important to be honest with others? Why is it important to be honest with ourselves? Have you ever experienced something that other people did not understand? Did they believe you when you told them? What was the result of being honest?

  Book Details

  Author:Tarl Telford

  Genre:Fantasy, Adventure, Fairy Tale

  Topics:Freedom, Loyalty, Honesty,

  Keeping Promises, Friendship, Adventure, Magic

  Book Type:Fiction

  Publisher:Emerald Engine Studios

  Publication Date:May 29, 2017

  Number of pages:275

  Publisher's recommended ages:10 and up

  Available on (platforms):Kindle

  HH2: Dark Dreams in Oz (Book Two)

  The Orphan Sorceress of Oz, first book in the Hidden History of Oz series,

  introduced readers to the powerful players vying for control of the Land of Oz

  during the Witch Wars. Now, two years later, Glinda is undisputed ruler of the South,

  but her hunger for knowledge and power leads her deeper into dangerous

  experimentation in the sorcerous arts.

  Magic and mayhem, dreams and defiance, secrets and sacrifice,

  all define this new age in the Land of Oz.

  THE WIZARD'S SECRETS BELONG TO HER. SHE WILL PROVE IT TO THE WORLD.

  Seventeen-year old Glinda has a reputation for control over her kingdom, her magic,

  and her friends. Unbeknownst to them, she unleashes a powerful and unstoppable

  new weapon, forged from the stolen nightmares of the Wizard. This betrayal drives

  the young Wizard far beyond her reach.

  Kally's lifelong mastery of magic has earned her a kingdom, many enemies,

  but no friends to soften her black heart. With a new face fashioned from

  forbidden magic, she enchants the wandering Wizard to join her in an

  impossible quest to bring lasting peace to the troubled Land of Oz.

  Glinda's crusade to reclaim the Wizard triggers a desperate race against

  enthralling magic, inhuman armies, and even the unchained powers of nature,

  driving her to unthinkable actions that threaten everything that she stands for.

  HH2: Chapter 14. Secret Spring

  The sun rose warm on their backs as Oscar and Kally raced across the fields to the southeast of the Emerald City. They covered miles before dawn, driven onward by the prospect of preserving the peace of Emerald City. The Hamstrambulator was a concession that Kally had made when Oscar pressed her.

  The Hamstrambulator was a fantastic creation by Smith & Tinker, given as a gift to King Winko, of the Winkies. It was a large hollow wheel with a pair of mechanical running legs in the center to power the movement. Baskets hung on a framework over the wheel. These were lifted by a means of gears and levers. The front basket held the steering mechanism and the basket levers.

  The vehicle was Omby-Amby's pride and joy. It was nothing short of miraculous that they retrieved the Hamstrambulator after the Battle of Emerald Prairie. Omby-Amby vowed that he would not let the vehicle out of his sight after that. But he wouldn't mind that Oscar borrowed it--for a noble cause, of course.

  Kally was not happy with the arrangement. S
he suggested that they could travel more quickly on foot, but Oscar disagreed. To keep the Silver Slippers a secret, Kally was forced to accept the Wizard's way. She had one requirement--no one must know where they had gone, or even that they were going.

  Though the miles went quickly, the dawn was a welcome change from the misty darkness. The light revealed a great forest ahead of them.

  "I didn't know this was so close to the Emerald City. I was certain I knew the area all around."

  "Time passes quickly in the presence of greatness."

  "For you or me?"

  "Yes." Kally replied cryptically.

  Oscar maneuvered the Hamstrambulator into the forest, following the easy path through the trees. The large wheel climbed over the fallen trees better than Oscar and Kally could have managed on foot. At last, Kally directed Oscar to stop. This was as close to their secret destination as the giant running wheel could get. "Discretion is required--my family always required it. Leave this contraption and walk with me."

  "We have to come back to it. Omby-Amby would never forgive me if I lost it."

  "Of course. Forgiveness is our goal, isn't it?"

  Oscar's silence withered the air behind Kally as she walked forward, smiling to herself. When Oscar finally joined her again, she said, "Tell me, Wizard, what is your treasure? It can be anything, but please, enough talk of liberty and freedom. It is enough to tire even my patience."

  Oscar frowned. "Treasure is where a man's heart is. What he believes in becomes his treasure, and therefore his motivation. Gold and silver shine. Art is beautiful. Science is amazing. But liberty--"

  Kally shot him a withering glance.

  "Liberty is only a treasure to those who recognize it. I suppose the greatest treasure is stories."

  "Stories?"

  "Stories. You learn from stories. Sure, it may seem like the story is only an adventure or a moral, but there are always more things you can learn. Stories hold the key to controlling people. If you control the story, you control the person--the way they think and remember."